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shaddi ka ladoo- FF4! (Page 113)

stylish_pari Senior Member
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:18pm | IP Logged


In the morning...when A wakes up...ridz is missing...
he then takes bath , goes to arima's room ....n sees she is still sleeping..he kisses her...n then gets ready to leave...
jus then ridz cum in wid his breakfasst.....n puts in on the centre table...
n says GUD MORNING wid a sweet smile....
armaan also smiles...n says GUD MORNING
RIDZI.....then is abt to leave n cum baq ....n goes near to him....
Arman becums happy....n then ridzi says
HAPPY.... a laung pause...
A: kiya happy....
R: aray yaar HAPPY DOCTORS DAY.....yaad nahi tumhe...?...aaj worldwide dr.s day hai na..
A: ohh acha..SAME TO U wid a faint smile...
n becums heart broken...that she doesn't remeber n e thing..n ridzi is smiling within herself...n enjoying the situation
arman leaves 4 sanjeevani....
n whole day..he is jus waiting for ridzi's call or msg...but not msg even a mISS CALL...he becums really upset n decides not tol call her...as she doesn't care for him..but then again thinks that she may b busy wid arima

its 7:00 pm....Armaan cuming baq to home...ridz call him..
R: KAB ARAHE ho?
A: yea Jus in 5 mins...
R: ok.......me n arima are w8ing for u...
A: ok..Bye

At home:
...armaan reaches n is jus about to ring the bell..but notices that the door is already ipen...
he goes inside.....there is dark inside.......n suddenly...sumone lites up the small candle
he is a bit confused...
n then ridzi says
R: happpY..........(long pause) BIRTHDAY ...ARMAAN.......
N then suddenly the lites are switched on...
he sees...the CAKE on the table....n wid beautiful decoration....
he becums happpy...
ridzi kisses him....n then again wishes him. AMMy is shocked plus surprised..to see all this...
then she asks him to cut the cake...they share a sweet moment together...n aFter dinner...
ridzi STARTs up cleaning the table....ammy helps him
R: tum jao....thak gaye hoge....and arima ko bhi lejana plxx
...main ati hoon...pani lekar
A: okay....jaldi ana plz

ARMAAn all smiling..makez arima lie in the cot..as she was sleeping...gives her GUd nite kiss....n then..goes into his room....
opens the door....n sees the candles on the side board n centre table n dressing table...n its was luking very romantic....
n switch on the lites....n sees The whole bed is covered wid rose petals.......
jus then ridz cum in ..n smiles...
he asks
A: mere liya kiya tumne yeh sab
R: kun pasand nahi aya?
A: ofcourse pasand aya....par tumhe itna sab nahi karna chahye tha ridhima
r: Kyun jab tum mere liye yeh gher renovate karasaktte ho..main itna nahi karsakti kiya ..?
A: .....hmmmm par ......dekho kita thak gaye ho tum..n ab tumhe arima ka bhi to khayal rakhna hai na
n makes her sit on the bed...n he himself sits on floor ....
R: Par Armaan
A: haan kiya bolo...
R: main tumhare lyay gift nahi lesaki
A: yeh gift nahi to aur kiya hai Ridhimma...
R:..............YEH to mujhe karna hi chahye tha na....U deserve it ....
A: ..nahi ridhima....yeh sab mere lyay gift tha...woh cake...n all these arrangements...plus the bigggest GIFt...that have givien me is OUR BABy....ARIMA .......after suffering all pain...alone....aur main is k badle tumhe kuch nahi deparaha
R: aisa mat kaho...agar tumhe kuch dena hi hai to ...BAS TUMHARA SAATH CHAHYE...wohi mere lyay bohat hai
............
A: saath...kis type ka saath chahye....( NOW armaan is GETTING NAUGHTY) ;)


NOW u experienced ppl continue...Smile
AND ..as this my first ever FANFIC.....
So plz ignore all my mistakess...........
PLZZZ ...and if u dun lyke it then u ppl can jus continue...from where rukz stopped.....Smile....


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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
hey guys hum hamesha armaan ya ridhima ka birthday kue celebrate karte hai..pata nahi lekin abhi tu armaan ka birthday chal raha hai mein ek ya do hafte key baad atul ka birthday leko geLOLLOLLOL aur us mein bahut maza aye ga meine abhe se soch leya haiWinkmein keya lekne wale ho do hafte baat atul ka birthday
hoga agar kise ko problem  ho tu bata do mein do hafte baad nahi 1 month baat lek loge lekin leko ge zaro and i am dam sure u all like it

ArmaanRidhima Senior Member
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
omg u r rocking stylish_ pari
Armaan is sooo cute & sweet awwwwww

now u deserve this:    Clap
salimaforever Senior Member
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
amazing part pari app ne pehle baar itna acha leka hai tu age kitna acha leko ge hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
koi mistake thi he nahi jo ignore kare hum sab ap ney bahut acha part leka tha age bhi plz lekte rehna
pwincess kanzi IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:30pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by desi_angel101

lol u guys are awesome!!! Itne saare achche parts pata nahi kahan se
shru karun...

Sabse pehle suvrati u amaze me hon with all ur parts about the fight n
everything but they were still really romantic n cute i think it was u who
wrote the really naughty parts rite (srry if it wasnt god i have like short
term memory loss hehe) i luvd them very very hot keep it up!

Sonali yay feels good to c u back here aaj kal kahan gayab hojaati ho
but then I'm one to talk mujhe to amy di ka darr hai ek baar wo wapas
aagayi to wo mujhe maardalegi for not coming here for so long... But I
really luvd ur part very sweet!

Kanan yaar kaisi baatein kar rahi thi pata hai tumhare parts bilkul achche
nahi the... Wo bahut bahut bahut bahut zabbardast the! Aise udaas mat
hona u r an incredible writer luv ya!

thx! im glad u lked it! Big smile

@Madhu: pichli baar kehna bhool gayi welcome to the ff hon main bhi
tumhari tarah reader hoon yahan par u just don't c me a lot cuz I usually
get too lazy to type something lekin maza aata hai na yahan par? Its so
much fun reading n commenting here! Hmm n I agree with yachna di n
yogitha that u shud try updating! Phir aur bhi maza aayega!

Yogitha aap kab update karengi? Missing ur updates yaar!

Ab to bas rukz ke parts ka intezaar hai jaldi se likhdo yaar!!

Luv Richa

zara. Senior Member
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
hey pari...great parts!!!
Clap
luv dem! Smile
pwincess kanzi IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by salimaforever

OMG !! OMG!! OMG!! keya part leka hai ap nai itna romantic part Embarrassed mujhe tu pata bhi nahi tha ap itne ache writer ho i can't believe it Clapthank u soooooo much! i am really glad u liked it! Embarrassed
ap tu rooz online ate ho RIGHT yh! i cum online every day...cnt live widout DMG N U ALL!  Embarrassed
matlab ap ab rooz parts update karo geWink ROOZ? ! well i cnt update on monday's n tuesday's boz im really busy...wid my tusion n stuffDeadLOL bt ill try 2 cntd rest of d days! Embarrassed ure an amzin ritter 2! infact ure betta den me! Embarrassed
addicted2ksg IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
*SIGH*

guys.... maine abhi pg 70 se padha.. aur jabhi main next page kholti hoon, aur ek page add ho jata hai!!

this ff is on fire!!!!! u guys r wayyyyy too good!!!! i luvd all of the updates soooo much!!

rukz: aap ka kya kehna!!! do u even realize how good u r??? i swear ur a born writer!! omg i wait for ur parts sooo much!! and u nvr disappoint!!! super duper duper job as usual!!

suvrati: ur parts r always shoooo shweet!!! they're tooo cuute!!! i just luvd them!! u can write romantic scenes rly rly well!

salima (di?? can u tell me how old u r???... and actually rukz and suvrati too.. coz idk how many di's i have on this ff! LOL ): i luuuuv ur parts!!!!! ur dialogues r rly good!!!

sonali: omg!!! i was rly excited to read ur part!! and it was awesome!!! i rly n truly luv the way u write! it's like realistic but at the same time luvy duvy and fantasy like!!! (btw.. that's a compliment Smile )

pwincess kanzi: i'm sry... idk ur name... but ur parts were very romantic!! naughty armaan!!! they were sooo passionate!!! just luvd them!!

pari: u wrote amazing parts!!! u shud write more often on this ff!! i rly liked ur parts!!

i'm sooooo sry guys if i forgot someone!!! there were a lot of parts to catch up with... so i'm rly rly sorry!!!!

amy di.... missing u!!! hope ur having fun!!

yachu di: missing ur updates!!! plz try to continue na?? if u can!

and where's appu??? haven't seen her for sometime!!

u girls r rocking this ff!!! brilliant job everyone!!

Heart u all!
shruti

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