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Part 20:

At Sanjeevani:

Lovely comes to check on all her patients doing her pre sleep rounds

Nana notices her come and shouts

Aaaaahhhh!

She quickly runs to him and goes

Oji!

Nanaji!

Aapko kya hua ?

Kaha dukh raha hai bataiye?

Ek min rukiye,mai abhi doctor ko bulati hoo

Nana goes

Arey ruk!

Tu kya mujhe Nana bulati hai?

Mujhe kahi kuch nahi hua

Lovely goes with a confused look

To phir jee,aap aise chillaye kyu?

Kuch chahiye to bataiye ,mai le ati hoo

Nana loves her concern

And goes

Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye

Bas neend nahi aa rahi thi

To isliye socha ke tujhe pareshan karoo!

Lovely says

Oji,aapko bolna chahiye they na pehle

Mai itna dar gayi thi na

Nana goes

Kyu?

Tu dari kyu?

Lovely goes

Woji,mujhe laga ki aapko phir se kal ki tarah

Nana goes

Maine 25 filmo aur 35 natak me kaam kiya hoo

Itni acting to jaanta hoo

Waise tuney kabhi acting ke bare me socha hai?

Lovely likes the fact that somebody actually wants to know about her and

She grabs a chair and sits next to his bed

And talks about her dreams and aspirations as a child and a teenager and what she loved doing the most

Nana listens to her life story ever so sweetly

And they feel the love vibes again

A bit stronger this time and from both ends


Pyaar ko ho jaane do
Pyaar me kho jaane do
Aetbaat kiska hai
Intezaar kiska hai
Abhi na hua to phir kabhi nahi kabhi nahi
Laa lala ,lala laa lala


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In the dream at the movies:


Arey uth te ho tum log ?

Ya phir tum dono ko dhakke maar ke nikalna padega ?

Public abhi ati hi hogi agle show ki

Chalo jaldi se bhago yaha se

Rahul and Muski both think they 're still in their dream and don't care what he says and enjoy the bike ride

The guy screams

Utho kaha na!

and grabs Rahul's arm to pick him up

Muskaan still sleepy, goes

Bike pe ye kaha se agaya Rahul

Tumhari 3 seater hai?

Rahul goes

Abey Muskaan uth

Ye bike pe nahi hamarey sar pe khada hai

Chal uth ,bhaagley yaha se

And they run out

Muskaan thinks of the dream she was in and shys and goes

Wo sapna tha?

Rahul goes

Aur kya?

Mai tujhe sach me konsa bike pe bitha ke ghumaney wala tha?

Muskaan goes excitedly

Matlab tere bhi sapne me mai tujhse lipti thi bike pe?

Rahul goes

Kya?

And goes

Door reh tu mujhse!Samjhi na? 

Zyada chipak mat mujhe

Muskaan goes grumpy and says

Acha?

Mai chipkoo?

Aur tu?

Tu bhi to itna kheech raha tha mujhe apne paas

Rahul goes

Mai?

Wo to sapna tha na Muskaan

Muskaan goes

Arey lekin chipak to raha tha na tu? tere sapne me?

Rahul goes

Nahi!

Tujhe kya pata mai apne sapne me tere sath kya kar raha tha?

Muskaan goes

Abey,bada besharam hai yaar tu

Abhi se aise waise sapne dekhney laga ?

Rahul goes

Chup kar !

Masti,to tujhe badi karni thi na

Muski goes innocently

Ha,Masti to mujhe abhi bhi karni hai

Rahul goes

Dekha?

Ab bol kiska dimaag zyada kharaab hai?

Muskaan goes

Chaddo!

Tu jaa,mai tere sath nahi aa rahi!

And sits in a corner on the stairs all upset

Rahul then gets the bike from the parking area

And goes

Ab chal! zyada nakhre na dikha

Mujhe pata hai tuney jaan boojh ke apni scooty ghar par chod di

Koi kharabi nahi thi usme

Bas,tujhe meri bike par mere sath jo baithna tha

Muskaan giggles and thinks

Arey! iske sapne me to mera raaz bhi khul gaya

Kaisa detective sapna tha yaar!

sab pata chal gaya isko to and

quickly pretends upset again

Rahul revs the bike and goes

Aaa naa!

Khoob masti shasti karengey and winks

And smiles at the masti bit

And goes

Dekh maine tere liye helmet bhi layi hai

Muskaan looks at the helmet and smiles at  the wink and is flattered

She jumps on the bike excitedly

And says

Chal phir,

Uda de apna hawaijahaz

Rahul goes

Acha pehle tu thik se pakad

Muskaan goes

Ley!

Tuney hi to kaha chipakna mat

Rahul grabs her hands and makes her hold him tight

And says

Wo to maine tujhe aise hi sataney ke liye kaha tha

Kass ke pakad!

He turns around and says

Aur mujhe koi problem nahi tere chipakne se

Mai to chahta hi hoo ke tu……..

and turns back

Muskaan feels his urge for love and tightens her grip

Rahul smiles and goes

Haan,bas aise hi reh!

Chodna mat!

And fires his bike away!



……………………………………………………………………….



The sinners again:

Riddhima is almost giving in to Armaan's seduction act now

And the situation flips around in no time

With Armaan turning into the target

And Riddhima the seductress

She does everything he never expected to her to do

He gets worried again with her ever increasing naughtiness

He tries to stop her temptations but in vain

She takes him round the whole kitchen and the hall

singing and dancing like an item girl

And just when Armaan is about to stop her dangerously irresistable moves before its too late

She knocks a vase off the table while swinging with the song

The vase hits the floor and there's broken glass everywhere

Armaan moves her away and lifts her up to save her from pricking herself

And while doing so a piece of glass cuts his foot instead

Blood oozes out of his foot's sole 

and Armaan cries Ouch!

Riddhima panics and helps him sit on the magical armchair

Runs to get first aid and comes back to sit on the step stool in front of the armchair

And dresses his wound

Armaan loves the way she looks after him

He looks at her passionately

And says

Riddhima!

She looks up to see his eyes burning with passion

He takes her hand and pulls her close

She blushes

and his heart sings

Jadu hai nasha hai

Madhoshiya

Tujhko bhulake ab jaoo kaha?


.......................................................


At the beach again:

Dr.Atul!

Shubh says and taps on his shoulder

Atul pulls out his face out of the icecream cone

and goes

Aap yaha bhi?

Anjali wipes the cream off his nose and hers too and says

Atul!
He's our senior !

Shubh agrees with her in arrogance

and

Atul goes

Arey kya yaar ?

Senior beach pe bhi hai kya?

Mai ab nahi jaoonga yaha se

Sir,aap mera peecha kyu rahe ho aaj?

Keerti ma'm ne aapko chod diya kya?

Unke sath kahi aur jaiye na

And Keerti appears from behind him

Anjali and Atul's eyes pop out in astonishment

Anjali goes

Hello Ma'm

Aap bhi sir ke sath hai?

Sorry!

Atul,chalo hum chaltey hai

and she takes his hand and drags him

Keerti says

Rukiye!

Aap kyu jaa rahe hai?

Aap log enjoy kijiye,

Hum kahi aur chale jaatey hai

Shubh gets annoyed and makes a funny face

and goes

Kyu Keerti?

Hum to yaha beach par walk leney aye they na

Hum kyu jayengey

Inhe jaane do

and says

Dr.Anjali aap log jaiye

Atul makes an evil face and goes

Arrrey!

Phir se

Shubh goes

Guys!

Mai senior doctor hoo

Aur is beach par hak mera pehle banta hai

Kyu Keerti?

Anjali giggles and goes

Yes,sir!

Aap ka hak banta hai and bursts out laughing again

Keerti gets embarassed

and Anjali walks Atul to the car

Keerti and Shubh start to walk the other way

after shooing them away for the second time in one evening

The two couples set off in opposite directions

Shubh gets Keerti close

and puts his arm around her waist

Anjali puts her head on Atul's shoulder and snuggles upto him

And here comes the rain to spice up the romance


Tip Tip barsa paani
Paani ne aag lagai

..............................................


Hey all
This is my treat to Mehmu,well done babes,u rock!
Hope you all liked this again very long part with a bit of everyone in it
kehtey hain Baarish me to pyaar ka maza hi kuch aur hota hai
Is that right?
Well ,we'll find out in the coming updates
Plz keep commenting,it really makes a diffrence when u appreciate
and hope I made u all smile
Love u all
Take care
Hina




Edited by hinanaziri - 21 May 2008 at 9:03am

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hmmmmmmmmmm,

kya kahoon aapke aur aapke update ke baare mein

kya qayamat dhaayi hai aapne

kya qayamat dhaayi hai aapne

yeh ff jaldi hi naya thread khulwayega

agar hum jaise shaitaan hue

to bhagwan aapko IF se exit door dikhlayegaLOL

yaar mein bhi kya kya likh deti hoon bhagwan kare aap kabhi bhi humari wajah se  IF chod ke na jaayein warna hum aapke bine kuch bhi nahi honge aur IF pe khoon ke aansoon bahenge mereCry

To Live A Life We Need
Brains,
Reflexes,
Perception,
Luck,
IQ,
Knowledge,
Way
Of
Expression
And Many More Mental Qualities.
Hats Off To You!!!

u have all and thus u give us so many good updates

waise i have something for u and ur job and ur career life

1. when in college !!
Hum honge kaamiyaab, Hum honge kaamiyaab ek din…..

2. when giving interview to Multi National Company
Tu hi re.. Too hi ree. tere binaaa main kaise jiyunn….

3. waiting for interview result!!
Intehaa ho gai Intzaarki.. aayinaaa kuch khabar mere yaarki…

4. just joined
Too cheez bhadi hai mast mast…..

5. after some time…
Ye kahaan aagaye hum??


6. After some more time…
Naa koyi umang hai, naa koyi tarang hai, mere
jindagi kya ek kati Pathang hai (booohoooo)

7. floating the resume
kabootar ja ja ja… kabootar ja ja ja…

8. finally when you don't get a better offer any longer
Jeena yehaan, marna yehaan iske siwa jaana kahan..

Finally this means that u and ur ff rox QON



Edited by magicgirlankita - 21 May 2008 at 6:43am
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Me going home now

See u all soon

and hope today's epi is great fun!

Thanks in advance for the replies

Hina


Edited by hinanaziri - 21 May 2008 at 6:12am
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Hi Hina di, am sooooooo sorry for not commenting on your earlier parts, I was dead busy at work & then this news on Shilpa leaving, meine tho tik se apki update padi bhi nahi, sorry.
 
Your Updates are really rocking, loved the sexy malik with yummy girl.....loved all the songs....at that time I was thinking it would be so wonderful, if Ridz seduces Arman, will he be able to control or no....& then in your latest update you did that....very nice...I hope Ridz does a good job at the dressing..Wink
 
Angie/Atul - tooo cute, confession on the beach sooooooooo romantic & then 1 ice cream to share, even better....but bechare log koi senior docs ne jaha bhi nahi chodo...seriously these senior docs are too much!!!LOLLOLLOL
 
Look at our love birds, all romancing at home only, no trouble at all
 
I Loved the whole dailogue between Rahul/muski, can actaully imagine them saying all that to each other, if they come togather on DMG the creatives shoudl definately use your idealogy & dialogues, it will be the best thing that ever happened to DMG, better than that, you must apply for the Head Creative director of DMG...
 
Love your updates.....do keep writing.....


Edited by Jodubai - 21 May 2008 at 6:41am
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hinu di thnx 4 d amazing treat Hug aisi treat milti ho to main to kahungi roz hi mera result announce ho LOL LOL

awww luved NL scene....development of  luv vibes Embarrassed

RM to mahaan hai LOL LOL actually they r pure entertainment Big smile muski d chipkali nd rahul her wall Wink

oh god d detective sapna cracked me up LOL LOL LOL

hmmm rahul helmet bhi laaya tha...ahan he already knew Wink

awwww AR r so adorable....armi control kar ridzie ko....tere nakshe kadamo par chal rahi hai LOL LOL

ah atul shubh scene ws d best Clap...."d senior biased, insaaf ka tarazu discussions" always crack me up ROFLROFL

oye hoye baarish ho hi gayi Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

can't w8 2 read d nxt part....KS in beach obviously wid d rain gods blessing them, AA all wet in d car Embarrassed nd AR....probably romancing in d balcony???armi ko bike par aana chahiye tha ridzie k ghar.....fir wo ghar wapis kaise jaata bike pe wen its all raining nd fir mazaa aata jab koi door bell ring karta LOL LOL nd NL....nana cud b lyk a kid wanting 2 play in rain nd lovely scolding him Wink nd SP can enjoy d rain inside d car wid windows rolled down Big smile

iss liye jaldi se continue karo warna gaane gaaungi Wink

 



Edited by mehma24 - 21 May 2008 at 11:12am
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