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Part 20:

At Sanjeevani:

Lovely comes to check on all her patients doing her pre sleep rounds

Nana notices her come and shouts

Aaaaahhhh!

She quickly runs to him and goes

Oji!

Nanaji!

Aapko kya hua ?

Kaha dukh raha hai bataiye?

Ek min rukiye,mai abhi doctor ko bulati hoo

Nana goes

Arey ruk!

Tu kya mujhe Nana bulati hai?

Mujhe kahi kuch nahi hua

Lovely goes with a confused look

To phir jee,aap aise chillaye kyu?

Kuch chahiye to bataiye ,mai le ati hoo

Nana loves her concern

And goes

Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye

Bas neend nahi aa rahi thi

To isliye socha ke tujhe pareshan karoo!

Lovely says

Oji,aapko bolna chahiye they na pehle

Mai itna dar gayi thi na

Nana goes

Kyu?

Tu dari kyu?

Lovely goes

Woji,mujhe laga ki aapko phir se kal ki tarah

Nana goes

Maine 25 filmo aur 35 natak me kaam kiya hoo

Itni acting to jaanta hoo

Waise tuney kabhi acting ke bare me socha hai?

Lovely likes the fact that somebody actually wants to know about her and

She grabs a chair and sits next to his bed

And talks about her dreams and aspirations as a child and a teenager and what she loved doing the most

Nana listens to her life story ever so sweetly

And they feel the love vibes again

A bit stronger this time and from both ends


Pyaar ko ho jaane do
Pyaar me kho jaane do
Aetbaat kiska hai
Intezaar kiska hai
Abhi na hua to phir kabhi nahi kabhi nahi
Laa lala ,lala laa lala


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In the dream at the movies:


Arey uth te ho tum log ?

Ya phir tum dono ko dhakke maar ke nikalna padega ?

Public abhi ati hi hogi agle show ki

Chalo jaldi se bhago yaha se

Rahul and Muski both think they 're still in their dream and don't care what he says and enjoy the bike ride

The guy screams

Utho kaha na!

and grabs Rahul's arm to pick him up

Muskaan still sleepy, goes

Bike pe ye kaha se agaya Rahul

Tumhari 3 seater hai?

Rahul goes

Abey Muskaan uth

Ye bike pe nahi hamarey sar pe khada hai

Chal uth ,bhaagley yaha se

And they run out

Muskaan thinks of the dream she was in and shys and goes

Wo sapna tha?

Rahul goes

Aur kya?

Mai tujhe sach me konsa bike pe bitha ke ghumaney wala tha?

Muskaan goes excitedly

Matlab tere bhi sapne me mai tujhse lipti thi bike pe?

Rahul goes

Kya?

And goes

Door reh tu mujhse!Samjhi na? 

Zyada chipak mat mujhe

Muskaan goes grumpy and says

Acha?

Mai chipkoo?

Aur tu?

Tu bhi to itna kheech raha tha mujhe apne paas

Rahul goes

Mai?

Wo to sapna tha na Muskaan

Muskaan goes

Arey lekin chipak to raha tha na tu? tere sapne me?

Rahul goes

Nahi!

Tujhe kya pata mai apne sapne me tere sath kya kar raha tha?

Muskaan goes

Abey,bada besharam hai yaar tu

Abhi se aise waise sapne dekhney laga ?

Rahul goes

Chup kar !

Masti,to tujhe badi karni thi na

Muski goes innocently

Ha,Masti to mujhe abhi bhi karni hai

Rahul goes

Dekha?

Ab bol kiska dimaag zyada kharaab hai?

Muskaan goes

Chaddo!

Tu jaa,mai tere sath nahi aa rahi!

And sits in a corner on the stairs all upset

Rahul then gets the bike from the parking area

And goes

Ab chal! zyada nakhre na dikha

Mujhe pata hai tuney jaan boojh ke apni scooty ghar par chod di

Koi kharabi nahi thi usme

Bas,tujhe meri bike par mere sath jo baithna tha

Muskaan giggles and thinks

Arey! iske sapne me to mera raaz bhi khul gaya

Kaisa detective sapna tha yaar!

sab pata chal gaya isko to and

quickly pretends upset again

Rahul revs the bike and goes

Aaa naa!

Khoob masti shasti karengey and winks

And smiles at the masti bit

And goes

Dekh maine tere liye helmet bhi layi hai

Muskaan looks at the helmet and smiles at  the wink and is flattered

She jumps on the bike excitedly

And says

Chal phir,

Uda de apna hawaijahaz

Rahul goes

Acha pehle tu thik se pakad

Muskaan goes

Ley!

Tuney hi to kaha chipakna mat

Rahul grabs her hands and makes her hold him tight

And says

Wo to maine tujhe aise hi sataney ke liye kaha tha

Kass ke pakad!

He turns around and says

Aur mujhe koi problem nahi tere chipakne se

Mai to chahta hi hoo ke tu……..

and turns back

Muskaan feels his urge for love and tightens her grip

Rahul smiles and goes

Haan,bas aise hi reh!

Chodna mat!

And fires his bike away!



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The sinners again:

Riddhima is almost giving in to Armaan's seduction act now

And the situation flips around in no time

With Armaan turning into the target

And Riddhima the seductress

She does everything he never expected to her to do

He gets worried again with her ever increasing naughtiness

He tries to stop her temptations but in vain

She takes him round the whole kitchen and the hall

singing and dancing like an item girl

And just when Armaan is about to stop her dangerously irresistable moves before its too late

She knocks a vase off the table while swinging with the song

The vase hits the floor and there's broken glass everywhere

Armaan moves her away and lifts her up to save her from pricking herself

And while doing so a piece of glass cuts his foot instead

Blood oozes out of his foot's sole 

and Armaan cries Ouch!

Riddhima panics and helps him sit on the magical armchair

Runs to get first aid and comes back to sit on the step stool in front of the armchair

And dresses his wound

Armaan loves the way she looks after him

He looks at her passionately

And says

Riddhima!

She looks up to see his eyes burning with passion

He takes her hand and pulls her close

She blushes

and his heart sings

Jadu hai nasha hai

Madhoshiya

Tujhko bhulake ab jaoo kaha?


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At the beach again:

Dr.Atul!

Shubh says and taps on his shoulder

Atul pulls out his face out of the icecream cone

and goes

Aap yaha bhi?

Anjali wipes the cream off his nose and hers too and says

Atul!
He's our senior !

Shubh agrees with her in arrogance

and

Atul goes

Arey kya yaar ?

Senior beach pe bhi hai kya?

Mai ab nahi jaoonga yaha se

Sir,aap mera peecha kyu rahe ho aaj?

Keerti ma'm ne aapko chod diya kya?

Unke sath kahi aur jaiye na

And Keerti appears from behind him

Anjali and Atul's eyes pop out in astonishment

Anjali goes

Hello Ma'm

Aap bhi sir ke sath hai?

Sorry!

Atul,chalo hum chaltey hai

and she takes his hand and drags him

Keerti says

Rukiye!

Aap kyu jaa rahe hai?

Aap log enjoy kijiye,

Hum kahi aur chale jaatey hai

Shubh gets annoyed and makes a funny face

and goes

Kyu Keerti?

Hum to yaha beach par walk leney aye they na

Hum kyu jayengey

Inhe jaane do

and says

Dr.Anjali aap log jaiye

Atul makes an evil face and goes

Arrrey!

Phir se

Shubh goes

Guys!

Mai senior doctor hoo

Aur is beach par hak mera pehle banta hai

Kyu Keerti?

Anjali giggles and goes

Yes,sir!

Aap ka hak banta hai and bursts out laughing again

Keerti gets embarassed

and Anjali walks Atul to the car

Keerti and Shubh start to walk the other way

after shooing them away for the second time in one evening

The two couples set off in opposite directions

Shubh gets Keerti close

and puts his arm around her waist

Anjali puts her head on Atul's shoulder and snuggles upto him

And here comes the rain to spice up the romance


Tip Tip barsa paani
Paani ne aag lagai

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Hey all
This is my treat to Mehmu,well done babes,u rock!
Hope you all liked this again very long part with a bit of everyone in it
kehtey hain Baarish me to pyaar ka maza hi kuch aur hota hai
Is that right?
Well ,we'll find out in the coming updates
Plz keep commenting,it really makes a diffrence when u appreciate
and hope I made u all smile
Love u all
Take care
Hina


Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago