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~*~*~* Kimi-Hana~*~*~* (Page 5)

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Posted: 04 May 2008 at 11:56am | IP Logged

Originally posted by *Nishi*

^^^ thanks sooo much !!!! i havent got around to telling all my friends yet so sorry i didnt tell u earlier !! Big smile Big smile Big smile yes i will post more !! Big smile Big smile Big smile im so glad u liked it ! Big smile

awww thats ok!! Big smile

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Posted: 05 May 2008 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
anyone else wanna read ???? Confused
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Posted: 06 May 2008 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
its awesome.<3
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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 10:50am | IP Logged
^^^ thanks Big smile plz people.... tell me if u want me to continue or not Confused i need a few more people to tell me... either here, or thru PM Smile thanks.... LOL
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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
yepz def continue.... Tongue Wink
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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
ok LOL
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:36pm | IP Logged

Next episode: 

 

Seiko walking home from school

 

 Seiko- I must have look soo stupid. Staring at him like that. I bet he hates me now. Seiko, you're a good for nothing piece of junk. Everyone hates you. How can you forget ? Your mom is gone, your dad doesn't care for you. The only reason you even have friends is because they feel bad for you.

 

 Dog- grrooowwlllll……..

 

 Seiko- What are you looking at ?

 

 Dog- *puppy face*

 

 Seiko- Aaww…. Ok. *reaches in her bag* Here you go. I only have this left over riceball from lunch. *smiles*

 

 Dog eats it in one bite….

 

 Seiko- Ok you've got your food now go home.

 

 Dog- (whining)

 

 Dog doesn't wanna go home Smile

 

 Seiko- I'm sorry…If I bring you home, my dad will kill me.

 

 Dog- whining more

 

 Seiko-But I'm sure I can convince him to let you stay. But you have to stay outside until you get your shots.

 

 Dog- *scared of shots face*

 

 Seiko- Heeeyy… I'm letting you come home with me you better be happy !  

 

 Dog- (happy now) Ruff ruff !

 

 Seiko- So what's your name dog ?

 

 Dog- Ruff !

 

 Seiko- You look like coffee and cream mixed together…. I think I'll name you Coffee !

 

 Dog- Ruff !

 

   ***walk home together***

 

 Seiko's House— kitchen

 

     Note from Dad-

          Seiko. I'm going out. I'll be back in a few days… Take care of yourself.

 

                         --Dad

Seiko- The usual…. Why am I so surprised at this ?? *starts to tear up* Why did you have to die ??.... You only made my life more miserable… Why !?

 

 Starts crying and throwing things and punching pillows… then trips on the floor..

 

 Seiko- ( hands on her face) There's no one there… there's no one there… There's….. no one there…

 

   No one.

 

 

 

  A few hours later…..

 

 Sapna- Seiko… Seiko wake up

 

 Kimi- Seiko wake up

 

 Sapna- Please wake up Seiko…

 

 Kimi- Seiko wake up now !!!

 

 Seiko-  Huh ?.... huh.. what happened… how did you guys get in here ?

Kimi- Your little dog helped us !

 

 Sapna- Kimi has psychic powers

 

 Kimi- I could sense something wasn't right *raises an eyebrow*

 

 Seiko- Yeah right (getting up).

 

 Kimi- What's wrong ?

 

 Seiko-Can you guys just leave now ? It's getting late. And I have to clean up here and get ready for tonight.

 

 Sapna- Ok. If you say so.

 

 Kimi- w-what ? Huh ? I wanna know what happened !

 

 Sapna- You take care of yourself. Kimi and I will be leaving now. *waves*

     SLAM !

 

  It all happened so fast, Seiko didn't even get a chance to say bye.

 

  ***Outside***

 

 Kimi- What was that for ?!!

 

 Sapna- We need to give her some space ! You know, baby steps. So she can spread her wings to fly like a butterfly !

 

 Kimi- Since when did you become an expert in this stuff  ??

 

 Sapna- Ever since I met you guys !

 

 Kimi- What ?? I'm not psycho !

 

 Sapna- I never said that ! Now come one, let's go ! We have alotta work to do !   **drags kimi home**

 

    Seiko's House

 

 Seiko- That was weird…. that was close…

                               Enjoy !!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
hehe.... that part with seiko crying was supposed to be emotional LOL LOL LOL i hope i did well expressing that ROFL LOL LOL

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