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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:08am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by hinanaziri

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hina di another wonderful part....surely worth d wait Clap Thanks Mehmu awww u knoe i luv being called this do you?dekha maine kaise pehchana? ab meri hina di ho to pehchanoge hi Big smileWo to hai!

ya itne saare double meaning naughty dialogues just lyk v hv in dmg these days Wink   LOL LOL LOL wahi se to inspire hui hoo,warna mai to itni shareef hoo na!
ARmidz ke to hote hi hai naughty dialogues nd AA k bhi Embarrassed abhi unko bhi to equal nahi to thoda aur to naughty banana chahiye na
Muskaan LOL LOL control ur emotions nd dun b so excited always LOL Woi to,nahi to Rahool ki toWink
btw luved it wen u sd RMTV cameras watching atul LOL LOL LOLthat was og nai? og bole to ????ConfusedBole to Original yaar oh k yea it is ClapHMMM

oho so ridz has a surprise 4 d night....wonder wot it is Embarrassed Tongue ahem ahem i hope its sumthing lyk "ahem ahemWink"ha wohi Ahem Ahem,ab tu itni bhi nadaan nahi lol! wo to hai WinkEmbarrassedLOLLOLnatkhat

smmmm so anjie wud b putting up sum menaka act...i mean sumthing lyk ridz zara zara??? 2 seduce atul Wink yep,have u guessed the song? i guess its sum SRK song coz  muski says anjie tera Shahrukh aa raha hai yaar.... m i right??Ha yaar,wo to hai,lekin song guess kar na pata hota to ab tak bata deti na Cry koi hint bhi to do Ab pata chala?

bt anjie dun u know?? Atul to khwaabon mein bhi aisa kuch nahi soch sakta shaadi se pehle LOL hawww!,Atul to bada sharma jayega yaar! i hope he wont b lyk govinda in partner nd humare dr armaan wud b atuls salman WinkLOLLOL bechare armidz LOLLOLnahi yaar,Atul ek dam john abraham bigair mooch wala banega,like in Jism lolololol yah atul bigair mooch wala john(par atul ko bike chalani nahi aatiWink) nd anjie uski bips LOLLOLLOLTu bhi na,kya kya imagine karti hai,lekin scene acha hai
so b careful....u might hv 2 use ridz "raat wala backup plan" LOL LOL ha wo to hai hi ready all the time

mehma

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Tum soti kab ho?LOLLOLwaise to main 12 tak soti hoon bt these days i m hvng holidays Big smile i m lyk totally freeeeeeeeee so i sleep arnd 2:30 or 3 Tongue nd wake up at 10 in d mrng WinkLOLLOLMaze hai tere to

btw this is d most colorful post i hv ever seen LOLLOLLOLMe too!!!

 

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by heenaz

absulotely amazing di Clap
wat an update, enjoyed anjali's performance, kya zabraat tha Wink Madam hot Anjali lol lagta hai ridhima ka bhoot anjali me ghus gaya LOL LOL
aur ye atul ko kya hua? Confused bechari anjali, hope they get back while on their date Embarrassed Embarrassed Of course they will,there's also a twist to the story here oh one more twist
the update was really cute at some points Embarrassed all the couples romancing hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ Day Dreaming
can't wait for the next part Aawww imagine that, ha imagine dat hamra to wohi kaam hai sab imagine karte rehnaWink

to fhir plans pe plan banate rahiye aur hume deta rahiye sweet and romantic updates Zaroor!,jail me se bhi,tu bail karaney ayegi na lololol zaroor aungi aur pehli baat ho sake to appko jail jane hi nahi dungi lolLOL

love u heena Love u too sweetyTongue
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:34am | IP Logged

Originally posted by heenaz

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by heenaz

absulotely amazing di Clap
wat an update, enjoyed anjali's performance, kya zabraat tha Wink Madam hot Anjali lol lagta hai ridhima ka bhoot anjali me ghus gaya LOL LOL
aur ye atul ko kya hua? Confused bechari anjali, hope they get back while on their date Embarrassed Embarrassed Of course they will,there's also a twist to the story here oh one more twist
the update was really cute at some points Embarrassed all the couples romancing hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ Day Dreaming
can't wait for the next part Aawww imagine that, ha imagine dat hamra to wohi kaam hai sab imagine karte rehnaWink

to fhir plans pe plan banate rahiye aur hume deta rahiye sweet and romantic updates Zaroor!,jail me se bhi,tu bail karaney ayegi na lololol zaroor aungi aur pehli baat ho sake to appko jail jane hi nahi dungi lolLOL

love u heena Love u too sweetyTongue

Aww,thats so sweet yaar,lwkin mai is baar jail me jana chahti hoo,phir waha koi kaam waam nahi hoga na,bas updates hi updates hongey lololol! 

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:35am | IP Logged
hina di,
i m sorry par mujhe kehna padega that it was the ever worst part i read,mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahi thi,itna ghatiya koi kaise likh sakta hai aur aap itni achi writer hote hue bhi itna ganda likh rahi hain nahi maine aapse yeh expect nahi kiya tha Cry Dead very very very bad yaar i know i m very bad aapko rula diya main bas mazaak kar rahi thi i read both the parts together mere liye to suspense baki hi nahi tha but i thought the song would be zara zara but whatever both the parts were awesome aajkal to sab hi nottie ho rahe hain,riddhima,muskaan,rahul,armaan,atul,and somewhat anjie tooooooo,both the updates were just awesome as usual i loved it and the endingbto the 10th part was hilarious yaar masti wow waise nottie logon ki list mein sabse top par aapka naam hi aayega coz u r the creative of such nottie people.........aur kya kahoon samajh nahi aa raha but u rock
luv ya
@nkit@


Edited by magicgirlankita - 15 May 2008 at 3:35am
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:39am | IP Logged
hi hina di......tht ws another nice part Clap

ye temporarily dominant Atul k dimaag mein aakhir chal kya raha hai Confused
yes it got a bit seious in d middle bt again Atul ws back 2 his cheery self.....Atulanjali LOL hum par film bhi ban ne lagi hai anjali LOL LOL

Sorry Anjali!

Mujhe to kuch kuch nahi

Itna sara bohot kuch hua lekin in zaalimo ke liye maine ye natak kiya

LOL atul ko itna saara bohot kuch hua LOL

ye sab interns kya kar rahe hai.....they r double planning against each other Wink i hope iss confusion mein AA ko AR k baare mein pakka pata chal jaye Embarrassed bt only after ridz raat wala plan is successful Embarrassed LOL

OMG muskaan ko masti karni hai LOL LOLcan't even imagine d expression on rahul nd armi's face LOL LOL LOL can't stop laughing

awwww Anjali ws so sweet....Atul shudn't hv been rude this tym bt its ok coz v need 2 know d raat wala plan LOL

nd luved d short romantic scenes between AR nd RM Embarrassed

mehma


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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by magicgirlankita

hina di,
i m sorry par mujhe kehna padega that it was the ever worst part i read,mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahi thi,itna ghatiya koi kaise likh sakta hai aur aap itni achi writer hote hue bhi itna ganda likh rahi hain nahi maine aapse yeh expect nahi kiya tha Cry Kya yaar Ankita,mai to hairaan ho gayi thi,itna bura likha????Dead very very very bad yaar i know i m very bad aapko rula diya main bas mazaak kar rahi thi i read both the parts together mere liye to suspense baki hi nahi tha but i thought the song would be zara zara but whatever both the parts were awesome aajkal to sab hi nottie ho rahe hain,Kya kare nottie season chal raha hai nariddhima,muskaan,rahul,armaan,atul,and somewhat anjie tooooooo,both the updates were just awesome as usual i loved it and the endingbto the 10th part was hilarious yaar masti wow waise nottie logon ki list mein sabse top par aapka naam hi aayega coz u r the creative of such nottie people.........Plz yaar mujhe bohot sharam aa rahi hai aur kya kahoon samajh nahi aa raha but u rock
luv ya Kuch na kaho........
@nkit@
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehma24

hi hina di......tht ws another nice part Clap
Thanks
ye temporarily dominant Atul k dimaag mein aakhir chal kya raha hai Confused bohot kuch,tum log twist padh ke pagal ho jaogey
yes it got a bit seious in d middle bt again Atul ws back 2 his cheery self.....Atulanjali LOL hum par film bhi ban ne lagi hai anjali LOL LOL hmmm

Sorry Anjali!

Mujhe to kuch kuch nahi

Itna sara bohot kuch hua lekin in zaalimo ke liye maine ye natak kiya

LOL atul ko itna saara bohot kuch hua LOL Only Atul could say that

ye sab interns kya kar rahe hai.....they r double planning against each other Wink i hope iss confusion mein AA ko AR k baare mein pakka pata chal jaye Embarrassed bt only after ridz raat wala plan is successful Embarrassed LOL Of course,wo to hona hi hai,usi se to pata chalega!

OMG muskaan ko masti karni hai LOL LOLcan't even imagine d expression on rahul nd armi's face LOL LOL LOL can't stop laughing Raoool and Muski will be one masti wali couple ,I tell u

awwww Anjali ws so sweet....Atul shudn't hv been rude this tym bt its ok coz v need 2 know d raat wala plan LOL Ha,na I had to go that way to make the raat ka plan happen

nd luved d short romantic scenes between AR nd RM Embarrassed

mehma


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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by heenaz

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by heenaz

absulotely amazing di Clap
wat an update, enjoyed anjali's performance, kya zabraat tha Wink Madam hot Anjali lol lagta hai ridhima ka bhoot anjali me ghus gaya LOL LOL
aur ye atul ko kya hua? Confused bechari anjali, hope they get back while on their date Embarrassed Embarrassed Of course they will,there's also a twist to the story here oh one more twist
the update was really cute at some points Embarrassed all the couples romancing hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ Day Dreaming
can't wait for the next part Aawww imagine that, ha imagine dat hamra to wohi kaam hai sab imagine karte rehnaWink

to fhir plans pe plan banate rahiye aur hume deta rahiye sweet and romantic updates Zaroor!,jail me se bhi,tu bail karaney ayegi na lololol zaroor aungi aur pehli baat ho sake to appko jail jane hi nahi dungi lolLOL

love u heena Love u too sweetyTongue

Aww,thats so sweet yaar,lwkin mai is baar jail me jana chahti hoo,phir waha koi kaam waam nahi hoga na,bas updates hi updates hongey lololol! 

nice idea di, lol hum log DMG ke liye kya kya nahi kar sakte, yahan tak ke jail jaane ko bhi tayaar haiLOL LOL

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