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Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 (Page 75)

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
wohoo!! awesome and hilarious!!! hahahaah

yea im sure its ridhima.. but cant wait to see WHY.. lol
and wow u got a list going for ur next updates dont you?? cant wait for each one of the story developements Big smile atleast they are having developements unlike the actual DMG LOL

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
wotz d suprise. waitng 4 it.................. amazng prt............... Smile
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:56pm | IP Logged

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OMG OMG OMG, Hina diClap, you were just too good....I just read your part 14/15 now in the office & you can imagine my facial expressions all changing....Embarrassed
 
I knew that Arman wouldn't take advantage of her....but the way you wrote it all down was so killing.....loved the respect, the closeness, both of them share, this just shows how much they trust each other...they are so cute, so adorable, just a perfect relationship
 
Atul was so cute too, asking Subh sir to leave cos he was waiting there before him, & I was just waiting for Subh to say 'Mein Senior Doctor ho' he uses this bail everywhere, but he was right full to do that, after all today he is gona propose to his lady love, am eagerly waiting how he will propose, he is so scared of Keerti, I hope he does all right, but since you are the writer, there is no fear, am sure you will get his feelings passed onto to Keerti in the most stylish manner
 
Angie/Atul was sweet to, both asking Kaha hai sab? & the irony both are aware that no one is coming too, but don;t know, that the other doesn't know, really Hina di, you are too good a writer
 
Lastly, that stranger must be no other than our pyaari Ridz as a cute yummy pizza girl.....m sure this is Arman's favourite pizza, sorry sorry, favourite delivery person, that he will make the payment in kind WinkWink


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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:35pm | IP Logged

Woooow di!
Im speechless!
Luved both part 14 and 15!
Ur becumng nottier by da day! LOL

Plz cont soon! Ur ff is soooooooo addictive! Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
awww!!!! that part had a mix of everything!! ur updates r getting better n better hina di.. if that's even possible!! can't wait for u to continue!
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:02am | IP Logged
This was another awesome part from you...Your parts keep getting better && better...Ill be waiitng for the next update...
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:05am | IP Logged
wooooooooo di
very romantic part
i m waiting for ur next part
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:38am | IP Logged
hye di
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!
choooooooooooo adorable Embarrassed
juz luved it Clap
cont super soooooooooonnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
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