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FF-Sacha Pyaar Milege pt. 1 -6 upd. on p3

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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 5:32pm | IP Logged

Setting: Holy hill cliff, Divya is sitting down and thinking about Amar.  Amar sees her and creeps up to her to surprise her.

Divya: Mera zindagee barbad hogay.  Kal meri aur Samrat ke shadi he.  Lekin me use pyaar ne karthe.  Me Amar ko pyaar karthow.  Lekin vo tho kesi aur ke saath shaadi kare.  Me jina ney chatha.  Me abhi murjana chatow.

Amar: He Ram!  Divyaji kya keriheri he!!  Vo kuthkoshi karna chathe!  Me esa nay hone dungi.  Aur ye sale Samrat kon he?

Divya stands up and prepares to jump  of the cliff.

Divya: Shambunathji mujhe maff ker dije.  Tum please Amar ko kyaal rakho.  Amar mujhe nay pyaar karthe.  Phir bi me uske saath naraz ne hoo.  Amar mujhe nay pyaar karthe.

(Amar slowly comes up behind her)

Amar: Kya bakwaas kehriho.

(Divya turns around to see Amar looking at her)

Amar: Amar Shivdar Upadayya sirf aur sirf Divya ko pyaar karthe.  Aur kisi larki ko nay. 

(Divya gets tears in her eyes and hugs Amar while crying into his shoulder)

Amar: Me apse bhut bhut pyaar karthow.  I-love-you.

Divya: I love you Amar.  Mujhe vadha karo ke tume mujhe kabi nay shoruge.  Kabhi chorkur chale nay jowgi.

(Amar puts his hand on Divya's head)

Amar: Me Amar Shivdar Upadayya tumse vadha kurtow me kabhi tujko chorkur chale nay jougi.  Ya is janam ho ya agle janam ho me tumhare sath hi hunga.  Vadha kurtow.  Kasamh se.

Sindoora: Wah kya bhaat hain.  Bura hain je tumhari dono ki janam is waqt katamh honewale.

Well guys here you go!  Please reply back.  Oh, and by the way, I'm new here.

 



Edited by koolkid234 - 18 May 2008 at 5:06pm

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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
wow!
its a good start<33 i loved it<3
plZ continue soon<3
btw i also have a FF which is tera mera pyaar, plZ do read it and enjoy wenever u have the time<33
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omg.....that was amazing Clap Clap
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really good start, wonder what will sindoora do now.
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lovely start!!!
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wonderful start
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AWESOOMMEEE ?

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Originally posted by koolkid24

Sindoora: Wa kya bhaat hain.  Bura hain je tum dono kaye janam is waqt katum honewale he.

(Amar and Divya break apart and stare at Sindoora)

Divya: Badi maa.  Tume yaha kya kare ho?  Aur tumhara kya matlab ti jab tune kaha humara dono ki janam is waqt katum honewale he?

Amar: S....Sin.....Sindoora Singh?

(Sindoora took out her gun and pointed it directly at Amar and Divya.  All of a sudden Amar and Divya's mind became filled with images and flashbacks.  They remembered when Sagar and Vidya met, Sagar's accidents, Vidya's times of misery, Sagar and Vidya hugging, and when Sindoora and shot and killed Sagar and Vidya.  They remembered everything)

(Amar and Divya both stared at each other in the eyes blankly)

Amar: V.....Vid......Vidya!

Divya: A...Aa....Aap!

Sindoora: Kya hua?  Kuch yaad tho nein agay? 

(Amar and Divya stared at Sindoora with angry looks on their faces)

Sindoora: Zuroor kuch yaad agay.  Ab to main tum dono ko zinda hum nain ruk sukthe.

(Sindoora pointed the gun at Amar and Divya and put her finger on the trigger)

Amar: Nay!  Ab nay!  Hum tumko aisa karne nay denge!  Pichle janam me, me bhoth bola tha, may mujbura tha.  Lekan aaj hum badhalgay!  Me pichle bar hum tumko bola!  Tum hargay Sindoora!

(He took a step toward Sindoora.  Divya pulled him back.  She looked at him with mournful eyes.)

Divya: Amar.  Ab nay.  Mujhse wadha karo je tum mere saat hogi.  Jub hum uper jaynge.

Amar: Hum kisi wadha nay karenge.  Kuch nay hoga.  Sub teek ho jayga.

Sindoora: Buht hogay.  Mera time waste horahay.

Man: Rook Sindoora!

(A man put a gun to Sindoora's head)

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