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TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END (Page 37)

Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 5:13pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!

Raj aur Naina ke ishq ne Omveer ki haalat kharab kardi!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Omveer ish umeed mein tha ke Naina ko ab wapas layega par Omveer ko yeh pata chala ke Naina Erkakulam ghumne gayi hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue 

Naina is too much!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkAur Raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLRoz Om se jhamela hota hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Nilima ish beech mein parehsan ho rahi hai........ dono baap aur bete ke beech mein phas gayi hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy 

Lo ab Om Inspector Chadda ko bol raha hai Raj ko sazza dene ke liye aur jab Inspector ne kaha aisi koi sazza nahi hai aur legally kuch nahi kar sakte toh Raj ko dhamkane ke liye kaha!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Omveer pagal ho gaya hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFLROFL ROFL ROFL

Ab woh Raj se yeh kehta hai ke woh chahe toh Naina ko chhodke Monica se shaadi kar sakta hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueRaj toh ghabra gaya ish baat se!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL 

Woh chahta tha ke hadbadahat mein Raj Monica se milega!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Par Raj bhi samaj gaya aur teen din baad hi usse mila!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve

Par phir bhi Om ne unhe follow kiya!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyAur saath mein police bhi legaya!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj bhi chala gaya Nature's call attend karne!!!!!Tongue Tongue TongueAur Naina ko police ne aake pakad liya!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedMar gaye!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina ka wig Lady Hawaldar ke haath mein aa gaya haathapai mein!!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Ab Chadda ne usse pehchan liya aur Omveer bhi waha aagaya!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOLAur sab samaj gaya!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj motor cycle mein aakar Naina ko lekar bhaag gaya!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Aur Omveer gusse se keh raha hai keh chhodunga nahi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLBakra toh woh ban gaya!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLROFL ROFL ROFL

Raj on duty inspecter ki bike lekar bhaag aaya!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLRaj bhi naa!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Chadda Om se keh raha tha ki usko khush hona chahiye aur woh inspecter aa gaya!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLToo good!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Police jeep mein Chadda unke peeche gaya aur Raj ki bike ka accident ho gaya!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedO no!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Shukar hai dono ke sar pe chhot nahi lagi hai!!!Smile Smile

Baahar sab milke jhagad rahe hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueBeejee ne Omveer ko ullu kaha!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL Sahi hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink ROFL ROFL

Sab kuch sunkar Nilima,Gita aur Girish hasne lage!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Dono zakhmi pade hai aur sab unke samne hi aapas mein jhagad rahe hai!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Wakai mein pagalpan kis hadh tak jaa sakta hai in dono ko dekh kar pata chalta hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLChadda ne sahi kaha!!!!!Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL

Ab yeh dono Psychology ke case study ban gaye!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLHaan namoone hai sab ke sab!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Inke jaisa item shayad hi hoga!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Finally sab theek hai!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile5 saal baad Nitin aur Heena e do bacche hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj aur Naina ke bhi do bacche hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileThats great!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Ab Omveer aur Nilima nautanki karte hai!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj aur Naina hasne lage!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLHaan sahi hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

And the Nautanki goes on!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

The Nautanki must go on as in the Show must go on!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL
 
It was hillarious!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

What a great ending to a great story!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

gazal_sameer Senior Member
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Posted: 19 August 2008 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
great end
its realy funny
  too good
maza a gaya
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posts: 4176

Posted: 21 August 2008 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gazal_sameer

great end
its realy funny
  too good
maza a gaya


thanks a lot....keep reading my other fics..Wink


yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 August 2008 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hat's off to u for such wonderful comic fic.

 



THANK YOU
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yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 August 2008 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fanatic 21

aapki fics hamesha se alag hoti hai............aur yeh unmain se ek thi...............throughly njoyed ur dis fic..............absolutely hatke n different frm ur style...............Clap
 
yes khoob bhalo n asadharon...(are yaar bengali nahin hoon par kuch words pata hai)Wink
 
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Thank you very much for liking my fic.

I hope I will get equal comments for my other fics..
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yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 August 2008 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!

Raj aur Naina ke ishq ne Omveer ki haalat kharab kardi!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Omveer ish umeed mein tha ke Naina ko ab wapas layega par Omveer ko yeh pata chala ke Naina Erkakulam ghumne gayi hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue 

Naina is too much!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkAur Raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLRoz Om se jhamela hota hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Nilima ish beech mein parehsan ho rahi hai........ dono baap aur bete ke beech mein phas gayi hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy 

Lo ab Om Inspector Chadda ko bol raha hai Raj ko sazza dene ke liye aur jab Inspector ne kaha aisi koi sazza nahi hai aur legally kuch nahi kar sakte toh Raj ko dhamkane ke liye kaha!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Omveer pagal ho gaya hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFLROFL ROFL ROFL

Ab woh Raj se yeh kehta hai ke woh chahe toh Naina ko chhodke Monica se shaadi kar sakta hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueRaj toh ghabra gaya ish baat se!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL 

Woh chahta tha ke hadbadahat mein Raj Monica se milega!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Par Raj bhi samaj gaya aur teen din baad hi usse mila!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve

Par phir bhi Om ne unhe follow kiya!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyAur saath mein police bhi legaya!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj bhi chala gaya Nature's call attend karne!!!!!Tongue Tongue TongueAur Naina ko police ne aake pakad liya!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedMar gaye!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina ka wig Lady Hawaldar ke haath mein aa gaya haathapai mein!!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Ab Chadda ne usse pehchan liya aur Omveer bhi waha aagaya!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOLAur sab samaj gaya!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj motor cycle mein aakar Naina ko lekar bhaag gaya!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Aur Omveer gusse se keh raha hai keh chhodunga nahi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLBakra toh woh ban gaya!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLROFL ROFL ROFL

Raj on duty inspecter ki bike lekar bhaag aaya!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLRaj bhi naa!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Chadda Om se keh raha tha ki usko khush hona chahiye aur woh inspecter aa gaya!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLToo good!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Police jeep mein Chadda unke peeche gaya aur Raj ki bike ka accident ho gaya!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedO no!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Shukar hai dono ke sar pe chhot nahi lagi hai!!!Smile Smile

Baahar sab milke jhagad rahe hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueBeejee ne Omveer ko ullu kaha!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL Sahi hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink ROFL ROFL

Sab kuch sunkar Nilima,Gita aur Girish hasne lage!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Dono zakhmi pade hai aur sab unke samne hi aapas mein jhagad rahe hai!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Wakai mein pagalpan kis hadh tak jaa sakta hai in dono ko dekh kar pata chalta hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLChadda ne sahi kaha!!!!!Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL

Ab yeh dono Psychology ke case study ban gaye!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLHaan namoone hai sab ke sab!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Inke jaisa item shayad hi hoga!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Finally sab theek hai!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile5 saal baad Nitin aur Heena e do bacche hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj aur Naina ke bhi do bacche hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileThats great!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Ab Omveer aur Nilima nautanki karte hai!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj aur Naina hasne lage!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLHaan sahi hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

And the Nautanki goes on!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

The Nautanki must go on as in the Show must go on!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL
 
It was hillarious!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

What a great ending to a great story!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Thanks a lot..

I am happy,that could make you laugh a lot.This is the success of my fic.

Actually I got bored by writing serious fictions..I thought that I must write a comedy..so..the result is TERI CHAAHAT ME.

I wasn't so sure that I would be able to give a meaningful end of this comedy.

I know ,it is being ended a bit earlier..but every good thing has an end..so
TCM ends here.

I am glad that every one is glad after readingTERI CHAAHAT ME.

I enjoyed every word I have written.So the readers did..

I am really very happy.

From the beginning..I am laughing myself..while writing.



Nilima-Omveer,Raj-Naina,Heena-Nitin,Chaddha,The Baba and The Pandit, Girish-Gita,Balwant..and above all..Beejee..all are heights of madness..


They are really crazy.
LOLSilly

Infact ,I never thought before writing any fic so deeply.

I believe in spontaneous action..if any idea comes to my mind,I just write it as a starting of a new fic..and ..my story proceeds..in a normal flow.



all my fics..TALAASH,SHAF,MJS.. and TCM..and PAHK..all are the results of spontaneous action..


Thanks for loving my fic..hope you will give more love to my other fics.



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