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Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 (Page 28)

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Part 5:

Muskaan!

screams Rahul

Muskaan jumps at that and comes back to her senses
and gets embarrased

She starts cleaning the kitchen surface and says

Sorry! Sorry mai wo

Rahul goes

Meri khayalo me kho gayi thi?

Muskaan blushes and smiles

Then Rahul goes and stands behind her while resting his back on the worktop

Muskaan boils the milk again and pours it into the mugs
She gets very concious and feels Rahul watching

Rahul comes from the back and grabs his coffee

Muskaan goes

Tumhari coffee!

Rahul goes hmm!

Has a sip and puts the mug down and goes

Hmm,Coffee to badiya banati hai tu,jale hue doodh ki bhi!

Muskaan laughs and goes

Maine doosra doodh liya tha,wo wala to sara gir gaya

Rahul goes

Agar yehi haal raha na tera to tere mummyji and papaji teri internship chudakey teri shadi kar wa dengey!

Muskaan blushes again
Rahul feels the need to show her some love

He comes from the back,pulls her from the waist and hugs her from behind

Muskaan closes her eyes and holds his arms wrapped around her waist

Rahul rests his head on her shoulder and closes his eyes

Both loose themselves in each other and just enjoy the moment

Rahul then opens his eyes and

turns her around to face him

Muskaan turns with her eyes looking down very shyly

Rahul asks

Sun!
Didi ko Patiala bhejoo tere mummy papa se baat karne?

Muskaan smiles and says

Dhatt!

and right then Rahul's mobile rings

Rahul answers it

Its Atul !

Atul goes in a very anxious tone

Yaar,Rahul mujhe plz teri help chahiye yaar!

Rahul goes Atul

Tu itna pareshan kyu lag raha hai?

Sab thik to hai,tere plants wagera?

Atul goes

Kuch thik nahi hai yaar!

Trinzy,my best friend se meri dicussion hui yaar

Usne mujhe suggest kiya ki Anjali ko mujhe impress karna hi hoga

Tu plz kal mujhe bike chalani sikha sakta hai?

Rahul goes

Atul,bike chalani to mai sikha doonga tujhe lekin

ye Trinzy kaun hai?

aur teri best friend?

Atul goes Arey!tu trinzy ko nahi jaanta?

Rahul goes nahi!

Tuney to kabhi mujhe ussey milaya nahi

Muskaan goes

Oye!

Trinzy uske ek paudhe ka naam hai

Rahul goes

Oh ,ha Trinzy ,yaad aya

Acha acha,to usne tujhe Anjali ko impress karne ka idea diya?

Atul goes
Ha !yaar

Isliye maine tujhe abhi fone kiya kal ki driving lesson book karne

Rahul goes

Atul!
Yaad hai tujhe,humne kya decide kiya tha?

Ki Anjali ko tu attitude dega aur wo tujhe manayegi?

Atul goes,
Yaar usme to bohot time waste ho jayega

Aur kya pata Anjali mujhe kabhi manayegi bhi ya nahi

Mai Anjali ko is mushkil me nahi daal sakta yaar

Rahul goes

Dekh Atul!

Is baar to tujhe hamari baat maan ni hi padegi

Atul goes

Nahi yaar!

Rahul goes
Mai kuch nahi sunne wala

Kal pata chal hi jayega ki Anjali ko kuch yaad bhi hai ya nahi,tumhare aaj ke jhagde ke bare me

To hum kal milte hai aur decide karengey ok?

Tu ab dimaag par zyada bojh mat daal aur apne bacho ke sath enjoy kar

See you tomorrow ok?

Atul goes

Okay!sadly and hangs up

Muskaan laughs at the the whole Atul-trinzy discussion and

Then Rahul goes

Chal,mai bhi nikalta hoo
Warna dinner bhi yahi karna padega!

Muskaan smiles and goes
Thik hai!

Rahul goes

Dinner ke liye nahi rokegi?

Muskaan nods her head and goes
Nahi!

Rahul goes
Haan !Coffee banane me itna time laga tujhe
To dinner banante hue to shayad breakfast ka time ho jae?

Muskaan looks up and makes a
'I'll kill u' face

Rahul goes
Aise mat dekh

Lagta hai dinner me mujhe hi kha jayegi!

Muskaan smiles

and then Rahul holds her hand and says a sweet goodbye!

and leaves Muskaan all loved up


Next morning:

Armaan gets to the hospital first to make sure Nana is fine

He finds Nana sleeping and Lovely by his side

Armaan smiles and doesn't disturb them and goes to the locker room

Atul comes in next

followed by Rahul and Muskaan

Armaan comes out of the changing room to see all three there and goes

Hi guys,
Hi champ!

Muskaan and Rahul go

Hi Armaan!

Atul looks worried,confused and sad and doesn't say anything

Armaan asks Rahul and Muskaan

Isko kya hua hai?

Rahul goes
Anjali !aur kya?

Armaan goes Anjie?
Oh ya!

Atul ko to aaj se uskey saamne bold and dominant banna hai na?

Muskaan goes

Ha ,lekin ye maane tab na
Isey to Anjali se do minute bhi door raha nahi jaata

Ye bold kya khaak banega

Dekhna abhi wo ayegi aur ye phir se uske agey peeche ghoomega

Rahul goes
Dekh Atul,hum tere faide ki baat kar rahe hai

Tujhe Anjali ke pyaar ko aazmana nahi?

Yaar,isse acha mauka nahi milega tujhe

Atul stills looks upset and doesn't agree with them

Muskaan goes

Abey hero!
Dekhna Anjali tujhe kaise pyaar se manane ati hai

Wo itni bhi buri nahi hai yaar!

Atul goes

Arey chup!
Meri Anjali ko bura mat bol,wo bilkul bhi buri nahi hai

Meri Anjali to sabse pyaari hai!

Armaan goes

Ok! okay!
Teri Anjali sabse pyari hai!
Fine?
Agreed!

Hum to bas itna dekhna chahte hai ki tu usey kitna pyara lagta hai

I'm sure wo tujhe definitely manayegi champ

Just trust me yaar

Bas tu usey khoob sara gusssa ur attitude dikha
aur dekh wo kaise Anjali Gupta se Anjali Joshi banti hai

Atul loves to hear Anjali with his name and goes excitedly

Acha?
Tu sure hai?
Anjali mujhe manayegi?

Armaan goes
Of course champ!

Ladkiyo ke baare me mujhe bohot experience hai yaar
Kyu Rahul? and winks at Rahul

Rahul goes
You're such a dog Armaan!

Armaan laughs and goes

Yaar champ!
Mai tujhe kabhi galat advice nahi doonga yaar
Tu bas mera ye funda try kar
Aur dekhna Anjali to kya uske poori family tujhe manane ayegi!

Waise Riddhima ayi nahi? and looks around

Anjali and Riddhima walk in at that point

and go

Hi guys!

Anjali goes with a smile

Hey Atul!

Kya hua itne udaas kyu lag rahe ho?

and goes into her locker to get something out

Atul looks at Armaan,Muskaan and Rahul

and they threaten him to do as they said

Riddhima notices something going on and decides to join in the fun and goes

Kya hua Atul?

Tum kahi kal ki race ke baad wali ladai ke liye gussey me to nahi ho?

and winks at the gang

Atul goes while pretending to be angry

Haan!Ridz
Tumhe kaise pata

in a bold husky voice

Anjali goes looks out and thinks

Was that her Atul?

Then goes
Oh,come on Atul!
Us choti si ladai par tum itna stronly kyu react kar rahe ho?

Armaan sees Atul's already giving in to Anjali face

and goes dramatically

Arey!
Anjie!
Tum ko kya pata
Atul tumse kitna gusse me hai?
Tumne kal uska saath bhi nahi diya aur uske sath baithne meri gaadi me bhi nahi ayi

Anjie goes
Armaan!
It was only a stupid race okay?
Aur maine socha ki mai dad ka saath doo
He's my father after all

Rahul goes to rub it in

Aur Atul kuch nahi?

Anjie goes

Whats wrong with you guys?

Tum log is baat ka itna bada issue kyu bana rahe ho?

Aur Atul ,tumhe kabse itna gussa aney laga?

and turns to get her lab coat out 

Atul makes an apologetic face and goes towards Anjali and says

Wo Anjali,mai to kabbbssseee

Muskaan covers his mouth and pulls him back

Riddhima then goes all innocently

Di!
Atul sach me bohot gusse me lag raha hai
Usey bhi gussa ata hai di

Armaan joins in and goes

Ha! Anjie
Basket sach keh rahi hai
Dekho champ ne kaisi 'Angry Young Man 'ki shakal banayi hai

Anjali sticks out her head from her locker and looks at Atul

Atul looks more abused than angry

and tries his best to give the best angry look possible

Anjali goes gently

Atul!

and gets worried

Atul turns away 'coz he just couldn't pretend anymore
and sits on the bench with a bang to show his anger

Anjali panics and gets all concerned about his sudden change in character and walks to Atul

Rahul goes to the others

Guys!

Coffee peeney chalein ? and signals to the others to leave them alone

Armaan goes 

Champ,mere dost 
Ab tujhe Anjali hi mana sakti hai I guess!

Good luck Anjie!
and walks our pretending to be very sad and teary

Riddhima and Muskaan giggle and go

Plz Atul,maan jao na !

Muskaan pinches and goes to Atul quietly
Aa rahi hai teri Anjali tujhe manane
Aur gussa dikhana usko okay?

and goes in a nautnaki way
Chalo riddhima,

Hum Anjali ko isey manane dete hai!

Ab wohi kuch kar sakti hai!

Riddhima goes to make it more convincing and important and says

Ha di!

Plz Atul ko manalo

and hops out with Muskaan

Anjali thinks

How can I ? 

I've  never done this before

and goes to sit next to Atul

Atul gets all excited and tries to keep a straight face

The rest of the natak company hide behind the door and try to get a glimpse of the roothna manana session

Anjali reaches Atul's hand and goes very sweetly 

Atul!.......



Sorry guys for being late today
The weather here was just perfect for a water fight ,so to reminise old DMG times I got a little carried away and drenched my hubby like crazy
Hope u liked this part
I will continue the AA scene and try to make it as cute and funny as poss
Please reply with you comments on this one
Love u all
Take care
Hina








Edited by hinanaziri - 10 May 2008 at 10:53am

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*RESERVED! Tongue

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OMG di...u hv a new fan!

i hv been reading ur ff since it started and wud always comment on each part....in my head!LOLLOL

But now...i tink u deserve all the praise u cn get...in person!Clap

Fantastic job...i luv ur storyline...AA r soooo funny!Clap

Please continue soon...wenever u hv time!

 

Marisha

PS:I hope u enjoyed drenching ur hubby!Wink....bdw did he drench u bak??!WinkLOL



Edited by perfectpiscean - 10 May 2008 at 11:38am
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gr8 prt. contd wenever ur free
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
hina di gr8 part Clap Clap Clap

awwww atul is sucha cutie.....i mean trinzy se discussion ki nd usne suggest kiya k anjie ko impress karo LOL
nd he just can't stay away frm anjie.....so cute of him Embarrassed

i wonder hw much attitude will he b able 2 show nw tht anjie will b trying 2 manaofy LOL him Wink

awww lovely ws sitting in nana's room....taking care of him whole night Embarrassed

also luved d RM scene Embarrassed Clap Clap

continue soon!!!(kya karu.....can't get enuf of ur ff Tongue )

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omg hina di!!! i'm so sry for being lazy on commenting!!! but that was sooooooo cute!!! atul is too adorable!!! it was too good!! luvd it!!!!
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omg ur da best
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Clap awesoem Hina.. Atul is sooooo cute.. Loved the RM scene Wink

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