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Part 14:

Romance continued....

Armaan holds Riddhima tight

and has no plans of letting Riddhima go

Riddhima gets worried with every passing moment

'coz Armaan keeps coming closer to her with those passing moments

And now they are stuck to each other like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, joined to make the romantic picture complete

All they can hear is each other's pounding and thumping heart beat as the temperature rises in the atmosphere there

but the chilly breeze from somewhere tickles them to warm up in a passionate embrace

They loose themselves in each other

And close their eyes to dream of a dream where their dream comes true

Riddhima after a while goes

Armaan!

Armaan goes

Hmmmm?

Surprise nahi chahiye?

Armaan goes

Hmm,chahiye!

Still with his eyes closed and head dug in her neck

Lekin abhi nahi

Riddhima !

Mujhe apne aur kareeb aney do na? he asks in sexy voice

Riddhima goes

Aur kareeb ?

And she smiles and says

Mai to tumme samaa chuki hoo Armaan!

Armaan goes

Bas! Muhje bhi tumme samaane do!

Riddhima pulls him closer to her

And Armaan

plants a kiss on her neck
and again
and again

and then Riddhima lifts his head to look into his eyes

Armaan says

Riddhima

Mujhe pata hai tumhe dar lag raha hai

Aur mai bhi nahi chahta tha ki hum behek jaye

Par Riddhima

Jab hum ek doosre se itna pyaar karte hai

Aur saath zindagi bitaney waley hai

And we trust each other so much to phir…………………

And he aims for her lips

Riddhima

Goes

Armaan!

Armaan feels her uneasy tone

And goes

Fine! in a slight annoyed tone

and

lets go off her

to break away from the sinful moment

Riddhima knows he's not happy

Armaan turns and finds the switch for the lights and

Then comes and sits down on the sofa

He goes

Sorry Riddhima!

Mujhe apni hadh nahi paar karni chahiye thi!

I'm sorry!

Shayad maine kuch zyada hi expect kar liya tha

And starts playing with his fingers and sighs in despair

Riddhima sits down next to him and goes

Armaan!

Please !

Mujhse naraaz mat ho

And makes a sad apologetic face

Armaan can't meet her eye and just looks at his hands in frustration

She then grabs his hand and holds it and says

Armaan! She says with hope

Agar tum chahte ho ki hum…………

And lifts up from the sofa and pulls him up too

And walks to her room dragging him behind her

Armaan panics

And looks surprised and goes

Riddhima!

And frees his hand from her grip and says

Tum mujhe kaha lekar jaa rahi ho?

They are standing at the door to her room

And Riddhima goes

Chalo?

Armaan asks

Kaha?

Riddhima says looking down with a shy look

Tum chahte they na?

Ki hum

Hum kya Riddhima?

Asks Armaan

She goes

Hum saath me ……

She says hesitantly

Armaan goes

Saath me what? And raises his eyebrows in wonder

Riddhima doesn't know what and how to say it

And goes

Armaan ,tumhi to chahtey they ki hum ek hojaye!

Armaan looks her and gives her a passionate look

And says

Haa, Riddhima

Chalo,ek ho jaatey hai!

And he walks her in to the room

She goes Armaan!

Ye galat to nahi hai na Armaan?

Armaan goes

Riddhima!

Pyaar me kuch sahi galat nahi hota

Bas pyaar me pyaar hota hai and locks the door

And turns to walk to Riddhima

Riddhima feels goosebumps all over her and walks backwards

She knocks her leg on the bed and drops on it

Armaan goes

Riddhima!

Aaj hum dil jaan aur ab badan se bhi ek ho jayenegey

He says while walking to her

Riddhima feels butterflies in her tummy and goes

Armaan!

Armaan comes to her and kneels on the floor in front of her

He gets her hands and holds them

And

Kisses them

Riddhima trembles in fear

He looks up to see the look on her face

She looks devastated

He walks his fingers up her arms to her shoulder and pulls her close

Riddhima goes stiff

Armaan goes

Riddhima?

And gets up to reach her ear and whispers

Dar gayi?

She stutters

Nahiiiiii!

And looks at his eyes burning up with passion

Ans she closes her eyes and wishes this was a dream

And is disgusted with herself to realise that its real

She waits for Armaan to………..

And then she hears the door unlock

She frowns and feels around for him

He isn't there

She wonders ,where he's gone

And opens her eyes

Armaan stands at the door

With hands folded

giving a million dollar smile……………………



Hey
Guys,hope u liked this kind wannabe committing paap update
Did any of u have a feeling that they might actually do the undone
Or u knew right the beginning that this was Armaan's test?
Plz reply and tell me what u thought of it
Ye sham abhi khatam nahi hui,lemme tell u that
Pictue abhi baaki hai mere dost
So see u all in the next update
With the rest of the characters
Love u all
Take care
Hina.


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 May 2008 at 11:21am

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:45am | IP Logged

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hehehehehehehehe .......diiii....wel well well sach bolon...i knew armaan wouldnt take sucha stpe i trust him completely....n probably even ridz did....n dats y she was testin him....thx 4 takin our requests n makin it an complete AR....n now as us sed....there's lost more left in the evenin...waitin to see n read lots more di....great goingClapClapClap

n ridzy's surprise is still left na...waitin 4 dat toooWink...wonder wat she's upto this timeLOL

cont soooooooooooooooooooonEmbarrassed



Edited by komalsirwani - 17 May 2008 at 10:49am
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hey, gr8888888888888888888888888 prt.................. 2 guudddddddddddddddddddd n mindblowing Smile
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by komalsirwani

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hehehehehehehehe .......diiii....wel well well sach bolon...i knew armaan wouldnt take sucha stpe i trust him completely....n probably even ridz did....n dats y she was testin him....thx 4 takin our requests n makin it an complete AR....n now as us sed....there's lost more left in the evenin...waitin to see n read lots more di....great goingClapClapClap

n ridzy's surprise is still left na...waitin 4 dat toooWink...wonder wat she's upto this timeLOL

cont soooooooooooooooooooonEmbarrassed

Hey Kimmi,

I think about 90% will know its a test for the two

But what Riddhima has planned for the evening will turn out to be no less than a sin!Wink

Thnaks for liking this part and I have to do as u all say,mere itne honeslt loyal readers jo ho,,I cudn't say no

I will update the part soon!

Love

Hina

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omg omg omg hinu di tht ws such a killer part BlushingBlushingBlushing i m still red Wink

humpe ye kisne laal rang daalaEmbarrassed

hina di ne humari humein maar dala EmbarrassedEmbarrassedWink

ab to sach mein atul ki aatma aa gayi hai mujh mein.....jab dekho gaane hi gaati rehti hoon LOLLOLLOL

ok back 2 d update......just luved it nd after reading this i love armi more nd more Embarrassed

frankly wen ridzie fell down on her bed nd armi knelt nd kissed her hands......4 tht very moment i ws lyk.....oho they might do d undoneTongue bt then i ws lyk nai armi won't nd if he won't their relation wud b d strongest nd c u didn't let them do anything(atleast nt in this updateLOL)

nd aage to as u sd picture abhi baake hai mere dost nd i m w8ng 4 d picture LOL especially ridz ka raat ka plan......abhi tak nahi pata chala uska plan aakhir hai kya LOL nd ofcourse baaki k couples kya gul khila rahe hai???LOLLOL

continue soon

mehma



Edited by mehma24 - 17 May 2008 at 2:44pm
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@hina dii...hehehehehehe dii....dont scare me...abhi tak yeh part hi dimaag se nahi utra..aur ap mujhe phir paap ki baatein bata rahi ho LOL
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by komalsirwani

@hina dii...hehehehehehe dii....dont scare me...abhi tak yeh part hi dimaag se nahi utra..aur ap mujhe phir paap ki baatein bata rahi ho LOL

Ab Riddhima itna lalchayegi Armaan ko to,wo bechara kya sakta hai????

He's only human yaar!

Aur wo bhi tarsaya huaWink

 

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:11am | IP Logged
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arghhhhhhhhh AngryAngry

di i just read d 1st line nd ma dad came saying he's watching race nd if i want 2 i will hv 2 cum ryt nw Cry

nd i dun wanna read d romantic part(can guess it frm d 1st line as well as d ooooooo u hv in d titleEmbarrassed) in a hurryWink

will cum later nd comment till then this 1 is reserved LOL

No prbs sweety,take your time,

yes its more worth reading slooooowly!Wink

badi experienced hai yaar tu is baat me



Edited by hinanaziri - 17 May 2008 at 11:12am

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