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~*~*~* Kimi-Hana~*~*~* (Page 4)

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Posted: 02 May 2008 at 10:01pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by jani-yeh

Originally posted by *Nishi*

hehe thanks Big smile ok wheres jani ??


im right here Nishi...q is where r u.... LOL
dnt worry read the nex bit...it's well funny.... LOL
write more soon.... Embarrassed


   thanks jani Embarrassed yh im gonna post more as soon as i can Embarrassed

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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 10:24am | IP Logged
^^^ thanks sara LOL LOL i dunno LOL LOL u think i should make one ?? LOL LOL
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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pakianjel

wooow chandni thats gr88Dancing
u r a good writer
so when u r making a film
Silly

LOLLOLnishi the director

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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutiex0

Originally posted by pakianjel

wooow chandni thats gr88Dancing
u r a good writer
so when u r making a film
Silly

LOLLOLnishi the director

  EmbarrassedLOLLOL

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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 12:25pm | IP Logged

****Chapter 2****

 

     *bell rings*

 

  Everyone grabs their stuff and heads for the door.

 

  Kimi- Sapna wait up ! 

   (finally cacthes up)

 

  Kimi- Where's Seiko ?

  Sapna- I dunno. I haven't seen her all day ! She's usually in Science with me but today, the teacher said she couldn't make it.

 

 Kimi- Wow… that's strange…wait I think I know where she is ( says with a smile)

 

    **Principal's Office**

 

 Principal- You came into my office…. You set up boobie traps… and if that wasn't enough, you set up a camera for everyone. Why do you do this ? Why ? You have no reason to torture me like this, Ms. Tamagotchi. Do you want to be expelled ?

 

 Seiko- (rolls her eyes)

 

 Principal- Your not leaving until you give me an explanation.

 

 Seiko- We did it…. for fun.

 

 Principal- Fun ?? Torturing your Principal is fun ? Don't answer that.

 

 Seiko- Look, I'm sorry John I won't do it again—

 

 Principal- You call me Mr. Principal not John.

 

 Seiko- Ok… Mr. Principal. I won't do it again.

 

 Principal- I don't believe you… You're still getting detention. Everyday…. For 4 weeks. This has to stop Ms. Tamagotchi.

 

 Seiko- (rolls her eyes again and leaves)

 

   **Waiting Room**

 

  Seiko enters

 

  Sapna- What did you get into this time ??

 

  Kimi- Yeah !! Come one, tell us !!

 

  Seiko- Oh nothing… just having a little fun. And I got in trouble... stupid John has nothin else to do but put innocent kids in detention.

 

  Kimi- What kinda fun ??

 

  Seiko- (switches the subject) Soooo. Have you guys decided if you want to have a video games marathon or a movie watching marathon ?

 

 Sapna- I'm liking the video games a lot !

 

 Kimi- Aaawww…. I really wanted you guys to see Strawberry Shortcake Ouch But it's alright.

 

 Sapna- That's a nice outfit you've got there Seiko Tongue.

 

  

Seiko- Oh  put it together myself (very proud).

 

Sapna- It looks like something you got outta the trash !! (laughing very hard with Kimi)

 

Seiko- You little !! (getting ready to punch her

 

Hallway moniter- Natsume

 

   Natsume grabs Seiko's hand who is getting ready to smack Kimi-kins.

 

   Natsume- It's not nice to hit people…..Seiko.

 

  Seiko- But I—

 

   Natusme- I don't want to hear it (covers her mouth) Look,…. There's something I've been meaning to tell you….

 

   Seiko- What ? What is it !

 

   Natsume- I-….I love you. And I wanna get married as soon as possible.

 

  Seiko- Wow !..... I dunno what to say !

 

   Natsume- Say yes !

 

   Seiko- Yes ! Yes ! Yes !!

 

   Natsume- Our Honey moon will be in Australia !

 

   Seiko- that would be nice !!

 

   **picking her up**

 

   Seiko- And we'll have lots of kids !! 26 kids !!

 

   Natsume- With each of there names from the letters of the alphabet ! Andrea, Bill, Candice !!

 

  Seiko- Diane ! Egert ! Faith !

 

   Natsume- And (putting her down)…. We'll move to Switzerland *Big Smile*

 

    Seiko- Oh Natsume, I knew you were the one (blush smiley)

 

              *** They Kiss *** Aaawww Embarrassed  

 

   Natsume- Hey ! (trying to get her attention) Where are you ??

 

   Seiko- Huh ? O-oh. *wakes up from dream*

 

   Natsume- If I catch you doing that again, you'll get suspended. (writing her off) Seriously, I dunno how many times a week.… *mumbling*

 

   He leaves…

 

   Seiko- Wow….

 

   Sapna- You almost got in suspended !!! Twice in one day ! Kya baat hai yaar !!  

 

Kimi- (Who has been paying close attention this whole time) Soooooooooora no you ni hiroku attemo futari—

 

   Seiko- Shut up ! And you, (pointing to Sapna) Stop Speaking in a different language I'm not familiar with to express your happiness.

 

   

   Kimi- Sorry…. *sad face*

 

   Sapna- Seiko, why do you have to be so mean ? *smiling*

 

   Seiko- Why does she have to sing songs for everything ??

 

   Sapna- It's how she is. Her personality.

 

   Seiko- But why that song ? *leans against locker*

 

   Kimi- I'm sorry ! Do you want me to Sakuranbo ? Tonari dooshi anata to atashi sakuranbo !!! 

 

   Seiko- Ahh just shut up !! I gotta go. I'll be late for class if I hang around you two dufuses.

 

     *they turn there heads and watch her leave*

 

     Kimi & Sapna- *sings and dancing to song* egao saku kimi to tsunagattetai    Moshi ano mukou ni mieru mono ga aru nara    Aishiau futari shiawase no sora   Tonari dooshi anata to atashi sakuranbo !!! 

 

                    

Sakuranbo = Cherries !!

 

 

         

 

 Translation:   Aishiau futari shiawase no ----  A couple in love and the sky of happiness

                                   Tonari dooshi anata to atashi sakuranbo ---- Together all along, we are cherries. !!!

       

                                   egao saku kimi to tsunagattetai ---  Smiles are blooming, I want to be connected to you.

                                   Moshi ano mukou ni mieru mono ga aru nara -----  If there is something to see over there

                                  

                                 

 Basic Meaning: We are perfect together. Like Cherries :D      

                                                                                                      ^              ^

                                                                                                      Seiko     Natsume

 

 Music Video: http://www.metacafe.com/watch/122455/sakuranbo_cherry_by_ai_ otsuka/

  

 Sing along: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s4NeHlMp4R0&eurl=ht

 

  Music Video with subs:   http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=1833627945131346900& amp;q=sakuranbo&ei=v08bSPrsE6Pk-wHLjN2_AQ

 

 enjoy !

 



Edited by *Nishi* - 05 May 2008 at 12:54pm
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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Nishi....oh my God! You're writing awesome.
I loved the first part about the narrator and Kimi.
But actually I loved everything.

And I love the name Sapna. That's also my cousin's name. LOL

And....you got contacts? I got them too like one months ago. I still have many troubles to get them in. LOL
But....it's definitely better than glasses. Embarrassed LOL
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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 4:28pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Little Foot

Nishi....oh my God! You're writing awesome.
I loved the first part about the narrator and Kimi.
But actually I loved everything.

And I love the name Sapna. That's also my cousin's name. LOL

And....you got contacts? I got them too like one months ago. I still have many troubles to get them in. LOL
But....it's definitely better than glasses. Embarrassed LOL

 aaww thanks !! Big smile i chose sapna cuz my mom was gonna name me that but decided for chandni Embarrassed yupe i have troubles but i'll get used to them LOL 2 months ? thats a long time Tongue lol LOL

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