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Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 (Page 41)

heenaz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
wow di hiba got a good story teller award, jijaji sahi keh rahe hai poori maa par gayi hai LOL

the part was absolutely gr8 Clap
Loved AR's romance and AA's roothna manana, maan jao maan jao atul Wink bechara kitni badi problem me phansa hai LOL
to fhir dr. ridhima fhir se naughty ho gayi ha, lagta hai next update awesome hone wala hai Embarrassed Embarrassed
i am sure the person behind R is Rahul, well dats wat i think Big smile
waiting for the next update, plz update soon
lots of love heena Tongue

hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
Part 8:

Kisse chup rahi ho Riddheema?

asks Padma

Ridz goes shocked

Ma! Aap?

Wo mai to

Paddy looks out to see Armaan running in the corridor searching her

She pulls Riddhima out and goes

Kahi aap inhe to nahi dhoond rahe Dr.Armaan?

Armaan looks at Ridz and Paddy and comes running to them
and says

Oh!To tum yaha chupi thi?

Paddy goes Baat kya hai?

Tum isey dhoond kyu rahe they ?

Armaan goes

Aap na apni beti ko samjha dijiye

Ridz panics and makes a

Plz don't tell her face

But Armaan loves to trouble her so he goes

Ye aaj kal bohot n.....

Paddy goes

Bohot kya?

Riddhima closes her eyes and just can't face her mum

Armaan says

Bohot acha kaam karney lagi hai hai ye
Sara time sabki praises leti hai
Agar aise hi acha performance deti rahi to baki hum sab kabhi IOTM ban hi nahi saktey!

Kyu Riddhima?

Kyu kar rahi ho tum aisa,arey doosro ko bhi to chance do,kuch acha karney ka

and winks

Padma sees him wink and goes

Oh,Acha to ye baat thi?

Ha,Dr.Riddheema aapko doosro ko bhi chance dena chahiye badmashi karney ka!

Armaan goes

Woi to!
without realising what Paddy just said

Riddhima shys away

Paddy goes

Armaan ,tum fikar amt karo,mai isey samjhadoongi thik hai?

Acha wo Nana kaise hai,maine suna ki kal unki tabiyet kharaab ho gayi thi ?

Ridz goes

Hum wahi jaa rahe they mom

Armaan goes,aap bhi chaliye

Paddy goes Okay!

The three see Shashank in the corridor

He asks
Kaha jaa rahe hai aap log?

Sab thik to hai na?

Paddy goes,wo nana matlab Mr.Deshpandey ko milne

Shashank goes,to phir is nek kaam me

Can I join u?

Armaan goes

Of course sir!

and goes

Now the family looks complete!

Ridz smiles and goes


They go to the ICU

Lovely gives Nana some medicines and helps him sit up to have them

Nana sees the future family approaching and goes

Arey ,apna hero to bada chaloo nikla

Lagta hai,bulbul ke sath sath uske maa baap ko bhi pata liya usne

Kahi ye log shadi ke liye invite to karne nahi aye?

He thinks out loud

Lovely goes

Oji,kiski shadi jee?

and goes

Hello jee! to the visitors

Shash asks

So,Mr Deshapandey?Ab kaise hai aap?

Nana goes

Ekdam jhakkas!

They laugh at him and Paddy goes

Arey sister Lovely aap poori raat yahi thi?

Lovely says Haa jee!

Paddy goes aap jaiye,aur aram kar lijiye
mai kisi aur ko yaha bhejti hoo

Lovely goes

Oji,nai jee,mai thik hoo aur mai sari raat thodi na jaagi thi,ek do neend ke jhoke maare they maine

Nana is taken aback by Lovely's unconditional and modest behaviour

and appreciates how much she cared for him and nursed him all night

and feels his first love spark towards her

Armaan and Riddhima come forward and go

So Nana?

Aap kaise hai?

Aap ne to humko dara hi diya tha!

Shash and Paddy appreciate their concern and decide to leave them with Nana and take Lovely with them to get some rest

As soon as they leave

Nana pulls Armaan and asks

Kyu Hero?

Kaise itni jaldi tuney apne saas sasur ko pata liya?

Ridz hears this and goes

Kahan Nana?

Abhi to sirf maa ko pata hai

Papa ko to kuch bhi nahi pata!

Armaan turns and goes close to Riddhima and goes

Tumhe sharam nahi ati?

Control Riddhima!

Nana ke saamne to itni desperate mat bano!

Riddhima first looks confused then smiles

Nana goes

Kaan me kya khusur phusur kar raha hai bulbul ke?

Armaan goes

Arey,kuch nahi Nana
Bas aap abhi jaldi se thi ho jao
Phir mujhe aapse kuch imp training leni hai
'Learn to meet the parents for chai,only @ Nana's No.1 acting school' ting tong!

Nana goes

Ey Hero!Nautanki band kar
Sach me tujhe chai pe bulaya hai?

Armaan goes
Of course sach me !

Aur phir jab mai itna impressive hoo to

Riddhima ke ma aur papa

How can they they say no to the 'Most Eligible Bachelor' I mean Doctor ?

Unka to na karney ka sawaal hi nahi uth ta ,mai hoo hi itna smart,handsome,professional and....

Oho!list bohot lambi hai

In short

I am the perfect partner they can possibly think of!

Riddhima hits him and goes

Kuch zyaada nahi hora Armaan? and gets irritated with his self praise

Armaan goes

Really? and frowns

Nana goes

Itna jyada mat akad hero!

Saas sasur ke saamne ache acho ki hawa nikal jati hai

Armaan goes ina dramatic way



To Nana mujhe aap achi si training denge na unse baat cheet karney ki?

Nana goes

Haa! haa to stop his drama

Ridz goes

Acha Nana ,hum ab chalte hai

Aap ko kuch der baat ward me shift kar dengey,phir hum shaam ko kaam khatam karney ke baad aapse milney ayengey ok?

and to wind Armaan up she goes

Chalein Mr.Perfect I mean Dr. Armaan the great?

Armaan gets annoyed and goes

Jee chaliye

Would be soon Mrs.Armaan the great!

Nana laughs and goes

Natak company!

Hey guys
Hope u liked this part
I will give u the next one shortly as a treat
Hope u liked this part
and plz don't forget to comment
Love u all Muah Mwah Mwah!
and thanks all for being addicted
Take care

Edited by hinanaziri - 14 May 2008 at 10:14am

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heyy_babyy Goldie

Joined: 04 August 2007
Posts: 991

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
Super cute part!!!
Love Armaan's dialogues...
He's getting wittier by da day...dont u think???
But Im lovin it....
Plz continue soon!!!
addicted2ksg IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 April 2008
Posts: 2564

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
it was sooo cute!! luv seeing them all together as one big happy family! can't wait for the next update hina di!
hinz Viewbie

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Joined: 13 September 2005
Posts: 28683

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 6:27pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by armaanaddict

it was sooo cute!! luv seeing them all together as one big happy family! can't wait for the next update hina di!

Ok here it is,u don't have to wait at all!

hinz Viewbie

NB8 & IPKKNDEBP Banner Contest winner
Joined: 13 September 2005
Posts: 28683

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 6:31pm | IP Logged


My whole update got erased

I'm so cross!

Apparently I can't post too many messages in a certain time span

I'm so gutted yaar ,it was mighty long update ,I can't re-type it ever


I wasted all that time typing and unfortunately didn't save it on this particular ocassion

My bad luck


So annoyed

I betta get some sleep,before I break the computer

See ya

Sorry,can't update because of the above!

Edited by hinanaziri - 13 May 2008 at 6:33pm
gia.khan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
awesomeeee!..please continue soon
nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 January 2008
Posts: 21049

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
so sweet of u its really an awsome update Clap
please update next part soon

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