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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 11:10am | IP Logged
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part now only.

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 11:21am | IP Logged
hi frds..
thank for comments...
i vll update tomorrow...and really sorry for late response...
take care
love
ashu Embarrassed
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Posted: 31 May 2008 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
waiting desperatelyyyyyyyyyy for da update with long part u promised it now only asap.
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 1:44am | IP Logged
sorrrrrry friends
par abhi update nahi kar paungi........as my exams are preponed..........so i vll update when ever i get time plz bear me....
sorry
ashu
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NO PROBLEM DI WE WIL WAIT FOR U Smile ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS



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hey ASHU...we will wait dear..u don't worry...ALL THE VERY BEST. Smile ..
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 11:06am | IP Logged
thank u all........
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naina went back to her room and was reviled to see pooja sleeping...and raj noticed that navin was there in room with gunny and were busy in some work ............................................................ ..............................................

next day morning a lady enters kma and well dressed in uniform.. she may be in her late 20's (i mean 29 or 30)...she was very beautiful

All guys were staring at her...and she went towards bc's cabin and knocked on door

bc :get in

lady :thank u sir..

he saw her and

bc :yes cadet...

L :major aarushi lamba reporting sir...

bc :oh i am sorry major as i thought u might be a fresher...

L :its ok sir...

By then another person stands near open door ... BC signs him to get in

bc :well major he is vice principle of kma

but before he completes his sentence the lady specks..

aa :i know sir maine yaha aane se pehle yaha ki staff ke bare me kafi kuch suna hai...

aa :hello mr abhimanyue.....i am major aarushi lamba...

abhi :plz to meet u.....

he smiled at her ...but she turned to bc

l :i vll take ur leave sir ..

bc :ok...

abhi (mann me) :kya ladki hai............aur itna attitude..........oh god we have to work with
her..................but she is hotttt

abhi :sir apne mujhe bulaya tha...

bc :haan .....tumne majorse to milhe chuke hoo...
so apko to pata chal gaya hoga how strict she is...pichle saal bahot sare rules ko toda gaya hai to
issi liye inhe yaha bhecha gaya hai............. so aap cadets ko samjha digiye………………aur aaj naye cadets bhe aane wale hai to vo bhi samhal lijiye as i wont be in kma for 2 ,3 days...

abhi :aap fikar mat kijiye hum sab samhal lenge...
abhi :sir aub hum chalte hai...
bc :ok...
...... ............................................................ ..............................................
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Raj in bed
Navin :arre raj abhi tak soo raha hai utt ja …raj
Raj in dreamy tone..
R :arre sone de na kyon itna tension le raha hai…
By then abhi enters room..
Abhi: tum log abhi tak ready nahi hue!!!!!!!!!!! Arre vo nayi major bahot strict hai…..
navin :nayi major....u mean she is a women...
abhi :haan..par jyada khush hone ki zaroorat nahi.....
And abhi tells what ever happened in bc's rom
Navin : to aub major nair ki kami ye puri karengi…aur raj tu to gaya aaj….
Raj :arre yaar chup kar….and he ran to bath room
Raj got ready quickly….
Tabhi gunny room me aata hai and he was too tensed..
Abhi :aub tujhe kya hua….itna pareshaan kyon hai…
Gunny: vo nayi Hitler…..ussne suriji ko datt diya …bichare suriji bahot upset hai…
Navin: aub to uss se milna he padega...
R: chale aub inse bhi mil lete hai…waise naam kya hai unka…
Abhi: aarushi lamba………..sorry sorry major aarushi lamba(he mimicked her)

And they all left for mess..and our six cadets were also there…..

Pooja :aaj suriji ko kya hua hai…unki battery itni down kyun lag rhai hai…
Yudi :kuch nahi vo koi nayi major aayi hai aur ussne suriji ko datt diya to issi liye vo bahot upset hai…
Huda: suna hai bahot hot hai……..
Aa : phir shuru ho gaya sala..abhi ye socho ke suriji ka mood kaise banaye…
ali :aur aap major ke baremai kaise vahiyat baat kar rahe the.....

Naina apne khayalo me kohi hue the,,,,,,,,pooja aur aalekh usse khush dekh kar bahot kush the aur issi liye unhine usse disturb nahi kiya

And teachers came inside mess and had there food …..abhi warned cadets about major and told them not to break rules …and student left for class and teachers went to there cabin.

Two girls enter kma one in long skirt top with bangles, long earings and with a smile on her face and another girl was a bit tough looking in tight jeans and jacket with boyish look..

In addition, on other side 3 guys jumped from kma trucks…..and an orderly was standing in ground waiting for them..He told them to whom they must report….

Gunny was busy in work and some body knocked door
Girl : excuse me sir
Gunny was puzzled to see the girl….he stared her for some time and
G: yes… how can I help u?
Girl: cadet aastha rai reporting sir..
And she handover her certificate to him…
Gunny took that file and was really impressed by her scores and her talent.......
gunny then looked at her as she looked very delicate...
g :kya aap ko aisa lagta hai ke aap ye tough drills pass kar sakti hai...
aastha : sir aap ko aisa kyon lagta hai ke mai ye nahi kar sakti...
(she asked him with a broad smile ....)
gunny look puzzled at her question..
g :aap kma ko he kyon chuna...i mean there are many other famous training centers...
aastha :maine suna tha ke yahaan ke teachers bahot handsome hai to issi liya....(she smiled again)
gunny tried hard to supress his smile....but she saw him
aastha: kya yahaan pe hasna mana hai???????
g :nahi to aise koi baat nahi cadet...
aastha :to aap apni haasi dabaneki kooshish kyon kar rahe hai????????
but gunny had no answer for her questions....raj aur navin door ke pass khade reh kar ye dekh raha tha....
and they entered the room to help his friend.....
r :fresher????????
aastha turned to him
aastha :yes sir...
r : naam
aa:aastha rai...
navin :cadet rai ...... u r from?
aastha: i am from karnataka....

by then another girl comes there

girl :cadet akriti bhatt reporting sir..
she gives her certificate to navin
navin: cadet aap ne army kyon join kiya...
akriti :life me action ki kami the to socha yahaan pe vo kami thodi kam ho jayegi...
raj :ok cadets u may leave now

and both girls left

raj: uss cadet ne to aaj gunny ki band he bajadi.....
gunny:assa kuch nahi hai ok... aur did u heard cadet kriti answer....
navin :kriti nahi akriti..
r & g :(mimiked him):kriti nahi akriti.........
all laughed..

navin: chalo aub abhi ke cabin me chalke dekhte hai vahan kya chal raha hai..
raj: ye ladkiyan hi assi hai to ladke kaise honge....????????
gunny: i really dont know how i vll handle them....did u guys heard her questions ......
raj :whos Q(pretending tat he dont remember )
gunny :tat cadet aastha...
navin :r u scared of her.....
g :scared......mai kyun darunga usse.....
n :i dont think she can pass these tough drills..
r :i think u r rt navin..
g :i dont think soo.....i think she will pass with good marks...i know she is delicate and very sweet...(he then realised what he said )
n :yeah she was very sweet......kyon raj.......
r :haan yaar aub gunny keh raha hai to sweet hi hogi...
g :will u guys stop pulling my leg..
n :let me think...................no ...
n:raj tumhe kya lagta hai humme kya karna chahi ye....gunny ko chod de...
r :pehle abhi ke pass chalte hai ............phir sochenge

and they all went to abhi's room where 3 boys were standing...

abhi:cadet rahul sharma...
rahul :yes sir..
a :cadet rohit sharma..
rohit :yes sir..
abhi :tum dono...
rahul :sir hum judwa hai..
abhi :ohh
abhi:cadet aakash gupta
aakash: yes sir..
abhi :aap tino ek hi room mai rahenge aur aap ka room no hai 210..
ok guy u may leave now...
and the boy left the room
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so friends maine update kar diya hai...par agla update thoda late hoga...
as i have exams ...
and thanks ranu and quietrajpri1623
love
ashu

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