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TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END (Page 4)

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outstanding comedy Clap

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ohhhhh my godddd

kya ff hai yarrrrrrrr it was amzing .tumhe pata hai tumne kitna acha ff likh diya hai .oh god agar raj aur naina ka aisa koi serial ajaye na to me kud ne lag jaun yar .are wahhhhh kya ff heyy . u r just toooooo good .wese raj aur naina ka dilouges kitne ache the aur to aur raj naina ke piche pada hua hai ye to imazine kar ke hi mujhe asaman me udne ka man karta hai thanxxxxxx sooooooooooooo much for such a butful ff.thanx

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thanks a lot
Originally posted by rlrl

ohhhhh my godddd

kya ff hai yarrrrrrrr it was amzing .tumhe pata hai tumne kitna acha ff likh diya hai .oh god agar raj aur naina ka aisa koi serial ajaye na to me kud ne lag jaun yar .are wahhhhh kya ff heyy . u r just toooooo good .wese raj aur naina ka dilouges kitne ache the aur to aur raj naina ke piche pada hua hai ye to imazine kar ke hi mujhe asaman me udne ka man karta hai thanxxxxxx sooooooooooooo much for such a butful ff.thanx

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ur ff was top good
eagerly waiting for update
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Raj soch raha hai k Naina bandal maar rahi hai..aur Raj sahi soch rah hai...

par Naina ne jo intezaam kia hai..uski khabar Raj ko nahi hai.


Raj ne socha k kisi college k chhokre ko khada karegi Krishnamurthy k bhes me..aur Raj 1 minute me pakad lega..


Raj ne socha k Naina ko mil le..university gate pe hi..ta k usko mauka na mile natak karne ka..

bechara Raj..nahi janta k Naina samajh chuki hai k Raj jald se jald usse milne ki koshish zaroor karega..aur uska pehla target to university campus hi hoga...


Naina ne jaisa socha..waisa hi hua..


Raj gaya university me...

jaise hi main gate se ghusa Raj..dekha Naina aur ek ladka bahar aa rahe hai...

ladka handsme hai...


Naina k class fellow bhi hai uske sath..unse bhi ladka hans hans k baatein kar raha hai..


Raj chhup gaya....dekhne laga k Naina kyaa karti hai..


par Naina ne bahut pahle hi Raj ko dekh lia hai...

jis pedh k pichhe Raj chhupa tha..uske do kadam age hi..Naina aur Nitin rook gaye..



Raj soch raha hai...zaroor yeh wahi Ramachandran hoga...


haa..vakei Ramachandra to Nitin hi hai..


Raj sun  sake is awaz me Naina aur Nitin baatein karne lage..

Naina--Ram..mom and dad se kab baat karoge?


Ram--bohoot jald...but mere amma..appa ko kaun samjayega?unko to ek cultured bharatnatyam jannewali bahu chahie...aam ko bohoot dar lagta hai..Naina..aur tumare parents..ek south k ladke ko son-in-law accept karenga..


Naina--kyon nahi karenge?


Ram--but..Naina..think one thing..aamara culture bilkul alag hota...rahen sahen bi...abi aam log to pure vegetarian ..tum to maans machhi bhi khata.. ..appa nai manega...


Naina--are..hum log non veg hai..par itna zada bhi nahi..vegetarian khana bhi khate hai..


Ram--Naina..tumko shadi ka itna jaldi kyon?


Naina--are..maine bolana..k ek pagal mere pichhe hai..


Ram--wahi..jo mall se jump marta.?

Naina--yes..abhi tum baat karo mere parents se..varna kisi bhi din woh pagal mujhe utha le gaya to?


Ram--aiyo..yeh kyaa bolta..aisa hai kya woh admi?very dangerous..Naina.. aam ko khoon kharaba pasand nai...aamara appa Gandhijee ka bohoot bada fan hota..


Naina--are woh tera baap hai Gandhi ka bhakt..tu to nahi...abhi aur mat paka.. kab ghar aaoge?


Ram--aamara research ka kaam..bohoot pressure hai aj kal..par don't worry. aam ata hai..aam kal phone kar k batata hai..k aam kab aa sakega tere ghar pe..but Naina..aam ko bahut darr lagta..agar woh pagal mere par aamla kia to?tumne to sab bata dia mere bare me..abi humara life hai danger me..


Naina--abhi zada natak karoge..to main maar dalungi tumko..us waqt yaad nahi tha k pyaar me kitni problem honi hai...ake to bola tha mujhe,"Naina..I think ..aamko tumse pyar hua aai.."


Ram--aiyo..us baat ka badla tum aise leta..give me some time...I will meet your parents..don't worry..par tum ek kaam kyon nahi karta..thode dino k lia Ernakulam kyon nahi chala jata..aamara dost ka ghar hai waha..uski wife bhi hai..tumko koi pareshani nahi hogi..

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Raj office aya...chaukidar beedee pee raha tha..usko Rs.50/_ ka fine kia Raj ne..


office k sare employee ko kisi na kisi bahane se daataa..


pure office me hungama ........


chai ka cup fek k mara..


Naina bandal nahi maar rahi thi..sach me Ramachandran Krishnamurthy naam ka ladka Naina ki zindagi me hai.



par aisa??chhee chhee chhee....itna darpok..aur baatein kaise karta hai?



Naina ne is ladke ko pasand kia hai apne lia??kaisa ghatia test hai... yuuuukkkks....



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Nitin ghar wapas aya....


ate hi dekha..k Heena paise geen rahi hai..


Nitin--yeh kaha se aye??

Heena--Naina ne bheje hai....usne kaha us pagal par achha khasa asar pada hai..isi lia..abhi 3 lakh bheja hai usne..kaam pura ho jane par baki k 2 lakh bhi bhej degi..

Nitin--ab in 3 laakh ka kyaa karenge?


Heena--bank me jama kar k aao...aur ek kaam karo..1 lakh ka short term deposit banao..interest me kuchh zada paise mil jayenge...3 maheene ka deposit banao...


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Naina ghar akar khub hansi...Raj k upar...kyaa buddhu banaya usko...bravo Naina Arya,,,Raj ko popat bana dala....
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Naina ne yeh nahi socha tha k sach me Nitin ko ghar lana hoga Ramachandran bana k..usne socha tha k Raj uska pichha chhod dega..aur tab woh gharwalo ko sari sachchai bata degi..k Ramachandran naam ka koi admi nahi hai uski zindagi me..

par kahi agar Raj ne Delhi university me jake enquiry ki to??sara bhaanda foot jayega...Raj ko rokna hoga..par kaise?


Heena zuban nahi kholegi...aur zada choo chaa ki usne to uske dad ko uska pata de dia jayega...

par jitna asan laga tha yeh kaam..utna asaan to nahi hai...



Edited by yakkudimag - 10 August 2008 at 5:56am

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again a great round of appalause for this update...thanks di for this marvelous update
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Raj uska pichha chhodta hi nahi..

Naina kaha jati hai..kisse milti hai..sab par nazar rakh raha hai...

yeh to shukar hai k waqt par Nitin aa jata hai...par kitne din aisa chalega.. Nitin ko bhi office jana padta hai..bechare ki haalat kharab hai.


ek din Naina aur Ramachandran nikle ghumne..obviously..Raj ko dikhane k lia..

Nitin aur Naina ne socha k raaste se Heena ko bhi pick kar lenge..aur teeno mil k Amritsar jayenge..

shadi k baad se hi Heena bol rahi rahi k Golden Temple jana hai..mauka achha hai.


Naina car chala rahi hai...thodi der baad usne view finder me dekha k Raj usko follow nahi kar raha hai..uski car dikh nahi rahi hai..

Naina--thank god..Raj pichha nahi kar raha hai...khair Heena ko phone lagao aur puchho k kaha hai?


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Heena  aur Nitin ne swarna mandir k Sevak ko 5000 rupai die...bola langar k kaam me istemal karna...


fir waha k langar se khana khaya..Naina..Heena aur Nitin ne.


..fir Amritsar k bazar me ghumne gaye..jahapar badhia se badhia khana milta hai...

waha ki lassi pee..aur jalebi bhi khai teeno ne..


shaam ka waqt tha...

Nitin--suna hai..is market k daal bukhara..aur mutton curry bahut badhia milti hai?


Naina--haa..yeha ka keema naan bhi bahut mashhoor hai..

Heena--chalo na khate hai..


Balbant Singh da Dhaba..

yeha par kaali daal..keema naan..aur mutton curry order kia teeno ne....



Nitin--mujhe mutton banana bhi ata hai..you know..mutton me zada masala dena nahi padta..par zada pakana padta hai..mutton ka apna ek test hota hai..chicken ya fish me to masala daal k swad banana padta hai...


Naina--ek kaam karna..yeh mission pura ho jaye..fir ek resturant kyon nahi khol leta tu?

Heena--to fir business jayega khadde me..sara khana to khud hi khaa jayega.



aise me khana aa gaya..

Nitin k muh me paani aa gaya...


Naina ko bhi bahut bhookh lagi thi..aise me Nitin ban gaya Ramchandran..

Ramachandran--I think Naina..tum jis assignment k bare me aamko bola ta..humko uska reference book mil gaya...kal tumko dega...


Naina chauk gai..isko kyaa ho gaya?

Heena ne ishara kia..k koi Naina ko dekh raha hai..puchha,"kya yehi woh pagal Rajveer hai?"


Naina ki jaan uske gale me atak gai..

Raj isi taraf aa raha hai....


Nitin mutton ka piece apne plate me lene hi wala hai...aur Raj ne uska haath pakad lia..


Raj--Mr. Ramachandran..aap to pure veg hota...to yeh mutton kaise khata?

Nitin ko mutton nahi khane dia jayega..to sadme se woh pagal hi ho jayega..

usne himmat juta k bola..


Ramachandran--oo..aamara family hai pure veg..aam nahi..aam roz subha egg khata..aur Naina ne aam ko non veg khana sikha dia hai..aam ko khane do..bohoot tasty hota yeh curry..

Heena--kisi ka khana kyon rok rahe hai?

Raj--aap kaun?

Naina--my friend Heena...

Raj--Heena jee..pyar k lia khud ka dharam bharsht kyon kare koi...waise bhi Naina ko veg khana zada pasand hai..aur Ramachandran ko bhi..dekhiye na pura Amritsar ka bazar dhundh k yeh Appam aur Sambar laya hoon un dono k lia...dosa aur vada bhi hai..inko khane dijiye..hum dono yeh dhabe ki delicious khane ka maza uthate hai..


Nitin ki haalat bigad gai...Naina ki bhi...itna achha mutton aur keema naan chhod k yeh dosa aur vada khana hoga??mar gaye..


Heena muh latka ke baithi rahi..Nitin ko aisi haalat me chhod k kaise itna achha khana kha sakti hai woh??

Naina..Nitin aur Heena..teeno ko mil k Raj ka laya hua khana pada..aur Raj ne unka order kia khana pura khaa lia..

Nitin ka man kar raha tha k Raj ko ek punch maare...


Naina--excuse me friends..mujhe wash room jana hai..



Naina k jane k baad..

Raj--Heenajee..number mil sakta hai aapka??

Heena became nervous...,"kyon..mera number kyon chahie?"

Raj--yuh hi...apko dekh kar lagta hai k aap bahut interesting hai..I am interested in you...


Nitin man hi man Raj ko laath maar raha hai..uske samne usiki biwi ko line maar raha hai...




Naina wapas aai...."friends..chale?"raat ho jayegi ghar pahuchte pahuchte...


Nitin aur Heena Raj ko gaalian dene lage...

Nitin--kameena..ek to mera mutton curry khaa gaya..upar se Heena par line maar raha tha...


Naina--Heena k bare me kuchh nahi kar sakti..par mutton ka intezam kar k aai hoon..

Heena--kaise..

Naina--washroom jane k bahane..main dhabe k andar gai thi..ek admi ko Keema naan aur mutton curry pack kar k meri car ki pichhe ki seat me rakhne ko bola...usne kia..usko maine car ka number..aur 100 rupai jo die the...chal abhi khate hai..sala Raj pura khana kha gaya humara..


Nitin-mujhe do....please...


sadak k kinare car rok k teeno mil k bhikarion ki tarha naan aur curry khane lage..


udhar Raj..dhabe me baitha raha..lasski pee raha tha..uska sar garam ho gaya tha,...

nahi yeh ladka south ka hi hai..varna..Mutton curry aur naan chhod k kaise dosa aur vada kha lia?Punjab ya Delhi ka hota..to mujhe peetta..

Naina..jaao....apne Ramachandran k paas...vada aur dosa khao..aur filter coffee peeo...yeh soch k Raj lassi peene laga..
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Naina jab ghar lauti..tab Beejee jagi hui thi...

Naina--aap abhi tak soyi nahi?

Beejee--kuchh sawal hai man me..

Naina--puchhie..

Beejee--is Ramachandran Krishnamurthy ko apne drama group se manage kia hai kya?

Naina--nahi beejee..main mili thi usse..

Beejee--Naina..tu paida hone k baad meri hi goad me aai thi..tere bolne se pahle samajh jati hoon k tujhe kyaa kahna hai..tera sach jhoot koi aur na pakad sake..main pakad sakti hoon..

Naina--Beejee..aap ko to sab samajh me ata hai..kya woh Rajveer mujhe chhodta..agar maine yeh natak nahi kia hota to?

Beejee--tujhe natak karne ki zaroorat kia hai?Raj achha ladka hai..aur tujhe yeh rishta isi lia manzoor nahi tha kyonki tere papa laye the..tujhe arranged marriege nahi karna..par sirf isi wajah se Raj jaise ladke ko khud se kyon door kar rahi hai beti?

Naina--Beejee..aap ko to sab dikhta hai..pata hai k Raj kaisa pagal hai...aaj pata hai kyaa kiaa usne?


Naina ne word by word bayaan kia..k Amritsar me kyaa hua..


Beejee hansne lagi..."Naina..kuchh bhi bol..yeh Raj hi tere lia sab se achha hai..teri har harkat ka sahi jawab dene ki takat rakhta hai Raj.."


Naina--I am too tired..sona hai mujhe..


Beejee--meri baat k bare me sochna..

Naina--thik hai...

Naina so gai..


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raat ko Raj ladhkhadate hue ghar aya...

Omveer ne samhala..."Raj..beta kyaa hua.."

Raj--kuchh bhi to nahi dad..Sambar k saath ab Aloo ka paratha khaya jayega...

Nilima--kal nashte me chahie tujhe yeh combination?

Raj--cut it out mom..main kyaa kah raha hoon..aur aap kyaa samajh rahi hai... Naina,the great Naina Arya...sach me us Madrasi k pichhe pagal hai.. keemaa naan chhod k dosa khaa rahi hai..mere samne..lage raho..meri zara bhi parvah nahi hai usko..


Nilima--mitti daal uski baat pe..tere lia ek achha rishta aya hai..

Raj--haa..aur ladki Bengali hogi..aur kisi Marathi ladke k pichhe pagal hogi.. Machhli k saath Puran Puli khayegi..sab pata hai..lage raho..

Omveer--are aisa kyaa ho gaya tu itna niraash ho gaya?

Raj--hone ko kuchh baki hai kyaa?



Omveer--are..tu to usi tarha demoralised ho gaya ..jaisa Naina chahti thi..are drama group me kaam karti hai..usko pata hai k kitni acting karne se public convince ho sakti hai..aur Naina ne tujhe yakeen dila dia k Ramachandran naam ka koi ladka hai uski zindagi me..aur tune yakeen kar bhi lia...


Raj khamosh ho gaya.."haa..maine to is tarha socha hi nahi.."


Raj ka ladhkhadana bandh ho gaya..."yes dad..maine to is angle se nahi socha..cool..main kal hi us Ramachandran ki kundali nikaalta hoon.."

Omveer--that is the spirit son..

Raj kamre me chala gaya...


Nilima--kyon usko encourage karte hain aap??

Omveer--baat agar sach hai Naina k bare me..to Raj khudh hi pichhe hat jayega..aur agar jhoot hai to..Raj Naina ko utha k le ayega..shadi main karva dunga..


Nilima--jaisa baap waisa beta..lage raho..

Raj ne socha k Ramachandran ka drama pakadne k lia akele Ramachandran ka pichha karna hoga..

Naina Devi..tum "daal daal"

aur Raj "paat paat"

Raj had a relaxed mood then..
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Edited by yakkudimag - 10 August 2008 at 5:58am
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hahahaha..Raj kitna intelligent hai....outstanding...every praise will remain pitty in front of u Di.... Clap

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