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Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 (Page 7)

hinz Viewbie

Joined: 13 September 2005
Posts: 28777

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Hello all,

I am so amazed to have recieved such a postive response to the recap and promo

Thanks all newbies and my good old friends to have replied

I will soon be giving you the first part to make u all smile

and I hope the creatives like always surprise us and cut this back to the pranks thing short

Edited by hinanaziri - 06 May 2008 at 2:59am

pari0706 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 December 2005
Posts: 8784

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 3:22am | IP Logged
me so late???????? *pari hits herself against wall n sees stars in day (din me tare); she gets back to normal n continues*

Hina jee sooo soo osrry for delay... plz continue supersoon n i like the promo hmm... anji becoming seedhi sadhi hmm n suprise? wht one?

-Pari Embarrassed
Tania.k IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 June 2006
Posts: 4427

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 3:32am | IP Logged
awesoem promo/teaser Clap Clap now i i can't wait lol!!

continue soon Wink
hyperash Senior Member

Joined: 13 January 2008
Posts: 824

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 5:31am | IP Logged
awesum prmo!!! cant wAiit!!! plzzz update soon!! Big smile
hinz Viewbie

Joined: 13 September 2005
Posts: 28777

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Part One:

The cars stop parallel to each other shortly after crossing the finishing point

Armaan has won the race and beaten Shashank

Atul blares the 'Khalballi' song out loud to celebrate

Shashank congratulates Armaan on his stylish win

Armaan looks at Riddhima in the mirror and says

Thank You sir!

Lekin I still think you superb

and may be next time and smiles

Padma goes from the back

Congratulations Armaan!

Lagta hai tumhari good luck ne tumhara saath de hi diya

Armaan grins and looks in the mirror again to see a shy blushing Riddhima trying to contain her happiness

and says


Lagta to aisa hi hai! and looks at Padma and smiles

Anjali is super upset on the defeat

Atul to rub it in sings

Ziddi ziddi ziddi ziddi Armaan!

Anjali looks at Atul and Armaan and goes

Ziddi to tum ho hi Armaan lekin

Lagta hai aaj to cheating bhi ki hogi zaroor

Aur waise hum ne tum logo ko jeetney diya

Nahi to mere dad kabhi kisi se nahi haartey!

Atul goes


Agar Armaan ziddi hai !

To tum?

Anjie goes

Atul,mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni

Tum ne mera saath chodke Armaan ka saath kyu diya?

and looks at him like a kid complaining of her toffee being stolen

Atul goes

Ulta mujhe tumse naraaz hona chahiye Anjali tumse

Tum mere saath is gaadi me kyu nahi ayi

Upar se itna atittude bhi de rahi ho?

Is baar mai tumhe manane nahi aoonga

Aur mai bohot serious hoo!

and looks real cross

Anjali never saw him that upset over anything and thinks she's in big trouble now

Shashank and Armaan smile at their cute fight and

Shashank feels that his daughter has found her soulmate in Atul and pretends he's not there to enjoy their sweet roothna manana

Padma laughs and goes

In dono ki pyaari si ladai to chalti rahegi

Hospital ke liye deri ho hari hai

Shashank replies

Oh Yes,of course1

Ye ladai to lagta hai kaafi lambi chalegi

Shubh and Keerti in their won world didn't give a damn of who won and who lost and were busy in/with each other

Holding hands and just talking away with their eyes

Rahul and Muskaan in the other car were the same

They just stared at each other lovingly and didn't take much interest in the race or the Atul-Anjie arguement

Shashank doesn't feel like diturbing the love birds

and goes

Loweee is in the air!

Padma smiles at him to confirm

Riddhima looks at Armaan and winks out of the blue

Armaan gets shocked and embarassed and thinks Riddhima has become a true flirt now

and doesn't even care about her parents

Shashank says

Okay Armaan!

Hum yahi se Sanjeevani ke liye nikal jaate hai

Aap baki sab ko ghar drop kar dengey please?

Armaan says

Sure sir! No problem

and they turn the cars in different directions!


Armaan after driving for a short while goes to Rahul

Abey O'Raoool!

Ab apni khaabo ki duniya se wapis aja

Tujhe ghar pehle chodoo?

Rahul is still not interested

Atul turns and taps on his shoulder

Muskaan comes out of the stare lock first and gets embarrased to be caught red handed

Armaan and Riddhima both chuckle

Atul goes

Armaan ,tujhse kuch pooch raha hai Rahul!

Aur Muskaan,tu bhi!

Tu to badi chupi rustam nikli yaar

Ye chakkar kab se chal raha hai bata na?

Muskaan gets back to her normal self and goes

Tu meri chod yaar

Tu bata,Anjali ke sath kya kya hua?

Atul turns back to his seat and says in a very shy way

Chup!Ye bhi koi batane wali baat hai?

Then thinks of their fight and goes annoyingly

Aur waise bhi mai abhi ussey bohot gussa hoo

Wo mere saath is gaadi me nahi ayi na?

Armaan goes

Good Atul!

Tujhe bhi usko attitide kabhi kabhi dena chahiye yaar!

Riddhima defends her sister and says


Atul ko aisa kuch nahi karna chahiye

Di ka to nature hi aisa hai

Wo kabhi haar asani se nahi maan sakti

Aur Atul,is gaadi me jagah bhi to nahi thi,
Isliye di nahi ayi hogi!

Atul goes

To tum us gaadi me reh jaati na aur usey yaha bhej deti

Rahul smiles at this and goes


Armaan ka kya hota phir?

Atul goes

Kyu,Uska kya hona hai?

Usko kyu problem hoti?

Armaan turns to Rahul and smiles

Riddhima and Muskaan both smile too and say


Tum bas ab Anjali se naraaz mat ho

Dekhna wo kal tak sab bhool jayegi!

Atul goes,

Lekin mai nahi bhoolunga is baar!

Armaan goes

Well done Atul!

Keep it up!

Rahul then goes

Armaan tu mujhe pehle ghar chod de

Phir mai Muskaan aur Atul ko drop kar doonga

Tu Riddhima ko drop kar dena and winks about his cool setting for AR

Riddhima gets all excited and

Armaan goes Okay! very casually and says

As you say!

Are you fine with that Riddhima?

and looks at Riddhima enjoying thinking of her time alone with him already

Rahul nods his head and goes


Armaan thanks him for this opportunity and

gets to Rahul's house and drops the three there

and asks Riddhima to come and sit in the front with him

Riddhima loves sitting with him in the front seat and recollects the romantic journey to Lonavla and blushes

and they leave for another exciting and romantic adventurous drive..................

I really hope all u guys liked it
Please reply with all your comments
Would love to know your take on this opening part
I hope and wish to give you lots more exciting updates if u want
Do u like the the storyline?
Lemme know
Take care for now
Love you all

Edited by hinanaziri - 06 May 2008 at 4:29pm

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Tania.k IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 June 2006
Posts: 4427

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 6:04am | IP Logged
wow  i'm the first to comment!  Awesoem update,Clap now it'll be fun to see/read LOL ajnali pataoing atul.. rahul is so sweet Embarrassed

Edited by me and just me - 06 May 2008 at 6:06am
MagicalKash IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 July 2007
Posts: 6623

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 6:08am | IP Logged
awesome hina di i said i will be addicted and see i am there lovddddddddd the prt soooooooooo romantic Clap cont soon i lov it

Edited by hot_diva - 06 May 2008 at 6:09am
ttimpy Senior Member

Joined: 03 April 2008
Posts: 922

Posted: 06 May 2008 at 6:10am | IP Logged
veeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice and sweet...cant wait for the romantic drive..........atul anjali manaaofy scene..............

keep it up and update soon.

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