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Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 (Page 48)

Jodubai Goldie
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
Good Morning Di, this was such a nice part...I mean all your parts are very nice, but this had the ganging up thing, which was just so cute...the dailogues were toooooooo good....I hope Atul thoda aur attitude dekaye..its good to see Angie troubled in love for a change...Rahul & Muski too good too...its good to see Arman & Rahul bonding up...(masti sochti...) finally the Lady herself..Ridz...I must say she is a very good student, learning all secrets of trade from the one & only Arman SIR...too good...I am waiting for Angie to excute her plan but most importantly am waiting for the raat ka plan Wink ...
but sadly I will read it only on Sunday...however if you are to update today nothing like it...but kehte hai na saber ka fhal mitta hota hai...so I will wait....thanks for giving my day a fantastic start...
take care

nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
really a nice update thank for updating please continue it soon

Har baar dil se yeh paigaam aaye,
Jubaan kholu to tera he naam aaye,
Tum he kyon bhaye dil ko kya malum,
Jab nazroo ke saamne haseen tamaam aaye.


Edited by kvn1983 - 14 May 2008 at 11:13pm
Kanika05 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 11:41pm | IP Logged

Hey Di!..In ur sleep u forgot to edit the topicLOLLOL

This was a cool,mindblowing partClapClap...I am loving AA these days EmbarrassedWink..it did get a little serious but u balanced well with Atul's funny one linersLOL."Atulanjali"LOLLOLLOL...& "Masti" alsoLOL

I'll be specially waiting for the missing romance partWinkEmbarrassed

Love KanuHeart

shalika Goldie
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
nice update
yachna IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 1:47am | IP Logged
hinu meri jaan yaar kya baat hai aaj kal to bade bade naughty hoti jaa rahi ho hmmmmmmmmm bahut maza aya angie ne kitne minnete kiye bt atul attitude de raha as per armaan theory nd ar heeeeeeee kabhi nahi sudhrega nd gvng her sme advice gud goi nd atul abbe sale ..wow lvd tht dialogs of atul nd ar bcm so naughty heeeeeeeee raat ko   omg yaar bt ridz bhi much kam nahi hai wow i realy enjoyd it yaar........................lvd it.........ab dekhte hai ridz ka surprise raat wala armaan to khushi mein jhum utha hmmmmmmmmmmmm..................
luv yachu
hinz Viewbie
hinz
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 2:30am | IP Logged

Originally posted by yachna

hinu meri jaan yaar kya baat hai aaj kal to bade bade naughty hoti jaa rahi ho hmmmmmmmmm bahut maza aya angie ne kitne minnete kiye bt atul attitude de raha as per armaan theory nd ar heeeeeeee kabhi nahi sudhrega nd gvng her sme advice gud goi nd atul abbe sale ..wow lvd tht dialogs of atul nd ar bcm so naughty heeeeeeeee raat ko   omg yaar bt ridz bhi much kam nahi hai wow i realy enjoyd it yaar........................lvd it.........ab dekhte hai ridz ka surprise raat wala armaan to khushi mein jhum utha hmmmmmmmmmmmm..................
luv yachu

Hey Yachu,

I was wondering phir se khaa gayab ho gayi tum,chalo ab aa gayi,good

thanks yaar for liking the update,Ab to full on masti chal rahi hai Sanjeevani me,sab ek doosre ke against planning kar rahe hai,lets see result kya nikata hai

Thanks again

 

heenaz IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 2:31am | IP Logged
absulotely amazing di Clap
wat an update, enjoyed anjali's performance, kya zabraat tha Wink
aur ye atul ko kya hua? Confused bechari anjali, hope they get back while on their date Embarrassed Embarrassed
the update was really cute at some points Embarrassed all the couples romancing hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ Day Dreaming
can't wait for the next part

to fhir plans pe plan banate rahiye aur hume deta rahiye sweet and romantic updates

love u heena Tongue
hinz Viewbie
hinz
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heenaz

absulotely amazing di Clap
wat an update, enjoyed anjali's performance, kya zabraat tha Wink Madam hot Anjali
aur ye atul ko kya hua? Confused bechari anjali, hope they get back while on their date Embarrassed Embarrassed Of course they will,there's also a twist to the story here
the update was really cute at some points Embarrassed all the couples romancing hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ Day Dreaming
can't wait for the next part Aawww imagine that

to fhir plans pe plan banate rahiye aur hume deta rahiye sweet and romantic updates Zaroor!,jail me se bhi,tu bail karaney ayegi na lololol

love u heena Love u too sweetyTongue

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