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Laaga Chunri Mein Daag(AR) NOTE-PG 150 19 (Page 66)

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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 2:20am | IP Logged

Originally posted by ridzie4u2nv

plz continue soon

i'll update today or tomorrow.........Smile

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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 2:21am | IP Logged

Originally posted by missypatel

ahahah!!

i juss read yur FF..i like hw u did justice 2 all six!!:D

AR seperation was kinda sad..but it was expected..!!
d last bit was funny..AtA broke RlMz record huh!!lol

plzzzz do PM me 2!!!!! appreciate it!!

thanksssssss a lot for your lovely comment.........i'm glad u liked it.......i'll surely pm u......Smile

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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 4:26am | IP Logged
RECAP:
              Ridz leaves armaan.Armaan searches for her but doesnt find her.Cute scene between RM & AA.
PART 7:
              Anjali's bidaai takes place.Shashank cries a lot & nani tries to calm him down.Looking at everyone crying even atul starts crying.Seeing him crying like a child lightens the moment because rahul cracks a joke on him.Everyone are still tensed about armaans whereabouts.Shubhankar comes to know that armaan had left sanjeevani in the night itself to attend the wedding.No one even picks the call of their house which means he hasnt gone home.His cell was also switched off.They decide to do the bidaai fast & leave the hotel & search for armaan.
K: hum pehle ghar chalenge......Pehle anjali ka ghar prvesh kar le uske baad armaan ko dhoondh ne jaayenge.
An: nahi mummy.....armaan ko dhoondhna zyaada zaroori hai......mera ghar pravesh baad mein bhi ho sakta hai.....
Shu: nahi beta keerti theek keh rahi hai.....ghar pravesh ke liye abhi ka mahurat achchaa hai isliye hum ghar pravesh karte hai......
At: par dad armaan kahaan hoga......kis haal mein hoga....mujhe toh kuch samajh nahi aa raha.......i hope woh theek hoga....
M: atul itna pareshaan mat ho.....hum usse dhoondh lenge...
Ra: nahi muskaan atul theek keh raha hai......kal kitni baarish thi aur tum jaanti ho armaan ki body baarish ke liye kitni sensitive hai....bachpan mein paanch minute woh baarish mein bheega tha aur usse pneumonia ho gaya tha.....ab toh mujhe bhi bahut chinta ho rahi hai.....
M: lekin hum kya kare??anjali ka ghar pravesh bhi toh zaroori hai....
R: ek kaam karo tum log ghar chale jaaoo.....main jaakar armaan ko dhoondhta hoon.....itne toofaan mein woh zyaada door nahi gaya hoga......
K: haan yeh theek rahega.....hum ghar jaate hai aur jaise hi ghar pravesh ho jaayega shubhankar aur atul bhi dhoondh ne mein tumhaari madad karenge.
                With this all of them left in 3 cars.Rahul went straight to sanjeevani to ask if any doctor or nurse had any idea but they had no idea.Only thing he came to know was he was very eager to attend atuls wedding so left sanjeevani in the worst weather.He decided to trace all places from sanjeevani to the hotel hoping armaan will be somewhere on way but he was not there.
                  In the mean time everyone reached mallik house & did the ghar pravesh.The ghar pravesh took place very hastily & in a hurry but anjie didnt mind it because searching armaan was more important.As soon as the ghar pravesh rasam was done shubhankar called rahul & asked about armaan but rahul told he was no where to be found on his way.Shubahankar & atul searched for armaan everywhere they could from hospitals to gardens to malls to small cottages.They searched each & every corner of mumbai due to which night came very soon.No one had eaten anything even at house worried about him.Anjie & muski were still trying to console a broken keerti.Keerti afraid if she would ever be able to see her son again.Here rahul was trying to control a devasteted atul & broken shubhankar.
                It was midnight by the time the 3 returned home.Shubhankar was trying to console keerti while rahul & muskaan being strong were trying to keep atul-anjie calm.Even anjie had burst into tears as soon as she came to know armaan was no where to be found.She cursed herself for this while atul cursed himself.
At(crying): yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai......agar maine usse shaadi ke liye aane ko nahi kahaa hota toh woh aaj hamare saath hota......main toh sirf yahi chahta tha ki meri shaadi main mera best brother aur best friend mere saath rahen....aajtak maine har chote kaam ke liye uska sahara maanga hai isliye main chahta tha ke is bade kaam ke liye woh mere saath ho par meri wajah se.........chota hone ke bavajood usne mujhe hamesha sambhala hai aur mera dhyaan rakha hai aur meri wajah se woh laapata hai....... agar usse kuch ho gaya toh main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paaoga.....
An(crying): nahi atul galti tumhaari nahi meri hai.....
Everyone looked at her surprised.
An: main hi is ghar ke liye manhoos hoon....tabhi toh hamaari shaadi hone waali thi tab itna bada toofaan aayaa.....humaari shaadi ke doosre hi din mera devar laapata ho gaya.......main is ghar ke liye bahut ashubh hoon.......shayad aap log apne ghar ke liye lakshmi laana chahte the par main ek manhoos bankar yahaan aa gayi...(folding her hands)..mujhe maaf kar do......
Muskaan also starts crying & hugs her.
M: nahi anjie apne aapko dosh mat do......hum mein se koi aisa nahi sochta.....yeh sab hamaari badkismati hai....iska dosh tum apne sar mat lo.....mujhe yakeen hai armaan theek hoga aur jaldi mil jaayega par tum apne dimaag mein aisi baatein mat laaoo......tum hamaare liye kya ho yeh tum khud nahi jaanti....tum is ghar ki bahu nahi beti ho aur main tumhaari behen aur bhalaa betiyaan bhi kabhi abshaguni ho sakti hai?????tum se achchi ladki is ghar ko nahi milsakti....
R: aur atul tu bhi khud ko kosna bandh kar.....koi bhi bhai chahega ki uska bhai uski shaadi main rahein toh ismein tune galat kya kiya????agar tu armaan se na kehta toh bhi woh tumhaari shaadi attend karne ke liye kuch bhi karta....mujhe lagta hai ab humme police main complain kar deni chahiye.....
K: theek keh rahe ho tum......
Just then she starts feeling giddy.She starts moving her head round & round.Shubhankar holds her properly & makes her drink water.Everyone get tensed.
Shu: keerti tum theek ho????
K: haan bas thoda BP low ho gaya......muskaan armaan ke kamre mein low BP ke liye tablet hogi woh lekar aana.....
Muskaan rushes to armaans bedroom & screams RAHUUUUUUUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLLL....... Everyone are shocked hearing her scream & rush to armaans bedroom.(Keerti was supported by shubhankar)
They see muskaans mouth open,her eyes popping out & finger pointing at something.They all look at what she is pointing & look at armaan lying unconscious on the floor.
RIDDHIMA'S PLACE:
                Riddhima was lying on her bed with his jacket in her hand.She was remembering her previous night was smiling.The night was enough for her to smile thinking about it.She had decided she would keep the night as the best memory ever & would never let the night make her cry hoping for the things which could have never happened in real.But where love comes tears always make its way;sometimes of happiness & sometimes of sadness.In case of riddhima they were a mixture of both.She wanted to be happy remembering her night but on the sametime some tears were of sadness thinking about the seperation.Bi knew what she was going through & went to her to talk to her & console her....Seeing bi ridz immediately wiped her tears but bi always knows everything....
R(hugging bi): bi aap itni raat ko yahaan????soyi nahi??
Bi: mujhe neendh nahi aa rahi thi par tujhe kya hua????aaj tu club kyon nahi gayi???
R: bas yuhi bi.....mera mann nahi kar raha tha.....
Bi: tu abhi usse yaad kar rahi hai na???
R: jee bi.......jaanti kal is waqt main uski salaamati ke liye bhagwaan se duaa maang rahi thi aur aaj bhi yahi kaam kar rahi hu.....farak sirf itna hai ki kal woh mere saath tha aur aaj nahi hai......kal main usse dekh sakti thi par aaj woh mujhse door hai.....
Bi: uski bahut yaad aa rahi hai???
R: haan bi....ab yeh yaadein hi toh mere jeene ka sahaara hai.....isliye toh uska yeh jacket main apne saath lekar aayi......uski koi toh nishaani mere saath hogi......
Bi: beta kab tak in yaadoin ke sahaare jee paaogi???
R: hamesha ke liye bi.....ab kayamath tak mujhe koi uski yaadoin se door nahi kar sakta....uski tasveer mere aankhon mein chap gayi hai...uski khushboo mere jism mein bas gayi hai.....uska naam mere dil pe likh gaya hai.....uski rooh(soul) mere rooh se mil gayi hai.....ab kayamath tak koi isse mujhse alag nahi kar sakta......bi main nahi jaanti thi pyaar itna khoobsurat hota hai (she started crying again) aur bi pyaar dard bhi bahut deta hai.....main usse bhool nahi paaogi par bi kya main ab uske bina jee paaogi???
Bi hugged her.
Bi: haan beta yeh sach hai tu naahi usse bhool paayegi aur naahi uske bina jee paayegi par beta tujhe uske bina jeene ki aadat daal ni padhegi.......uski yaadoin ko apne hothon ki muskaan banaa....uski yaadoin ko is tarah ro kar badnaam na kar.....agar tu uski yaadoin mein apni khusiyaan dhoondh legi toh tujhe uski kami mehsoos nahi hogi......
R: par bi maine jo uske saath kiya shayad uske baad woh mujhse nafrat karega.....raat ko pyaar jataaya aur subah usse bataaye bina waapas aa gayi.....
Bi: tujhe yakeen hai woh tujhse sachaa pyaar karta hai??
R: jee bi.....
Bi: toh samajh le uski haalat teri jaisi hogi ya phir tujhse bhi boori....kamse kum tu yeh wajah toh jaanti hai ki tum dono alag kyu hue par woh bechara zindagi bhar iski wajah dhoondh ne mein hi pagal ho jaayega.....agar kabhi tum dono ka phir se saamna hua toh yaad rakhna uska tumhe sabse pehla sawaal yahi hoga ki tune usse chod kyu diya........
R: bhagwaan kare humaara kabhi saamna na ho.....main usse yeh jawaab kabhi nahi de paaogi......bi kya maine jo kiya woh sahi kiya???is tarah apne pyaar ko jaane diya......
Bi: beta pyaar kabhi galat nahi ho sakta......tumne jo kiya woh tumhaare nazarye se sahi hai par uske nazarye se yeh bilkool galat hai......sachaa pyaar insaan ko bahut mushkil se milta aur isse jaane nahi dena chahiye par hum logon ki baat alag hai.....
R: bi kya aapko bhi kabhi kissi se pyaar hua tha????
Bi: haan hua tha aur ussi se meri shaadi honewaali thi par shaadi waali din hi mujhe raaste se uthaakar yahaan le aaya gaya tha....tabse maine baahar ki duniya nahi dekhi......
Bi had never shared this info with anyone but she told ridz about it knowing that she is in love & they both shared the same pain.....Ridz was shocked to hear this.....She could have never imagined this.
Bi: main aaj bhi usse bahut pyaar karti hu par waqt ke saath mere zakhm bhi bhar gaye.....
R: iska matlab main bhi kuch saal baad aapki tarah hi rahugi.....
Bi: beta kal kisne dekha hai......bhagwaan ne sabki taqdeer likhi hai......saari prem kahaaniyaa adhuri nahi rehti.....ho sakta hai tere kismat main kuch aur hi ho....waise tune ab tak uska naam nahi bataaya.....
R: mujhe nahi pataa uska naam kya hai....
Bi: kya tune uska naam tak nahi poocha???
R: nahi bi mauka hi nahi mila.....par maine khud uska naam rakh diya hai....mere liye woh armaan hai.....
Bi: armaan kyu????
R: kyunki bi usne mere dil ke saare armaan poore kar diye.....bas koi armaan poora na kar sakaa toh humaari shaadi ka.....aap jaanti hai na bi mujhe shaadi karne ka kitna armaan tha par ab main sapno aur haqeeqat se waakif ho gayi hu.....meri shaadi ka armaan ab main uske saath sapno main hi poora kar doongi....
Bi: pagli......chal ab raat bahut ho chuki hai......so jaa......
R: jee bi....good night.....
Bi leaves & ridz stands near the window.
R(to herself): main nahi jaanti bhagawaan aapne mere kismat main kya likha hai par mujhe aap par poora bharosa hai.....main jaanti hu aap hamesha mere liye achchaa hi sochenge......bas meri ek baat maan lo aur usko hamesha khush rakho....... mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye......
SAMETIME SANJEEVANI:
Shash: Shubhankar......woh respond karne lagaa hai.....ab medicines uspe asar karegi...lagta kissi ne bade dil se uske kiye duaa maangi hai......woh bach jaayega.......
Okay this is part 7........I'm sorry if I disappointed anyone...I tried doing justice to this part...May be this part was not much good but promise next part will be.... Very soon i'll be introducing a leap......Plzzzzzzzzz leave frank comments.......


Edited by pinky_5 - 26 June 2008 at 4:30am

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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 4:45am | IP Logged
nice update
plz continue soon and thanks for dpm
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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 5:36am | IP Logged
wow......
was soooo sad....i hav no wrds...nutin to say...was jus perfect...i jus hopeee tht they meeet soon...plzz make them meet.... Ouch jaldi seee
keeep it up...make it happpy sooon Smile
thnks for the pm...keep em cumin Wink
luvvss aashna
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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 5:48am | IP Logged
h3y pinky di very nyc part han....plzzz ab arman aur ridz ko hamesha k liye miladi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzz....and thankx alot 4 the pm... Tongue
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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 5:50am | IP Logged
awwwwww dat was great hw cute
luved every bit Now i must search 4 words 2 express my feelings

its really awesome and very cooooooool.
really gr8 part dear....
now i am much eagerly waiting 4 next update just 2 c what happens with armaan.....
so ........plz continue soon Clap
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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 6:36am | IP Logged
hey pinky wow yaar ws sooooooooo sad yaar i hv no wrds 2 say yaar it ws jst soooo gud yaar perfct yaar lvd it omg yaar all wre so tensd nd angie ws blammng her slf so mch emotions nd omg yaar armaan ws lyng on d floor ohhhhhhhhhh no nd ridz yaar ws sooooooooooo sad yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ab inhe hamesha ke liye milwa do yaar ridz ki dua rang layi jo wo thik hai omg yaar now wht gonna happn whn he opn his eys oh god wo to tut gaya hay................plzzzzzzzz cont soooooooon nd enjoy ur holidays i'll miss u...........
thnks fr  dpm..........
tc
loadz of lv
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