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TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END (Page 25)

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Guys..ab batao...Raj ko kis had tak satana chahie..kya Naina thik kar rahi hai?



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Raj apne kamre me so raha hai..doctor ne usko neend ka injection dia hai...

raat k 2 baje hai..

paas wale room me Nilima aur Omveer so rahe hai..

Omveer ko lekar aaj Beejee gai thi Police station..Inspector Kuljeet Chaddha k paas..

Chaddha--oo jee bolo..ki gall hai?

Omveer--humari bahu..Naina ko kisine agvaah kar lia hai..

Chaddha--jee..aisa hai..yeh bhi ho sakta k toaddi bahu khud hi bhaagi hai ghar se..

Omveer--kyaa baat kar rahe hain aap?woh aur mera beta New York se laute Delhi Airport pe..wahi se kidnap kia kisine usko..

Chaddha--mamla to Delhi Police ka banta hai jee..aap pahle Delhi se order laao..fir hum karte hai tehkikat..

Omveer--aap kyon nahi kuchh karenge?humari bahu hai..aapki bhi beti saman hai woh..agar aapki ghar ki bahu beti ko is tarha koi utha le..to aap kya special order ka wait karenge?

Chaddha kuchh der chup raha..

Chaddha--achhi baat hai..uski ek photo de dijiye..hum dekhte hai..

Beejee aur Omveer Police station se nikle..

achanak..

Beejee--Om..tu ja car me baith..main apna chashma bhool aai hoon..

Beejee gai Chaddha k cabin me..

Chaddha ne Beejee k pair chhooen..

Chaddha ki beti ki shaadi Beejee ne bahut achhe ladke se karai thi..is baat ka ehsaan aaj bhi Chaddha maanta hai..

Chaddha--Pairi Pauna Beejee..

Beejee--Jeenda reh..

Chaddha--kahani kyaa hai Beejee?

Beejee ne bataya brief me...

Chaddha--ooo..ab is baat ka kyaa investigation hoga?aap bolo....

Beejee--kuchh mat kar..bas chup  chaap baitha reh..

Beejee ne apne bag se ek dabba nikala..

Beejee--yeh le..maine laddoo banaye the..tere ghar k lia yeh dabba hai..

Chaddha ne fir se Beejee k pair chhooen...

Beeje chali aai waha se..

Omveer--itni der lag gai?

Beejee--arre mere chashme k upar shak kia unlogone..socha usme hi bomb hoga..varna main kyon chhod aati usko..soch..kyaa paagal log hai..

Omveer--Inspector Chaddha mujhe pahle darje kameena laga..

Beejee--abhi chal..

Raj ko aakar bataya Omveer ne k Police me report kar chuke hai woh..

Raj k sar par haath...

aur ab Raj so raha hai...

achanak zor zor se hawa chalne lagi..

khidki se awaz aane lagi...

Raj ki neend toot gai..

Raj uth kar baitha bed par..

uski nazar balcony me rakhi chair par gai...


achanak woh chair hilne lagi...

is side se us side ko jaane lagi..jaise koi us chair ko khich kar kabhi  right ..kabhi left me le ja raha hai...

Raj k gale se awaz nahi nikli..

achanak ek candle andhere se chair k paas aai...

safed rang ka chair hai..isi lia andhere me dikh raha hai..

load shading ho gai hai...

Raj(darte hue)--kaun hai?kaun hai waha?

"tanha tanha yeha pe jeena yeh koi baat hain.?.koi saath nahi tera yeha to yeh koi baat hai??

kisi koooooooooooooooo jaan de de..kisiiiiiiiiiiiiiii  jaan le le..

is sare zamane me yehi pyaari baat hai.."

Raj dar gaya..yeh gana to..Naina gun gunati thi..New York me..kai baar sun chuka hai Raj.

bas..'PYAAR' ki jagah 'JAAN' hai..

pyaar ki jagah jaan ki len den ki baat chal rahi hai..

achanak...ek ghunghat odhi hui ladki aake khadi hui balcony me...

apna haath aage kia usne..wahi jala hua haath..

yeh to Naina hai...


Raj dar gaya..bahut zada...bhagwan ka naam japne laga..

"Ram Ram..Ram..Ram..Ram Ram..Ramm..Jai Hanuman Gyaan Goon sagar.. Jay Kapish....dhatt tariki..aage ka pata nahi..kyaa karoon?Ram Ram..Ram.. Ram...."

achanak woh saya ghayab ho gaya...

aur Raj behosh hoke fir se geera..

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jo kuchh hua woj kuchh is prakar the..

safed rang ka chair is side se us side ho raha tha..

chair lohe ka tha...

Balcony k niche k roof me..ek bada sa magnet rakh kar idhar se udhar ho raha tha..

aur Magnet k saath lohe ki chair bhi hil rahi thi..

aur candle bhi idhar udhar ho rahi thi..actually candle ek remote controlled toy car k upar chipka dia tha kisine..

aur zor zor se hawa chal rahi thi..

badha sa fan istemal kia gaya..

yeh cheese natak ya film ki shooting me hi use kie jaate hai...

jab toofan ka scene dikhana ho..tab fan chalaya jata hai..

horror play k lia..isi tarha chair ko hilaya jata hai..aur remote controlled toy.. kisi bhi toy shop mil hi jata hai..


yeh jo sara horror movie ka set lagaya gaya tha..

yeh Naina k natak company se aayaa tha..Naina ne achhe khase paise die iske lia..

ab sawal yeh uthta hai..k gharwalo ko kaise pata nahi chala..haa..


pahli raat ko jab Naina Raj ko darane aai thi..us raat ek chor aya tha is ghar me..

Naina ne aaj k raat k lia usko book kia..

k ghar me ghoos kar..Raj k ilava sab ko..thoda thoda chloroferm se behosh karna hai..watchman ko bhi..

Chor ne wada kia hai..k dubara chori nahi karega kabhi..

Naina ne usko apne drama company k director ko bol kar..us chor ko Manager bana dia hai..

aur bas..ghar me Raj ko chhod kar sab koi gehri neend me...

bade se fan ko rassi se khich kar balcony me rakha gaya..aur niche k room k switch board me uska plug lagaya gaya..

is chakkar me ..Naina k natak company k naye Manager ko electric shock bhi laga..

Naina k saath uske drama company k 4 members aur the..

yeh tha "MISSION CHUDAIL KA JALWA"

MISSION ACCOMPLISHED ..perfectly..

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subha Nilima aai Raj ko davai dene..tab dekha Raj geera pada hai..

 

Nilima--beta..Raj..uth..ankhe khol...

Raj--haa..

Nilima--ankhe khol..

Raj ne ankhe kholi...

Raj--mom..Naina..aai thi..woh..

Nilima--Raj..tera vahem hai...hum log dhundh rahe hai usko...hausla rakh...


aise me Omveer aaye..

Omveer--Inspector Chaddha se baat hui...

Nilima--kyaa kaha unhone?

Omveer--Simla jane wale road k paas..ek jagah..ek purani haveli hai...waha par kuchh logo ki rahene ki khabar hai..agar waha pe chhaanbeen ki jaye..to kuchh suraag mil sakta hai..par yeh Raj ko kyaa hua?


aise me Beejee ka phone aayaa..

Beejee ko Nilima ne bataya Raj ki haalat k bareme..

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dopaher ko Beejee aai...

saath me ek Peer Baba ko lekar..bahut pahuche hue Baba  hain..

lambi si daadhi hai..gale me bahut si mala hai..kala kaptan type ka kuchh pahena hai Baba ne..haath me Jhaadoo hai...

Nilima--yeh kaun hai Beejee?

Beejee--Peer Baba..sari pareshaani door kar denge..maine inse kaha..sare jhamele k bare me..isi lia yeh mere saath aaye..

PeerBaba--HAKKANDHAAHH...humen sara ghar dikhao...

Raj--yeh Hakka...hakka..what is that?

PeerBaba--humara Takia Kalaam hai..

yeh kah kar Raj sar par..us feather se bane jhaadoo se mara...feather Raj k naak me gaya..

Raj zor zor se chhinkne laga..

PeerBaba--HAKKANDHAAHH...ghar k us taraf kyaa hai??

Omveer aa kar khade hue..yeh kyaa tamasha hai?

Nilima--koi Peer Baba hai..


aise me ek dhoti pahena hua Pandit aayaa..

gale me rudhrakhsh ki mala..sar k jata...sar par Tilak..

Pandit--Alakh Niranjan..

Raj--do naam ek saath..Alak aur Niranjan..

Beejee--Pranam Panditjee..

Pandit ne haath utha k ashirvaad dia..

Beejee--aapko..kisne bulaya?

Pandit--yehi se jaa raha tha..achanak aisa andesha hua..k aas paas..koi durghatna hui hai..

Nilima chauk gai..

Raj aur dar gaya..

Omveer chidh gaye..

Pandit--durghatna ka talluk isi ghar se hai..isi ghar me kuchh ashubh ho raha hai...kisi ka kala saya hai is ghar me..

PeerBaba--HAKKANDHAAHH....hai koi kala saya..


Raj--kyaa bakwas hai?ab dono ek raag aalaap kar rahe hain aaplog..kaheka kala saya..

Pandit--Alakh Niranjan....isi ghar k kisi aurat k saath..bahut bura haadsa hua hai..

Nilima--haa..Panditjee..aisa ho raha hai...kuchh dino se..

Raj ne socha ab uska bhaanda footega....

Beejee--par..Baba..jiske saath bura hua..woh..

PeerBaba--isi ghar ki bahu hai..haa..

HAKKANDHAAHH...

Beejee rone lagi...."Baba..uske sath bura hua..kahi kisine uski...."

Omveer--Beejee aap bhi...


aise me Pandit ne aake Raj ko pichhe se pakda..

Pandit chillane laga.."isi par us saaye ki nazar hai...haa...."

Raj khud ko chhudane laga.."arre chhodoooooooooooooo oooooooooooo oooooooo..."

Pandit ne Raj ko kas k pakda..

aur Peer Baba Samne se aya..apne jhaadoo se Raj  ko maarne laga...

HAKKANDHAAHH...HAKKANDHAAHH...HAKKANDHAAHH...HAKKANDHAAHH...

Alakh Niranjan..Alakh Niranjan..Alakh Niranjan..Alakh Niranjan..Alakh Niranjan..

yeh 2 slogans ki wajah se Raj ki haalat bigad gai...

Peer maar raha hai jhaadoo se..Pandit pakda hai Raj ko...

Peer--aise nahi jayegi yeh chudail....

yeh kah kar Peer ne zor se Raj k muh par thooka..

Raj--yuuuuuuuukssssss..dad....

Beejee hansi rok nahi paa rahi hai..par hans bhi nahi sakti..

Omveer--abhi k abhi dono niklo..varna Police ko bulaunga..

Beejee--Raj ..beta tu thik to hai na?

Raj--Peer aur Pandit gaya hai?

Beejee--haa..

Raj--main muh dhoke ata hoon..actually main nahake aata hoon..

Omveer--Beejee..yeh sab kyaa hai?

Beejee--mujhko kyaa malum k woh Peer aisa niklega..

Peer aur Pandit dono gaye...Kailash Auditorium..waha pe naye natak ka rehersal chal raha hai..


Pandit ne Rudrakhsh  ki mala utari.."Pappu..chai la.."

Naina aai.."Sir..badhia tha..kamaal kia aapne..aap sirf drama direct kyon karte hai..acting bhi kariyena.."

Pandit Naina k drama company ka Malik cum director tha..

Peer Baba aaye..apni daadhi nikaal ne lage...

yeh Peer Baba..usi drama group ka side actor hai..

Peer ka acutal name hai Ganesh..Ganesh Tripathi..

usne daat nikaal k puchhe,"mera performance kaisa tha?"

Naina ne zor se chaata mara..

Ganesh--yeh kyon?

Naina--saale...kitni overacting karta hai..kyon..Raj ne kaunsi bhains churai hai teri ..mera pati hai woh..saale..jhaado se maarne ko bola tha..tu uski muh par thook aya..kameena..kutta..suwar....jitna bola usse zada karne ko kaun bola tha tujhko?..kyon thooka uske muh pe?saale..thik se brush to karta nahi..paan aur guthkha chabata hai..usi muh se tune Raj par thooka..aur thik se brush karta bhi ho to ..fir bhi kyon thooka uspar?bata....

Ganesh--main method actor  hoon..character me ghoos jata hoon..

Naina--saale method acting maa ki aankh...

Naina ne Ganesh ko peetna shuru kia...

 

 


 



Edited by yakkudimag - 10 August 2008 at 6:37am

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Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Beejee bhi naa sab sert kar diya inspector ke saath!!! Tongue Aur kya bahana maara!!!! LOL

Aur kya drama kiya Naina ne!!! Tongue Pura set make up ke sath!!No wonder actress jo hai!!!! LOL

Raj ki toh khatiya khadi hogayi!!! LOL

Naina bhi kya cheez hai!!!Chor ko manager bana diya aur usse apna kam bhi karva liya!!!! LOL Kamal hai woh toh!!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue

Waise yeh peer baba ka takia kalam LOL !!!!

Naina ne sahi kiya usko maar kar!!! Angry This went over the top!!!!



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awsome
too good
very funny LOL
great going Clap
plz continue soon
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too good.excellent ud.plz cont soon.......

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