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Laaga Chunri Mein Daag(AR) NOTE-PG 150 19 (Page 115)

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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simran1285

Woohooo you updated!!! Lovely part thanks for moving it ahead and having them come face to face at last! I loved how you took care of the explaining thank god he followed her and listened in on the convo. Armaan Jr. is such a cutie just like his Pa!

 

I hope you will update regularly, really looking forward to this! And thanks for PM

thankssssssss a lot simran for your lovely comment.......i'm glad u liked it.......yes i'll be updating regularly for sometime atleast.....Smile

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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

The scenes between armaan and jr armaan were really good i liked the way u showed how jr armaan has become close to all the malik family.finally armaan and ridz met the way u got them to meet was really good.

cant wait 2 read armaans reaction after finding out what ridz does 4 a living.

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thanksssssssss a lot for your sweeeeeeeeeeet comment........i'm glad u liked it.......Smile
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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dmg123

WOW....they finally meet!!.........very different.......hopefully he doesnt run away...n hopefully he understands.......love the chemistry between Armaan n Jr. Armaan....its very sweet........i wnder wat will happen next....its getting to be really interesting!!.......

pls continue soon!!.......

u did an awesome job!!

thank u very much for the pm!!!.....really appreciate it

thanksssssss a ot for your lovely update........i'll surely update soooooooon.......thanks for appreciating my work...Smile
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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by musicdiva

awesome part! u really caught me in the begining when it was actually anjali, and i thought it would be ridz..

but atleast AR met, and now armaan knows ridhima's truth..
hopefully he accepts her! :'(
 
cont soon!
thanksssssss a lot for ur sweeeeeeeeeeeeet comment.........i'll surely update soooooon mostly by tomorrow.........Smile
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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by x-Ridzzie-x

Heyyy pinky'

 

Luv da part'.both Armaan nd Jr Armaan are sooo cute'adorable'

Nd jr armaan is clever jus lyk his dad isn't he'lol'da cute innocent smile'mn I wish I cud she it L '.

 

Yesss finally dey met'poor ridz'jus wen she was beginin 2 learn 2 live like dat'she see's him..buh im really happy for Armaan though'now he's found her

 

Buh the conversation on the fone'omg wonder how Armaan wud be feeling'totally broken'I jus heop dat he understands wat situation ridz was at'nd 2 say da truth'ridz wasn't a prostitute'cuz well..she neva had S*x wiv anyone except Armaan'I fink'.she was onli a bar dancer'dats nt dat bad'.

Mayb for Armaan's reputation'yhhh buh still he cant b angry at her now can he?? Hmmmm

 

Cant w8 4 da next part'

Egerly waitin 4 armaan question and ridz answers'.

 

Thnx 4 da pm

 

Luv ya'Bless

Ridz,

.x.

 

 

 

 

thankssssssss ridz for such a lovely comment.........too many questions & only 1 answer wait for the next part......i'll update next part by tomorrow........Smile
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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mar-

wooooooooooooooooooow grt part really good
hope everything gets oke
tnx for the pm
plssss continue sooon cant wait!!!
thankssssssss for your sweeeeeeet comment......will update by tomorrow........Smile
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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rimli_remix rox

finally AR met,hope armaan will understand riddzi's pain
great part pinky
cont soon
thanksssssss a lot for your lovely comment......i'll update soooooon........Smile
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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by er.Sheetal

Hi Pinky...
First of all i need to give u a BIG hug...Hug thank u-thank u-thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for updating quicked dis time... u r welcome.... and i am sooooooooo sorry dat 'I m' late dis time... was stuck wid work... its ok I promise it wont happen ever-ever again... but please keep updating at d same fast pace as compared to ur previous delayed ones... ya i'll update regularly now u said last time u didnt know dat u u have such a big fan as me... u know wat... i have filed & saved ur FF on my Laptop... i read it atleast 5 times till now... OMG!!!!!!i'm glad to hav such a big fan.....Smile
 
No about Part 11... i have one word... WOW... i adored it... O so it was Anjali calling Sr.Armaan... but i loved dat scene between Anjali, Armaan & Jr.Armaan... i loved d way Jr.Armaan kept flashing his addictive smile displaying dose cute dimples... i was really very-very amused... i love kids & so of course i enjoyed it... i think wat i enjoyed d most was d chemistry both d Armaans developed wid each other...
D conversation between Riz & Muskaan was equally good... i specially liked d moment when Muskaan asked her about if she remembers her husband or not ans Ridz remembers Armaan... loved it... and not to mention d moment when Jr.Armaan hugged Sr.Armaan instead of Riddima... dat was fantastic...
i could feel it wat dey might have felt seeing each other all of a sudden wid a number of things getting chained up...  thanksssssssss a lot for such a lovely comment.......i'm glad u liked it........Smile
 
I just hope Anjali realizes their relationship soon & she helps dem out... wait for that......Smile
So now Armaan is aware of her reality... i m eagerly looking forward to d next part... plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz-plz- update soon dis time as well... i'll surely update soooooooon......Smile
 
Love
- Sheetal
 
 
 

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