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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:02am | IP Logged

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by magicgirlankita

hina di,
i m sorry par mujhe kehna padega that it was the ever worst part i read,mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahi thi,itna ghatiya koi kaise likh sakta hai aur aap itni achi writer hote hue bhi itna ganda likh rahi hain nahi maine aapse yeh expect nahi kiya tha Cry Kya yaar Ankita,mai to hairaan ho gayi thi,itna bura likha????bhi hum bhi kabhi kabhi nottei ho sakte hainDead very very very bad yaar i know i m very bad aapko rula diya main bas mazaak kar rahi thi i read both the parts together mere liye to suspense baki hi nahi tha but i thought the song would be zara zara but whatever both the parts were awesome aajkal to sab hi nottie ho rahe hain,Kya kare nottie season chal raha hai na,tabhi tosabse zyaada nottie aap hi ho riddhima,muskaan,rahul,armaan,atul,and somewhat anjie tooooooo,both the updates were just awesome as usual i loved it and the endingbto the 10th part was hilarious yaar masti wow waise nottie logon ki list mein sabse top par aapka naam hi aayega coz u r the creative of such nottie people.........Plz yaar mujhe bohot sharam aa rahi haioye hoyye sharam???????kyun bhai sach hi to kaha maine aur kya kahoon samajh nahi aa raha but u rock
Kuch na kaho........hum kuch nahi kaheinge to kaun kahega???????????

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jodubai

Good Morning Di, this was such a nice part..Thanks so much Jyoti.I mean all your parts are very nice, but this had the ganging up thing, which was just so cute...the dailogues were toooooooo good....I hope Atul thoda aur attitude dekaye..Dikha diya usne yaar its good to see Angie troubled in love for a change...Rahul & Muski too good too...its good to see Arman & Rahul bonding up...(masti sochti...) I know,kab tak ladte rahengey finally the Lady herself..Ridz...I must say she is a very good student, learning all secrets of trade from the one & only Arman SIR...too good...I am waiting for Angie to excute her plan but most importantly am waiting for the raat ka plan Wink ... She did,but didn't work,but it wasn't supposed to work anyway,aur bhi to manana padega
but sadly I will read it only on Sunday..Nahi,I have updated already yaar.however if you are to update today nothing like it...but kehte hai na saber ka fhal mitta hota hai...so I will wait....thanks for giving my day a fantastic start... U will get to read a few funny and hot sizzling updates with a few secrets out and AA back on track when  u'r back on Sunday,have a gr8 weekend
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:07am | IP Logged

Originally posted by shalika

nice update

Thanks hun!

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Also thanks

Nidha,Shruti,Jia and Huma

thank u all for replying

and see soon in the next update!



Edited by hinanaziri - 15 May 2008 at 4:18am
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:25am | IP Logged

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by mehma24

hi hina di......tht ws another nice part Clap
Thanks
ye temporarily dominant Atul k dimaag mein aakhir chal kya raha hai Confused bohot kuch,tum log twist padh ke pagal ho jaogey haila pagal....haan fir hum mental hospital mein laptops le jayenge....jaie aap jail mein le jaoge 2 write updates....v wil take 2 read them Wink
yes it got a bit serious in d middle bt again Atul ws back 2 his cheery self.....Atulanjali LOL hum par film bhi ban ne lagi hai anjali LOL LOL hmmm

Sorry Anjali!

Mujhe to kuch kuch nahi

Itna sara bohot kuch hua lekin in zaalimo ke liye maine ye natak kiya

LOL atul ko itna saara bohot kuch hua LOL Only Atul could say that exactly

ye sab interns kya kar rahe hai.....they r double planning against each other Wink i hope iss confusion mein AA ko AR k baare mein pakka pata chal jaye Embarrassed bt only after ridz raat wala plan is successful Embarrassed LOL Of course,wo to hona hi hai,usi se to pata chalega! nw nw i m getting eager 4 d raat wala planEmbarrassed jaldi se update karo na Cry

OMG muskaan ko masti karni hai LOL LOLcan't even imagine d expression on rahul nd armi's face LOL LOL LOL can't stop laughing Raoool and Muski will be one masti wali couple ,I tell u yes yes punjab se jo haiWinkLOL

awwww Anjali ws so sweet....Atul shudn't hv been rude this tym bt its ok coz v need 2 know d raat wala plan LOL Ha,na I had to go that way to make the raat ka plan happen bt wen will it happenCry...i m sure their will b loads of confusion wid d execution of every1s different plansLOLLOL

nd luved d short romantic scenes between AR nd RM Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

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smmmm so anjie wud b putting up sum menaka act...i mean sumthing lyk ridz zara zara??? 2 seduce atul Wink yep,have u guessed the song? i guess its sum SRK song coz  muski says anjie tera Shahrukh aa raha hai yaar.... m i right??Ha yaar,wo to hai,lekin song guess kar na pata hota to ab tak bata deti na Cry koi hint bhi to do Ab pata chala? haan pata chal gaya nd i ws lyk....hw can i b so stupid 2 nt remember this song

bt anjie dun u know?? Atul to khwaabon mein bhi aisa kuch nahi soch sakta shaadi se pehle LOL hawww!,Atul to bada sharma jayega yaar! i hope he wont b lyk govinda in partner nd humare dr armaan wud b atuls salman WinkLOLLOL bechare armidz LOLLOLnahi yaar,Atul ek dam john abraham bigair mooch wala banega,like in Jism lolololol yah atul bigair mooch wala john(par atul ko bike chalani nahi aatiWink) nd anjie uski bips LOLLOLLOLTu bhi na,kya kya imagine karti hai,lekin scene acha hai  imagine atul riding his bicycle nd anjie sitting behind himTongue


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Tum soti kab ho?LOLLOLwaise to main 12 tak soti hoon bt these days i m hvng holidays Big smile i m lyk totally freeeeeeeeee so i sleep arnd 2:30 or 3 Tongue nd wake up at 10 in d mrng WinkLOLLOLMaze hai tere to yes tabhi to almost pura din IF pe hoti ho

btw this is d most colorful post i hv ever seen LOLLOLLOLMe too!!! nw more colours added bt maine bahut kuch delete kar diya LOL

 

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:36am | IP Logged
wow hina di awesome parts
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehma24

Originally posted by hinanaziri

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smmmm so anjie wud b putting up sum menaka act...i mean sumthing lyk ridz zara zara??? 2 seduce atul Wink yep,have u guessed the song? i guess its sum SRK song coz  muski says anjie tera Shahrukh aa raha hai yaar.... m i right??Ha yaar,wo to hai,lekin song guess kar na pata hota to ab tak bata deti na Cry koi hint bhi to do Ab pata chala? haan pata chal gaya nd i ws lyk....hw can i b so stupid 2 nt remember this song

bt anjie dun u know?? Atul to khwaabon mein bhi aisa kuch nahi soch sakta shaadi se pehle LOL hawww!,Atul to bada sharma jayega yaar! i hope he wont b lyk govinda in partner nd humare dr armaan wud b atuls salman WinkLOLLOL bechare armidz LOLLOLnahi yaar,Atul ek dam john abraham bigair mooch wala banega,like in Jism lolololol yah atul bigair mooch wala john(par atul ko bike chalani nahi aatiWink) nd anjie uski bips LOLLOLLOLTu bhi na,kya kya imagine karti hai,lekin scene acha hai  imagine atul riding his bicycle nd anjie sitting behind himTongue Yaar,That wud be out of this world,it will be the bst ride one cud give and have


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Tum soti kab ho?LOLLOLwaise to main 12 tak soti hoon bt these days i m hvng holidays Big smile i m lyk totally freeeeeeeeee so i sleep arnd 2:30 or 3 Tongue nd wake up at 10 in d mrng WinkLOLLOLMaze hai tere to yes tabhi to almost pura din IF pe hoti ho

btw this is d most colorful post i hv ever seen LOLLOLLOLMe too!!! nw more colours added bt maine bahut kuch delete kar diya LOL

 

Hmmmm,konsa colour baki hai?

Chal lets get back to my normal green

Ok abhi mai update likh rahi hoo,dimaag me,ghar pe jake type karoongi

Aaj wala epi bhi to itna funny honey wala hai

Mai yaha apne sare 6 coulples ki evening plan kar rahi hoo

Ek se  badkar ek scene honey wala hai,watch out



Edited by hinanaziri - 15 May 2008 at 4:46am

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