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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by mehma24

hina di another wonderful part....surely worth d wait Clap Thanks Mehmu awww u knoe i luv being called this
ya itne saare double meaning naughty dialogues just lyk v hv in dmg these days Wink   LOL LOL LOL wahi se to inspire hui hoo,warna mai to itni shareef hoo na!
ARmidz ke to hote hi hai naughty dialogues nd AA k bhi Embarrassed abhi unko bhi to equal nahi to thoda aur to naughty banana chahiye na
Muskaan LOL LOL control ur emotions nd dun b so excited always LOL Woi to,nahi to Rahool ki toWink
btw luved it wen u sd RMTV cameras watching atul LOL LOL LOLthat was og nai? og bole to ????Confused

oho so ridz has a surprise 4 d night....wonder wot it is Embarrassed Tongue ahem ahem i hope its sumthing lyk "ahem ahem"Wink

smmmm so anjie wud b putting up sum menaka act...i mean sumthing lyk ridz zara zara??? 2 seduce atul Wink yep,have u guessed the song? i guess its sum SRK song coz  muski says anjie tera Shahrukh aa raha hai yaar.... m i right??
bt anjie dun u know?? Atul to khwaabon mein bhi aisa kuch nahi soch sakta shaadi se pehle LOL hawww!,Atul to bada sharma jayega yaar! i hope he wont b lyk govinda in partner nd humare dr armaan wud b atuls salman WinkLOLLOL bechare armidz LOLLOL
so b careful....u might hv 2 use ridz "raat wala backup plan" LOL LOL ha wo to hai hi ready all the time

mehma

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:13pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by AngelicSoniya

awesum...very nice part...
Clap
i actually dont hav wrds yaar...u r so gr8 ...
armaan is so naughty huh...
well cont soon

Thanks Soniya

Glad u liked this part

I will cont soon!

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:17pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by mehma24

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by mehma24

hina di another wonderful part....surely worth d wait Clap Thanks Mehmu awww u knoe i luv being called this do you?dekha maine kaise pehchana?ya itne saare double meaning naughty dialogues just lyk v hv in dmg these days Wink   LOL LOL LOL wahi se to inspire hui hoo,warna mai to itni shareef hoo na!
ARmidz ke to hote hi hai naughty dialogues nd AA k bhi Embarrassed abhi unko bhi to equal nahi to thoda aur to naughty banana chahiye na
Muskaan LOL LOL control ur emotions nd dun b so excited always LOL Woi to,nahi to Rahool ki toWink
btw luved it wen u sd RMTV cameras watching atul LOL LOL LOLthat was og nai? og bole to ????ConfusedBole to Original yaar

oho so ridz has a surprise 4 d night....wonder wot it is Embarrassed Tongue ahem ahem i hope its sumthing lyk "ahem ahemWink"ha wohi Ahem Ahem,ab tu itni bhi nadaan nahi lol!

smmmm so anjie wud b putting up sum menaka act...i mean sumthing lyk ridz zara zara??? 2 seduce atul Wink yep,have u guessed the song? i guess its sum SRK song coz  muski says anjie tera Shahrukh aa raha hai yaar.... m i right??Ha yaar,wo to hai,lekin song guess kar na
bt anjie dun u know?? Atul to khwaabon mein bhi aisa kuch nahi soch sakta shaadi se pehle LOL hawww!,Atul to bada sharma jayega yaar! i hope he wont b lyk govinda in partner nd humare dr armaan wud b atuls salman WinkLOLLOL bechare armidz LOLLOLnahi yaar,Atul ek dam john abraham bigair mooch wala banega,like in Jism lolololol
so b careful....u might hv 2 use ridz "raat wala backup plan" LOL LOL ha wo to hai hi ready all the time

mehma

One question

Tum soti kab ho?

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by mehma24

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by mehma24

hina di another wonderful part....surely worth d wait Clap Thanks Mehmu awww u knoe i luv being called this do you?dekha maine kaise pehchana? ab meri hina di ho to pehchanoge hi Big smile

ya itne saare double meaning naughty dialogues just lyk v hv in dmg these days Wink   LOL LOL LOL wahi se to inspire hui hoo,warna mai to itni shareef hoo na!
ARmidz ke to hote hi hai naughty dialogues nd AA k bhi Embarrassed abhi unko bhi to equal nahi to thoda aur to naughty banana chahiye na
Muskaan LOL LOL control ur emotions nd dun b so excited always LOL Woi to,nahi to Rahool ki toWink
btw luved it wen u sd RMTV cameras watching atul LOL LOL LOLthat was og nai? og bole to ????ConfusedBole to Original yaar oh k yea it is Clap

oho so ridz has a surprise 4 d night....wonder wot it is Embarrassed Tongue ahem ahem i hope its sumthing lyk "ahem ahemWink"ha wohi Ahem Ahem,ab tu itni bhi nadaan nahi lol! wo to hai WinkEmbarrassedLOLLOL

smmmm so anjie wud b putting up sum menaka act...i mean sumthing lyk ridz zara zara??? 2 seduce atul Wink yep,have u guessed the song? i guess its sum SRK song coz  muski says anjie tera Shahrukh aa raha hai yaar.... m i right??Ha yaar,wo to hai,lekin song guess kar na pata hota to ab tak bata deti na Cry koi hint bhi to do

bt anjie dun u know?? Atul to khwaabon mein bhi aisa kuch nahi soch sakta shaadi se pehle LOL hawww!,Atul to bada sharma jayega yaar! i hope he wont b lyk govinda in partner nd humare dr armaan wud b atuls salman WinkLOLLOL bechare armidz LOLLOLnahi yaar,Atul ek dam john abraham bigair mooch wala banega,like in Jism lolololol yah atul bigair mooch wala john(par atul ko bike chalani nahi aatiWink) nd anjie uski bips LOLLOLLOL
so b careful....u might hv 2 use ridz "raat wala backup plan" LOL LOL ha wo to hai hi ready all the time

mehma

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Tum soti kab ho?LOLLOLwaise to main 12 tak soti hoon bt these days i m hvng holidays Big smile i m lyk totally freeeeeeeeee so i sleep arnd 2:30 or 3 Tongue nd wake up at 10 in d mrng WinkLOLLOL

btw this is d most colorful post i hv ever seen LOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
This part was so cute && naughty...
I wonder what Rida has up her sleeve for the nught...LOL
Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
what a naughty part!! i luvd it!!
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Part 10:

Atul looks at everyone and walks in with loads of attitude in him

Armaan goes

Come on Anjie!

Anjie goes okay, sadly and sings

Tum paas aye!

Yu muskuraye!

Sob sob!

Atul goes face to face to a teary Anjali and gives a very rude angry look and shows

Am I muskuraaing?

Anjali still continues

Tum ne na jaane kya

Sapne dikhaye

Sob sob!

Atul walks away to the serving bar

And the others are in a shock to see Atul behave so rudely to Anjali

Dil bebasi me chup ke rota hai

Kya karoo haaye

Kuch kuch hota hai!

Sob sob!

Armaan holds Riddhima's hand and this time he really feels for Anjali and goes

Kuch kuch Hota hai?

And asks Riddhima what to do

Rahul sings

Kuch Kuch Hota Hai to Muskaan and goes

Kuch kar!

Muskaan goes to Anjali

Abey,ye konsa rone wala gaa rahi ho Anjali tum?

Hame pata hai tumhe Kuch Kuch hota hai

Lekin is kuch kuch ko bohot kuch banana ke liye tumhe wo wala item karna hi hoga yaar

Riddhima goes

Haan di,Dikhado Atul ko apna wo wala roop!

Anjali wipes her tears

And gives an adamant look

Gets back all her lost bold attitude and gets charged up to lure her love

Atul on the other hand gets some food and sits on the table in the corner ignoring Anjali and her suicidal song

Anjali goes

Watch me! And

goes Atul! in a seductive voice

The others get shocked to see her change so quick from a sad to a hot Anjali

Atul looks at her and gets worried

Anjali sheds her waistcoat first and then loosens her shirts top button

Pulls Muskaan's scarf out of her hair

And walks to Atul singing

Yeh Mera dil yaar ka deewana

Deewana deewana

Pyaar ka parwana

Ata hai mujhko Pyaar me jal jana

Mushkil hai pyaare ,tera bachke jaana


The shocked crew look amazed with her dance and are happy for them

Yeh Mera dil yaar ka deewana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Atul feels a weakening effect in his knees

He is totally seduced and becomes a naughty Shahrukh

Armaan goes Wow!

And to tease Riddhima ,he says

Kahi tumhara raat ka surprise aisa kuch to nahi?

Riddhima smiles and goes

Hmm, may be?

Rahul goes to Muskaan looking gorgeous in her curly let down hair

Anjali sach me Atul se kitna pyaar karti hai na?

Muskaan goes in usual bubbly way

Tum bhi kabhi roothogey na mujhse to mai bhi tumhe aise hi manaoongi

Thik hai?

Rahul goes

Phir to mai abhi se naraaz hoo tujhse!

Chal mana!

They both smile and hug sweetly and
think Atul and Anjali are sorted now

Armaan and Riddhima hold hands under the table too

Anjali finishes the song in style

Atul sits there with his eyes closed and just blown away by Anjali's beauty

Anjali thinks her mission was successful and now she's got her Atul back

Atul then has a disturbing thought

He thinks of continuing his anger drama somehow to really take Anjali to the limit

He loves this game and wants it to go on forever

He opens his eyes to see a little shy and a little embarrassed Anjali waiting to be praised on her performance

But Atul has different plans

The canteen goes silent and everybody awaits the forgiving scene

Then Atul says

Aise kyu dekh rahi ho mujhe? Again rudely

Pehle kabhi mujhe dekha nahi kya?

Aur ye sab karke tum sabit kya karna chahti ho?

Ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?

Aur ye tumhari koshish mujhe manane k thi?

Anjali is confused and feels as though she has no hope now

Atul then

Nahi Anjali,mai itni jaldi nahi maanney wala

Kaha tha na maine?

Anjali looks completely shattered with all her hopes washed away

The others are surprised with Atul's behaviour too

Armaan goes

Champ!

Bohot ho gaya yaar!

Riddhima goes

Plz Atul,di ko maaf kardo!

Atul winks at them and funny music plays again

They look at each other and think

He's now learnt the tricks of the trade and has become a true player

And they are stuck with a disappointed Anjali and a temporarily dominant Atul

Anjali just can't take her pain and embarrassment anymore and runs to the locker room

The four tell Atul off for being so rude

Atul goes

Tum logo ne hi to kaha tha yaar!

Ab mujhe maza aney laga hai ,mai is natak to aur agey leke jana chahta hoo

Isme tum sab ko meri madad karni chahiye guys

I love Anjali

Aur mujhe sirf ye jaanna hai ki wo bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti hai ya nahi?

Bas!

And thinks to himself

Saaalo,mujhe Anjali ke saamne phasa kar ab mujhse hi ye drama!

Mai apni Anjali ko bohot ache se jaanta hoo

Lekin mai tum sab ko bhi prove karke rahoonga ki wo bhi mujhse bohot pyaar karti hai aur mere liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai!

Sorry Anjali!

Mujhe to kuch kuch nahi

Itna sara bohot kuch hua lekin in zaalimo ke liye maine ye natak kiya

Armaan and Rahul go

Tu chahta kya hai ab,bataa na?

Atul goes

Arey!

Tum sab ko Anjali ki itni fikar kyu ho rahi hai?

Kal tak to meri side they na tum log?

Riddhima goes

Atul!

Ye sab drama tha

Hum chaaro is plan me they!

Muskaan goes ha yaar!

Humne to socha tha ki maza ayega Anjali ko tujhe manatey dekh

Lekin yaha to baat bohot serious ho gayi yaar

Atul goes

Come on guys

I was just joking
Mazaak tha

Jaise tum logo ne mujhse kiya waise

Armaan goes

Thik hai ,agar ye mazaak tha to aaj tujhe Anjali ke saath movie dekhne aur dinner par jaana hoga

Hum sab uske saamne pretend karengey ke hum bhi aa rahe hai

Lekin jaogey sirf tum dono hi!

Atul goes

Really?

Great idea

Konsi achi nayi film lagi hai?

Armaan goes

Atulanjali? Dekhega?

Atul goes wow Atulanjali?

Kya naam hai na,Atul and Anjali makes Atulanjali

Wow ,hum par film bhi ban gayi Anjali,
humari jodi kitni famous hai nai?
Aur dekhna ye film bhi ek dam superhit rahegi!

Konse show ki tickets hai Armaan?

Rahul goes

Raat ke Bara baje ki!

Atul goes

Lekin wo to bohot late ho jayega na yaar

Phir kal subah duty bhi to karni hai!

Koi baat nahi ,pehle dinner kar letey hai hum log

Phir film bhi dekh lengey

Riddhima and Muskaan get relieved that Atul is back to his funny self
And now they have to somehow send Anjali to the the cinema since plan one backfired

Riddhima says

Mai kuch bhi karke di ko cinema bhej doongi,

Muskaan goes

Mai aur Rahul bhi film dekhne jayengey yaar

Kyu Rahul?

Don't worry hum Anjali aur Atul se bohot door baithengey thik hai?

Rahul goes

Tujhse kisne kaha mai chaloonga tere sath?

Muskaan goes

Maine!

Chalogey na tum?

Bada mazaa ayega

Khoob masti karengey

Armaan and Rahul go

Masti? And their eyes pop out!


Hey all
Hope u all liked the update
Did it get a little serious somewhere along the middle?I thought it did
Its now become a plan on a plan and another plan and it might turn out to be a right mess in the end,but it will all be very romantic,funny and a full of masti evening for all 6 couples!
Sorry to have strectched it,but I just cudn't do any justice to the romantic evening if I am so sleepy now,so thought I'll leave it for tomorrow
Plz reply with your comments good or bad on this part
and sorry if u were disspointed in anyway
I'll be back with the missing romance soon
Take care
And love u all
Hina


Edited by hinanaziri - 14 May 2008 at 6:27pm

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
hey hina
cool part

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