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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:16am | IP Logged
hey friends i am back with update....
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naina raj reached dr's home and its raining heavyly...

dr t:maine kakase baat kar li hai vo tum dono ko kamra aur kuch kapade

dedenge tum dono change karlena aaise hi mat baith jana tum dono bahot

bheeg chuke ho

raj :ok..bye...

they leave..and raj and naina get into home..

kaka :aap log aagaye mem sahab ne bataya tha ...aap kya lenge ...chai ya

coffee..

n :isski koi zarurat nahi hai..(politely)

kaka :to aap log kapade badal ligiye...

he shows them some cloths and he say tat he is leaving at the cottage

back side house if they need some thing they can call him.and he leaves

from there..

and raj picks some cloths and naina is still lost thinking tat which one

she should wear....
after great efforts she picks up one and enters near by room to change

r :naina mai coffee bana raha hoon tumhe chahiye

n :sir aapko cofe banani aati hai...(shouting from room)

r :haan...par tum ye kyon puch rahi ho

after some time n comes out of her room...he hears the sound and
raj picks cofe mugs and turns and his mouth and eyes were wide open....

n :sirrrrrrrrr.........

r :beautifulllllll...i mean naina.......i mean cadet............i

mean..........cofe....

he hand overs the mug to her his hands were a bit shaking...

naina is wearing a red two piece gown...her wet hears are resting freely on

her sholder...

naina a bit worried..and blushing :sir aap theak ho...

r :haan mai theak..theak hoon...and he sits on near by chair...

r :naina tum bahoot acchi lag rahi ho....

n :smiles

r and n completed there cofe and naina was about to leave when raj held

her hand
naina turned to him....and she was just looking at him....

r :will u dance with me...

n :abhi?????????yaha?????????

r :haan abhi aur yahi.....

naina jo raj ke aankome khoyi hue hai...just nods....they danced ...no

music was there...
they were so close that they can hear each others heart beat....and they

always loved to dance without music....
at the end naina and raj were eye locked...

raj moved forward and and holds her face in his hands and started kissing

her on her lips...
for a sec or 2 she didnt knew what was goin on later she held him and

started responding..
after some time they got apart..and naina ran away from there and closed

her room door
aur raj usse pata nahi chal raha ye ussne kyon kia aur vo aub naina se

kya kahega..
naina kaise react karege....

he stood there for some time...lost in his thoughts..
aur vo jake naina ke door par knock karta hai....

r :naina vo i ...

before he complete his sentence she opens the door and hugggggs him

raj was really happy....naina hugged him...vo raj se naraz nahi thi....

r :naina i love u...(he wispered these words in dreamy voice)

naina was crying par ye kushi ke aasu the..

r ;tum ro kyun rahi ho... naraz ho mujh se kya baat hai....

n :haan bahoot naraz hoon...

r : i am sorry..vo mujhe pata hai maine jo kuch bhi kiya...she put her

finger on his lips and

n :smiles..aapne itni si baat kehne ke liye itna waqt lagaya...

n :jub aap mere pass nahi the tab maine jana ke aap mere liye kya hai...
sir aap aub mujhe chodke kahi nahi jayege na..

r :haan par tumhe mere ek baat maani hogi..

n :kaise baat...

r :jab hum akele honge to tum mujhe raj bulaogi..

n :haan sir...(she looked at him )Oops raj
then he smiled.......
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so friend i have done my job now its ur turn to comment
i am waitng for ur comment...

take care
bye
love
ashu

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awesome too good very nice part loved it immensely waiting for next
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OH GOD IT WAS JUS AWESOME Big smile .... I AM SOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY THAT FINALLY THEY CONFESSED EACH OTHER THEIR FEELINGS Tongue .. I MUST SAY ASHU THAT U HAV DONE A GREAT JOB.. TODAYS PART WAS VERY ROMANTIC AND ASHU THIS IS FOR U Clap WAITING 4 THE NEXT PART


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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:39am | IP Logged
thankssssss
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oh its was soo sweet yaar...beautiful update...now can't wait for the further update...please update soon with a long part...and thanks for this lovely update...just awesum
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
next scene

raj aur naina ek dusare ki bahome khoye hue the.... aur waise he

soo gaye...(sooo nothing happened..ha haa haaa)...

next day morning

door bell rings.. and they both wake up... naina is pink and raj is

smiling.....

raj opened door and the servent got into home..

kaka :sahab aap kya lenge..

raj :do cofe bana dijiye...

raj and naina fresh hoke aate hai they have there cofe and left to

hospital to collect reports..
and they are in tina's cabin

dr t :rajke reports bilkul positive hai...aap kafi fast recover kar

rahe hai....

r :isska matlab mai duty join kar sakte hai.

dr t :haan ...........par aapki sholder aur legpe jo injury hai usske

dressing ka khass khayal rakhna hoga aur...tablets.....

n :jo ye kabhi waqtpe nahi lete..

dr t:unhe waqtpe leni hogi.....

raj just nodded..

r :to aub hum chale..

dr t :naina kya baat hai aaj tum kuch alag lag rahe ho

n :aisa kuch nhi hai (blushing )

t :par tumhara chehara to kuch aur hi keh raha hai....kyon raj

tumne kuch kaha kya???????

r :smiled..........

and tina understood

t :i am really happy for u both and she hugged naina...

r :aub chale naina...

n :bye..

r :bye tina

t : raj apna aur naina ka khayal rakhna.......

and now they left for kma
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in kma naveen was back....as naveen and gunny were newly

appointed ....so for some days they have to share room with raj and

abhi....

raj ko naveen ke aane ke bareme nahi pata tha as naveen wanna

give surprise to raj and naina

raj and naina enter acedamy

r :naveen kab aa rah hai

n :pata nahi...unhone kuch kaha nahi..

r :jab naveen ko humare bareme pata chalega to vo kya kahega..

n :iss baat se to mujhe bhi darr lag raha hai...

and they heard a chearful voice from behind

v :kiss baat se darr rahi hai meri behan

naina and raj turned behind and were shocked to see naveen
naveen :maine kaha tha na abhi in dono ke chere dekhne layak

honge jab me inhe surprise dunga..

raj :tum kab aaye..i mean it was really shock....rather than surprise

naveen :naina tum ye kis baat se darr rahi ho .

n:vo mai... naye  major aane wale hai na issi liye...

naveen :bus itni se baat ke liye darr gaye gudiya...

naina hugged naveen par vo raj ko dekh rahi the..

raj :mai room me ja ta hoon..

naveen :to ye le chabi..

r :kiske chabi mai apne room mai ja raha hoon..

navin :apne nahi humare....we have to share room for few days..
i hope u dont mind

r :ok ....tats not a big deal....with asmile

abhi :where is gunny he told me tat he will bring some food for

us....he cooks really well..

naina :gunny can cook....

navin :better than u...

naina punched him .....

navin :pehle se kafi tough ho gayi ho naina...pehle bar mujhe

tumhare punch se thoda dard hua...

raj :to agle bar bolnese pehle soch lena..

naina :par vo yaha kyon khana lane wale the i mean in ground...

raj :naina jab hum log yaha pe the tab hum uss lake ke pass jo paid

dikh raha hai na usske neche baithke khana khate the...

all of them headed to wards abhi's room as gunny didnt came

there...naina wanted to go to her room but they insisted her to join

them

abhi :ek baat kahni hai naina....

naina :haan sir

abhi :sir nahi abhi..i mean when u r not in the class u can call me

abhi

naina :ok

abhi :actually huda.....1st years jo join karne wale hai unke

ragging ke bareme soch rah hai....aur bc ragging ke khilaf hai aur

as a teacher hum aap logoko punish nahi karna chate soo plzz

handle him..

raj :u dont worry abhi...assa kuch nahi hoga mujhe apne cadets par

pura bharosa hai..

naina smiled hearing raj's words

navin :vaise naina tumhare passout hone me abhi sirf 6 mahine

bache hai to tum kaha join karna chahogi...

naina :jaha aap hoge vahi

she said this looking at raj who just smiled back to her but navin

thought she said it him

navin :ohh gudiya tats so sweet of u...but dont u expect any

favours from me...he said naughtly
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so friends here is ur next ud...
plz do comment
love
ashu


Edited by ashu20 - 19 May 2008 at 4:14am

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awesome too good thanks for another lovely part.

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