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TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END (Page 32)

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Posted: 02 July 2008 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
its really funny
what a fic

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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 7:02am | IP Logged

Raj ghar lauta.....

Nilima daur kar aaii.."kyaa hua beta?yeh nishaan tere chehre pe?"

Omveer--pahle isse yeh puchho..k Office se kaise ghayab hua tha..kya baat hai Raj?

Raj--Naina se milne gaya tha..toilet ki khidki se kud kar bhaagaatha..aur milne gaya Naina se..aur hum dono ko love birds samajh kar Police ne pakad lia..aur mujhe hawalat me bhar kar dia kharcha paani..Inspector to Naina ko propose bhi kar raha tha ..

Nilima--dekho jee..bahut hua..Naina ko le aate hai... dono sabak sikh chuke hain...abhi is baat par mitti daalo..

Raj--nahi..koi zaroorat nahi..jab M.A. pass kar legi tab aayegi..rahne dete hai usko udhar..I am not interested..bahut hua..ab bahut kaam pending hai.. unhe khatam karna hai..mujhe bhookh lagi hai..

Nilima--haa...haath muh dhokar aa jaa..main abhi khana lagati hoon..

Raj apne kamre me chala gaya....

thodi der baad niche aayaa..dinner k lia..

Raj khana khaa nahi raha tha..bhakos raha tha..

Nilima--dhire ..khana bhaag nahi raha hai..

Omveer--tere tewar kuchh badle hue lag rahe hai.. kyaa baat hai?

Raj--aise hi..ab aap toh apna faisla badalenge nahi... mujhe bhi aur request nahi karna..Naina aaye.. naa aaye..I am not interested..waise bhi duniya me woh ek akeli ladki to nahi hai..

Omveer k gale k andar paani chala gaya tha..aut tabhi unko khaansi aai..

paani chhidak kar baahar aya..

Omveer--kyaa baat kar raha hai?

Raj--haa..timepass karne k lia bahut mil jaati hai..

Omveer--abe tu paagal to nahi ho gaya..Naina maar dalegi tujhko...

Raj--nahi..infact usne already apna ek boyfriend bana lia hai...timepass k lia..mujhe usine yeh idea dia..M.A. pass karne tak humara yeh affair chalega..

Nilima ki ankhe khuli ki khuli reh gai...

Nilima--beta..aisa nahi bolte..

Omveer--achha..Police ka danda tere sar par to nahi pada?dimag satak gaya hai kya?

Raj--aapko jo samajhna hai samjhe..par aaj se Naina  ka zikar nahi hoga is ghar me..jab usko aanaa hoga aa jayegi..main sone chala..

Raj chala gaya...

Omveer aur Nilima baithe rahe..

Omveer--yeh to maine nahi socha tha..

Nilima--sochne k lia dimag ka hona bhi zaroori hai Mr. Siddhu..aapke paas to hai nahi...thik bol rahi hoon na?

Omveer--vakei me nahi hai..varna tumse shaadi thode hi karta?

Nilima--yeh ek kaam samajhdari ka kia tha aapne.. aur meri zindagi ka sab se badi bhool hai yeh..us waqt mera dimag  ghaas charne gaya tha..

Omveer chidh gaye...

Omveer--meri insult karne ki koshish kar rahi ho?

Nilima--koshish nahi..main insult kar rahi hoon..

Omveer--ghalati Raj ki hai...

Nilima--dono ne ghalati ki..to unko maaf kar dena tha..aisi saza kyon?

Omveer--Beejee ne bola..

Nilima--waah re mere Beejee k bhakt!!Beejee ghar me aag lagane ko bolti ..to shayad woh bhi laga dete..kyon?

Omveer--nahi..

Nilima--to fir Raj ki zindagi me yeh aag kyon laga dia?

Omveer--usko sudhaarne k lia..

Nilima--woh aur bhi bigad gaya hai..abhi Extra Marital karne ki baat kar raha hai...

Omveer--besharam ladka ...

Nilima--ha..aur bolo..ek toh tumhari wajah se usko Police ki maar jhelni padi..aur..

Omveer--maine kaha tha Police ko?

Nilima--tumne Naina ko ghar se bhaga dia..usi se milne gaya..aur yeh bhakeda..sab kuchh tumhari wajah se hai..

Omveer--usko samjhaaon..shaai shuda hai woh..kisi aur k bare me sochna bhi paap hai..

Nilima--aap hi samjhao..kyon ap uske baap hain..

Omveer--yeh kavita karne ka waqt nahi hai Nila.. kuchh karo..

Nilima--main neutral hoon..Raj kuchh kaheta hai to main chup raheti hoon..ab bhi main chup rahungi..

Nilima chali gai..

Omveer k sar par haath..

room me jaakar Raj chat karne baitha...net pe

Naina thi chat par..

Raj ka user name hai GARAM DHARAM(GD)..aur Naina ka user name hai GABBAR KI BASANTI(GKB)..

GARAM DHARAM--maine dad ko bata dia hai..k main kisi aur ki taraf attract honewala hoon..

GABBAR KI BASANTI..--good..unka chehra choose hue aam ki tarha ban gaya tha kya?

GD--nahi..baasi papad ki tarha ban gaya tha..

GKB--he deserves it..

GD--I know..par hum aise hi net se contact karenge.. phone karogi ..to dad pakad lenge..net is safe.

GKB--by the way..dad ko dikhane k lia..tumhare lia ek GIRL FRIEND dhoondh li hai maine..

GD--kaun hai?

GKB--main khud..mujhe risk nahi lena..kisi aur k haath me tumko chhod k..

GD--par dad to pehchaan jaayenge..

GKB--khaak pehchanenge..Natak me kaam karti hoon..aisa get up banaungi...Omveer Siddhu ki aisi band bajegi..fir se mujhe maike bhejne ki baat nahi karenge..

GD--love you..tum kitni chalu item ho..

GKB--ek hi kaam bewakoofo jaisa kia hai..

GD--kyaa?

GKB--tumse shaadi..

GD--shut up..tum badi 'woh' ho..

GKB--aarree ..rreee..kyaa nakhre hai..achha suno.. main  chali..kal University jaldi jana hai..good night...I love you..

GD--love you too..good night..

Raj so gaya ..udhar Naina bhi so gai..

Omveer ki neend ghayab ho chuki thi..

Omveer--Nila..Nila..utho..

Nilima--kyaa hai?

Omveer--arre..tumko neend kaise aa sakti hai .. aise waqt me..jab tumhara beta aise ghalat raah par jaa raha hai?

Nilima--aadhi raat ko yeh bakwas karni hai tumko?

Omveer--kaisi Maa ho?bete ki ara bhi fikar nahi?

Nilima--tumko fikar hai..kaafi hai..mujhe sona hai.. please...

agle din..

Raj Office se nikla....

Omveer ne uska pichha kia...

unhone dekha..Raj ek coffee shop k andar gaya..

jitna dikha..yehi k..Raj ek ladki k saath hai..ladki ne Mini Skirt paehni hui hai..aur uske kate hue baal hai..Mashroom Cut..

haath me stylish wrist watch..funky look hai ladki ka..

Raj se bahut chipki hui hai..

Omveer coffee shop k andar gaye..door k ek table baithe..Raj ko watch karne k lia..

achanak unko dikha..k Raj shoes se pair nikal k.. pahle ladki k feet ko sehla raha hai apne pairo se.. fir Raj ka right foot ladki k knees tak jaane ki koshish kar rahi hai...

Omveer(man hi man)..arre inko koi rokta kyon nahi?oohh no..yeha par sab ladke ladki aisa hi kar rahe hai..shit..nahi Raj..tu mera beta hai..shadishuda hai..nahi Raj..nahiiiii..

udhar..

Raj--dad dekh rahe hain?

Naina--apna sar pit rahe hain..

Raj--tumne baal sach me kata die?

Naina--nahi..hair style...bana pada..

Raj--waise kaafi hot lag rahi ho..

Naina--haa...ghar par aise gai to Beejee maaregi..

Raj--sab kuchh Beejee ka kia dhara hai..

Naina--ehsaanfaramosh..bhul gaye..Beejee ne hi kitni madad ki hai..humari?

Raj--haa..woh bhi hai..

udhar

Omveer(man hi man)--mera beta itna bada tharki hai..mujhe aaj hi malum pada..yeh dhukda kiske saamne jaake rouun..haiii..Ohh God..

Omveer ki yeh haalat dekh kar..Raj aur Naina hans rahe hai..


Naina--bas..abhi aur nahi ..unko sabak sikha chuke hum..

Raj--abhi nahi..Maa ko kuchh dino k lia bhagana hai ghar se..

Naina--nahi..aisa nahi karoge..

Raj--aisa hi karna hai..tab jaa k dad ko pata chalega..



Edited by yakkudimag - 03 July 2008 at 2:10pm
sania_58 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 8:37am | IP Logged
awsome, awsome, awsome
too funny
by the way chat er idea, extra maritial affair
oh god, itna tumhare dimag main kaise aata hai??
superb
mindblowing
great going Clap
plz continue soon, waiting
rituka7 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 9:12am | IP Logged
awesome
too good
update soon............
Mahak Sinha IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 04 July 2008 at 12:05am | IP Logged
G8 nautanki. LOL
In dono ko best nautanki of the year ka prize dena chahiye. Wink
Coffee shop me ye sab kar rahe hain aur koi kuch bhi nahi keh raha hai waah. Wink
Kya kahega koi jab sab hi aise hain. Wink Wink Wink
Kya full proof plan socha hai RN ne. LOL
Jodi bhi bhagwaan ne kamaal ki banayi hai. Wink Wink
Neelima ji ka dil ki mai insul karne ki koshish nahi insult kar rahi hoon kamal ka hai. Smile Smile Smile
RN humare ladte ladte bhi pyaar karte rehte hain. Wink
Chat name kitna badia rakha hai dono ne GD aur GKB. LOL
Good planning. Wink
Raj jaanta tha ki us k dad aise nahi maanege to aise hi sahi. Angry
Bechare itna dar gaye ki neend apni to aayi nahi Neelima ji ko bhi nahi sone diya. Wink Wink Wink
Choosa hua aam kya tittle rakha hai Naina ne apne sasur ka. LOL
I like it. Smile
update soon.
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Posted: 04 July 2008 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
this is indeed the the one of the bestest nautanki yet...... LOL
when raj said abt the extra marital stuff........my god!!! bechara onveer LOL
aur kya id nikala hai......mindblowing
and omveer ka halat dekhne layek hai..........dialogues saare parte parte i m in splits...........anu u r toooo good yaar, itne awesome ideas ate kaise hai yaar........i just love the way u write ekdum staright forward sentences......

its tooooooooooooo good Clap
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Posted: 04 July 2008 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Raj aur Naina ne kya foolproof plan banaya hai!!!! Clap

Omveer ki toh haalat kharab ho gayi hai!!!! LOL Uske saath aisa hi hona chahiye!!!! LOL

Nilima bhi kya dialogue deti hai!!!! LOL I loved her dialogue insult karne ki koshish nahi kar rahi hoon insult kar rahi hoon!!!! ROFL

Raj aur Naina dono net pe chat kar rahe hai!!!! Wink Jhagde mein bhi inka romance chalu hai!!!! Embarrassed Waise kya chat name rakha hai dono ne!!! LOL

Waise Naina ne bhi Raj ko wahi kaha jo thodi der pehle uski saas ne uske sasur ko kaha tha!!!! Wink Nilima bhi na sahi mein Naina ki saas hai!!!!! LOL Kya jodi hai saas bahu ki!!!! Clap

Omveer ki toh raaton ki neend hi udh gayi hai!!!! LOL Woh toh Nilima ko bhi sone nahi de raha hai!!! LOL

Raj aur Naina coffee shop mein yeh sab kar rahe hai!!!! Wink Sabhi yehi kar rahe hai!!!Aur Omveer waha sar patak raha hai!!!! ROFL

Raj ne ek aur plan banaya hai!!!! Wink Kya baat hai!!!! Clap

Raj aur Naina ki jodi toh kamal ki hai!!!!Kya jodi banayi hai bhagwaan ne!!! LOL Dono ke dono number one nautanki!!!! Clap

yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 05 July 2008 at 4:24am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Raj aur Naina ne kya foolproof plan banaya hai!!!! Clap

Omveer ki toh haalat kharab ho gayi hai!!!! LOL Uske saath aisa hi hona chahiye!!!! LOL

Nilima bhi kya dialogue deti hai!!!! LOL I loved her dialogue insult karne ki koshish nahi kar rahi hoon insult kar rahi hoon!!!! ROFL

Raj aur Naina dono net pe chat kar rahe hai!!!! Wink Jhagde mein bhi inka romance chalu hai!!!! Embarrassed Waise kya chat name rakha hai dono ne!!! LOL

Waise Naina ne bhi Raj ko wahi kaha jo thodi der pehle uski saas ne uske sasur ko kaha tha!!!! Wink Nilima bhi na sahi mein Naina ki saas hai!!!!! LOL Kya jodi hai saas bahu ki!!!! Clap

Omveer ki toh raaton ki neend hi udh gayi hai!!!! LOL Woh toh Nilima ko bhi sone nahi de raha hai!!! LOL

Raj aur Naina coffee shop mein yeh sab kar rahe hai!!!! Wink Sabhi yehi kar rahe hai!!!Aur Omveer waha sar patak raha hai!!!! ROFL

Raj ne ek aur plan banaya hai!!!! Wink Kya baat hai!!!! Clap

Raj aur Naina ki jodi toh kamal ki hai!!!!Kya jodi banayi hai bhagwaan ne!!! LOL Dono ke dono number one nautanki!!!! Clap

AB AAYEGA MAJA..THE ISHTYLLE.. THE MUJIK..THE BHAYANKAR FARMULLA..THE TASHAN..

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