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TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END (Page 27)

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Posted: 12 June 2008 at 10:04am | IP Logged

thanks a lot to all readers..Smile

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that ws tooooooooooo good
mindblowing and awesome updates........u know, these updates make me feel being naughty is sooooooooo enjoyable!! i wished i played more pranks when i ws in school!!
and the drama party is really wowwwwww!

gr8 and fantastic fic once again dear
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Raj k muh par Peer Baba thuk kar chale gaye..

Raj k lia bahut bura tajoorba..

Omveer ko bahut gussa aa gaya tha...

Beejee bhi patli gali se nikal gai..

udhar Ganesh urf Peer Baba..Naina k haatho buri tarha se pit raha tha...idhar Raj ..awaz nikaal k  ro raha tha..isse ghatia aur kuchh ho nahi sakta...

Omveer--yeh ho kyaa raha hai??

Raj--dad..sab meri ghalti hai..main bahut bura kia..Naina k saath..

Omveer--kyaa??

Raj ne tab sab kuchh bataya...kidnapping ka darr..Nitin k naam ki supari.. Heena k baap k naam se khamokha Naina ko darana..aur fir usse jaldi shadi karna..

Nilima k sar par haath..unka beta itna bada ghotala karega..unhone sapne me bhi nahi socha tha..k Raj aisi harkat karega..

Omveer--achha hai..bhugto ab..Naina se itna bada dhokha kia...

Raj--kyaa karta..shadi k lia maan hi nahi rahi thi...

Nilima--toh itna ghotala karega tu?aaj nahi to kal maan hi jaati....jaldbazi me yeh kyaa kia tune?

Raj-I am sorry Mom..

Omveer--to fir usko kisne kidnap kia?

Raj--mujhe shak hua tha..Heena k dad par..kyonki jisdin usko utha k le gaye the..usdin phone aya tha Nitin k paas..k Heena ko talak do..varna usko nahi chhoda jayega..

Nilima--Naina ko Heena samajh k uthaya hai?

Raj--haa..main gaya tha Heena k dad k paas..par yeh kaam unka nahi hai..

Omveer--to kiska kaam hai yeh?

Raj--I think..mere plan ki khabar bahar k kisiko pata chal gai thi..usine chance me dance kia hai..

Nilima--haa..par jinhone kidnap kia..unki kuchh to demands hongi..paisa..dene me kyaa harj hai?

Omveer--sab se pahle Raj ko lock up me dalna chahie..

Raj aur zor se rone laga...

Nilima--kyon dara rahe ho bachche ko..

Omveer--yeh bachcha hai??..haa...isko..to jute se marna chahie..itni ghatia harkat..us bekasoor ladki ko kitna jhelna padh raha hai....sab iski wajah se..

Omveer Raj ko peetne lage...

Raj--Mummyyyyyyyyyy...bachao......

Nilima--main kuchh nahi kar sakti....

............
udhar Beejee ne ghar par jake Naina ko sab kuchh bataya...

Naina ne bhi bataya..k Ganesh Tripathi kaise pit chuka hai..

Beejee--main apni hansi rok nahi paa rahi thi..

Naina--sab thik hi tha..par Ganesh ne Raj par thuk k achha nahi kia..dia maine usko full kharcha pani...

Beejee--haa..tab mujhe bhi achha nahi laga...achha sun..Chaddha se kah kar yeh khabar Raj tak pahucha dia hai..k kidnappers Shimla road k paas ek purane makaan me the..

Naina--okkk....thanks Beejee..

ab hoga Naina ka naya Mission..

"Mission Chudail ka Jalwa Reloaded."

usne apne drama group k logo ko phone kia..ek special performance k lia. ..agar yeh successful hua to drama company k lia Rs.50000/_ ..inaam..


Raj k dimag me bhi Shimla road wali baat hai...

Raj ne socha khud jakar..dekhega..Police ko bina bataye..

Raj ne Beejee ko phone kia...

Beejee--haa..Raj bolo..

Raj--mujhe jana hai us purane makaan me...

Beejee--tu waise hi bimar hai..kyon jayega waha??

Raj--nahi Beejee..mujhe jana hi hai..aapko bhi sath chalna hai..Naina ..

Beejee--kyaa?

Raj--..aap ko chalna hai bas...

phone rakh kar Raj ne socha.."Naina mujhse naraz ho sakti hai..par Beejee se uski koi narazgi nahi hai..Beejee k sath ..I will be in safe side.."

udhar Inspector Chaddha ka phone aya..

Omveer k paas...

unhone kaha..k raat k 10 baje..pure police force k sath us jagah par raid hoga..

Raj ne yeh suna..agar Naina ne sach ugal dia..nahi..Naina..woh zinda hai.. kahi kidnappers ne muh khol dia..Police k pahuchne se pahle Raj ko udhar pahuchna hai...


raat k 8 baje..Shimla Road...k paas.. ka woh makaan..

Beejee--Raj ..beta..mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai..

Raj--Main hoon Naa..Beejee..

Beejee--tu ab tak tha..isi lia ..to...

Raj makaan k andar ghusa...Beejee ko bol kar gaya.."Beejee..agar main 15 minute me nahi aya..to yeh lijiye laatthi..andar aa jaiyega.."

Beejee--achha mazak karta hai..is umar me yeha tak aa gai..kaafi nahi hai kya?upar se mujhe Superwoman banane pe kyon tula hai tu?

Raj--oof oo..Beejee..Naina k lia aap itna bhi nahi kar sakti?

Beejee--thik hai..tu jaa..main yehi par pehra deti hoon..

Raj andar ghusa...

ek do kamre dekh lie usne...aise me kisike payal ki awaz...

chham..chham..chham...

Raj--Ram Ram..Ram..Ram..Ramm....Jay Hanuman Gyan Gun Sagar..isse age ki line Beejee se sikh lunga..par Bajrangbali  abhi uddhar karo..

achanak...kisike gaane ki awaz..

"main dunia bhula dungi..teri chaahat me..
main dunia bhula dungiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..teri chaahat me...

ho dushman zamana..mujhe na bhulana..

main sab kuchh loota dungiiiiii..

teri chaahat me..."

Raj--kkkkaaaauunn..hai...

chham chham..chham..chhamm..

Raj---yeh payal ki exhibition nahi hai..saaf batao..k kaun hain..hello.. kidnapper bhai saab..kaha hai aap..dekhie..main cheque book sath laya hoon..amount bhar lijiye aap log..par meri biwi ko chhod do..main mar jaunga..uske bina....dekho mujhe bahut gussa aa raha hai..

achanak waha se chimgaadar udh gaya..Raj k sar k upar se...

Raj thoda aur aage badha...

achanak..andhere me kuchh figures dekhne ko mil rahe hai..

"taa taa thei tat..aa taa thai tat..tigdha dig dig thai..tigdha dig dig thai..tigdha dig dig thai.."

"dha dhin dhin dha..dha dhin dhin dha..na teen teen na..tete dhin dhin dha.."

"mohe panghat pe nandlaal chhed gayo re.."

tarha tarha ki awazein..

tarha tarha k dance steps..

Raj--arre..bhaiyo..aur unki baheno..naachna hai to samne ake perform karo.. andhere me kyon ho?

achanak...

"eeeiiihiii..chhhheeiinnn...chhhoooooee..hhjieeeeeeeekkkk... "

Raj --nnnaaaahiii...bas..samne ane ki zaroorat nahi.......

achanak..ek moti si figure wali koi aa gai...

"aauuoon..maauoon..khaaouuun..munjhe naanch..denkhna hainnn.. nannchho.."

Raj--main?

"haannn..tum...""gaanaa bhin gaaonnn.."

Raj--ok try karta hoon..."uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnn unnnnnnnnnnnn.. Anshik banaya..anshik banaya..anshik  banaya aanpne...tenre bin..suni suni hai..raanhen.."

"shut your mouth..ek Himesh Reshmaiya kyaa kum hai..koi dhang ka gana gaao..saanle ne humari conpy kar kar k ..panka dalann.."

Raj--ok..last chance..

"jaane jigar jane mannn..

80 kilo tera wazan..

tu jo ake mujh pe geerriii..mar jaunga..main sanam..."

"haaa..haaa..haaa.."

ek patli si figure aai.."achha gana hai..moti k lia.."

aise me ek roshni si guzri...

aur fir shuru hua Item Song..chorus me..

"unchi khindki..mankdi ka jangla..

uske pinchhe..bhoot bangla..

unchi khindki..mankdi ka jangla..

uske pinchhe..bhoot bangla.."

Raj waha se bhaag ne laga..

aur woh group uske pichhe pichhe aane laga..

Raj--Beejee..15 minute kya nahi hue aapkee..?? helppppppppppppppppppp pp....

aise me Raj k sath koi takrai.."aarreeee..cockroachhhh.,,,, bachaoooooo ooo oooooo.."

Raj--chhodo..mujhe...

"nahi..mujhe cockroach se darr lagta hai..aaaa.....cockroachhhhhh hhhhh hhhhhh..Beejeeeeeeeeeeee"

Raj ko mehsoos hua..isse to pahle gale mil chuka hai..awaz bhi jaani pehchani lag rahi hai..

Raj ne uske chehre par torch mara..

arree..yeh to Naina hai...

Raj--so..yeh tumhari badmashi thi??

Naina--tum ne kyaa kia tha?

Raj--chalo ghar.. main batata hoon..abhi chalo..

Raj..Naina ko ghasit kar bahar laya..

udhar natak company pichhe pichhe aai..

bahar sab road k paas hai...

Raj ne apne dad ko aur Naina k dad ko phone kia...

2 ghante baad..sab log Raj k ghar par jama hue..

natak mandali bhi..

Raj ne Pandit aur Peer ko pehchaan lia..

Raj--Alakh Niranjan..Haakkaa,,.saalo..bakra banane k lia main hi mila?

Ganesh--Naina ne hi bola tha..

Raj--woh bolegi to kuen me kud jayega.??.mere muh pe thuka..

Naina --maine thuk ne ko nahi kaha tha..

Raj--jhaadoo se marne ko kaha tha ..sirf?

Naina--haa..

Raj--oohh..

Gita--koi humko batayega..k ho kya ho raha hai?

Naina--main batati hoon..

sab kuchh sun kar..

Omveer,Nilima,Gita aur Girish..sab baith gaye..

Nilima--Bahenjee..paani peena chahengi aap?

Gita--haa..plaese..

Girish--par..Naina ab tak kaha thi?

Beejee--humare ghar pe..terrece wale room me..

Raj--Beejee..aapne Naina ka saath dia?

Beejee--Naina k lia main kuchh bhi kar sakti hoon beta..

Naina--achha khasa natak jama tha..cockroach ne sab gadbad kar dia..

Natak Group ka director--humari payment?

Raj--oohh..payment?kitna?

"Rs. 50000/_"

"50000 dande padne chahie aapko"

Omveer ne 2000 rupai dekar sab ko rawana kia..

Nitin aur Heena bhi pahuch chuke the..Naina k milne ki khabar paa kar...

Girish--achha...Raj ne jo kia so kia...par tumko kisne kidnap kia tha?

Naina--Heena k dad ne..Heena samajh kar kidnap karvaya tha mujhe..par jab mujhko dekha..sab saaf ho gaya..

Omveer--Heena ko kyon kidnap karana chaahte the?

Naina--aapke bete ne unke bare me ghatia baatein kahi..isi lia..Heena aur Nitin ko sabak sikhane k lia..yehi sab kia tha..unka koi dosh nahi...sara kuchh Raj,Nitin aur Heena ka kia dhara hai..

Nilima ne Nitin ki taraf dekha..

Nitin--we are very sorry aunty..

Naina--dalbadloo..saalon..tum dono ko to..

Beejee--achhi baat hai,ab dono hi gunahgaar hai,saza dono ko milni chahie,  kyaa kare?

Gita--kyaa karenge Beejee?

Omveer--dono ki saza yeh hai..k dono..alag rahenge..jab tak Naina M.A. pass nahi kar leti tab tak..Naina apne maike me rahegi..

Raj--no dad..aisa gazab mat karna..

Nilima--tumhari yehi saza hai..

Naina ka chehra bhi utar gaya..yeh to nahi chaahti thi woh..

 

 

 

 

 


 



Edited by yakkudimag - 10 August 2008 at 6:41am
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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Waah waah waah kya nautanki thi. LOL
Raj ka dance to kamaal ka tha chudailo k samne. LOL
Naina ki bhi acchi practise se natak karne me. Wink
Us ko yahi profession start kar dena chahiye. Wink Wink
Beejee k to kehne hi kya budhape me jo na kar de wahi kam hai. Wink
Omveer aur Neelima bhi soch rahe honge ki kya tagda baccha paaya hai unhone. LOL
Beta to beta bahu bhi poori ki poori nautanki hai. LOL
Shimla Road waala natak to kamal ka hi tha. LOL
Natak company waale bhi ab Naina ka saath nahi denge jab 50000/- ki jagah 2000/* milenge. LOL LOL
Acchi punishment mile dono ko yahi hona chahiye tha. Embarrassed
Is baar dono hi nahi reh paayenge ek doosre k bgair. Embarrassed
Naina bhi kush nahi hai is punishment se.Bahut pyaar hai na us ko apne pati se. LOL
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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 8:31am | IP Logged
are yaar pakdi gayi.......

vaise iss prank mein bahut maza aaya......

ab bicharon ko alag rehna padega.....

but it was very good updt
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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 8:50am | IP Logged
my god, darling u r just BRILLIANT
this ws an outstanding update......aur iske aage kya kahoon, meri bolti band kar di hai tumne...........itna badiya update........bhoot ke drama, raj ka gana aur end my ekdum too good saaza...........mann gaye yaar.......this ws as amazing as possible.........loved it, loved it.............mast update tha, mazaa aa gaya sach mein!!

tusi gr8 ho

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too good Clap .plz cont soon......

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