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Muskaan jumps at that and comes back to her senses
and gets embarrased
She starts cleaning the kitchen surface and says
Sorry! Sorry mai wo
Meri khayalo me kho gayi thi?
Muskaan blushes and smiles
Then Rahul goes and stands behind her while resting his back on the worktop
Muskaan boils the milk again and pours it into the mugs
She gets very concious and feels Rahul watching
Rahul comes from the back and grabs his coffee
Rahul goes hmm!
Has a sip and puts the mug down and goes
Hmm,Coffee to badiya banati hai tu,jale hue doodh ki bhi!
Muskaan laughs and goes
Maine doosra doodh liya tha,wo wala to sara gir gaya
Agar yehi haal raha na tera to tere mummyji and papaji teri internship chudakey teri shadi kar wa dengey!
Muskaan blushes again
Rahul feels the need to show her some love
He comes from the back,pulls her from the waist and hugs her from behind
Muskaan closes her eyes and holds his arms wrapped around her waist
Rahul rests his head on her shoulder and closes his eyes
Both loose themselves in each other and just enjoy the moment
Rahul then opens his eyes and
turns her around to face him
Muskaan turns with her eyes looking down very shyly
Didi ko Patiala bhejoo tere mummy papa se baat karne?
Muskaan smiles and says
and right then Rahul's mobile rings
Rahul answers it
Its Atul !
Atul goes in a very anxious tone
Yaar,Rahul mujhe plz teri help chahiye yaar!
Rahul goes Atul
Tu itna pareshan kyu lag raha hai?
Sab thik to hai,tere plants wagera?
Kuch thik nahi hai yaar!
Trinzy,my best friend se meri dicussion hui yaar
Usne mujhe suggest kiya ki Anjali ko mujhe impress karna hi hoga
Tu plz kal mujhe bike chalani sikha sakta hai?
Atul,bike chalani to mai sikha doonga tujhe lekin
ye Trinzy kaun hai?
aur teri best friend?
Atul goes Arey!tu trinzy ko nahi jaanta?
Rahul goes nahi!
Tuney to kabhi mujhe ussey milaya nahi
Trinzy uske ek paudhe ka naam hai
Oh ,ha Trinzy ,yaad aya
Acha acha,to usne tujhe Anjali ko impress karne ka idea diya?
Isliye maine tujhe abhi fone kiya kal ki driving lesson book karne
Yaad hai tujhe,humne kya decide kiya tha?
Ki Anjali ko tu attitude dega aur wo tujhe manayegi?
Yaar usme to bohot time waste ho jayega
Aur kya pata Anjali mujhe kabhi manayegi bhi ya nahi
Mai Anjali ko is mushkil me nahi daal sakta yaar
Is baar to tujhe hamari baat maan ni hi padegi
Mai kuch nahi sunne wala
Kal pata chal hi jayega ki Anjali ko kuch yaad bhi hai ya nahi,tumhare aaj ke jhagde ke bare me
To hum kal milte hai aur decide karengey ok?
Tu ab dimaag par zyada bojh mat daal aur apne bacho ke sath enjoy kar
See you tomorrow ok?
Okay!sadly and hangs up
Muskaan laughs at the the whole Atul-trinzy discussion and
Then Rahul goes
Chal,mai bhi nikalta hoo
Warna dinner bhi yahi karna padega!
Muskaan smiles and goes
Dinner ke liye nahi rokegi?
Muskaan nods her head and goes
Haan !Coffee banane me itna time laga tujhe
To dinner banante hue to shayad breakfast ka time ho jae?
Muskaan looks up and makes a
'I'll kill u' face
Aise mat dekh
Lagta hai dinner me mujhe hi kha jayegi!
and then Rahul holds her hand and says a sweet goodbye!
and leaves Muskaan all loved up
Armaan gets to the hospital first to make sure Nana is fine
He finds Nana sleeping and Lovely by his side
Armaan smiles and doesn't disturb them and goes to the locker room
Atul comes in next
followed by Rahul and Muskaan
Armaan comes out of the changing room to see all three there and goes
Muskaan and Rahul go
Atul looks worried,confused and sad and doesn't say anything
Armaan asks Rahul and Muskaan
Isko kya hua hai?
Anjali !aur kya?
Armaan goes Anjie?
Atul ko to aaj se uskey saamne bold and dominant banna hai na?
Ha ,lekin ye maane tab na
Isey to Anjali se do minute bhi door raha nahi jaata
Ye bold kya khaak banega
Dekhna abhi wo ayegi aur ye phir se uske agey peeche ghoomega
Dekh Atul,hum tere faide ki baat kar rahe hai
Tujhe Anjali ke pyaar ko aazmana nahi?
Yaar,isse acha mauka nahi milega tujhe
Atul stills looks upset and doesn't agree with them
Dekhna Anjali tujhe kaise pyaar se manane ati hai
Wo itni bhi buri nahi hai yaar!
Meri Anjali ko bura mat bol,wo bilkul bhi buri nahi hai
Meri Anjali to sabse pyaari hai!
Teri Anjali sabse pyari hai!
Hum to bas itna dekhna chahte hai ki tu usey kitna pyara lagta hai
I'm sure wo tujhe definitely manayegi champ
Just trust me yaar
Bas tu usey khoob sara gusssa ur attitude dikha
aur dekh wo kaise Anjali Gupta se Anjali Joshi banti hai
Atul loves to hear Anjali with his name and goes excitedly
Tu sure hai?
Anjali mujhe manayegi?
Of course champ!
Ladkiyo ke baare me mujhe bohot experience hai yaar
Kyu Rahul? and winks at Rahul
You're such a dog Armaan!
Armaan laughs and goes
Mai tujhe kabhi galat advice nahi doonga yaar
Tu bas mera ye funda try kar
Aur dekhna Anjali to kya uske poori family tujhe manane ayegi!
Waise Riddhima ayi nahi? and looks around
Anjali and Riddhima walk in at that point
Anjali goes with a smile
Kya hua itne udaas kyu lag rahe ho?
and goes into her locker to get something out
Atul looks at Armaan,Muskaan and Rahul
and they threaten him to do as they said
Riddhima notices something going on and decides to join in the fun and goes
Kya hua Atul?
Tum kahi kal ki race ke baad wali ladai ke liye gussey me to nahi ho?
and winks at the gang
Atul goes while pretending to be angry
Tumhe kaise pata
in a bold husky voice
Anjali goes looks out and thinks
Was that her Atul?
Oh,come on Atul!
Us choti si ladai par tum itna stronly kyu react kar rahe ho?
Armaan sees Atul's already giving in to Anjali face
and goes dramatically
Tum ko kya pata
Atul tumse kitna gusse me hai?
Tumne kal uska saath bhi nahi diya aur uske sath baithne meri gaadi me bhi nahi ayi
It was only a stupid race okay?
Aur maine socha ki mai dad ka saath doo
He's my father after all
Rahul goes to rub it in
Aur Atul kuch nahi?
Whats wrong with you guys?
Tum log is baat ka itna bada issue kyu bana rahe ho?
Aur Atul ,tumhe kabse itna gussa aney laga?
and turns to get her lab coat out
Atul makes an apologetic face and goes towards Anjali and says
Wo Anjali,mai to kabbbssseee
Muskaan covers his mouth and pulls him back
Riddhima then goes all innocently
Atul sach me bohot gusse me lag raha hai
Usey bhi gussa ata hai di
Armaan joins in and goes
Basket sach keh rahi hai
Dekho champ ne kaisi 'Angry Young Man 'ki shakal banayi hai
Anjali sticks out her head from her locker and looks at Atul
Atul looks more abused than angry
and tries his best to give the best angry look possible
Anjali goes gently
and gets worried
Atul turns away 'coz he just couldn't pretend anymore
and sits on the bench with a bang to show his anger
Anjali panics and gets all concerned about his sudden change in character and walks to Atul
Rahul goes to the others
Coffee peeney chalein ? and signals to the others to leave them alone
Ab tujhe Anjali hi mana sakti hai I guess!
Good luck Anjie!
and walks our pretending to be very sad and teary
Riddhima and Muskaan giggle and go
Plz Atul,maan jao na !
Muskaan pinches and goes to Atul quietly
Aa rahi hai teri Anjali tujhe manane
Aur gussa dikhana usko okay?
and goes in a nautnaki way
Hum Anjali ko isey manane dete hai!
Ab wohi kuch kar sakti hai!
Riddhima goes to make it more convincing and important and says
Plz Atul ko manalo
and hops out with Muskaan
How can I ?
I've never done this before
and goes to sit next to Atul
Atul gets all excited and tries to keep a straight face
The rest of the natak company hide behind the door and try to get a glimpse of the roothna manana session
Anjali reaches Atul's hand and goes very sweetly
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i hv been reading ur ff since it started and wud always comment on each part....in my head!
But now...i tink u deserve all the praise u cn get...in person!
Fantastic job...i luv ur storyline...AA r soooo funny!
Please continue soon...wenever u hv time!
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