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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:03am | IP Logged

Originally posted by mehma24

hmmm ok give d AR part nd by d tym v read it u can add d AA part Wink

Cheeky!

Fine ye lo!

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by mehma24

hmmm ok give d AR part nd by d tym v read it u can add d AA part Wink

Cheeky!

Fine ye lo!

LOLLOL thts wot ma sis(cuzin) calls me LOLLOLLOL

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LOL yahoo dii...u finally givin da AR part...jaldi doo LOL LOL
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Part 16:

Armaan answers the door:

Kon chahiye aapko? he asks

The person says

Aap ! very quietly

and turns around with a box of super hot pizza and looks super cool in red

She has her head down and says

Sir,

I'm from yummy pizza place aur ye raha aapka oven hot pizza

Armaan wonders why the person is looking down and goes

Tum pizza deliver karne aye ho to aise sharma kyu rahi ho?

Don't worry ,tumhari shakal dekh ke mai tumse pyaar nahi karne lagoonga

Aur ye pizza wale home delivery ke liye ladkiya kabse bhejne lagey?

Dekho!

Mai ek izzatdaar aur shareef insaan hoo

Mujhe aisi koi buri aadatey nahi hai

I'm a one woman man

And meri hai

Basket!

Matlab usey mai pyaar se basket bulata hoo

Lekin uska naam Dr.Riddhima Shashank Gupta hai

Jo ab kuch dino ke baad

Mrs .Riddhima Armaan Malik ban jayegi! He says with pride

The delivery girl chuckles

Armaan goes

Tumhe hasi kyu aa rahi hai?

Are sach me meri aur Riddhima ki shadi honey wali hai

Isme hasne wali konsi baat hai?

She giggles again

And he gets irritated

Lao, ye pizza aur payment ka batao!

He takes the pizza from her

And checks out the delivery girl from top to bottom

She looks cute in a Yummy Pizza t-shirt and black cropped trousers and a red cap

He goes

Ye yummy pizza kuch jaana pehchana naam lagta hai

And pretends to think

And then goes

Chodo,pata nahi kaha suna hai

Tum jaldi payments ka batao

The girl now lifts her head to show her face

Asmani rang plays

He is amazed by her beauty as she takes her cap off and her hair blows across her face

He is left speechless  

And the girl goes

Sir?

He's still gazing her her angelic face

She smiles and takes the pizza away from his hand and puts it on the table

He follows her around

and then she goes back to the door

And says

Sir!

Payment?

He goes

Kitne hue?

With his eyes and mouth wide open

She goes

Zyada nahi!

And shuts the door from inside and gives him a naughty look

And says

Pulling him close against the door

Zyada nahi,

Yehi kuch do teen hugs
Aur chaar paanch kisses

Chalega?

Ya discount kardoo?

Armaan chuckles and looks at her

And says

Sure!

Aap apni payment abhi lengey ya khaana khaane ke baad and pins her to the wall

Riddhima escapes from under his hands

And goes

Khanaey ke baad

Aur agar aapko pizza yummy laga to

Ho sakta hai tip bhi mil jaye and winks

Armaan laughs and runs after her

They play the chase game

And then finally Armaan gets her and makes her sit at the dinner table and goes

Acha lets make it fair

Do teen kiss khaane ke pehle

Aur bohot sare khaney ke baad! Okay?

Hope u don't mind

Riddhima goes

No problem!

As long as u pay me and winks again

Armaan goes

Sure!

Mai kabhi apna hisaab adhoora nahi chodta and kisses her on the cheek

And goes

Mmmmmmmmmmm!

Yummm!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Zara is taraf mudna

And kisses the other cheek and says

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm!

Yummy!

Jab tum itni yummy ho to pizza to delicious hoga hi

Arey ha! Aapki pizza company me koi after sales scheme nahi hai?

And winks

Riddhima hits him on his back and goes

Hai na sir! 

Hum to apne customers ko serve karney ke saath saath unhe pizza khilatey bhi hai

And pulls out a slice of pizza and feeds him

He bites into the slice and then her finger and goes

Oh,I'm Sorry!

Kya karoo?

Aap...

Sorry I mean ye Pizza hai hi itna yummy ke just can't get enough!

And they laugh and joke

and

Share the yummy pizza and some yummy moments together !

 ...................................................... .....

 

Edited:

 

Back to the couple harassed by ' The Senior Doctor':

 

 

Atul grabs Anjali's hand

 

Looks at her puffy eyes

 

And thinks

 

Bohot ho gaya

 

Mai apni Anjali ko ab aur nahi sata sakta

 

Anjali is puzzled to see an unexpected pain in his eyes

 

And goes

 

Kya hua Atul?

 

Hum sabka wait karney waley hai?

 

Atul goes

 

Kon sab? And looks at her lovingly

 

She goes

 

Sab!

 

I mean Armaan Rahul and all

 

He goes

 

Wo sab nahi aa rahe Anjali

 

Aur tum chalo

 

And pulls her to run

 

Anjali goes

 

Atul!

 

Kya kar rahey ho,

 

bhaag kyu rahey ho?

 

Atul goes

 

Anjali! Jaldi karo and runs faster

 

And they finally reach the car

 

Atul says panting away

 

Anjali,gaadi me baitho

 

Huffing and puffing

 

She goes Okay!

 

Lekin baat kya hai?

 

Aur tum itni jaldi me kyu ho?

 

Aur mujhse baat bhi kar rahe ho?

 

Tumne mujhe maaf kar diya?

 

Atul goes

 

Anjali ,tum plz gaadi me baitho aur yaha se chalo

 

Mai tumhe sab batata hoo

 

And they sit in the car and drive away

 

Atul directs her towards a secluded beach area

 

And Anjali gets very surprised

 

She goes

 

Hum yaha kyu aye hai Atul?

 

Hum yaha kya karney waley hai?

 

Atul goes

 

Bahar ao ,mujhe kuch kehna hai tumhe

 

And they get out of the car and walk to the sandy beach

 

There's not many people around

 

And all they can hear is the tides hitting the shore

 

Atul  stops walking at a point

 

Turns to face Anjali

 

Folds his hands

 

closes his eyes with her image locked in them

 

And falls on his knees…………………….



Guys

Hope u liked the yummy update

And have u guessed why Armaan told the delivery girl his whole story?

keep guessing and

Plz do comment on this part ,now added with the AA part

Take care
Love u all
Hina



Edited by hinanaziri - 18 May 2008 at 5:14pm

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ahan tht ws a yummmmmmmyyyyyyyyyyy part hina di EmbarrassedWink

omg armi ne to pizza girl apne pyar ki puri history hi suna daali

main ussey basket kehta hoon...uska naam ye hai baad mein wo hoga LOLLOLLOL

can't imagine armi's expression on seeing ridzie as d pizza gal LOL muh band kar lo.....kahin makhi na ghus jaye Wink

awwww dpayment ws d best part

ridzie bhi na .....discount ka pooch rahi hai.....armi ko to aise payment jitni zyada ho utni achi lagegi Wink

awww ridz feeding armi.....tht ws really really cute nd adorableEmbarrassed

u rock di Clap

mehma



Edited by mehma24 - 18 May 2008 at 11:20am
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hehehehehehehehehe

omgggg dat was choo choo choo chweetEmbarrassed....kuch hugs aur thode kssess heheheheheheh omg kya sauda hai....wat brains di yummy pizza girl

n hes talkin to her all abt his lyf n his gf n everythin hehehehehehe omg i just love allt his....ure too good....loved the part totally...totally...it was excellent..super cute....hehehehehehehehe LOL

 



Edited by komalsirwani - 18 May 2008 at 11:14am
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:32am | IP Logged

Ok my loveys

I've added the AA part to it

Plz comment on that too if u can

Thanks for your previous comments

I will reply to them in a short while

and

Thanks for waiting

Hope the update was yummy enoughWink



Edited by hinanaziri - 18 May 2008 at 11:34am
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:43am | IP Logged
hehehehehheheeh loved t dii...heheheheh atul proposin anjie kya hehehehe poor guye...hes serioualy harrased by shub heheheheheheh loved it

but one Q dat made me thnk was...y did armi tel everythin to dewlivery gal...did he knw dat it was ridz?? diii...cmon u cant leve us with a Q cmon di...humari shakal dekho hum kitne bhole hai hehehehe u have to answer that...matlab u have to update ASAP...hehehehe LOL

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