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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
oh its was soo sweet yaar...beautiful update...now can't wait for the further update...please update soon with a long part...and thanks for this lovely update...just awesum

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
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thank u
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
next scene

raj aur naina ek dusare ki bahome khoye hue the.... aur waise he

soo gaye...(sooo nothing happened..ha haa haaa)...

next day morning

door bell rings.. and they both wake up... naina is pink and raj is

smiling.....

raj opened door and the servent got into home..

kaka :sahab aap kya lenge..

raj :do cofe bana dijiye...

raj and naina fresh hoke aate hai they have there cofe and left to

hospital to collect reports..
and they are in tina's cabin

dr t :rajke reports bilkul positive hai...aap kafi fast recover kar

rahe hai....

r :isska matlab mai duty join kar sakte hai.

dr t :haan ...........par aapki sholder aur legpe jo injury hai usske

dressing ka khass khayal rakhna hoga aur...tablets.....

n :jo ye kabhi waqtpe nahi lete..

dr t:unhe waqtpe leni hogi.....

raj just nodded..

r :to aub hum chale..

dr t :naina kya baat hai aaj tum kuch alag lag rahe ho

n :aisa kuch nhi hai (blushing )

t :par tumhara chehara to kuch aur hi keh raha hai....kyon raj

tumne kuch kaha kya???????

r :smiled..........

and tina understood

t :i am really happy for u both and she hugged naina...

r :aub chale naina...

n :bye..

r :bye tina

t : raj apna aur naina ka khayal rakhna.......

and now they left for kma
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in kma naveen was back....as naveen and gunny were newly

appointed ....so for some days they have to share room with raj and

abhi....

raj ko naveen ke aane ke bareme nahi pata tha as naveen wanna

give surprise to raj and naina

raj and naina enter acedamy

r :naveen kab aa rah hai

n :pata nahi...unhone kuch kaha nahi..

r :jab naveen ko humare bareme pata chalega to vo kya kahega..

n :iss baat se to mujhe bhi darr lag raha hai...

and they heard a chearful voice from behind

v :kiss baat se darr rahi hai meri behan

naina and raj turned behind and were shocked to see naveen
naveen :maine kaha tha na abhi in dono ke chere dekhne layak

honge jab me inhe surprise dunga..

raj :tum kab aaye..i mean it was really shock....rather than surprise

naveen :naina tum ye kis baat se darr rahi ho .

n:vo mai... naye  major aane wale hai na issi liye...

naveen :bus itni se baat ke liye darr gaye gudiya...

naina hugged naveen par vo raj ko dekh rahi the..

raj :mai room me ja ta hoon..

naveen :to ye le chabi..

r :kiske chabi mai apne room mai ja raha hoon..

navin :apne nahi humare....we have to share room for few days..
i hope u dont mind

r :ok ....tats not a big deal....with asmile

abhi :where is gunny he told me tat he will bring some food for

us....he cooks really well..

naina :gunny can cook....

navin :better than u...

naina punched him .....

navin :pehle se kafi tough ho gayi ho naina...pehle bar mujhe

tumhare punch se thoda dard hua...

raj :to agle bar bolnese pehle soch lena..

naina :par vo yaha kyon khana lane wale the i mean in ground...

raj :naina jab hum log yaha pe the tab hum uss lake ke pass jo paid

dikh raha hai na usske neche baithke khana khate the...

all of them headed to wards abhi's room as gunny didnt came

there...naina wanted to go to her room but they insisted her to join

them

abhi :ek baat kahni hai naina....

naina :haan sir

abhi :sir nahi abhi..i mean when u r not in the class u can call me

abhi

naina :ok

abhi :actually huda.....1st years jo join karne wale hai unke

ragging ke bareme soch rah hai....aur bc ragging ke khilaf hai aur

as a teacher hum aap logoko punish nahi karna chate soo plzz

handle him..

raj :u dont worry abhi...assa kuch nahi hoga mujhe apne cadets par

pura bharosa hai..

naina smiled hearing raj's words

navin :vaise naina tumhare passout hone me abhi sirf 6 mahine

bache hai to tum kaha join karna chahogi...

naina :jaha aap hoge vahi

she said this looking at raj who just smiled back to her but navin

thought she said it him

navin :ohh gudiya tats so sweet of u...but dont u expect any

favours from me...he said naughtly
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so friends here is ur next ud...
plz do comment
love
ashu


Edited by ashu20 - 19 May 2008 at 4:14am

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
awesome too good thanks for another lovely part.
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!Mindblowing!!!!

The proposal was sooooo swwweeeettttt Tongue !!!!!Finally they confessed!!! Tongue

Aur phir kuch nahi hua......how bad Angry !!!!

Woh so gaye .... so sweet!!!

Naina ne kya kaha hai Raj ko....par Navin ko laga usse kaha!!! LOL LOL

Continue with the romance!!!

By the way..Nair kaha se aaya...woh toh gaya Gehlot ke saath jail mein chaaki peesne!!!

Please don't make the mistake they made in the serial!!!!Nair has anyways disappeared from the serial!!!!Usse toh jail jana hi chahiye....saare kale kartooto ka bhagidar tha!!!! Angry

Accha ek baat batao ...kya tumari story mein Roma hai Abhimanyu ke liye yaa phir Akriti aayegi???

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
Hey dear

great update........good that the both fially confessed....the scene was ver cute.

Thanks ......waiting for the next update Smile
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
awsome
superb
very nice Clap
finally they confesseed Wink good
waiting for u'r next update
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
waitingggggggggggg for it asap now only with long part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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