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Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 (Page 70)

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by komalsirwani

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hehehehehehehehe .......diiii....wel well well sach bolon...i knew armaan wouldnt take sucha stpe i trust him completely....n probably even ridz did....n dats y she was testin him....thx 4 takin our requests n makin it an complete AR....n now as us sed....there's lost more left in the evenin...waitin to see n read lots more di....great goingClapClapClap

n ridzy's surprise is still left na...waitin 4 dat toooWink...wonder wat she's upto this timeLOL

cont soooooooooooooooooooonEmbarrassed

Hey Kimmi,

I think about 90% will know its a test for the two

But what Riddhima has planned for the evening will turn out to be no less than a sin!Wink

Thnaks for liking this part and I have to do as u all say,mere itne honeslt loyal readers jo ho,,I cudn't say no

I will update the part soon!

Love

Hina

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:04am | IP Logged

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omg omg omg hinu di tht ws such a killer part BlushingBlushingBlushing i m still red Wink

humpe ye kisne laal rang daalaEmbarrassed

hina di ne humari humein maar dala EmbarrassedEmbarrassedWink

ab to sach mein atul ki aatma aa gayi hai mujh mein.....jab dekho gaane hi gaati rehti hoon LOLLOLLOL

ok back 2 d update......just luved it nd after reading this i love armi more nd more Embarrassed

frankly wen ridzie fell down on her bed nd armi knelt nd kissed her hands......4 tht very moment i ws lyk.....oho they might do d undoneTongue bt then i ws lyk nai armi won't nd if he won't their relation wud b d strongest nd c u didn't let them do anything(atleast nt in this updateLOL)

nd aage to as u sd picture abhi baake hai mere dost nd i m w8ng 4 d picture LOL especially ridz ka raat ka plan......abhi tak nahi pata chala uska plan aakhir hai kya LOL nd ofcourse baaki k couples kya gul khila rahe hai???LOLLOL

continue soon

mehma



Edited by mehma24 - 17 May 2008 at 2:44pm
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:08am | IP Logged
@hina dii...hehehehehehe dii....dont scare me...abhi tak yeh part hi dimaag se nahi utra..aur ap mujhe phir paap ki baatein bata rahi ho LOL
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by komalsirwani

@hina dii...hehehehehehe dii....dont scare me...abhi tak yeh part hi dimaag se nahi utra..aur ap mujhe phir paap ki baatein bata rahi ho LOL

Ab Riddhima itna lalchayegi Armaan ko to,wo bechara kya sakta hai????

He's only human yaar!

Aur wo bhi tarsaya huaWink

 

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehma24

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arghhhhhhhhh AngryAngry

di i just read d 1st line nd ma dad came saying he's watching race nd if i want 2 i will hv 2 cum ryt nw Cry

nd i dun wanna read d romantic part(can guess it frm d 1st line as well as d ooooooo u hv in d titleEmbarrassed) in a hurryWink

will cum later nd comment till then this 1 is reserved LOL

No prbs sweety,take your time,

yes its more worth reading slooooowly!Wink

badi experienced hai yaar tu is baat me



Edited by hinanaziri - 17 May 2008 at 11:12am
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:20am | IP Logged
LOL diiiii....omg ure lines make me laugh...tarsaya hua LOL
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:28am | IP Logged

Originally posted by komalsirwani

LOL diiiii....omg ure lines make me laugh...tarsaya hua LOL

that made me laugh tooLOL

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omg!!!..wat a greattt update!:D.. i loved ittttttttttttttt:D

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