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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 15 years ago

Omveer ghar aaye....aur bedroom me jaake zameen par hi baith gaye..

Nilima aai..."chai laaoon..??"

Omveer--zeher laa mere lia...

Nilima--ok...

Nilima jaane lagi...

Omveer--Nilu sun..kitthe jaa rahi hai??

Nilima--bazar..ghar me zeher toh hota nahi...

Omveer--sab..sab mil kar mujhe pareshaan karne pe tule hue hai...ek tera beta..ek teri bahu..aur abhi tu..

Omveer apna baal nochne lage...

Nilima--kyaa baat hai?itne pareshaan kyon ho tum?

Omveer--beta gaya haath se..aaj bete ki kaali kartoot dekh kar aa raha hoon..pata nahi..bahu kyaa gul khila rahi hogi..

Nilima bhi zameen par baithi..Omveer k paas..

Nilima--batao..baat kyaa hai?Raj ne kyaa kia hai?

Omveer--pahle darje ka tharki ban gaya hai Raj..maine apni ankho se dekha hai...ek parkati k saath baitha tha... coffee shop me..aur kaisi wahiat harkatein kar raha tha.. chhee chheee...chheee chhheee..

Nilima--kyaa hua?

Omveer--arre batate hue bhi sharam aati hai..

Nilima--dekhte hue sharam nahi aai..toh bata hi do..

Omveer--main bata nahi sakta..

Nilima--main chali..mat batao....

Nilima chali gai kitchen me...

Raj raat k 10 baje waapas aya...

dekha hall me Nilima aur Omveer baithe hai..

Raj-hello people....

Omveer--dekho..us parkati k chakkar me kaise baat kar raha hai humse...

Nilima--kyon re..kyaa kia tune?

Raj--kuchh bhi toh nahi...

Omveer--woh ladki kaun thi?jiske saath tu baitha tha coffee shop me?

Raj--woh..haa..uska naam hai Monica..my girlfriend..

Nilima--kyaaaaa?

Raj--Mom..don't act so shocked...Monica is a very nice girl....

Nilima--Naina ko pata chalega toh tujhe maar daalegi....

Raj--woh samajhti hai Mom meri haalat....usko koi problem nahi hai..infact aaj maine Naina k naye boyfriend ko dekha..he is very handsome...he is too cool...

Nilima--achhaa!!!

Omveer--kyaa khaak achha...dono shaher bhar me raasleela kar rahe hai....

Raj--ab aap hum dono ko alag kar denge..toh apna enjoyment ka tarika khudh hi dhundhna padega na..?what you say Mom?

Nilima--kitna besharam ladka hai...tujhe yeh baatein karte hue sharam nahi aati?

Raj--aati hai..par 2 second baad chali bhi jaati hai.. sharam ka kyaa hai Mom...uska arrival-departure laga rehta hai...

Omveer--hey bhagwan!!!!!

Nilima--mere karam hi foot gaye...Raj k Papa..mera ticket katva do..mujhe teerth pe jana hai...

Raj--haa..jaiyena...Dad ko bhi saath le jaiye...

Omveer--tu bhi chalega humare saath....

Raj--main itna bewakoof nahi hoon..aapdono chale jaayenge ...ghar khaali hoga...main aur Mona...we will have a great time together...

Nilima--haiii..yeh baatein sunne se pahle main mar kyon nahi gai?

Omveer--Monica se Mona..waahhh...

Raj--Mona is a very nice girl Dad...aap log milenge toh aaplog bhi bahut khush honge...

Nilima--chup ho jaa karamjale..chup ho jaa...

Raj--ok...main khana khaa k aya hoon..aaplog khaa lena..Good Night...

Raj chala gaya apne kamre ki taraf..sitti bajate hue...

Nilima aur Omveer baithe rahe...dono k sar par haath...

Nilima--sab tumhari wajah se..naa tum Naina ko uske maaike bhej dete..naa yeh anarth hota..

Omveer--haa..sara dosh toh mera hi ha...bolo..tum bhi bolo..

Nilima--kyaa ghalat bol rahi hoon?tumhara kia dhara nahi tha...arre ghalati ki thi dono ne..maaf kar dena tha.. par nahi..tumko toh saza dena hai unko...

Omveer--arre..unki saza..unhike lia maza ban jaayega.. mujhe kidhar malum tha?

Nilima--tum toh chup hi raho..

Nilima gusse me chali gai..
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kamre me jaa kar Raj sochne laga..k Nilima ko kaise ghar se bhagaya jaaye...

aur Beejee hans hans k lot pot ho rahi hain ..Naina se sab kuchh sun kar.

Beejee--tum dono na...sach me ..itne shaitaan ho...

Naina--haa woh toh hai..

Beejee--pahle se hi jaanti thi main..dono ki jodi upar se ban k aai hai..kyaa badmaash ho dono..uff..Om ki halat toh kharab ho gai hogi..

Naina--unki shakal dekhne laayak thi Beejee..bas aap Mom and Dad ko kuchh mat batana...nautanki zor par hain...

Beejee--achha..bahut hua yeh sab..par ab kuchh padhai bhi kar le..Final Exams. sar par hain tere..

Naina --haa..woh toh hai...

aise me Naina k kamre ka phone baja...

Naina--hello..

phone Omveer ka tha...

Naina--Pairipauna Papajee..

Omveer--jeeti raho..bahu tumhara final exam kab khatam hoga?

Naina--3 maheene baad...

Omveer--tum ghar aa jaao..exams toh hoti rahengi..tum ghar chali aao..

Naina--nahi..actually..Raj rahega toh padhai me disturb hoga..main yeha shanti se padh rahi hoon...main exams de kar hi waapas aaungi..

Omveer--Raj disturb nahi karega..main khayal rakhunga is baat ka..tum ghar chali aao..kal hi Raj tumko lene jaayega...

Naina--nahi Papa...mujhe abhi nahi ana...exam. bahut tough hai..mujhe padhai karni hai...

Omveer--jaisa tum thik samjho..agar ghar ana chaaho.. toh ghar aa sakti ho..kisi bhi waqt..

Omveer ne phone kaat dia...

Naina ne Beejee ki taraf dekha....

aur dono zor zor se hansne lagi...

Nilima--kyaa hua..kyaa kaha Naina ne?

Omveer--woh nahi ana chaahti..kehti hai exam ki padhai me Raj disturb karega...

Nilima--lo..yehi sunna baaki tha...

Omveer--yeh ana kyon nahi chaahti..main samajh raha hoon...

Nilima--kyaa samajh rahe ho?

Omveer--yehi..k ab usko koi naya mil gaya hai..

Nilima--jaisa beta ..waisa baap..dono besharam..apni bahu k bare me kaisi baatein karte ho!!!

Omveer--toh aur kyaa bolu..tum batao...

Nilima--jaisi karni..waisi bharni..mana kia tha..jo ho raha hai..hone do....iske siva hum kar bhi kyaa sakte hain?

Omveer--yeh Raj humara hi beta hai na??

Nilima--haa..ab mujhe yakeen ho gaya..k Raj me tumhare hi saare gun aaye hain...tumko yaad nahi.. tumne kaisa drama kia tha..mere sasoor k saamne.. mujhse shaadi karne k lia...??

Omveer--kyaa kia tha maine?

Nilima--choohen maarne ki davai khaya tha... tumne.. Baojee ko impress karne k lia..yaad aya?

Omveer--par extra marital ..Raj toh extra marital..

Nilima--haa..kyonki mere sasoorjee tumhari tarha khadoos nahi the..

Omveer--haa...aur bolo..rook kyon gai??

Nilima--main kyaa bolu?

Omveer--toh chup raho..

Nilima so gai....kahi na kahi..unko lag raha hai..k sara kia dhara Raj ka hai..apne bete ko achhe se jaanti hain Nilima...Raj ..Naina k ilava kisi aur ki taraf dekhta bhi nahi..rishta rakhna toh bahut door ki baat hai...aur Naina bhi koi ghalat kaam nahi karegi..par yeh Monica kaun hai??Raj ki koi dost bhi nahi hai..Monica naam ki..Naina ki bhi koi dost nahi hai..Monica naam ki...toh yeh Monica kaha se aai??

Nilima ko koi fikar nahi..Raj aur Naina ko lekar..kyonki Raj ki aankho me shararat saaf dekh rahi thi woh..jab woh Omveer se baatein kar raha tha.

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Raj ne pahle socha tha..k Nilima ko confidence me lekar kaam karega..par kahi agar Nilima ne parda faash kar dia Omveer k saamne..toh lene k dene pad jaayenge..isi lia nautanki jaari rakhna hai sab k saamne..Naina toh Beejee ko bata kar hi kaam karegi..par Beejee is so reliable..woh apna muh nahi kholengi..

aise me Naina ka phone aya Raj k mobile par...

Raj--haa bolo..

Naina--Papajee ne phone kia tha mujhe..kah rahe the..k kal tum mujhe lene aa sakte ho..agar lene naa bhi aao.. toh main jab chahoon ghar waapas aa sakti hoon...

Raj--tumne kyaa jawab dia?

Naina--nakhre dikhana zaroori tha..par tum kal hi aa jaao mujhe lene..khamokha jhamela kyon kare jab aasaani se kaam ho raha hai?

Raj--nahi..mujhe maza aa raha hai..pura drama karna hai mujhe..

Naina--tum na..marvaaoge..Raj kal hi aa jaao na.. please!!

Raj--nahi...Dad ko puri tarha se maza chakhana hai...

Naina--maza chakhane k chakkar me kahi hum dono kharche par naa aa jaye...

Raj--arre ..fikar mat karo..main samhal lunga...

Naina--isi baat ka darr hai...

Naina ne phone kaat dia..

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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Rituka

@rituka7

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

damn cool
update soon............

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sania_58

@sania_58

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

fatafati update Di

u rocked

i agree with Naina yeh raj marvayega

terrific update

mindblowing

continue soon

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Prerna

@prerna1

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

too good yaar 😆👏🏻

plz update soon

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daisy_luvs_ ff

@daisy_luvs_ ff

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 15 years ago

my goodness!!!!!!!!1

kya maza chakhaya omveer ko................ufffffff...........aur raj ke dialogues toh bas wowwww....sharam ka arrival departure thik nahin hai.😆...............kya logic hai!!!😆😆😆😆

such main, sabse badmash hai aur sabse cute bhi..................🥰🥰

aur naina ne sach hi kaha...................zada risk lekar kahin gaddhe mein na gir jaye.................leking ab aaye ga aur mazazaaaaaa...........😉😜😆😆

cooooooooool update and really funny!!!!!!!1😆👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

Oh god ye dono poore k poore commedy king hain.😆😆😆😆

Neelima apne bete ko jaanti hai acchi tarah to koi baat nahi par Omveer to my god pata nahi kya hai.😉😉😉😉

Jab Naina ko bula raha hai Om to Raj aane nahi de raha hai pakka kuch gadbad karega tabhi maanega.

bade confidence se keh raha hai ki mai samhaal loonga.😉😉😉😉

Kya baat hai ki Naina ko bhi naya bf mil gaya hai.😆😆😆😆

Om ka past itna hi shaandaar hai to beta to future aur shaandar banayega hi.😉😉😉😉

Koi fayda nahi hai Raj maanega nahi.

Ab dekhte hain aage kya kya hota hai.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

IF-Stunnerz

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Omveer ki haalat wakai mein kaafi kharab hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Uske saath aisa hi hona chahiye!!!!

Nilima bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Omveer ne kaha aur woh zeher lane jaa rahi thi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Woh Raj ko tharki aur Naina ko hi parkati keh raha hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Nilima is the ideal wife for him!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜Uski baaton ko bilkul dhyan nahi deti!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Waah kya style se aata hai Raj!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂Monica meri girlfriend!!!!😜 😜 😜Waah!!!😉 😉 😉 😆 😆Accha sabak sikha raha hai Om ko!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻

Ab Naina ko bhi naya boyfriend mil gaya!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Waah waah!!!😆 😆 😆 😆Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj bhi stroke pe stroke maar raha hai!!!!👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻Enjoyment ka tareeka aur sharam ka arrival-departure!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj unke teerth pe jane ke baad Mona ke saath ghar pe!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Nilima ab puri filmy ho gayi hai!!!😜 😜 😜 😆 😆 😆Yeh sunne se pehle main mar kyun nahi gayi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj kya jawab de raha hai apne mom dad ko!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻

Nilima Om se gussa hai!!!😜 😜 😜 🙂 🙂Sahi hai!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

Raj ab Nilima ko ghar se bhagana chahta hai!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Good!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Beejee toh hai hi unke har kaam mein partner in crime!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😜 😜 😜 😜

Beejee ne sahi kaha!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂They are just made for each other!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰

Om ab chahta hai Naina ghar aa jaye!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜Haan ab uske paas aur koi raasta jo nahi hai!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne bhi ab bahana bana ke tal diya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

Nilima ko apni bahu se wakai bahut pyaar hai!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂Apni bahu ke khilaaf nahi sunna chahti!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜 😉 Waah!!!!!👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻Saas ho toh aisi!!!! 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻

Accha toh Raj ki in haarkatein usse virasat mein mili hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Om ka past toh wakai mein bahut shaandar tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Yeh sab uski nautankiyan Om ne bhi kaafi ki thi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Raj ka future aur bhi shaandar hai!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣Jaisa baap waisa beta!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣

Nilima ab bhi Om ko nahi chhod rahi hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 Kehti hai uske sasoorjee Om ki tarah khadoos nahi thhe!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Nilima bahut intelligent hai!!! Acchi tarah se apne bete ko janti hai!!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂Janti hai ke Raj Naina ko chhod kar kissi aur ko dekhta tak nahi hai!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 Woh samaj gayi ke Raj shararat kar raha hai!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj bhi Naina ko ab aane nahi de raha hai jab ki Om khud bula raha hai!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜 😜Usse ab mazza aa raha hai aur Om ko puri tarah se sabak sikhana chahta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bade confidence ke saath keh raha hai ke woh sambhal lega!!!!!! 😜 😜 😜 😜 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂Kuch gadbad zaroor karega!!!!!

But aage dekhte hai kya hota hai!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

Waise Omveer ke role mein Mukul Dev and Nilima ke role mein Vaishnavi bahut acchi lagegi!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Omveer ki haalat wakai mein kaafi kharab hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Uske saath aisa hi hona chahiye!!!!

Nilima bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Omveer ne kaha aur woh zeher lane jaa rahi thi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Woh Raj ko tharki aur Naina ko hi parkati keh raha hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Nilima is the ideal wife for him!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜Uski baaton ko bilkul dhyan nahi deti!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Waah kya style se aata hai Raj!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂Monica meri girlfriend!!!!😜 😜 😜Waah!!!😉 😉 😉 😆 😆Accha sabak sikha raha hai Om ko!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻

Ab Naina ko bhi naya boyfriend mil gaya!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Waah waah!!!😆 😆 😆 😆Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj bhi stroke pe stroke maar raha hai!!!!👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻Enjoyment ka tareeka aur sharam ka arrival-departure!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj unke teerth pe jane ke baad Mona ke saath ghar pe!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Nilima ab puri filmy ho gayi hai!!!😜 😜 😜 😆 😆 😆Yeh sunne se pehle main mar kyun nahi gayi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj kya jawab de raha hai apne mom dad ko!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻

Nilima Om se gussa hai!!!😜 😜 😜 🙂 🙂Sahi hai!!!!     🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

Raj ab Nilima ko ghar se bhagana chahta hai!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Good!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Beejee toh hai hi unke har kaam mein partner in crime!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😜 😜 😜 😜

Beejee ne sahi kaha!!!!    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂They are just made for each other!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰

Om ab chahta hai Naina ghar aa jaye!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜Haan ab uske paas aur koi raasta jo nahi hai!!!!!    😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne bhi ab bahana bana ke tal diya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

Nilima ko apni bahu se wakai bahut pyaar hai!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂Apni bahu ke khilaaf nahi sunna chahti!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜 😉 Waah!!!!!👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻Saas ho toh aisi!!!!     👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻

Accha toh Raj ki in haarkatein usse virasat mein mili hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Om ka past toh wakai mein bahut shaandar tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Yeh sab uski nautankiyan Om ne bhi kaafi ki thi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Raj ka future aur bhi shaandar hai!!!!!     😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣Jaisa baap waisa beta!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣

Nilima ab bhi Om ko nahi chhod rahi hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉   Kehti hai uske sasoorjee Om ki tarah khadoos nahi thhe!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Nilima bahut intelligent hai!!!    Acchi tarah se apne bete ko janti hai!!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂Janti hai ke Raj Naina ko chhod kar kissi aur ko dekhta tak nahi hai!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 Woh samaj gayi ke Raj shararat kar raha hai!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj bhi Naina ko ab aane nahi de raha hai jab ki Om khud bula raha hai!!!!😜 😜 😜 😜 😜Usse ab mazza aa raha hai aur Om ko puri tarah se sabak sikhana chahta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bade confidence ke saath keh raha hai ke woh sambhal lega!!!!!!   😜 😜 😜 😜 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂Kuch gadbad zaroor karega!!!!!

But aage dekhte hai kya hota hai!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

Waise Omveer ke role mein Mukul Dev and Nilima ke role mein Vaishnavi bahut acchi lagegi!!!!!🙂 🙂 🙂

Raj bahut bada item hai...aur haa..jodian upar se hi ban k aati hai..varna Raj aur Naina kaise milte??

Omveer..bhi ek aur nayab item..aur Nilima..unko kaabil jodidar..

aur haa..Raj kaam karega..aur koi gadbad nahi hogi..aisa sochna bhi paap hai..😆

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

Raj aur Naina ka ishque zor shor se chalne laga..aur Omveer ki haalat din ba din kharab hone lagi..

ek ka maza..dusre k lia saza ban gai..

Naina ka final exam bhi ho gaya....

ab Omveer taiyari karne lage..Naina ko ghar laane ki.. par Naina ghayab hai,pata chala..woh gai hai Ernakulam.. ghumne...

Omveer k sar par haath....

par Naina Chandigarh me hi hai..Omveer aur Nilima ko chhod kar sab koi jaante hai..

aur Raj ki toh aish hai..ghar ata hai der se..Omveer se jhamela hota hai.....

par Raj ko koi fark nahi padta...

Naina ab naatak nahi karna chaahti..uske director ne dusri heroine dhoondh li hai..usko naatak karne me maza nahi aa raha hai.. bakwas screenplay hai..

Nilima pareshaan ho gai hain..k pata nahi ab kyaa hoga...Raj baat nahi sunta..aur Omveer ka gussa saathve aasmaan par hai...

Omveer ne decide kia..k Raj ko Police k hawale kar denge woh...

unhone Inspector Chaddha ko contact kia....

Chaddha--haa..boliye..

Omveer--patni k rahte hue..agar koi ladka..dusri k pichhe bhaage toh kyaa saza hai uske lia?

Chaddha--dekhiye..agar patni k rahte kisi aur se shaadi kare..toh hum kuchh kar sakte hain...chakkar chalane k lia koi saza toh Penal Code me nahi hai..

Omveer--par usko hirasat me lekar..toh..sabak sikha sakte hai na aap?

Chaddha--dekhiye Siddhu saab..hum kuchh kar nahi sakte legally.. par Raj ko dara sakte hai...

Omveer--bas..utna hi kar dijiye...ehsaan hoga mujh par..

Chaddha--ok...aap bas mujhe yeh bata dijiyega..k woh dono fir kab milne wale hai..

Omveer--jee ..shukriya..

Omveer(man hi man)--beta Raj..main bhi tera baap hoon..ab maza chakhunga tujhko,sara mamla Naina k lautne se pahle nipat jaaye.. toh hi achha..

Raj aur Monica ko mulakat honewali hai 3 din baad...

Omveer ne Raj ko bulaya..

Raj--kahiye dad..mere paas zyada time nahi hai...

Omveer--maine bahut socha..agar tu us Monica k saath khush hai.. toh yehi sahi..Naina ko chhod kar usse shaadi kar..koi jhamela nahi hoga..

Raj ka sar chakra gaya...yeh dad kyaa bol rahe hain.. agar pakda gaya Raj..toh shayad is baar dad dande se maarenge...

Raj baukhla gaya...

Omveer ne socha,hadbadahat me Raj us parkati Monica se contact karega...jitni jaldi ho sake..Omveer Raj par nazar rakhne lage..

3 din baad hi Raj milne gaya Monica se,Raj ko samajh me aa gaya.. k Omveer usko follow zaroor karenge..

aur Om ne follow kia undono ko...

Simla road par Raj ki car rooki hui hai...aur dono zara sa door khade hokar baat kar rahe hain..

Raj..aur Monica k bhes me Naina..

Raj ne kaha.."tum thehro..main zara aya.."

Naina--kaha jaa rahe ho?

Raj--1 number...

Naina--ok..zyada door mat jana...

Raj gaya..

aur tabhi..Naina k chehre par..flash light geeri...

Inspector Chaddha...aur unke saath 1 officer aur 1 lady hawaldar..

aur saath me Omveer..

Naina(man hi man)--arre,...dad toh Police lekar aaye hain.. ab kyaa karoon??Raj kaha gaya..

kuchh sochne k pahle hi lady hawaldar ne Naina urf Monica ko pakda....

Inspector Chaddha aaye..."kyon ..chhori..tanne bahut josh chadha hai??haa...kyaa baat hai?dusre ki pati par dore daal rahi hai??"

Naina--nahi..ghalat soch rahe hai..

Chaddha--ghalat ..sahi sab thaane chal kar batana...

Naina--nahiii..Rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj....bachao...

Raj ne Naina ki awaz suni...arre..yeh ho kyaa raha hai??

Raj ne dekha Police khadi hai..Inspector Chaddha... oohh no....

lady hawaldar ne Naina ka haath pakda...

Naina--dekhiye..bahut ghalat kar rahi aap..nahii..

Hawaldar--kameeni..aur koi nahi mila tujhko..?

Naina ne haathapai karna shuru kar dia..aur Hawaldar ko gussa aa gaya..aur usne Naina urf Monica k baal ko pakad kar khincha..

aur......................Naina ka wig uske haatho me aa gaya...

Chaddha chauk gaya..."Naina..tum??"

itne me Omveer aaye..."achha?yeh sab chal raha tha? Monica.. hmm..Naina..kyaa acting hai..tabhi main sochu..."

Omveer ki baat puri nahi ho pai..

Raj ek Motor cycle me aya..aur Naina ko khinch kar usme bitha kar bhaag gaya...

Omveer--MUJHE BAKRA BANAYA...CHHODUNGA NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII..

Chaddha--yeh ho kyaa raha hai??

udhar..

Naina--yeh bike kaha se mili?

Raj--arre...waha par ek Onduty Inspector bhi karne aya tha ..1 number..uski bike khadi thi...main isko le aya..

Naina--arre..kyaa kia??Inspector ki bike..nahiiii...dad ko pata chal gaya hai?

Raj--kaise?

Naina--arre Lady Hawaldar ne mera wig pakad k khincha,aur..sara bhaanda foot gaya..

Raj--arre baap re...

Naina--tumhare baap ne achha maza chakaya...ab dono jaayenge jail...

udhar Omveer chillane lage.."CHHODUNGA NAHI.. DEKH LUNGA..."

Chaddha--aapko toh khush hona chahie..k Raj Naina k saath hi milta tha..aur..aap bhi na..itna time barbad kar dia..

aise me Bike ka malik woh inspector daur k aya.. "arre.. Sir..woh ladka meri bike lekar bhaag gaya...."

Chaddha--shame on you..tum kar kyaa rahe the??

Officer--natural call Sir..

Chaddha--GO TO HELL....

Police ki jeep me Chaddha ne Raj aur Naina ko follow kia..unko rokne k lia..

jab Raj ne dekha uske pichhe Police ki jeep..usne aur tez chalana shuru kia bike..

Naina--kaha tha..jhamela hoga..tumne fansaya..

Raj--arre ..mera baap itna danger..aaj hi malum pada...

aur road par kuchh patthar pade the...bike ko dhakka laga...paas k ek car se....aur Raj ek taraf...Naina ek taraf..aur bike road par..

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Hospital me...

Nilima,Gita,Girish,Beeje..Omveer sab baahar khade hai... shukar hai..dono k sar par chot nahi aai..

dono ko ek hi room me rakha gaya hai..

Nilima--kaha tha maine..zyada chalu mat bano....par meri sunte kaha ho?

Omveer--arre..mujhe kaha pata tha..k Monica Naina hi hai...

Beejee--Omveer..tum ullu k ullu hi rahe..

Gita--kyaa Bhaisaab..aap toh bilkul sathia gaye hain...

Girish--Omveer...tum..toh baat hi mat karo...

Raj aur Naina geere the..road k dono side par..patto ka dher tha.. Raj ka pair jaake takra gaya pedh k saath..aur Naina haath k bal geeri..

abhi..Naina k haath me plaster hai..aur Raj ki ek taang tangi hui hai..plaster me bandh kar..aur kuchh mamuli kharonch aai hai dono ko...

Doctor ne kaha.."dono se mil sakte hain aap log.."

Raj--haiii..Mummy..bachao..main gaya..arre..

Naina--sab kuchh..tumhara kia dhara hai..maine bola ..k dad maan gaye hai,aur main ghar aa jati hoon,par nahi.. tumko naatak ko aur khinchna tha...maro ab..

puri ghatna sun kar..Nilima..Gita aur Girish hansne lage...

Naina--mujhe chot lagi hai...

Raj ne bahut angry look dia..Naina ko..

Naina--mera matlab hai..humko chot lagi hai..aur aap dono hans rahe hai??

Girish--toh aur kyaa kare?tum logone harkat hi aisi ki hai...

Gita--jaisi karni..waisi bharni..pichhli baar ki ghatna se sabak nahi li...achha hai..ab raho hospital me..

Nilima--arre..Omveer ne mere saamne phone kia tha Naina ko..tab itne nakhre dikhaye isne..uff..

Beejee--sara kasoor Om ka hi hai..

Om--Beejee..aapka hi idea tha..dono ko saza dene ka..

Beejee--toh kaan pakad k utthak baithak karvana tha.. aise alag kyon kia??

Raj aur Naina k parents aapas me jhagad ne lage...

Raj--Naina..dekh kar nahi lagta..k inke saamne hum zakhmi pade hain..

Naina--haa..bilkul nahi lagta..kyaa kismat hai humari.. dhatt...

dono muh latka k lete rahe...

aise me Inspector Chaddha ki Entry...

teeno par charges hain..

Raj aur Naina par charges yeh hai..khamokha logo ko pareshaan karna..aur Raj par ilzaam hai Police ki bike lekar bhaagna..aur Police k kahne par bhi nahi rukna..

Omveer par aarop hai..Police ka waqt barbad karna...

Raj--oohh no..

Naina--mar gaye....Raj bola tha..maine..

Raj--chup raho tum...

Beejee ne bola..jurmana bhar dia jaayega..

3 lacs ka jurmana bhara gaya..

Chaddha uske baad bhi ek din dono ko dekhne aaye..aur Naina ko uski wig waapas karne aaye..

Chaddha--Paagalpan kis had tak jaa sakta hai..yeh tum logo ko dekh kar pata chalta hai..

Raj--faida kyaa?

Chaddha--saath toh ho ultimately..

Naina--hospital me..meri haath latki hui hai..aur Raj k taang tange hue hain..

Chaddha--jaisi karni..waisi bharni..

Nitin aur Heena..milne aaye..aur dono apni hansi rok hi nahi paa rahe the..

Naina aur Raj ghar laute...

Nilima ne aarti utaari Raj ki...har koi maujud the usdin..

Gita,Girish,Omveer k ilava..aur bhi log the..Beejee..

Nitin,Heena,Balwant..aur Inspector Chaddha..bhi the...

Raj wheel chair me ghar k andar gaya...

kismat hi kharab...

Balwant ne Nitin aur Heena ki shaadi dubara karne ka socha hai.. with a grand reception..sab ko jana hai..1 maheene baad hi hai shaadi..

Balwant k ek dost hai..jo College me Psychology padhate hain..woh ek Case ki tarha Raj aur Naina..aur Omveer ko dekhne aaye..

baad me malum pada..unke class k lecture ko sunne dusre class k students bhi aaye the..

insaan kitna bada ..gadha,,ullu..sankhi..and at the same time badmaash ho sakta hai..yeh Raj aur Naina ko dekh kar malum padta hai..

Omveer ultimately relaxed hue..Raj sudhar gaya..Naina ne bhi nautanki karna chhod dia..(?)

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5 saal baad...

Nitin aur Heena ko 2 bachche hue...ek ladka..ek ladki..

Raj aur Naina ko bhi 2 bachche hue..ek ladka ..ek ladki..

Kailash auditorium me drama hoga...

Salim-Anarkali..

Raj aur Naina apne bachcho ko lekar dekhne gaye... Beejee bhi gai thi..aur Gita aur Girish bhi...Nitin aur Heena bhi the...

drama shuru hua...aur Raj ki beti chillaii.."PAPA.. WOH DEKHO DADAJEE..."

Raj ka beta bhi chillaya.."DADIMA....DAADIMAAA.."

actually is naatak me..Jodha-Akbar ka role kar rahe hain Nilima aur Omveer..

Raj ne Naina ki taraf dekha..aur Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha..aur dono hansne lage...

Nautanki Goes on..The Nautanki must go on..

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Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

durdanto,fatafati, full of nautanki

awsome

too cool

loved the ending

u rocked

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