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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 10:05am | IP Logged
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz now only with long part asap.

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
please update karo na...
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
hi friends
ye raha update hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..
............................................................ ....................................................next day morning
naina,huda,ali,aalekh,pooja and ud r standing in ground
h :chutiyan kaise beet gayi pata hi nahi chala...
aa :tujhe tu saal bhar ki chuti bhi kum lagegi...
ali :hum to aaj subhe ka intazar kar rahe the...kafi bore hogaye the...
y :ya bro...life me koi thrill nahi the..
h :teri life me kabhi thrill hogi bhi nahi......... LOL

pooja sees some one well dressed in uniform comming towards them

p :naina tere bhai...
naina :haan vo aaj se vahi hum sab ka drill lenge...
h :chalo inhe bhi dekh lete hai...

after some time they have completed thier drill and are impressed by navin....

p :agla class kiska hai...
h :tere shah rukh ka...
n :to chale class ke liye...
p :pehle battery to charge karle...
ali :aur vaise bhi class shuru hone mai abhi kafi waqt hai..
y :i am really hungry bro ...the drill was really ....
h :abey abhi to keh raha tha ke life me thrill chaheye aur abhi to ye shuruvat hai...aur abhi se tere band baj gayi... LOL
y :u see bro i just wanna say tat drill was very exhausting...so...
aa :aub kuch khane ke liye bhi le ate hai...apun to chala tum logo ka ho gaya ho to aa jao..
y :wait iam comming chef...
ali :hum bhi aa rahe hai..

after some time they complete their food and are still sitting there chatting ...and orderly comes there and informs naina that raj is calling her..

naina leaves and there is a knock on door...

r :get in
n :aap ne mujh bulaya..
r :haan..

usske haath me ek book hai to vo abhi bhi book ke taraf he dekh raha hai..
naina ko pata nahi chal raha hai ke vo raj se kaise baat kare...kya bulaye..
raj ya phir sir...
raj sees her and understands her situation aur vo uske pass jata hai and holds her hand

r :kya hua..
n :raj tumne mujhe yaha...aur vo bhi iss waqt kyon bulaya..i mean abhi humrara class hai..
r :i know par tumse mile bager raha nahi gaya to issi liye..
n :.... Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
r :aaj sham ko kya kar rahe ho...i mean if u r free then i have some plans...
n :i am free...par abhi hum class ke liye late ho rahe hai sirrrrrrr Wink (with a naughty smile)
r :ohhh yes cadet then lets leave now but...promise me tat we r going to meet after the class..
n :i vll try...
r :wt????????? Confused

and naina leaves from there before he catch her...
all are in class. raj enters class........ naina still smiling...

raj starts class after some time the class is over
saare cadets bahar chale jate hai naina is picking her books...

r : naina.
n :yes sirrrrrr

raj naina ko dekh kar muskurata hai as she is looking very beautiful..her innocent face...naughty smile....

n :to aaj sham ko tum mujhe kaha leke jayenge...
r :vo ek surprise hai...........aur haan be ready at sharp 1900 hrs
n :aur hum kaha milenge???????
n :agar tum hostel aayenge to pooja ko pata chal jayega aur mai aapke room me nahi aa sakti kyon ki bhaya vaha hai..
r :to mai tumhara gunny ke room me wait karunga...
n :par waha to abhi bhi hoga..
r :nahi vo kuch kam se kma ke bahar gaya hai....
n : ok

and naina leaves from there...as she has shalini's class
after whole day hectic shedule they are back in room and pooja is on bed
aur naina ready ho rahi hai...

p :naina tu kahi ja rhi hai..
n :haan vo me bahar ja rahi hoon
p :kya baat hai tu itni confused kyun lag rahi hai...
n :mujhe pata nahi chal raha ke mai kya pehnu....ye jeans ya ye skirt....pooja ye dress bhi acchi hai na
p :tu ek kam kar vo skirt pehen le...waise tu ja kaha rahi hai...
p :aur tu puchto aise rahe hai jaise kisike saath date pe ja rahi hai..aur vo bhi shah rukh khan ke saath.

actually pooja real shah rukh ki baat kar rahi hai par naina ko lagta hai ke vo raj ki baat kar rahi hai

n :kya baat kar rahi hai puja d..d...date... aur mai...mai rajveer sir ke saath date pe nahi ja rahi hoon (her face is cmpletely red)
p :ohhhhhhh to aap kaha ja rahi hai .......
n :mai to aise he... Embarrassed Embarrassed
p :mujhe lagta hai abhi tu ready ho ke jana chaheye...sir ko aaur kitna intazar karvayegi Wink
n :(blushing hardly)tu kya bol rahi hai pooja Embarrassed
p :tu abhi ja jab aaye gi na tub mai tumhari class lungi...
p :abhi chal mai tere ready hone mai madat karti hoon...
p :agar kisine tere bare me pucha to mai kahungi ki tune khana kha liya aur tu so rahi hai
n :thanks pooja....... Smile
on the other side in raj's room ( raj gunny aur navin hai)
r :mai kya pehnu yaar
gunny comes near raj and murmurs
g :jyada natak mat kar varna navin ko shak ho jayega
r :ok to mai ye pehan lu...
g :ok
raj is wearing a jeans white shirt and a jeans jacket
n :ye aaj itna shaj dhaj ke kaha ja raha hai...kahi kisi ladki ke chakkar me to nahi padgaya..
r : arre yaar mai aise he ready nahi ho sakta...
n :haan raj tu kuch bhi kar le iss bar bhi mere fresher's bol me mere date tere date se acchi hogi...
r :sorry to disappoint u... par iss bar tu mujhse haar jayega...
g :pehle fresher's ko to aane do...aur raj tujhe nahi lagta ke tu late ho raha hai..
r : ok then bye...
raj leaves
n :gunny raj kisse milne gaya hai...
g : ye usse puchna chahiye tha...
n :mujhe lagta hai ke usse pyar ho gaya hai...
g :mujhe bhookh lagi hai.....mess me chale..
n :haan par tune to kaha tha suriji busy hai..etc etc
g:haan par aaj khana bana hai
n :to theak hai mai naina ko bhi bulata hoon..
g :usse apne frds ke saath rehne de chal hum chalte hai shayad vo bhi mess me he ho
(but gunny knows tat she is with raj)
and the leave for mess....
............................................................ ....................................................
raj is waiting for naina he is in gunny's room and naina opens door...he turns around and he is stunned to see her......
she is wearing a white long skirt and white top..........
naina :ahem ahem.....
raj :..........
naina :jane ka irada nahi hai kya
raj :nahi...
naina :to..kya irada hai........
raj :mai sari zindagi aise he tumhe dekhte rehna chata hoon...
naina :raj tum pagal hogaye hoon..
naina :aub chale.... isse pehle ke bhaya aa jaye
raj :navin....is saale ki to ...
naina :kya kaha tumne mere bhi ko
raj :humare rishtay ko naam de raha tha..
raj :isse pehle ke humare saale sahab ya aaye hum chaltet hai...
and they both leave..........
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waitng for ur comments
love
ashu

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
awesome too good very nice lovely part waituing for next asap with long part.
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
woooooow...i m also stuned after reading today's cute and hilarious update...outstanding indeed...dialogues were aweeeeeeesum...simply a great update dear...thanku soo much for this beautiful update
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
interesting ud Clap .plz cont soon......
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
a very cute update....the interaction between raj and naina is very sweet. great job.....please continue as soon as you can Tongue
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
very nice ud........and gr8 that u take comments so seriously.......u hv used bhaiya instead of bhai everywhere.........that's really sweet of uu....
and plzzz tell that when r u going to ud next....i mean on vich date......and it's really nice that u specified in the title about ur ud........ Smile Smile Smile

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