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(FF) Change @ Twilight (Epilogue Pg. 123) (Page 81)

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Part 23


Right then her cell phone rings again. "Yes he called! If he hadn't I don't know what I'd do to him!" Neha laughs as she answers it.

"Hello?" She says in a sing-song voice.

"Hello Neha." She hears the softness of his voice, and a huge smile erupts on her face.

"Hi Sharad. I didn't think you'd call." Neha says, glancing out her window.

"Could I ever do something like that?" Sharad laughs. "But of course I'd call for our date."

"When would it be?" Neha asks.

"How does tomorrow evening sound for you? And since it's a Sunday, promise it won't be too late!" Sharad tells her.

"That sounds totally fine Sharad, I'll see you tomorrow then?"

"Sure! Bye."

"Can't wait for tomorrow!" Neha says, trying to sound sweet.

"Even though you've already seen what a date with me is like?" Sharad asks. "Crap! What the hell did I just say?"

"How do you know anything about that?" Neha asks right away. "Did Lanny tell you?"

"Lanny, that's a good excuse, he knew something about it!" Sharad laughs nervously. "Yeah Lanny told me everything after we dropped Shaili off."

"What exactly did he tell you??" Neha asks again.

"Why can't I remember what the idiot was thinking when we were in the car, it was something about the editing studio...?" "Aren't you guys meeting at the editing studio tomorrow?"

Neha's silent for two minutes. "Yeah, that's right."

Sharad quickly breathes a sigh of relief. "Thank-god I remembered on time!" "Okay, so you've already seen what a date with me is like. You up for it?" Sharad says, trying to change the subject.

"Sharad, can I be honest with you?" Neha asks.

"Sure?" Sharad says. "Oh god, what does she know now"?

"Well, I did see how your date was with Shaili, and I'm not sure I want the same type of typical romance." Neha admits.

"Oh, well that's a surprise; most girls would love that type of stuff." Sharad says.

"You'll find out tomorrow, I'm not like most girls!" Neha says laughing.

"Can't wait. Bye." Sharad hangs up and lets out a huge deep breath.

Rashmi walks by. "What's up bro?"

"Don't talk to me! You were right!" he slumps down. "This whole bachelor idea is a total flop! All these girls think I'm into them, but I'm not. And honestly I feel bad hurting them."

"Well I did tell you so!" Rashmi comes and sits next to him.

"And I haven't even told you the worst part," Sharad holds his head in his hands.

"And that is?"

"I think Neha's slowly trying to figure me out."

"Figure you out, meaning...what I think it is?" Rashmi asks, looking up at him.

"Yeah, she's close to figuring out, that we're the blood-sucking type vampires!" Sharad says in a louder voice.

Not exciting at all, believe me I know! But this is it for Saturday's update. I won't be able to do any other ones today! Please do leave comments!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

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*thud*

amazing upd! i love sharad...haha blood-sucking vampires..that sounds soo sexy!

yay GOOOO NEHA!!!!
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Day Dreaming ...

Neha is smart...
and Sharad (the fool LOL ) had to let it out.

Man man man ... I love this FF!
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Neha is cool...I like smart people... Wink LOL
So Sharad is not into any one of them...so where is the heroine darling? 

And  Sharad has two sisters: Rashmi and Lanny and both can read minds?

This is getting so exciting...I am almost biting my nails... Wink LOL If this is what you produce after writer's block, I don't know know what to say...except you are an amazing writer.. Clap Clap Clap

Continue darling...

Edited by Isha - 17 May 2008 at 5:03am
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Originally posted by muqualp

*thud*

amazing upd! i love sharad...haha blood-sucking vampires..that sounds soo sexy!

yay GOOOO NEHA!!!!

Thanks Muqs!TongueEmbarrassed Doesn't it?Wink and yes...Neha's going to figure this all out sooner or later!Tongue

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Originally posted by Little Foot

Day Dreaming ...

Neha is smart...
and Sharad (the fool LOL ) had to let it out.

Man man man ... I love this FF!

Thanks Mandy Shandy!TongueEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by Isha

Neha is cool...I like smart people... Wink LOL
So Sharad is not into any one of them...so where is the heroine darling? Thanks I'm glad I made Neha like that, hope she likes it! and we'll see, he could fall in love with any of them!Wink

And  Sharad has two sisters: Rashmi and Lanny and both can read minds? Nope. Lanny is the guy that was to follow the dates, and get it all on camera, and so on the ride home Sharad could hear everything Lanny was thinking!Tongue

This is getting so exciting...I am almost biting my nails... Wink LOL If this is what you produce after writer's block, I don't know know what to say...except you are an amazing writer.. Clap Clap Clap Aw...don't bite your nails, they won't grow, I speak from childhood experience!WinkLOL and yeah writer's block and I had a bit of problems after last night, I think I just started venting out my problems, and so then I got the hang of the story!Tongue but thanks Nishi, coming from an azmazing writer like you, that defintiely means something!Tongue

Continue darling... Will try!Tongue 
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I like how you made "Neha" sooo damn smart.. loving it.. and now I am even more curious as to what he will do on our date since I already told him I am not the very romantic types.. Big smile

Btw, I never replied to the last part but I am getting the feeling you are trying to pair "Neha" up with Lanny... are you? If you are thats cool and all but I have a personal request.. Can we give him like a real name.. like Shahid (you know since I am so in love with him and all)?? hehe.. lol

And I loved how in the previous part you made Shaili believe Maya and I was like chuckling in the back.. haha. I like being mean to people I like..

Ok.. continue soon now.. I can't wait for the next part.

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