Laaga Chunri Mein Daag(AR) NOTE-PG 150 19 - Page 44

Posted: 15 years ago
hey

wowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was juz a AWESOME prt πŸ˜†

cont super sooooooooonnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
Posted: 15 years ago

OMG Pinky di!..This was even better!😳😳
Awww..Ridz left Ammy alone!..The dialogues were shoo shweet!😳
RM😳..Luved them!
AA were really cute & Adorable😳😳😳

Continue soon & thanks for the PM!

-Kanu❀️

Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy
omg omg omg wat an awesum updateee πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ waas relli gud...sooo puuure 😊
but sooo sad ridzi left arman...or wait shall i say ridhima....dooo get them bak together sooon!!
n AA n RM parts wer adorable!!!! sooo cuttee! luv muskaan n her naughty tricksss πŸ˜› keeep it up! πŸ‘

p.s thnks for the pm 😊
Posted: 15 years ago
OMG! pinky u cnt do dis 2 armidz! plz do sumfnk! 😭 i really hpe dey meet agn! i really hpe!    over all really nce prt! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!
Posted: 15 years ago
woooow grt part really good πŸ‘ πŸ‘
awwww... ridz left armaan 😭 pls do something very soon
pls continue soon
Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part yaar
but why did riddz leave armaan just like that.she waited for him for almost her life and when he is there she just left him???
thanx for the pm
continue soon
Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Pinky...

Well a laughed a lot while reading RM scene... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†   Absolutely gr8... loved it... Face Painting & Rahul Joker πŸ˜† πŸ˜†  WOW...
AA were very sweet... 😳 πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ 

But i loved reading d emotional part of d story d MOST... The restlessness & discomfort of Armaan was very grieving... i felt like crying... 😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­  Also d way Ridz have sacrificed her love, it was praise worthy... It was very-very touching... My heart ached when i thought about dem... πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

I like d contrast between d lives of Main Lead, i.e., AR 7 other supporting cast pairs, i.e., RM & AA... RM r happily married, for AA its a new happy beginning...

But for AR, struggle of life have just started... Their journey has started but yet its on hold... dey r close to each other's heart, but yet too far... They have got d biggest happiness & den d biggest pain of their lives on d same day...


UR FF have seems to hv one of d most interesting storyline as i cant even imagine wats gonna happen next wid AR's life... i love dem more than anythig else... Hope AR meets again ASAP... 😊

I am CURIOUSLY waiting for d next part.. please try to update ASAP... 😊


Love
- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
hey rely sad wat happened to AR they should b hapy lke AA n RM i wonder πŸ˜• wat Ammy gona do wen he c Ridzy thnx 4 tha PM! 😭
Posted: 15 years ago
Very nice update ............
Your written style is also good.   πŸ˜ƒ
I like it.
You written it brilliantly πŸ‘
Keep Continue..Edited by ram* - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
hey pinky superb part as usual.specially i loved the rahul-muskaan part.it was very very cute.
plz update it soon.


rimli

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