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TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END (Page 2)

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Posted: 01 May 2008 at 11:20am | IP Logged

thnx for startin dis fic......its awesome...........aapki romantic fic padhne ka avsar hame mil raha hai......yaar yeh kuch jyaada hi badi hindi lingo ho gayi.....Wink

bas aage jaldi updt karna....

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Posted: 01 May 2008 at 1:35pm | IP Logged

tip k 500 rupai lekar Rajveer dinraat ghumne laga..k kahi woh nakchadhi ladki mil jaye..uska sar fodh k usko yeh paise de dega..k dava kharid lena...

par hairani ki baat yeh hai k ladki milli hi nahi..kaibar us raaste se guzra Raj..par Naina dikhi hi nahi...


Raj ek din gaya halwai ki dukan me mithai kharidne.....


Naina bhi ai thi...Naina laddoo kharidne aai thi..Raj bhi..par Raj ne Rabri kharida..

aur Rabri ki haandi bahana maar k Naina k kapdo par de mara...


Naina chillane lagi..."you idiot..dikhta nahi tumko..itni badi haandi mere upar udhel di.."

Raj--kyaa karoon usse zada tez main fek nahi sakta ..aapko chot lag jati..anyways yeh lijiye rupai....laundry ka bill bhar lijiye ga...


Naina--500 rupai nahi hota bill..


Raj --jitna ho utna laundrywale ko dijiyega..baki ka aap k lia..tip..


Rajveer chala gaya....


Naina ,"main tumko dekh lungi..you fool."


Raj ne pichhe mudh k jawab dia..."main photo bhej dunga apna..yaa fir mere ghar aa jana ..jee bhar k dekhne k lia..meri shakal hi kuchh aisi hai..bar bar dekhne ko man karta hai."




Raj hans raha tha....



Naina laddoo ka packet aur kapdo me rabri leke ghar wapas aai..


beejee--are Naina..rabri khane ka man tha to khud khati..kapdo ko kyon khilaya?

Naina--beejee ..mera sar khana bandh karo..ek lafange ne mujh par rabri de mara ...wahi lafanga jiski car thok di thi maine..sale ne aisa badla lia..ainda mere samne ayega to uski ankhe noch lungi...



beeje--beta gussa nahi karte..tune bhi to 500 rupai tip dia tha usko..


Naina--jee ..aaj usne mujhe woh paise lauta die..bola laundry a bill bhar k jitna bach jaye main rakh loon...tip..



beejee hansne lagi....Naina ne inkar kar dia aise rishte k lia...jodi barabar ki thi...

Naina--aapko bahut maza aa raha hai na...hassien..



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lekin office me laut kar..Raj ko kuchh bura lagne laga.....

usne bhi to ghalat kaam kia tha..5000 ka bill usne 8000 banaya..Naina sach hi bol rahi thi...Naina ne uski car ko takkar maari..par sharafat se usne apna card dia.

500 ka tip dia....par ghar par akar..jo bhi kia ghar k andar..

par Raj ne jo kia..ek halwai ki dukan me kia..bahut logo k samne Naina ka tamasha banaya.

yeh ghalat kia usne.....

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Naina ko ek shadi me jana tha...uski ek saheli ki shadi thi.

barati me Raj bhi tha..


party me Naina ko dekh kar Raj gaya usse maafi mangne k lia..

Naina usko take k bhao nahi puchha...


Raj--us halwai ki dukan pe maine kia..uske lia sorry.

Naina--thik hai...abhi mujhe bahut kaam hai.

Raj--sirf to pose maar k ghoom rahi hain aap..kyaa kaam hai aapko?

Naina--aap bhi pose marie na..kisne mana kia aapko..yaa fir aapki shakal itni buri hai k camera k samne jate darr lagta hai apko?


Raj--meri shakal bahut achhi hai..

Naina--ghalatfaimi hai aapki.

Raj--meri maa kahti hai k main bahut handsome hoon..

Naina--apni mummy k paas jaiye na..mera time kyon barbad kar rahe hai?


Raj--kamaal hai ..main sorry bol raha hoon..aur aap meri khilli udaye ja rahi hain aap?

Naina --isi layak hain aap....


beejee bhi aai thi shadi me..

beejee ne in dono ko dekha..

beejee aai..

beejee--are itni hi pasand hai Naina..to beta shadi kyon nahi kar lete isse?

Naina--beejee..aap sach me sathia gai hai.

beejee--are sach hai..isi Raj ka hi to rishta aya tha tere lia Naina..tune bina dekhe hi reject kar dia isko..

Raj--ooo..to woh aap hi thi..tabhi main sochu kaun pagal hogi jisne mujhe reject kia..

Naina ko pagal kaha Raj ne..Naina is baar sach me chidh gai..

Naina--tu pagal..tera sara khandan pagal..tu to bandar jaisa dikhta hai..bhootni ke....


Naina maramari par utar aai..

beejee--Naina ..kyaa kar rahi hai...are logo k samne tamasha mat kar...chhod..kyaa kar rahi hai..

Naina--beejee...halwai k dukan me usne tamasha kia tha....are dunia ka akhri ladka yeh ho..to bhi shadi nahi karungi isse..

Raj--are tum kya nahi karogi...main khud tumse shadi nahi karunga..

Naina--thank you so much..abhi khamokha line mat marna mere upar..

Raj--mere itne bure din nahi aaye k main tum par line marunga..

Naina--really to ab tak kyaa kar rahe the..mere hi age pichhe ghoom to rahe the aap.

Raj--ghalti ho gai..ainda nahi aunga....

Raj chala gaya waha se

 

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Naina ka graduation complete ho chuka hai..

Girish Arya matlab jab Naina k dad ne puchha..," beti..ab kyaa karna chahti ho?"

Naina--daddy...padhai aur shadi...in dono k chhod k jo bhi kahenge  karungi...


Girish--padhai nahi karni..age Masters k lia nahi jana hai?

Naina--main pak chuki hoon padhai kar k..waise bhi padhai kar k naukri hi karni hai..par main aapki ek lauti beti...paiso kya kamee hai mujhe?age padh kar kyaa karungi?

Girish--to fir shadi kar lo.

Naina--dad..main sirf 21 ki hoon..abhi to mere doodh k daant nahi geere... balika badhu nahi banna mujhe.

Girish--shadi karne ka sab se achha waqt waqt to yeh umar hi hai...

Naina--dad..college me professor log paka te the mujhe..abhi koi lalloo mujhe  pakayega..taras khaiye mujh par.

Girish--are..kisi lalloo se thodhe hi shadi hogi teri?

Naina--kyaa pata?

Girish--to kisi NGO ko join kar le na..logo se mil..yaa fir bachcho k nursery me padha...choose kar..yaa to M.A. ki padhai kar..yaa to shadi..yaa fir koi kaam kar..you have to choose.


Naina--matlab..ghar baith k aish karne ka koi option nahi rakha aapne?

Girish--khaali dimag  shaitan ka adda hota hai..aur pata hai tum din bhar shaitani karti rehti ho..so..tumko aisa karne to dia nahi ja sakta.. isilia.. choose.

Naina--ok..main M.A. ki padhai karungi..par mujhe drama group bhi join karna hai...natak karna hai..kar sakti hoon?

Girish--ok..par padhai thik se karni hogi..

Naina--thik hai..kal hi M.A. ka form laungi...



Edited by yakkudimag - 10 August 2008 at 5:50am

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hahahaha..damn good...dubara padh rahi hun phir bhi maan nahin bhar raha hai...outstanding di...thanks again for updating this ff here
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Posted: 01 May 2008 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 02 May 2008 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Naina ne university join kar lia..aur drama group bhi....


ek din Naina laut rahi thi ghar..aaj woh car se nahi aai thi..uska man kia yuh hi ghumte ghumte ghar jane ka...


Naina road cross kar rahi thi..achanak Raj ko dekha..

Naina ulte raaste par jane lagi...


Raj ne chillaya..."Nainaaaaaaaa"


Naina aur tez chalne lagi..

par Raj ne usko pakad hi lia..

Raj--yaar tumko tez chalne ki bimari hai kyaa?aur mujhe dekh kar bhaag kyon gai?


Naina--meri marzi..

Raj--aaj paidal?car nahi sath me?

Naina--mera man kia yuh hi auto ya taxi se ghar jane ka isi lia car nahi lai.


Raj--hmm..yaar tum utni khadus ho nahi jitna maine socha tha.



Naina--fir se chalu ho gaye aap?

Raj--are suno to..main soch raha tha..k ..infact main kai dino se soch raha tha k tumne mujhe reject kiaa kyon?I mean main itna handsome dashing......

Naina--gun hai aapke paas?hai to mujhe shoot kar dijiye..par apna gungaan kar k mera sar mat chabaiye.

Raj--main soch raha tha k agar tum ek adh baar mujhse mil lo..to ho sakta hai mere bare me tumhari rai badal jaye..aur shadi karne k lia tum haa bol do..

Naina--aap bade besharam hai....itni beizzati se bhi aapka jee nahi bhara?

Raj--nahi bhara..isi lia ..to mujhe har roz tumhari bak bak sunni hai..aur is lia ek sath rahena zaroori hai..aur eksaath rahene k lia shadi karna zaroori hai.. waise us din tumhari beeje ne jo kaha..maine socha uske bare me..baat me dum hai..tum seriously mujhe bahut pasand ho..bahut zada...waise kaun si chakki ka atta khati ho?


Naina--abhi mera man kar raha hai k main zaher khaa loo.

Raj--oo..solid food k sath mix kar k ?

Naina--matlab?

Raj--tumhi ne kaha zaher khana hai..to solid food ko hi khaya jata hai..agar liquid form me ho to..peena padta hai...

Naina--subha shayad uthkar maine Roma aunty ki shakal dekhi thi?


Raj--woh kaun hai?

Naina-- meri panauti padosan..jis din uski shakal dekh loon mera pura din kharab guzarta hai.


Raj--Kailash auditorium me kal natak honewala hai,'Laila- Majnoo'...dekhne chalogi?

Naina--nahi mujhe bahut kaam hai....bye bye....

Naina bhaag gai.


Laila-Majnu Naina k hi drama group k log pesh karne wale hai




Laila k baap ka role Naina ko mila hai..kyonki woh role karne wale ko food poison ho gaya hai..

Naina ne Laila k baap k role k lia hi practise ki hai..


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natak ki shaam....


darshako k bich Raj bhi hai...front seat pe..apne ek dost k saath aya hai..



aur ek aur fasad khada hua..

Laila ka role jo karnewali thi woh Majnoo k role wale ladke k sath bhaag gai....uske lia yehi mauka tha..

ek aur ladka taiyar hua Majnoo k role ko karne k lia..par Laila kaha se ayegi..


Director ne Naina ki taraf dekha..

Naina--nahi..sir Laila k baap k lia hi thik hoon main..Laila nahi...aur fir Laila k baap ka role kaun karega?


Director--dono role tu hi kar le...jab Laila ki dialougue hai tab tu Laila ban jana..jab baap ka role hoga tab tu baap ban jana..aur kisi ladki ko ghunghat dal k Laila ki jagah khadi rahne k lia kah denge..

Naina--sir..marvaoge..darshak chappalo se maregi hum ko..


Director--woh to waise bhi nahi chhodega koi..Laila Majnoo dono farar..tu kuchh kar ...


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Scene shuru hua...


Majnoo--Laila tumse bepnaah mohabbat hai mujhko..


Naina ne dekha Raj seat me baitha hai ..front seat me..uska dimag ghoom gaya..sab golmal ho gaya...usne ghalti se Laila k baap wala dialougue bol dia...


Laila--ek latth se marna hai tainu..sara ishque da bukhar utar daangaa toadda...



Yeh sun k Majnoo bhi nervous ho gaya....

Majnoo--Laila,darling..... kya bolti tu..?


Director k sar par haath ...


audience pet pakad k hansne lagi...kuchh to chillane lage...are kyaa tamasha laga rakha hai..100 rupai lia hai ticket k..yeh kachra dikhane k lia?


Raj to Laila bani Naina ko dekh kar chauk gaya..aur aise deadly dialougue sunkar bhi..hasi rok nahi paya..

Naina ne jab dekha gadbad ho gai hai...usne ghabra kar gana gana shuru kar dia..


man hi man director ko gaali dena shuru kar dia...aur bhaage hue Laila Majnoo ko bhi..

Naina urf Laila gaa rahi hai.."pyar kia to darna kyaa..jab pyaar kia to darna kyaa..pyaar kia koi chori nahi ki...."



Public ko gussa aa gaya....


Director ne parda fek dia...


Raj soch raha hai..k isi lia Naina ne ane se inkaar kar dia..khud hi Laila bannewali thi..par kaisi ghatia version hai Laila ki..


Scene 2....


Laila ka baap Majnoo ko khari khoti suna raha hai...



Raj soch raha hai k Laila kab ayegi..

aise me Laila k baap ki muchhe khul kar geer gai..aur Laila ka bap Laila ban gaya....



Raj hans hans k lot pot ho raha hai....




Laila stage k samne aai....

mike pakad k usne bolna shuru kia,


"Darshako,actually main Laila ka baap hi banne wali thi is natak me..par Laila aur Majnoo dono bhaag gaye hai ahen waqt par..isi lia mujhe kabhi Laila to kabhi Laila ka baap banna pad raha hai..please co-operate with us.. and please co-operate with me..5 minute ka waqt dijiye..main apni muchhe laga loon..fir continue karenge na...please.."



Darshak pet pakad k hans rahe hai...


ek serious romance-tragedy itni badhia comedy ban jayegi kisi ne nahi socha tha...sab ka paisa wasool...show superhit.



Director ne Naina ko 100 rupai die,"beti,tere lia..tune jaise samhala..varna sade hue ande aur tamatar khane se koi nahi rok sakta tha."



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Naina auditorium k bahar aai..taxi pakad ne k lia...


Raj ki car ake ruki...


Raj--zamana kharab hai...waise bhi Naina..Laila aur Laila ka baap..koi itna achha combination to chhodega nahi..aao gadi k andar ake baithi..tumko ghar chhod deta hoon.


Naina--I can look after myself.


Raj--kahne ki baatein hai..is desh me koi strong mard bhi apni security ki guranty nahi de sakta ..aur aap to abla naari hai..

Naina--main nahi aap abla hai..shayad apko hi ghar akele jane se dar lagta hai...kyon?


Raj--thik hai..main hi abla hoon..ab chale?



Naina car k andar baith gai aur chal padi apne ghar ki taraf.


Edited by yakkudimag - 10 August 2008 at 5:51am

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awesome updt .......

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hiiiiiiiilariou once again
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omg....it was hilarious...keep it up LOL

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