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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 74)

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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
awesome udClap plz cont soon.......

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Sorry darling for being late. Ouch Ouch
Superb update. Clap
Yaar ek baat batao story edit to Navin n party k liye ki gayi thi par hum logon k liye edit karne ki kya jarrorat thi yaar. Wink
Vaise Naina bhi kam nautanki nahi hai. LOL LOL
accha dil maara ki u r experience holder but i'm not. LOL
Pyaar karti hi thi par Raj ya koi aur bhi ladka hota aur Naina ki jagah bhi koi bhi hota to us ka responce aisa hi hota. Angry
Finally ab it's leading to it's end. Smile Smile Smile
Congrats for completing 2 months. Clap Clap Clap
update soon.
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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 3:46am | IP Logged
Clap Both the parts were awesome..i loved their flashback....so sweet Day Dreaming Day Dreaming ...i loved the way raj proposed naina Embarrassed Embarrassed ...

I can understand naina's inhibitions....it's nice to know raj was her first and last BF...so nice na

since u hv decide to end this story...i feel sad..but do come up with another one..i love ur writing style...

I like the way u keep ur ff light hearted..no heavy drama..rona dhona..etc...
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update plzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part asap.
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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 4:54am | IP Logged
@aarthi
thnx a lott yaar!!.....

@lipi
thnx!!..

@riyaa
ya riya i am planning means have planned to end the fic!!.....evrythn which strts reaches an end!..lol!!.....
it makes me really glad to noe that u will miss de fic!...nd i will miss it too!..
ur tellin me thnxxx!!......welcmee yaar!.....u dunt really need to say thnx!..

i should be sayn thnx....all of u hv always supported me!!...

@varsha
thnx!..

@sonu
i am so glad that u hv read my fic!!....nd u will miss it!....well i will miss it too!!.........thnkuu very much!!.......hopefully godwiling nd wid all ur support i surely will ryt more of fics!!..

@mahak
nva mind mahak!!......thnx a lot!!..........hehehe!...kuch battein hoti hain private nd confidential!!...lol!!........
thnxx!....if dis fic has completed 2 months its all coz of de people who read nd appreciate!...so thnx to u!!....

@yyy
thnx!!...

please dunt feel sad ya!!........lyk i said hopefully i shd be here wid more fics!!.......
to be honest i dunt lyk all dat rona-dhona stuff!...plain nd simple!...nd dats wat people lyk too!!.....so thnx once again!!>.

@sweta
yesss yess i will surely dear!!!!
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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Another info for all of you!.

Some miscalculation!....ill be updating today wenesday fri nd sunday!!....

Next week
mon tue nd wed!.....continous updts!!....

thnx a lot!
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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 5:44am | IP Logged
PART-44

THe next day morning Raj and Naina got up to find none at home!!... Dead

Raj-Its so strange!...

Naina-I knoe...these people have planned something big time!!...

Raj-So what do we do noww??

Just then Raj's phone rings!!..

The voice from the other end says

If you want to see the rest of the big family alive then pack your bags and leave hone right now!....Ah wondering where to go?....dunt worry pack your bags and go down...a car and driver is waiting for you!!

It was a recorded message

RAj smiled!.. Wink

Raj-Aggar inkey plan ka pata na hota....toh kitna darr jatey!!

Raj and Naina packed and went down!!..Car and driver was waiting down as instructed!!...

They drove for almost 6 hours!..

Raj-Ohh bhai sahab!....kitney dair aur!!..

Driver-Kamal ke admi hoon...tumhara pariwwar takleff main hain...aur tum aaram se baithe hoon!..

Naina-Lekin

Raj caught her hand and overruled her voice!!

Raj-Lekin aapko kya problem hain!!.. Wink

Naina looked at him questiongly!!

Raj dint say anything!!..

Raj-Waisey kya naam bataya aapney??

Driver-Ayye maine bula hi kidhar!!

Raj-TOh ab bolo!

Driver-Arjun!!

Raj-Hmm....acha naam hain!....mere saleey ka naam arjun hain

Driver-Ayee arjun thodi hain!..

Raj raised his eyebrow!.. Confused

Driver-ahh woh ah....Is duniya mein apun jaisa ek hi arjun hain!!

Raj-Acha chodo gaddi chalao!!

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They finally reach the destination!!..

Driver gets out to get the bag!..

Raj-Thats aalekh!....a driver in disguise!..

Naina laughed!..

Naina-I knoe!!...

They both smile and go inside!...it was their farmhouse kinda thingi in the outskirts of de city!!

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When they put the bell beejee opens the door!!..

Raj-Beejee aap!!..

Beejee--Haann veer main!.....andar aao!..

Beejee was waiting that raj will ask something!..

Raj-Beejee bahut bhukh lagi hain! LOL

Beejee--Huh?...ahh haan....

Raj-Bee bakki ke pagal kahan hain??

Beejee--beta tujhe pata nahi kya??

Raj-Uff beejee

Raj gets up and starts walkinggg

Raj- Navinnn Nishaaa!.....Aakash kahan hoo yaar?....come out bauhut ho gaya timepass.....bahar aalekh ne sab bata diya!.. LOL

All heads pooped out

They all screamed

Aalekh ne bata diyaaa!! Angry

Raj started laughing!!...

They all screamed

Aalekhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It was heard outside....aalekh came running in!..

AAlekh-Kya hua??

Navin--Saleeyy kuttey....kyun sara program bigad diya!! Angry

Raj-Navin navin chill....aalekh ne kuch nahi bataya....i and naina figured that out....tum loggon ko bahar nikalney ka yahi rasta tha LOL .....aalekh did his job perfectly....shakk hummein kal neelu par hua.....she made a mistakeeee

All screamm

Neeelu!!!!!!!!

Aalekh and neelu smile!!..

THey all settle down..

Raj-So yahan decently saath mein kyun nahi aa saktey the??

Navin-AB jab plan flop ho hi gaya hain....toh aggey ki kahani suna detein hain!..

Beejee--Haan puttar.....dekh veer.....humne tumhari aur naina ke shaadii fix kar di hain!.. Embarrassed

Raj-Bee jahan tak mein janta hoon sab ne decide kiya tha ki mein aur naina shadii karengey LOL (raj took a glass of water)

Beejee--Matlab humne fix kar di hain....date fix kar di hain......ahh aaj mehendi hain.....kal sangeett aur parsoon shadiii aur uske baad honeymoon Smile

RAj spat the water he was drinking!....Horror struck on naina's facee!.. Angry Ouch Confused

Both together--Kya??????????????????? Angry

Noone expected them to reat like that

Navin-Uhh koi problem??

Raj-Navin tumne humse puche bagir humari shadi fix kar di??

Navin-Uhh haan...

Raj-Your unbeatable man!!...

Navin-CMon shadi toh honi thi....ab aur kya

Raj-Right aur kya??   Angry

Naina-I meann itni jaldi?...kya mein itni badii bhoj hoon kyaa

Navin-Naina.....cmon yaar mein tujhe toh khush dekhna chahtha hoon!....bas nothing more...aur teri khushi raj mein hain!..

Naina-But

Navin-Shh!....ab sarri tayari shuru karo!!...

Navin-Aur haan sarrey functions mein sab ayyengey...yeh no entry for ladke and all that sab kuch nahi hain...sab aa saktein hain!.. LOL


They all dismissed!!..

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She sat in front of the mirror....took one last look at herself...yes she was ready!!...

SHe was ready to get to the first ceremony of her weddin!!...

Naina was ready!!....

SHe went downstairs....she saw beejee and some other girls waiting for her!....she also saw badi ma there!...she felt happy..

SHe went and met badi ma!..

Naina-Aap yahan??

Badima-Haan veer se baat huyi....usne bulaya aur mein apney aap ko rok nahi payi!....apni bahu se toh mil looon!.. LOL

Naina-Ahh aur uncle??

Badima-Veer ne unhey bhi bulaya llekin woh nahi aaye...unki tabyat kuch theekh nahi!.. Cry

Naina was proud of raj........sab bhul kar he invited him!...

Naina sat down....and the rasam began.....they started applying the mehendi on her hands.....far away he stood jus admiring her!.....her beauty and the smile spread across her face!....though it was happening to fast......they were finally getting settled down in life!.....they would soon be one!....and the thought made him feel excited!....Raj was in an entirely different world!....

Naina was also blushing....with all the teasing going on!!.......both were definately happy!!...

Suddenly the lights went off!!


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SOrry i knoe its short....but i am not typing nythin else.....i personally am not satiisfied with what i have been typing....so not typing nything further!.....probably my mood is bad!....so anyway bear with this short part......i doont want to continue since its not shaping properly!.....sorry bout it!....but jus smetyms evrything goes rong!!

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its nice too good but too short update soon plzzzzzzzzz

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