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TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END (Page 13)

Shilpa_1234 Senior Member
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 8:53am | IP Logged
god wht a wonderful riter u r.....m totally totally engrossd in dis fic frm past many dayz....had ma exmz nd prjct wrk so didn comment nethng abt dis gr8 fic....but nw i will Big smile

strtng vth d 1st chaptr d way u introduced dem....sahi tha ...d way naina tellz him 2 keep 500RS. tip mein nd rajz badla 2 dis nd den his dialogue....main photo bhej dunga apna..yaa fir mere ghar aa jana ..jee bhar k dekhne k lia..meri shakal hi kuchh aisi hai..bar bar dekhne ko man karta hai.... LOL LOL LOL ....simply superb

nd d way naina reactz whn raj callz her pagal wz juz hilariouz....i couldn control ma laughtr
Naina:tu pagal..tera sara khandan pagal..tu to bandar jaisa dikhta hai..bhootni ke

hehehe gr8 one linerz yaar u rite....so natural....aisa koi bhi dialogue nahi tha jo kisi film se copy kiya ho ya novel mein pehle padha ho...kammal ka likhti ho tum....if i strt ritng all ma fav dialoguez den mere liye 2 din bhi kam padh jayega

i luvd d way bth raj nd naina try 2 pull der legz in dis fic....nd den d Laila majnu ka shw....too good yaar...i wz laughng non-stp thru out dis fic....all thnkz 2 u Smile...helpd me a lot specially 2 relive ma exm ka tension...den Nitin ka drama....uska pakda jana....nd rajz way of teasing naina continuously also his love 4 her....i luvd each nd evry part of dis fic

nd yea dis is d best fic i hav eva read....keep it up....waitng 4 d next part eagerly Smile

yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 9:14am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Shilpa_1234

god wht a wonderful riter u r.....m totally totally engrossd in dis fic frm past many dayz....had ma exmz nd prjct wrk so didn comment nethng abt dis gr8 fic....but nw i will Big smile

strtng vth d 1st chaptr d way u introduced dem....sahi tha ...d way naina tellz him 2 keep 500RS. tip mein nd rajz badla 2 dis nd den his dialogue....main photo bhej dunga apna..yaa fir mere ghar aa jana ..jee bhar k dekhne k lia..meri shakal hi kuchh aisi hai..bar bar dekhne ko man karta hai.... LOL LOL LOL ....simply superb

nd d way naina reactz whn raj callz her pagal wz juz hilariouz....i couldn control ma laughtr
Naina:tu pagal..tera sara khandan pagal..tu to bandar jaisa dikhta hai..bhootni ke

hehehe gr8 one linerz yaar u rite....so natural....aisa koi bhi dialogue nahi tha jo kisi film se copy kiya ho ya novel mein pehle padha ho...kammal ka likhti ho tum....if i strt ritng all ma fav dialoguez den mere liye 2 din bhi kam padh jayega

i luvd d way bth raj nd naina try 2 pull der legz in dis fic....nd den d Laila majnu ka shw....too good yaar...i wz laughng non-stp thru out dis fic....all thnkz 2 u Smile...helpd me a lot specially 2 relive ma exm ka tension...den Nitin ka drama....uska pakda jana....nd rajz way of teasing naina continuously also his love 4 her....i luvd each nd evry part of dis fic

nd yea dis is d best fic i hav eva read....keep it up....waitng 4 d next part eagerly Smile

 

thanks a lot...

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
too good
kia naina man jay gi
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 1:55am | IP Logged

Raj dunia bhar k tension k sath wapas aya..

ab Nitin ka kyaa kia jaye?

Heena ka baap chhodega nahi

Raj ne apne dad se baat ki..

Omveer--dekh...ek kaam kar..usko achi si naukri dila kar bahar bhej de.

Raj--kitne din k lia?yeh kyaa koi solution hai?

Omveer--wahi to..police protection thode din k lia..abhi ek kaam kar..undono ko bahar bhej de..kahi par bhi..

Raj--kitne din k lia?

Omveer--jab tak Heena ko ek bachcha  nahi ho jata..


Raj--shayad bachche ko dekh kar Heena k dad ka dil pighal jaye..okk..main baat karta hoon Nitin se


raat ko Naina ke paas..Raj ka phone aya..

Naina ne suna.."idea bura nahi..par filhal kuchh dino k lia Nitin aur Heena ko tumhare ghar pe rakho..tum par koi shak bhi nahi karega.."

Raj--ok..par unko bheje kaha?

Naina--Ernakulam..

Raj--bhankas mat maar..Ernakulam me kaun hai?

Naina--hotel to hoga..

Raj--okk..

Naina Nitin aur Heena ko lekar Raj k ghar tak gai..


Nilima--are Naina..aao ..yeh Nitin hai na?

Naina--jee..Raj kaha hai?

Nilima--abhi office se nikla hai..

Omveer--oo tum log aa gaye?I am so sorry..k Naina aur Raj k chakkar me tum dono ko samne ana pada..aur Nitin ko yeh khatra hua.

Heena--nahi uncle..yeh to hona hi tha..fark sirf itna hai k thode din pahle hua...

Raj aya..

Raj--hello everyone..are Nainajee aao...dhanyabhaagya humare..waise padhaarne ka kasht kyon kia?

Naina ne  karari nazro se raj ko dekha..

Raj ka gala darr k mare sukh gaya..

Omveer--abhi kyaa karna chaahta hai tu?

Raj--maine Ernaculam  k resort me baat ki hai..jagah hai..but ek problem hai.. jaha bhi jana hai station aur airport se to guzarna hi hoga..Heena k gharwalo ne waha par pejra bithaya hai...cover up karne k lia..koi aur ka hona zaroori hai..khaas kar ek couple..jo unka dhyaan bata sake..aur Heena aur Nitin aram se custom clearing se bhi nikal jaye..lekin kaun uthayega yeh khatra?


Naina aise hi dekh rahi thi..ek painting ki taraf...usko aisa laga Raj usko dekhe hi jaa raha hai..

Naina--kahi tum meri taraf..I mean humari taraf to ishara nahi kar rahe ho?

Raj--akalmand logo se baat karneka yehi faida hai..zada detail me nahi jana padta..

Omveer--you mean...tu aur Naina..par tum dono ki shadi nahi hui..as couple.. thoda ajeeb nahi lagega?I mean mere bete ko sab log jaante hai..shak to hoga..

Raj--to shadi kara dijiye hum dono ki..

Heena--Raj..you have gone crazy indeed..

Raj--no ..not at all..soch kar dekho..

Naina chup kar k baithi hai..

Nitin--nahi Raj..dekha jaye to humari wajah se bhi bahut logo ko problem hui hai..hum log natak se bhaage to..Naina par jute padte padte reh gaye..


Naina--that is not an issue..agar isse Nitin aur Heena ki problem solve ho..to main..ok..Mom ,Dad aur Beejee ko bula ti hoon abhi..

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Girish--hua kyaa?kya Raj ne fir se bawal kia ya Naina ne kuchh kia?

Omveer--nahi aisi koi baat nahi..finally dono maan gaye hai shadi k lia..

Beejee--mujhe to pahle se hi malum tha..aisa kuchh bahut jald hoga..khair Naina..Raj..tum dono ka mere pair chhune ka koi irada hai k nahi?

Naina--sorry Beejee..

Raj ne bhi Beejee k pair chhooen..

shadi ka date fix ho gaya..

Raj ki kismat achhi hai..1 hafte k andar hi bahut hi shubh muhurat nikla..

Naina muh latka k khadi rahi..

tai hua k pag fere k baad k din hi Naina ko lekar Raj chala jayega New York..waha pe business ki achhi party mili hai..honeymoon ka honeymoon..aur business ka business..

shadi ka mandap..

fere lete hue Raj ne thoda bahut bhaangda karne ka socha tha..par Naina ne jis tarha usko dekha..Raj ki khatia khadi ho gai..


vidaai k waqt..Girish,Gita..aur Beejee..sab k ankho me nami..

Naina to foot foot k rone lagi..

Naina--mujhe mat bhejo..Beejee..please..mujhe nahi jana..

Naina Beejee ka gala pakad k uchhal uchhal k rone lagi..."uuuhhh.. aaaaaa aaaaaa..eeeeeeeeeeeee..Beejeeeeeeeeeee.. Mommmmmmmm..Dadyy.."

Beejee--beta kaha teri shadi saat samandar paar hui hai?ek hi shaher me hai tu..jab man kare chali ana milne..abhi jaa..dekh aisa nahi karte..

Naina apne sasooral gai..

Nilima ne nazar utaari..

Raj ki hansi rukti hi nahi..

Omveer bahut khush hue..kyon ki unka beta khush hai..

anguthi dhundhne ki rasam bhi hui..aur Raj jeeta usme..

Heena aur Nitin bhi the shadi me..


suhaag raat..

Raj kamre me aya...

dekha Naina shaadi ka joda utaar k night suit pahen chuki hai..TV dekh rahi hai..

Raj--waahhh..kyaa biwi hai..

Naina--doodh waha rakha hai..jaake pee lo..

Raj ne doodh peea...

fir kapde badal kar Naina k paas aya..

Raj--dekho Naina..yeh ghar tumhara hai..aur main bhi tumhara hoon..

Naina--haa malum hai..

Raj--malum hai?yeh to achhi baat hai..to puri raat TV dekhna hai?yaa..

Naina--haa neend bahut aa rahi hai..

Raj--aaj ki raat koi sota hai kya?

Naina--kyaa karna hai?panja ladana hai?

Raj--nahi chonch se chonch ladani hai..


kamre light bandh ho gai..

agle din subha jab Raj utha..uske chehre pe Naina k lipstick aur sindoor ka daag...

Naina--suno muh achhi tarha se dhona..

Raj--main to aise hi bahar jaunga..

Naina--thik hai jaao..abhi jaao..

Naina ne Raj ko kamre k bahar bhej dia..

ghar me itne rishte dar the..Raj ko dekh kar sab hansne lage...


Raj ko bahut sharam aai...


Raj--Naina..are darwaza kholo..are mujhe muh dhona hai..


Naina ne darwaza kholaa...

Naina--shaukh pura ho gaya?

Raj--haa..

Naina--andar aao..aur bathroom jaao..

 

 



Edited by yakkudimag - 10 August 2008 at 6:18am

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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 2:42am | IP Logged
LOL LOL LOL mindblowing update...Raj ne kya idea nikala shaadi karne ka...simply a great update...thanks for this cute hilarious update...
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by quietrajpri1623

LOL LOL LOL mindblowing update...Raj ne kya idea nikala shaadi karne ka...simply a great update...thanks for this cute hilarious update...
thanks..golmaal abhi khatam nahi hua..shuru hua hai
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 3:58am | IP Logged
awesome.cont soon......
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Toh dono ne Shaadi karli Embarrassed Tongue Tongue !!!!

Aur dono ko bhagane ka plan bhi kya banaya Tongue !!!!

Par Nitin aur Heena ko bhagane ke bahane se Confused !!!!!Aur Naina muh latka kar kyun khadi thi???Woh khush nahi hai???

Aur dono ne shaadi ki.........Raj ko toh Naina abhi se uglion par nacha rahi hai!!!! LOL LOL LOL

Pata nahi Raj kaise anguthi ke khel mein kaise jeet gaya LOL !!!!

Aur Naina ne kya kiya uske saath....usse kamre se bahar bhej diya LOL !!!Raj ab se uski baatein mana karo warna tumari toh gayi LOL !!!

Ab dono jayenge New York honeymoon ke liye Tongue Tongue Tongue !!!!!

Hope yahan toh acche se inka romance dekhne ko mile Wink Tongue !!!!


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