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FF - ***HUMSAFAR*** pr - 19 updt pg 90 (Page 90)

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 2:33am | IP Logged

 

                 PART - 18

hello guyz... how u all.Smile... i m so sorry 4 d delay...actually i was about 2 post wen wen my doorbell rang !!. i went outside to receive a courirer...as it was on my name... wen ii saw it.. i started jumping like a pim pom ball..LOL. actually the gud news is..i hv got admission in one of the best colleges in delhi(INDIA)...Dancing. i m sooooooooo haapy.. !!!!!!!!!!!!!! imagine i was in top 20 rankers out of 10,000 students ...Big smileBig smileBig smile. thought 2 share dis gud news wid allBig smileBig smileBig smile

OK HERE'S D PART....

NITE - MALIK'S HOUSE n yes ridzi armaan alone at home.. as armaan's parents went back 2 america.. so privacy...
ridhima combing her hair...all set 4 a wonderful sleep.. as she is v.tired coz of hectic schedule... armaan cums out of bathroom..n as usual in a naughty mood.Wink.  armaan staring at ridz..she notices it 4m mirror..

r - (combing her hair).. armaan .. aise kya dekh rahe hoConfused
          ar - cums closer ... holds her 4m back...Embarrassed
ar - tumhe.. Wink
r - vo to mujhe bhi pata hai.Wink. lekin kyun...Confused
ar - aaj pura din tumse kitni dur tha na...Embarrassed
     r - stops combing n pushes him back...
ar - arre !!Confused
r - tum to mere paas hi mat aao.. hosp. mein kya kar rahe the aaj..Angry
ar - (v.naughtily) maine.. maine kya kiya..Wink
r - achcha .. tumhe nai pata... fire escape mein kya kar rahe theAngry she turns 2ward him....
ar  OO... vo..Wink. (holds her again 4m waist) tumhe yaad hai kuch..tumne promise kiya tha...Wink
r - kya..Confused
ar - yahi.. tumne kaha tha jo kuch karna hai.. sab ghar pe karna..Tongue.
r - haan.. lekin vo isliye taki tum us wat mujhe jaane dete..par tumne aisa nai kiya.. isliye main bhi apna promise poora nai karungi...Angry
ar - kya ..Ouch
rid pushes him away.. n goes to bed n starts reading magazine...LOL
ar - basket...Ouch (takes magazine away) dis is not done yaar...Cry
r - wat ...Angry n takes back d magazineLOL
ar - (again pulls the magazine n throws n table....LOL) yaar ye galat baat hai... tumne promise kiya tha.. tum apne promise tod nai sakti..Cry
r -  achcha.... par tum to roz todte ho..Wink
ar - maine.Ouch... maine kab toda..Shocked
r - ok ..let me remind u ...
1) ridhima.. main tumhe kabhie hospital mein tang nai karunga..Wink
2) main achche doctor ki tarah... duties pe dhyan dungaLOL
armaan interrpts... haan..haan..to.. to maine diya na....Ouch
r - achcha .. isiliye dr. keerti se daant padi..Angry
ar - ya.. watever..Confused
r - 3).main..... armaan interrupts..Wink
ar - listen na yaar...  ye sab baatein abhi karni zaroori hai...(tries 2 hug her) raat to mauj masti k liye hoti hai...Wink
r - (pushes him back) tumhara bas chale to tum to poora din mauj masti karo...Ouch
ar - yes !!! tumhe kaise pata ..mere dillo - dimag mein ye baat rehti hai..Wink
ridhima gives an angry luk 2 armaan...Angry
ar - sry..( n bends his head...LOL)
r - gud...ab hatto mujhe sona hai..Confused
ar - sona hai..Shocked sone ka kya matlab hai... raat koi sone k liye hoti hai.
r - achcha to kisliye hoti hai.. basket ball khelne k liye..LOL.
ar - dekho basket ab mujhe gussa aa raha hai hun.. main na ..Angry
r - kya .. kya kar loge..LOL. ab hato..
(pushes him hard he fells 4m bed as he was sitting on cornerLOLLOLLOL..she giggles.. armaan gives an angry luk... she covers herself wid bedsheet..)
r - gud nyt.. so jao... subhah duty par late ho jayeingein...n switch off d lyts...
armaan gets up angrily switch on all d lights ff the room.. switch on the tv. n music player n dat to on full volume...LOL
r - (yelling) armaan pagal ho gaye ho... padosi jaag jayeingein...Angry
ar - dancing... who d hell cares...Wink
r - argh..Angry.( she swich off the tv n music player... )
ar - kya  hai.. Angrytumhe sona hai.. tum so jao.. mujhe neend nai aa rai hai...
r -armaan ..tumhe ho kya gaya hai..Confused.
ar - tumse matlab...Angry
r - armaan.. dekho cool down.. (sets his t-shirt n hair...) dekho cool down ..Smile
plz beath jao...(n make him sit on bed) kya ho gay tumhe..(v. sweetly has if she was talking to the baby...Embarrassed)
ar - tum to kuch samajhti hi nai ho..Ouch
r- kya armaan...Confused
ar - arre maine to sirf itna hi kaha tha na ki... humne subhah se baat nai ki.. kuch baatein kartein hai...Cry
r - tumne baatoin k liye kaha tha..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
ar - watever...Wink
r -par tum hi mujhe batao tumne jo hospital mein kiya..vo sahi tha..Confused
ar - nai.Ouch. n bends his head..(awww... chhoo chweet...) i m sry..
r - hmmm.. dats like my armaan..Embarrassed
armaan turns his face 2wards ridhima...
ar - i m gud na...Wink
r - v. gud...Embarrassed
ar - (naughty) dat means i deserve a kiss...Wink
r - armaan.. Embarrassed
ar - ab is mein kya problem hai yaar...Angry
r - koi problem nai hai.... Embarrassed
she was about to kiss armaan...
DING DONG... door bell rings..LOLLOLLOL
ar - argh...Angry. poori duniya ko kaise pata chal jata hai.. ki maine tumhare kareeb aane ki koshish kar raha hun..
r - ab... bak bak band karo aur dekho na kaun hai...LOL
armaan goes.. n cums back after 5 mins..
r - kaun tha..Confused
ar - irritating padosi..Angry
r - dekha.. kaha tha na... i m sure us tv aur music player ki awaaz sun kar aaye hoingeinAngry
ar - itz ok.. yaar..Wink
r - tumne kya kaha..Confused.
         ar - giggles...
r - issmein hasne ki kya baat hai...Confused
ar - maine unse keh diya ki vo mehras k ghar se awwaz aa rai thi...LOL
r - kya... even she gigles..LOL
armaan lie down on bed n keeps his head in ridhima's lap..
r -  armaan..Embarrassed
ar - hmm.Smile.
r -  bends down (whispers in his ear) i luv u...Embarrassed
ar - smiles.. i know .. he gets up....tum mujhe kuch de rai thi..Wink
r  - kya ??EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
ar - kiss..Wink.
r - tum kuch nai bhulte na...Embarrassed
ar - no... Wink
r - ridhima gives armaan a kiss on his cheek...
ar - wow... ab meri baari..Wink.
r - aisi baat kab hui thi...Confused
ar - achcha nai hui thi.. chalo ab kar lete hai...LOL
r - armaan...Embarrassed
 armaan holds her tightly n stares her rosy pink lips... he moves closer.. n kisses her lips.. a long passionate kiss... totally mad in luv... armaan removes the strap of her nite - gown.. n moves down kissing her neck..n shoulder.. ridhima breathing heavily...  she is v. shy n turns .. armaan slowly opens d zip n starts kissing her back ,as he was moving down opening d zip..  burning with passion... both share some romantic n passionate moments...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 AFTER 1 HR. BOTH LYING ON BED UNDER THE SHEET...Embarrassed
r - armaan.. tum bahut bure ho..Embarrassed
ar - achcha.. kitna bura hun main.Wink.
r - bahuttttttt.... zyada bure...Embarrassed
ar - main to usse bhi bura hun... n winks..Wink
   ridhima blushes..Embarrassed
r - ab so jao... kal late ho jayeingein nai to ...Smile
ar - ok..Smile
both sleep...
NEXT MORNING.. SANJEEVANI.. LOCKER ROOM EVERY1 DERE...
ra - kal ka din kitna tiring tha na... mera to abhi tak sir ghoom raha hai.. n holds his head..Ouch
m - rahul.. teri tabeeyat theek nai hai kya ....Confused
ra-  arre sab theek hai .. dnt wry..Smile
an - vaise yaar bat to sach hai.. in duties k chakkar mein apni personal lyf to jaise black n white  ho gayi hai..Ouch
ar - o really.. par jahan tak main jaanta un.. saali sahiba ..tumhari personal lyf mein to ab hi rang aaye hai..WinkLOL
all giggle..LOL
at - kya armaan tu bhi kuch bhi bolta hai..Embarrassed
ri - arre armaan ne kya galat bolaWink
armaan opens his locker n sees a card dere he picks it up n reads..
 DEAR ARMAAN.....
  IT SEEMS U HV. FORGOTTEN ME.. BUT I HVNT .. I M BACK IN UR LYF...
URS.
 ???? KEEP GUESSING ...ConfusedConfusedConfused

at - ye kaun ho sakta hai..Confused
ar - rid is this ur prank or wat..Ouch
ri - armaan main aisa kyun karne lagi...Confused
ar - muskaan.. tu..Angry
m- hero pagal ho gaya hai... main bhala ek shadi shuda aadmi k saath flirt kyun karun???LOLLOL n laughs..
ridhima takes the card n re - reads it...
ra -par ye sab kar kaun sakta hai ...Confused
at - tu ..Wink
ra - kya ..Angry
at - nai..Confused mere..mere.. kehne ka matlab tha tu to nai karega na..LOL  pheww..
an - itz strange..Confused. nywayz chhodo isse duties k liye late ho rahe hai...

reporting centre...
duties are alloted by dr. keerti.. all doing there respective duties.. after sum tym ..BREAK... all sitting in cafetiria.. armaan silent..Cry
r - armaan.. tum ab tak us letter k baare mein soch rahe ho..Confused.
ar - pata nai rid.. aisa mazzak kaun kar sakta hai..Confused
an - chill jeej... kissi ne aise hi mazaak kiya hoga...Smile
A WARD BOY CUMS TO DEM...
wb - armaan sir kissi ladkine aapk liye ye buquet bheja hai.Confused..
ar - wat...AngryConfused
ra - naam kya hai uska...Confused
wb - naam to nai bataya..
ar -  wat d hell...Angry
ri - armaan kool down... Ouch
m - hero tujhe to kush hona chahiye..teri koi chahne vaali tujhe gifts bhej rai hai..LOL
ra - muskaan ye mazzak ka waqt nai hai...Ouch
at - armaan.. tu fikar mat kar hum pata laga lengein...Smile
an - jeej relax yaar..
armaan notices ridhima.. she was luking v. sad n was lil tensed..
armaan keeps his hand on ridhima's..
ar - kya hua..Confused
ri - kuch nai..Ouch
ar - tumhe mujh par bharosa to hai na..
ri - khud se zyadaSmile.. n keeps her other hand on armaan's hand....Embarrassed i know u luv me.. aur hamare beech koi nai aa sakta.. both smile...
m - haye.. romance karte hue kitne cute lagte hai..Wink
ra - tujhse kum..Embarrassed(he didnt realized wat he said..)
den both blush.Embarrassed.
at - aaaye haye..Wink
an - ab ye romance ka session band karein..LOL duties par late ho jayeingein...
 DUTY OVER.. ALL IN LOCKER ROOM...
ar - hey yaar... aaj to duties bhi jaldi khatam ho gayi kahin ghumne chalen...Big smile
at - haan to ja rahe hai na anjali aur main..Wink
ra - atul.. sab saath saath mein...LOL
at - O
ar - (stands on benchLOLLOL) SEA SHELLS chalen..
ri - nai.. bahut boring hai...Ouch
at - haan yaar kuch aur socho..
dey were discussing were to go.. enters sister luvly..
luv - O JEE.. dr. armaan jee...Smile
ar - yes sweetheart..LOL
luv (smiles) o jee ..aapse koi milne aaya hai..
all 2geder..  KAUN..Confused.
luv- 1 ladki...
ALL SHOCKED N LUK AT EACH OTHER....
 PRECAP -  girl's identity revealed... armaan - ridhima seprated Cry(4ever.../ fewdays) keep guessing...
 
ok guys dats it 4 day..hope u liked it
do comment

Luv u
ChandniSmile

 

                                       PART - 19

 

hey evry1..howz u all...ok without increasing ur curiosity...here's d next part...Big smile

All were discussing were to go.. enters sister luvly..
luv - O JEE.. dr. armaan jee...Smile
ar - yes sweetheart..LOL
luv (smiles) o jee ..aapse koi milne aaya hai..Smile
all 2geder..  KAUN...
luv- 1 ladki...
ALL SHOCKED N LUK AT EACH OTHER.....
lul - jee.. ye .. n d girl enters the locker room...
all - MINNIE !!!!!!!!!!ShockedBig smile
armaan jumps 4m d bench.LOL. n runs to hug minnie.. he was about 2 hug her..
mi - vahin ruk jao boyfrd.Confused
ar - STOPS.. kyun ??Confused
mi - apni gf ko bhul gaye na.. poore 2 mahine mein ekbaar bhi cal nai kiya..OuchAngry
ar - gf..i m so sry..main sach mein bahut busy tha...Ouch
he kneels down n holds his ears....(aw... chooo chweeeetttt)
ar - ab to maaf kardeEmbarrassed
(all other standing away.anjie tells rahul n muski d whole story ...both smile..Smile)
mi - chal maaf kiya... ab ek hug bhi nai dega... itne tym baad aayi hun...Big smile
armaan hugs her.. n carries her in his lap n kisses her cheeks... even minnie  kisses him..Embarrassed
mi - i luv u bf  ... i missed u soooo much..Embarrassed
ar - achcha ..mujhe to nai lagta...Wink
mi - kyun..Shocked
ar - tune mujhe bataya kyun nai ki tum aane waali ho...CryAngry
mi - tumhari gf hun bf... tumhari hi tarah..surprizes dene ki aadat hai.. n winksWink
ar - achcha.. n kisses her again(minnie still in his lap )Embarrassed
mi - kaisa hai tu..Embarrassed
ar - mast...Winktu bata... ab koi prblem to nai hai na..Confused
mi - bf.. main to dekh bilkul theek hun Big smileagar tu na hota to main to vaise bhi gannu( lord ganesha..) k pass chali jaati..
ar - (puts hands on her mouth) khabardaar jo dobaara aisa kaha.. nai to main tujhse kabhie baat nai karunga..AngryCry
mi -  oye naaraz kyun hota hai.. achha theek hai nai kahungi.Tongue. ab baaki sabse to milne de...LOL
armaan was about to keep her down...
mi - NO.. aaj main poora din tuhari god mein hi rahungi..LOL
all laugh...
ar - achcha ..meri maa.LOL.(jaise yogitha(my shona) meri aur yachu ki maa.. hai choti c.par poora dimaag hilla k rakh deti hai.. rite yachu.LOL..)
she meets every1..
ri - hi minnie.. n kisses her.. kaisi ho..Smile
mi - bilkul theek..Embarrassed to aapne mere bf ko mujhse cheen hi liya naLOL n smiles..
ri - (blushes) arre minnie.. dnt wry..mera sirf husband hua hai... bf to ab bhi tumhara hai.. Wink
all smile..
an- hi.. lil angel.. kaisi ho..Embarrassed
mi - hi anjie didi..n hugs her(4m armaan's lap only) main theek hun.. aap kaisi ho..Smile
an - bilkul theek...Smile
minnie notices atul's makeover..
mi - atul bhaiya.. aapko kya ho gaya..Shocked
ar - gf... ye ishq nai aasaan..Wink
mi - matlab ....Confused
at - arre chod na minnie usse.. howz u ..n kisses Embarrassed
mi - bilkul theek..aap to bahut smart lag rahe ho.. soch rai hun(luks at armaan) isse chhod kar.. aapko apna bf bana lun...LOL
at - nytym sweetheart...Embarrassed
ar - minnie..tum meri gf hoke mujhse bewafai karogi...Angry
mi - kyun tumne.. ridhima didi se shaadi kar k ..mujhe dhoka nai diya..Wink.
every1 laughs..
ar - bf ye dono kaun hai..Confused
ar - ye sanjeevani k naye interns hai.. inhone mid term mein join kiya tha.. tab tu yahaan nai thi...Smile
mi - mujhe maloom hai.. tabhie maine poocha..budhu kahin ka..LOL n hits lightly his forehead..
all giggle..
r - hi.. i m  rahul...Smile
m -  hi.. main muskaan..Smile
mi - nice 2 meet u ..Smile
mi - bf ... main sanjeevani se 2 mahine k liye kya gayi.. yahaan to bahut smart ladke aa gaye..Embarrassed
r - thank u Smile
ar - ye dono na tujhse pyar nai karte .Ouch.sirf main karta hun... issliye inke baare mein sochna bhi mat..Angry. dekh.. champ anjie ka hai.. muski  rahul ki..Embarrassed aur main tera...
mi - (mimics him) aur main tera... LOLhuh.. mera hota to shaadi itni jaldi na karta.. mujhe bataye bina...Unhappy.but congrats.. Embarrassed
ar - thnx..
ANNOUNCEMENT - ALL INTERNS........ DR. KEERTI.
ar - ab to jaane de.. duty hai...Confused
mi - achcha chal theek hai ja... par jaldi aayiyo..Smile
ar - kisses her... sure sweetheart...Embarrassed
keerti allots ever1 dere respective duties..all were about 2 leave...
k - dr. armaan..
ar - (turns.. n every1 stops).. yes mamConfused
k - aapko dr shashank ne apne cabin mein bulaya hai..
ever1 exchange glances...Ermm
ar - ok mam...Stern Smile
k - other.. back to work
all - yes mam...
keerti goes..
at - oye kya hua.. sasurji ne tujhe kyun bulaya hai..Confused
anjie blushes..Embarrassed
ar - pata nai.. yaar...(luks at rid).. basket..tumne sasurji ko kuch kaha ..Confused
rid - armaan..Angry main kya kahungi..
ar - haan ..to daant kyun rai ho.LOL. aise hi pooch liya..
mu - phite muan ! ab ja bhi nai to teri to band baji..LOL
ar - sahi keh rai hai..
ra - all d best..Wink
ar - gives him a wierd luk..Stern Smile. .. yeah.. thnx
            armaan in dr. shashank's cabin..
sh - beta..sanjeevani management se fone aaya tha.. unka kehna hai ki sab interns mein se tumhari performance sabse achi hai.. so. congratz.Clap
ar - thank u papa..Smile
sh - administration ne tumhe 1 offer diya hai.. ek seminar hai ,bangkok mein which will last 4 atleast 8 -9 days.. n u r invited dere...Big smile
ar - really..Big smile
sh - yes.. to main soch raha tha ki tum jaana pasand karoge..Smile
ar - off course.Big smile.. sudenly his x-presion changes..Confused
sh - kya hua beta.. tum kush nai ho..Confused
ar - nai papa ..aisi baat nai hai..Confused
sh - to fir.. koi problem hai.. cum on tell me..Confused
ar - papa.. ridhimaUnhappy
sh - ridhima??
ar - papa ridhima yahan akeli ho jayegi..Cry
sh - dekho beta i know tumhe uski parwah hai.. aur abhi nayi nayi shaadi hui hai.Embarrassed. to ho sakta hai tumhara usse door jaana.. use pasand bhi na aaye.. lekin beta.. ye tumhare liye lyf tym opportunity hai..Smile
ar - jee dad.Stern Smile.
sh - aur jahaan tak main ridhima ko jaanta hun.. vo bahut kush hogi..so cheer up..Smile
ar - (smiles) yes dad..Smile.. but jaana kab hai..Question
sh - 3 din baad...
ar - ok.. Smile
sh - ok den.. all d best.. n i m proud of u..Embarrassed
ar - thanks papa..Smile
sh - u may cont. wid ur duty Smile
armaan leaves.. after sumtime BREAK.. every1(except armaan) in cafe.. minnie sitting on table.LOL
r - minie.. kya logi..Smile
mi - bf...Big smile
ri - kya.. Confused
mi - matlab.. mujhe abhi sirf ye batao ki aapka aur bf. ki shaadi kaise hui..Embarrassed aur us budhu ne propose kiya bhi tha ya nai.LOL.(rid. blushes)Embarrassed
mu - oye chutki.. kiya tha yaar.. aise thodi na vo haan keh deti..Wink
mi - sach !!.Big smile. ab jaldi se batao.. kya kaha usne..(rid blushes)Embarrassed
ra - minie.. pehle tum kuch kha lo.Smile.
at - itni lambi story hai.. ye na ho tumhe neend hi aa jaye..LOL
all giggle.. ridhima blushes...Embarrassed
an - atul !!
enters armaan ..Embarrassed.n sits beside ridhima..Embarrassed
mi - kahan tha tu..Angry
ar - thoda kaam tha..aur tu ye table pe kyu beathi hai.Confused.chair nai padi..Angry
minnie.. stands up on d table...n jumps on armaan..LOL
ar - le beath gayi chair pe khush..hun..Wink
at - chalo koi to hai jo armaan se behas mein jeet sakta hai..LOL
all laugh..
ar - yeah watever..Ouch
minnie touches armaans face...
ar - kya hai..Confused
mi - ye tera thobda(face) kyun utra hua hai...Confused
an - haan..jeej..kya hua..Confused
mi - us ladki k baare mei soch raha hai.. vo to main hun..Wink
ar - nai minie..
ri - armaan kya hua.Confused.
 armaan tells everything.. all v. happy..
ra - itni khushi ki baat hai.. aur tu aise bata raha hai..LOL
           all - congratulate himClapClap
ri - armaan.. kya hua..Confused
ar - vo ridhima..Ouch
mu - main batati hun...Wink
ar - kya..Confused
mu - tera chehra isilye utra hai na kyunki ridhima se 9 din tak door rahega...Embarrassed
an - at .... OOO...Embarrassed
an - how sweet jeej...Wink
at - arre baton baton mein pata hi nai chala.. break over hone ka tym ho gaya.. (break over... back 2 duites... duties over back to home.. minnie went  2 lonavala orphanage)
  MALIK'S HOUSE.. armaan v. sad sitting on bed. (without shirt )Embarrassed. ridhima cums out of bathroom.. knows he is sad.. n tries to cheer him up... Smile
she goes to bed.. n sits in armaan's lap..Embarrassed
ri - hi..hubby..Embarrassed
ar - basket ..plz yaarOuch
ri - kya hua..Confused
  armaan puts his arms around her  keeps his head on her shoulder.. Embarrassed
ar - main tumhe chhod kar nai jaana chahta..Cry.
ri - armaan.. (turns her face 2wards him..n puts her hand on his cheek..) armaan dekho.. ek husband se pehle tum ek dr. ho.. aur phir ye opportunity kitne kam logon ko milti hai... Smile
ar - i know.. lekin tumhara kya..Cry
ri - arre ..mera kya.. haan tumhe miss bahut karungi.. lekin usk liye tumhari proffesinal lyf suffer nai hone dungi..Smile
  armaan hugs herEmbarrassed
ri-(in his arms) aur.. vaise bhi is ghar k har kone mein ho tum.. main tumhe itna bhi mis nai karungi n laughs..Wink
armaan leaves her.Confused.
ar - matlab.Confused.
ri - matlab ??Confused
ar - i mean . main soch raha tha ki jab main yahan nai rahunga.. to tum mummy papa k paas chali jaogi..
ri - aise kaise chali jaungi..Confused main to yahin reh kar tumhara intezaar karungi..Embarrassed
ar - nai basket.. aisa ma karna yaar.. tum bahut akeli ho jaogi..Cry
ri - armaan.. mere paas yahaan sab honge.. tum vahan bilkul akele.Cry. to main bhala tumhe akela kar k..khud kaise sab k saath reh sakti hun..huh..Smile
armaan hugs her... Embarrassed
ar - thank u basket..tumne meri saari tension door kardi...Embarrassed
ri - most welcum hubby...(she notices armaan is still a lil sad...)

she gets nottie !!!!!Embarrassed  

  ...to be cont....
so guys.. how was d part ???Embarrassed hey yaar tum sab bhi na bahut darpok ho LOL. aise kaise ridhima armaan ko main door kar dungi.. huh.Wink dekha kaise seprate kiya.. ki seprate ho kar bhi saath rahengeinEmbarrassed.
precap - ahem ahem !!! sry. 2day no precap... n yes 4 all muskaan n rahul fans .... surprize !!Smile

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Edited by sheenu - 12 June 2008 at 3:28am

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 3:25am | IP Logged

u betr b sory grl making us wait 4 dis lng looool wil be waitin 4 ur updte

woooooooooooow luvin it as usual aww left me speechless very nce luvin ur wrk n thx 4 da lng updte well done

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sheenu

HEY GUYZ.... sry.. sryy.... v. sry 4 d delay.... bas give me half n hr. it will be updated Smile

hey sheenu y jaan wlcm bck yaar.......no probz waitng fr ur prt........
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 3:53am | IP Logged
plz plz jaldhi se update kijiye..................
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 4:50am | IP Logged
hey sheenu fst congratz again so happppppy fr u.SmileSmile.......nd yaar mssng u so mch yaar........nd wow yaar vry lng update hmmmmmmmmmm thnk god u hv updated..........it ws superb yaar vry vryyyyyyyyyyyy gud nd i lv their cute fghts wow ridz ne armaan ko bed se gira diyaClapsoooooooooooooooo fnnnnnnnnnny yaar nd wow yaar ye armaan to na omg yaar kitna naughty hai aakhir baat manva hi li poor i ws laughng whn he said sabko kaise pata chal jata hai omg......dammmmmmm goooooooooooood nd chooooooooooooooooo romantic yaar......hayeeeeeeee..................brilliant bt ye kya sabki band baji hui hai nd whoz tht grl nd oh god ye kaha se tapak padi AR ke beech mein omg.......kuch karo....Embarrassedomg ar pareshaan ho gaya kabhi crd,kabhi flowrs omg nd precap ws scaryng yaar no ths cnt be happn yaar................plzzzzzzzzzzzz............
cont sooooooooooon.............so excitd nd eagrly waitng fr ur nxt prt..Tongue
thnks fr d pm...........
loadz of lv
yachu........Smile


Edited by yachna - 10 June 2008 at 5:08am
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 4:53am | IP Logged

*reserved*   *editted*

Hey Di!Big smile Hows u?Wink

Congo for the Admission!ClapClap..U really deserved it!Embarrassed...

Wonderful update!ClapClap..Loved the RomanceEmbarrassedEmbarrassedAR r getting adorable day by dayEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Gosh!Confused..A Girl??...I Hope she doesn't creats problemsOuch.
But i trust u that u wudn't separate our AR foreverEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Continue soon!....Thanks for the PM!Embarrassed

-KanuHeart



Edited by *[email protected]@* - 10 June 2008 at 5:07am
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 4:54am | IP Logged
omg!!!!!!!nooooooo dont separate them yaarr Cry dey r soo cute..plzzz dont separate them Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

btw congo for the admission.. i knew u hv to be da best!!! Wink Wink
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Di...It was just fav. Clap Clap Im dying to read next part..count soon..Your sis..piya.

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