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(FF) Change @ Twilight (Epilogue Pg. 123) (Page 105)

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 10:47pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by BMTDian

aww man as soon as i think i'm the first LOL oh well Ouch
awsome update Embarrassed Aditya really has an impact on her..so much not to be interested in Sharad like b4 Shocked impossible Wink lolz
whoops...maya told them LOL hehe seems interesting!! Embarrassed
as i said awsome update cant wait for the next one Big smile

Aww it's okay Lima!Embarrassed Thanks hun!Tongue

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neha said the magic word--- Vampire! lol gr8 part meeru! plz plz cont soon!
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Thanks Muqs! Embarrassed
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Part 29


"I know Neha. I'm sorry, but they said Shaili was in an accident and so they needed to know where I was so they could come and get me!" Maya says quickly to her. "And yes, I know that! But I'm sorry. I got worried! What should I do now?"

"Get away from there." Neha responds.

"Away?" Maya asks, confused. "Like we should go somewhere else?"

"I always thought Maya would be smarter than this." She signals to Sharad to give her one minute and walks to a corner. "Yes, just take Rahul, and go someplace else!"

"So you're saying that nothing's happened to Shaili?" Maya asks again.

"Of course! Otherwise don't you think I'd get a phone call or something?" Neha explains.

"Oh true. I'll call you back later with details. But why do you think they wanted to know where I was this badly?"

"I'm guessing, since you 'so graciously' admitted that the whole spying idea was yours, they way to get back at you?" Neha admits.

"Oh god, I never thought it'd backfire on me like this!" Maya whines.

"Get over it, and act quickly now!" Neha says.

"First tell me, how's the date?" Maya laughs.

"Fine, how's yours?" Neha laughs.

"I'm not on a date." Maya says matter-o-factly.

"Has something happened?" Neha asks, immediately concerned.

"No," she laughs. "It's just this isn't really a date. I don't know what to call it."

"Call it a date, it'll make you feel better, believe me!" Neha laughs.

"Thanks for the advice. I'll talk to you later! Bye!"Maya hangs up.

"She's so crazy! I hope it all works out though." Neha reluctantly goes back to where Sharad was waiting.

"Everything okay with Maya??" He asks her, handing her the club she picked. "crap, I wasn't supposed to mention Maya's name!"

"How did he know this had anything to do with Maya? Why do I find something strange about this whole scenario?"She nods. "Everything's fine. Thanks. Let's play!"

They both start playing their game of golf.

At the dorm

"Okay, here's her message of where she is!" Rushvi says showing the four girls.

"I don't feel comfortable still." Nishi says.

"Oh come on Nishi, don't you want to have a little revenge?" Shaili says, nudging her.

Nishi laughs. "Not like this. It's invading her privacy completely."

"True, but we did it to both of you; you should want to do it to Maya too!" Rushvi laughs.

"Why are you both so eager to do it??" Nishi questions.

Simran and Rushvi look at each other. "We just enjoy doing it?" They laugh.

"Nice excuse!" Shaili mouths to them.

"How would you feel Rushvi, if one time you're out with Mr. oh-so-hot Aryan, and we decide to spy on you two?" Nishi asks her.

Rushvi thinks for a minute. "You're right. I would hate that! I'm not so sure I want to do this after all." Rushvi says backing away.

"Ha!" Nishi laughs and walks to her. "So now it's you two on your own!"

"You two are chickens!" Shaili makes a face. "Come on Simi!"

Both Shaili and Simran leave the dorm to where Maya supposedly is.

A little later

"Sharad, have a drink of water na? You'll get dehydrated!" Neha says, passing her bottle to him.

"Nope, I'm fine." He says, throwing it back to her.

"There's something so weird about this guy. But why can't I put my finger on it!? I better discuss this with somebody." Neha catches the bottle.

Sharad keeps glancing up at her, as he hears her thoughts prominently. "I need to be more cautious around her! She's so close to figuring everything out!" Sharad gets a frown across his forehead.

"Kya hua? Everything okay?" She asks him.

He just nods. "Everything's fine." "Or at least it'll be fine soon!"

What could he mean by that? This ff, is slowly but surely reaching it's peak! Please do leave comments! Since I updated twice yesterday, I might not be able to do one today!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera
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Ah two updates! Tongue Awesome!

Neha's date is so ... different. LOL
She's too smart.

Haha ... the idea of Shaili's accident was good ... and mean. LOL

Love yaaa

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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 4:59am | IP Logged
AWESOME...
Now you got me biting my nails again...what did Sharad mean...
Oh I love Neha's smartness...
Nishi is so idealistic yaar...She sounded like me when she said that would be invading someone's privacy!! LOL
Maya's spontaneous date isn't working well? She didn't sound ecstatic to Neha...Hmm....

Will his secret be out? Oh poor thing...

You can really build suspense and keep the reader guessing...only an accomplished writer can do it...my nails are all gone...so something soon... LOL

Edited by Isha - 24 May 2008 at 5:00am
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Chalo read the 3 parts... The funniest thing was when Anik had to leave using... the fire escape. LOL LOL

Well if you had followed my suggestion Neha wouldn't be thinking about Aditya when she was on her date with Sharad, this might have hurt Sharad's ego, bechara.

I think Sharad is going to tell 'his story' to Neha..


@Mandy: OMG you like Tokio Hotel? Too obvious isn't it? Being from Germany... LOL LOL
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 11:44am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Little Foot

Ah two updates! Tongue Awesome!

Neha's date is so ... different. LOL
She's too smart.

Haha ... the idea of Shaili's accident was good ... and mean. LOL

Love yaaa

Thanks so much Mandy Shandy! I wanted to add a little variety to it! and yes Rushvi;s mean for telling that to Maya!LOL 

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