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Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 (Page 18)

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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 3:37am | IP Logged
hinajeeeeee yeh puchne ki baat hai? i have exam tom but still i came i said chalo pehle hina jee ka update read karlu baad mein studying Embarrassed but no update Ouch

aab mein padhai karne ke baad check karungi shaam ko .. n me will wait for a brilliant update haan Wink

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hey hina di.....tht ws such a cute nd naughty part Embarrassed Embarrassed ridz sach mein shaitan ho gayi hai Wink LOL LOL

oh god i hope nana gets well soon Cry Cry

continue soon!!!
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by armaanaddict

oh wow!! sry for commenting late hina di, but i luvd this part soo much!!!

Thats okay sweety

At least u replied

and does anyone want an update today?

 

HI Hina di, definately need an update today, 'cos you know, I cannot come online for 2 days...today I had just a bad start in the morning, & all cos of you!!!!! I had no update for my good start in the morning. please jaldi jaldi update kariye na....some nice cute AR scenes, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Part Three:

Armaan and Riddhima rush to the hospital

and then run to the ICU

They see Nana battling away strongly and Anjie,Keerti and Lovely around him

Keerti sees them outside the room and comes out with Anjie

She says

Aap dono yaha?

Anjie goes,maine inko fone kiya tha Dr.Keerti

Nana Armaan ke patient hai na?

Keerti goes

Koi ghabraney wali baat nahi hai

Nana is much better now,he's responding very well to the medication and will soon be sent back to the ward

Lekin hua kya tha ? asks a worried Armaan

Keerti goes

Aaj subah ,unhe breathing me problem ho rahi thi
phir halat aur bigdi aur unhe asthma attack aa gaya

Sister Lovely ne baat ko sambhaal liya

Unhone fauran on call doctor ko page karke Nana ko oxygen diya aur
Sahi medication sahi waqt par milne ki wajah se,baat sambhal gayi!

Humne unko ICU me sirf precautionary , under observation rakha hai

He should be fine soon!

Armaan and Riddhima sigh in relief and say

Thank God!

Hum kuch der yaha ruk saktey hai?

Keerti goes sure!

Thanks Dr.Keerti! says Armaan

Keerti asks Kisliye?

Mr.Deshpandey mere patient hai aur mere har patient ki treatment karna mera farz hai

Ridz goes in a thankful way

Haan!ma'm

Looks at Armman and says

Lekin Nana hum dono ke liye liye bohot khaas hai
aur hamare bohot kareeb bhi

Anjali wonders why and how?

Keerti appreciates their concern and goes

Agar kisi ko thank you kehna hai aapko to wo hai

Sister Lovely,Unhone is case ko bohot achi tarah se handle kiya hai

Lovely inside the ICU is busy checking the monitor and making sure Nana has no problems

Armaan and Riddhima look at Loevly so engrossed and dedicated to her work and go

Sure!We will

Then Keerti says
Ok ,mai chalti hoo,mujhe apne doosre patients ko attend karne hai

Nana ko jab hosh aajaye to mujhe page kardijiye

Take care and leaves

They go

Yes Ma'm!

Anjie goes

Okay guys!

Mai bhi ab niklati hoo ,

Don't worry Nana is in good hands,he'll be fine soon

They both go

Hmm!

and Anjie starts walking to go

Turns round from the corridor as AR were going in the room and says

Hey Ridzie!

Mai ghar ja rahi hoo

So why don't you come with me?

Ridz makes a 'I don't wanna go yet' face

Anji goes

Ridz!Armaan hai na Nana ke paas

Riddhima looks at Armaan to ask him

Armaan makes a 'Don't Go' face

but agress unwillingly and says

Haan,Riddhima

Mai hoo yaha,tum chali jao Anjie ke sath

Mai tumhe fone par Nana ke bare me update de doonga

Tum jao!

Ridz makes a very upset face and goes

Okay!

Anjie goes

ridzie,

Mujhe papa aur Padma aunty se kuch baat karni hai to
mai unse milke ati hoo

Tum jab tak Nana ko dekh lo,thik hai?

Riddhima brightens up instantly
and goes

Haan ,di!

Aap jao baat karne papa se,

Mai aapko car park me milti hoo,Okay?

Anjie goes Okay fine!
and leaves

Armaan gets all happy that Riddhima didn't leave without a goodbye and they look at each other and smile

Ridz then grabs Armaan's hand and they both go into the ICU to check on Nana


At Rahul's house:

The three wait ouside Rahul's house

Rahul goes to Muskaan and Atul

Guys,Mai abhi meri gaadi ki chabi leke ata hoo

Atul looks around and goes

Rahul,teri bike kaha hai?

Mujhe bike chalani seekhni thi yaar

Armaan to aaj kal pata nahi kaha busy rehta hai,
Mujhe bike sikhane ka promise kiya aur sikhata bhi nahi

Tu plz mujhe sikhayega?
Mujhe Anjali ko impress karna hai yaar!
I know she loves racing!

Muskaan laughs at Atul's sweetneess

Rahul goes

Arey yaar Atul,
Meri bike to hospital me parked hai !

Atul goes Oh no!

Rahi baat Armaan ki to wo to aaj kal bohot busy lagta hai and winks at Muskaan

Rahul then goes
Don't worry Atul, mai tujhe zaroor bike chalani sikhaoonga
Aur mai jaanta hoo Anjali ko racing kitni pasand hai
Aur ye bhi jaanta hoo ki tu kuch bhi kar sakta hai Anjali ko impress karne ke liye

Muskaan buts in and goes to Atul

Oye!Khottey!
Mujhe to laga tha ki tu Anjli se naraaz hai
Uska kya hua?
Mujhe paat tha tu 5 minute se zyada naraaz nahi reh sakta teri Anjali se!

Atul goes

Oh Haan,yaar
Acha hua Muskaan tune yaad dil diya
Mai to Anjli se gussa hoo na!

Rahul laughs at his innocent confused face

Muskaan goes

Acha hai na,
Tu gussa hoga to ,dekhtey hai teri Anjali tujhe manane ati hai ya nahi

Rahul goes

To phir ho gayi chutti!
Anjali tujhe koi manane nahi wali!
Ulta bani hui baat bigad sakti hai

Atul goes
Nahi ,yaar
Please,wo inte patane ke baad ab pati hai
Nahi,bad idea
Mai hi usey mana loonga!
Aur wo manaye ya mai manoo,its the same na?

Muskaan goes looking at Rahul

Nahi,Atul!
Is baar Anjali hi tujhe manane ayegi dekhna
Wo tujhse pyaar karti hai yaar
Aur jo tum se pyaar karta hai,wo apne pyaar ko zyada time tak naraaz nahi rakh sakta
Wo jaldi hi tujhe mana legi

Rahul looks at her lovingly and
Thanks her for understanding what he did
and gets happy that she knows how much he loves her

Atul goes

Really Muskaan?
Anjali,mujhe manayegi?
Ajeeb lagega nai?

Rahul goes

Abey !
Tu bhi ajeeb hai yaar!
Bas ab tu usko aur impress karne ki chod
aur usko attitude de
Dekhtey hai Anjali tujhe manane ke liye kya kya karti hai

Atul gets all excited at the idea of being the dominating one for once and looks forward to meeting Anjali

Rahul runs and gets his keys

While Atul makes weird, funny,happy,cute,innocent ,desperate faces

Chal ab,yahi thairke saara scene plan karega kya attitude dikhaney ka?
Atul,tu na !

Muskaan laughs her typical laugh to see Atul getting told off

They get into the car

Atul sits at the back still imagining himself as the
Dominating, bossy,rude,bad guy and Anjali like a good girl trying her best to please him

He loves the idea and smiles

Rahul and Muskaan smile at him and drive off!

Rahul drives past Muskaan's house quickly

Atul says coming out of his daze

Abey!

Muskaan ka ghar to peeche reh gaya,

Tu usey nahi drop karega pehle?

Rahul goes looking in the mirror at Atul

Arey,
Matlab ,tu sab dekh raha hai ?
I mean wo mujhe laga tujhe jaldi hai
Tere bache wait tera ait kar rahe hongey na Atul?
Isliye maine socha ke tujhe pehle drop kardoo
Mujhe pata hai Muskaan ka ghar kaha hai


Muskaan feels how much Rahul wants to have some privacy with her and blushes

Rahul sees her blush and goes

Thik hai na Atul?
Tere bache,kya naam hai unka?
Trina,Pinky,Rosy apne papa ko miss kar rahe hongey na yaar?

Atul goes Ha yaar!
Papa mummy se naraaz hone ka natak kar rahe hai
Ye jaanke bacho ko kitna dukh hoga nai?

Muskaan giggles and goes

Arey tere,bache to tera sath dengey is baar Atul

Atul goes
Sach?
Ha ,to phir mai trinzy se aur ideas loonga attitude dikhane ke!

They then get to Atul's house and drop him

Atul say
Bye!Muskaan
Thanks Rahul
Mai jaldi jaata hoo haa?
Bache wait kar rahe hongey,kal miltey hai okay?
and legs it

Rahul and Muskaan see him run

and then

Muskaan goes

Kitni fikar karta hai na apne bacho ki?

Rahul goes Haan!

Jinse pyaar karte hai,unki fikar to hoti hai!

Muskaan looks at him and smiles

They set off again

Both remain silent for a while and there's an awkward silene

Then Rahul goes

Music?

and both reach the stereo at the same time and end up touching each others hand

Rahul goes sorry and pulls out his hand first

Muskaan gets all shy and plays the music

The song goes

Chup tum raho
Chup hum rahein
Khamoshi ko khamoshi se
Aashiqui ko ashiqui se
Baat karney do!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both smile and Rahul goes

Perfect song !
Haina?

Muskaan blushes and they exchange some passionate loving looks matching the lyrics of the song

They soon get to the house

Rahul hates that they're already

Muskaan knows why

and goes

Thanks Rahul!

Rahul goes

It okay!
and looks at gives her a longing look

Muskaan gets out of the car
goes on Rahul side and
says to make him happy

Andar nahi aogey?
Coffee peeney?...............



Hey guys
Hope u liked it,plz say u did!
Sorry I didn't update before,I thought not many wanted one,but now I know that u really did
Sorry again for being late
Plz don't forget to reply with you lovely comments
I'll be waiting
Love u all
Take care
Hina







Edited by hinanaziri - 08 May 2008 at 5:32am

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Hey Hina Di!..I was just checking the post & saw ur updateWink.Great timing naa?LOL ..I wanted to be the first one & i amBig smileLOLBig smile

This part was very CuteEmbarrassed!..Anjali will be getting more suspicious abt AR ,I guess?ConfusedLOLEmbarrassed..AR r veryyy Cute!Embarrassed..Thank God Nana is alright!WinkSmile..Hmmmm!..Kahin Nana aur Lovely ka pair ban na jayeROFLROFL...RM were tooo sweet!Embarrassed..Rahul is so desperateLOLEmbarrassedBig smile..RM r turning out to be the second ARLOLEmbarrassedLOL..Atul is shhooo shweetLOL..!!

Well,Will be waiting for the next update!Wink

Love KanuHeart



Edited by *K@nik@* - 08 May 2008 at 5:42am

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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jodubai

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by armaanaddict

oh wow!! sry for commenting late hina di, but i luvd this part soo much!!!

Thats okay sweety

At least u replied

and does anyone want an update today?

 

HI Hina di, definately need an update today, 'cos you know, I cannot come online for 2 days...today I had just a bad start in the morning, & all cos of you!!!!! I had no update for my good start in the morning. please jaldi jaldi update kariye na....some nice cute AR scenes, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Awww Jyoti,yaar sorry

I didn't mean to spoil your day and also sorry 'coz

there's not many AR bits in this one,its coming up in the next part

I feel so bad now,can I like do something about it?

Lemme know if I can!

Sorry again yaar



Edited by hinanaziri - 08 May 2008 at 5:45am
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 5:48am | IP Logged
hey hina wow yaar lvly prt ohg od angie abhi tak nahi samjhi yaar nd ridz ws sad whn she said u cme wth me nd whn she said main papa se milke ati hu to wow she ws so happppppppy tht now she goi 2 say atleast gudbye 2 hm..........wow yaar thnk god nana is ne nd wow sis lvly how cute na usi ki waja se nd AR goi 2 thnk 2 her wow nd so fnnnnnnnnnny muski sai dnahi angali ko mamane de nd rahuuuul nahi tu hi mana poor atul bura phasa attitute dega ab nd wow lvd it RM scens soooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeee .......bechare ko bhejna tha jaldi se rina,tina,meena ke naam se bhej diya hmmmmmmmmmmm.....goooooooooood ............lvd it........
cotn sooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by *K@nik@*

*reserved*

*editted*

Hey Hina Di!..I was just checking the post & saw ur updateWink.Great timing naa?LOL ..I wanted to be the first one & i amBig smileLOLBig smile

This part was very CuteEmbarrassed!..Anjali will be getting more suspicious abt AR ,I guess?ConfusedLOLEmbarrassed..AR r veryyy Cute!Embarrassed..Thank God Nana is alright!WinkSmile..Hmmmm!..Kahin Nana aur Lovely ka pair ban na jayeROFLROFL...RM were tooo sweet!Embarrassed..Rahul is so desperateLOLEmbarrassedBig smile..RM r turning out to be the second ARLOLEmbarrassedLOL..Atul is shhooo shweetLOL..!!

Well,Will be waiting for the next update!Wink

Love KanuHeart

Hey Kanu,

Thanks darling,for replying and wo bhi first one,well done hun

Glad u like this part with a little of everyone

Rahul is damn desperate yaar,Muskaan bhi hai,lekin thoda sa shy hai

Next update me shayad kuch AR jaisa ho jaye,but they wudn't do the same kinda stuff AR did

It will be specifcally Rahul Muskaan style!

Funny and cute!

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