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Hidden love (AK) Part 14 page 31!! (Page 25)

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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 10:19am | IP Logged
grt PART ur an excellent writer

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Originally posted by za7n4b

grt PART ur an excellent writer

aaww thanx Big smile

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Hi guys, I wanted 2 ask if u guys want me 2 carry on with my ff, I'm not sure if the concept is gud and if u guys have any suggestions, feel free 2 pm me Smile

Thanx alot!
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yes plz cont this ff it is great plz cont were waiting for u
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plz cont soon, it's a gr8 story Clap
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aaww thank u superstar15 and iqbals4ever, will try and cont. 2day! It will be a long part!
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Part 12 ~

Kripa could not believe what she was hearing, did Angad really believe that she could do such a thing, she may have been a spoilt brat, ok, a spoilt popular brat but that didn't mean she could be so ruthless and cruel to cheat on Angad with his own brother. " Angad, I didn't cheated on you, why would I? This must be some sort of misunderstanding" She waited for a reply but Angad did not plan on giving one. Infact he didn't have an answer himself. Without further hesitation, he walked away, needing some space to think.

******

Flasback

Mishty ran towards Angad who was busy talking to the professor, more like persuading her to let him off for his latest prank.

Angad (apologetically): I'm sorry ma'am, it won't happen again.

Professor (in a stern voice): It better not, one hour detention at 4 o clock, don't be late, you can go now.

He headed towards the door, with a scowl on his face when he saw Mishty waiting for him.

Angad (sulking at his misfortune): " Hey wassup Mishty?"

Mishty: Nuffin much, umm, Angad are you and Kripa having any relationship problems lately?

Angad (surprised): No why?

Mishty: Well, umm, you might not want to believe me, but umm, I just saw her outside…

Angad: So?

Mishty: With your bro…

Angad ( snapping at her): And? Mishty you might wanna hurry up, cos I wanna get home by Christmas.

Mishty (slightly annoyed): Angad, she kinda was umm, kissing him behind the guys toilets.

Angad (very very angry): Mishty, I ain't in the mood of a silly practical joke, thanks for wasting a minute of my precious life and I don't intend on wasting any more so if you would excuse me…

Mishty: Angad, I ain't jokin…

Angad (angrily): So this is true?

Mishty: duh…talk about stupid…oops…sorry Angad.

He stood there, gob smacked, was Mishty telling the truth? He couldn't believe it but then again why would she lie?

He got out of the building and headed to his car as quick as he could, not wanting to show how much he was hurting inside.

End of flashback

******

Angad snapped back to reality as he realised where he was and it was getting dark, he walked back to Kripa, knowing what a big mistake he had made, not being able to believe how stupid he had been to ever fall in love with Kripa.

" I want a divorce" Angad said in a confident tone while his heart shed silent tears.

Guys I know this is quite short but I will try and update more today , pls comment and I hope u like it Smile Thanx 4 all your comments guys, I really appreciate them!



Edited by *cute_princess* - 25 May 2008 at 9:22am
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Posted: 25 May 2008 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Cry its misty i hate her , Angry Angry Angry oh poor kripa i wish kripa se alag hoke angad ko asliyat ka pata chale tab wo roye . Cry

please update soon and long part.

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