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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 70)

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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj ne Naina ko sahi jana!!Usse challenge karke hi uske saath dance kiya jaa sakta tha aur Raj ne wahi kiya!!!! LOL

Raj ne itna try kiya par Naina ko toh kuch hota hi nahi hai!!!! LOL Par haan ajeeb toh feel kiya!!!! LOL

Raj aur Naina finally mile aur logo ka jeena haram kiya!!!! LOL

Raj aur Aalekh ka dialogue on Naina's rona was very funny!!! LOL

Aur Rosy ka Naina ko bhabhi bulana!!! Wink Wink

Raj ka under the blanket manana bhi was sooo romantic!!!! Embarrassed

Rosy ne sahi kaha!!!Pyaar mein labzon ki zaroorat nahi padhti!!!! Smile Smile Smile

Waise Neelu kya kehne waali thi jo kehte kehte rukh gayi?? Confused Confused Confused

I am waiting to know how Raj proposed to Naina!!!! Embarrassed

Akash ne sahi kaha tha..... aise kaise picture khatam!!!!! Smile

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it was awesome.......kamaal ki history hai dono ki...
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PART-42


Raj-Uhh main aur Naina.....ok umm main aur naina bahut hi achhe dost ban gayye!....ofcourse aalekh aur neelu already hain...we jus dint mention!!...Aalekh mujhse pehle naina ka friend hain!!...he was also my friend!...uh common friend!.....aur neelu was also naina's friend!...i got to knoe neelu coz of naina!!...

Aakash--Excuse me hum yeh sab sunne ne ke liye nahi baithe hain....get to the point!!... LOL

Raj-Arrey aa raha hoon na....actually we played lot of pranks on evryone and stuff so we became gud frnds...but aalekh nd neelu thouhgt we were in lovee!!....they tried to bring us together!!....and we got to knoe that...so in return we played another prank....naina went and spoke to aalekh and told him she loves him and stuff....and i did that with neelu!!........umm thats when actualy woh baat mere dimag mein baithe!!..

Few days later Naina ke tabyat kharab ho gayi...she had high fever...bhukar utar hi nahi raha tha....and i was really scared and upset!....and thats when aalekh drilled something into my head!!......he was giving gyan on love!! LOL ....naina was bladi ill...and aalekh was telling me that i was in love!!.... Wink

And i actually was!! Embarrassed ....the fear of losing naina....or any harm being caused to naina sent shivers to me!!....i couldnt loose her at any cost!....i couldnt see her in pain too!!....thats when swami aalekh helped me!!....and i really owe evrything to him!!....thnx a lot aalekh!!....

Naina hugged raj!...she rested her head on his shoullder!!

Aalekh-Anything for you Raj!!...And naina ofcourse!!

Aakash-So finally what happened?? Tongue

Raj--Ahh your not going to leave me!!.. Wink

Aakash--Tell us.....what gyan did you give naina??






Raj-Naina tum jannti hoon ladkiyaan kabhi kabhi salwar suit pehnti hain?....well do you even knoe woh kya hain?? LOL

Naina-Shut up Raj Angry ....you noe right thats all so girly girly!!....main nahi pehnti!...

Raj-Would like to see you someday in that!!.... Wink

Raj was laughing!!.. LOL LOL

Raj-Waisey i noe tum apni shaddi mein bhi jeans pehnogi!!...

Raj was laughing at the top of his voice!!.....

Naina-Heyy jus shut up!!....

Navin-Correct Raj...Naina ki shadii toh kabhi hogi hi nahi!.....zindagi bhar shes gonna be single!!...arrey kaunsa pagal ladka karega iss pagli se shaadi??....I mean ladki ke sharrer mein ek ladka hain!!.. LOL LOL

Navin and Raj were laughing now!!...

Naina-Listen shadi appki nahi hogi!....meri toh hogi!...kahin to hoga!.....kahin na kahin to hoga mera mr.perfect!!....mere intezarr mein!!........aayega woh ek dusri duniya se aur mujhe utha kar chala jayega!.... Embarrassed

Navin-Ofcourse ayega from mars!....aur tumhe utha kar mars mein le jayega!... LOL LOL

Naina gussa ho kar chale jati hain!!...

NExt day

Raj goes to naina's room!...he sees naina...ahh ya it was naina....pehle doubt hua...but it was naina...she stood there in a salwar suit!...

Big time uncomfortable in it!!....she just couldnt carry it!!......her posture dint suit the dress!...Raj smiled!

Raj-Naina we were kiddin yesterday!!....tumne itna serious kyun le liya?? LOL LOL

Naina-Listen mein yeh apni marzi se pehna hain!..

Raj-Uff itna gussaa!....waise tumhari chuni kahan hain??

Raj was laughing again!... LOL

Naina-Chunni!....eewiie woh galley ka patta i am not wearing...

Raj-Naina uskle bina dress ka koi matlab nahi!...ek bar pehne ke dekh lo!!... Wink

Naina picked up the duppatta!....she put it on her head!...

Naina-Isme garmi hogi!.. Confused

Raj-Uff sar par kyun udh rahi hoon??.....galle par laga lo...

Naina--Tumhe is sab ke bahut jankari hain!!....tumhi laga do!!.. Wink

Naina threw the duppatta!....raj caught it shook his head!.....wondering how could she be such a girl!!...

He stood behind her!....pechche se put the duppatta around her neck!....after he placed it...his hands came down slightly touching her skin!!....a light mourn escaped her lips!.....light one but raj heard it!...he saw her face in the mirror!!....her eyes closed!.....

Raj was lost in a thought!!......jus then naina realized what happened!!...she moved away!.....and went out of the room!!...

Raj-Kapde baldene ke sath iska behaviour bhi badal gayyaa!! LOL .....kahin jo mein tumhare liye feel karta hoon woh bhi tum mere liye!!....

FEw days later there was a wedding!!....Raj's cozin brother was getting married!...and naina was related to the girls side!!.....she was her friend!....So raj and naina at that wedding!!

Naina for a change picked up a girly girly outfit after neelu's insistance!!....and anyway she wanted to!!...

Naina picked up a red lehenga!....with golden work on it!....it looked beautiful!...neelu trained her how to carry it!....and naina learnt quick!!.....she was sure to blow evryone up with her new avatar!...

Raj was to pick her up at 8!....it was 8 20!...and no sign of naina!!...

Suddenly she came from there!...she looked like an angel to him!...he saw her and kept looking at her!!.......lost in her beauty!....in the girl naina!...not the tomboy naina!!...

Naina clicked her fingers in front of himm!!..

Naina-Kya hua??....aise kyun dekh rahe hon??....funny lag rhaha hain kya?maine neelu ko kaha tha...lekin neelu
Confused
She said that fast!..

Raj placed his fingers on her lips!!...

Raj-Shh!...Naina your looking beautiful!!.. Wink

Naina blushed!!

Naina-Really??? Smile

Raj-Ofcourse!...you look stunning!!

Naina-Thnx Raj!!

Raj was lost in her!!..

Naina-Aisey mat dekho!.....mujhse pyar ho jayega!!.. LOL LOL

Raj-Ho gaya hain!!...

Naina was shocked!!>. Dead

Naina-Kya?? Confused

Raj-Ahh kya?/....uh woh kya? LOL

Naina-Tumne abhi abhi kya kaha??

Raj-Kuch nahi!..maine kahan kuch kaha!!...nothing ahh chale??

Naina (suspiciously) chalo!!...

Raj drives them down to that place!!...

They get down !!..

Raj takes Naina from a behind route!

Naina-Yahan se??

Raj-Shh!!...

Hes taking her through the garden!....two of them walking alone in the garden!!......in the middle of the garden!..

There was one fountain in the garden!!...and some lights around it!...a calm and peaceful place!!..

Raj dint knoe why exactly he brought naina this way!..it dint lead to the hall!.....what was he doing!...he was losing control!..

He finally went and stood by the fountain....

TEnsion clear on his face!!

Naina-Raj koi problem??

Raj-Haan!..

Naina-Kya hua???

Raj--Naina kya tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya??

Naina-Raj I cant believe tum mujhse yeh puch rahe hoon!!..... LOL LOL

Raj-Janta hoon nahi kiya!...lekin aggar koi tumse pyar karta toh?? Confused

Naina dint noe what was happenin??

Naina-Lekin tumhari problem kya hain??

Raj-I lovvee you Naina!!....

Naina was shocked!!..

Naina-What??

Raj-I really really love you!!....

Naina dint knoe wat to do!...she turned around only to be caught by him!...

HE caught her tight!!...

He kept his chin on her shoulder...and started rubbing it!.(now you knoe how it started)

Naina was silent!..

Raj started kissing her neck!...he was saying some calm words to her hair!....he was just playing with them!....he dint noe what he was doing!!....

HE kept kissing her!!....

Raj-I love you naina....i knoe you love me too!!..

Suddenly Naina came out of her world she realized what was happenin!....

Naina pulled out of his grip!..

Raj-Naina please!. Smile

Naina-Jus shut up!...I dunt love you!!.. Angry

She walked out from that garden!.....rather ran out of there!.....tears flowing out of her eyes!!........

Raj fell on the floor!!......He was cryinggg!!..

Raj-Naina maine bahut ladkiyoon ke saath flirt kiya hoga!!...lekin maine kabhi bhi kisi bhi ladki ko aisa kuch nahi kaha!!...maine kabhi bhi unhe dokha nahi diya!!....maine kabhi unke liye aisa mehsoos nahi kiya jaisa tumhare liye mehssos karta hoon!!

Yeh dil yun pehle dhadka nahi!!....
Kisi ki pyar ke liye yun tadpa nahi!!
izhar-e-ishq hoga itna mushkil
pata chala hain aaj jab bani hain pyar meri manzil!!...

(ok i jus had those 4 lines in mind!...i noe they dunt rhyme either).....(jus felt like adding it)

Naina runs to her fullest!...stops only on reaching the car!.....

In the hall!...Raj and Nain khud ko sambhalte hain!...they have to see through this wedding!.....they attend it half-heartedly!....many a times naina looks at raj and raj also looks at her!...and both look away!!..............

The party goes on like that!...

ITs time to leave!...Naina was confused!!

Raj came to her!..

Raj-Chalein??

Naina nods and walks in front!..

Raj and Naina reach the car!.

Raj stops there!..

Raj-I am sorry for whatever happened!...I dunno i just!....i just kinda dint noe what i was doing!....i really am sorry!!.... Cry

Naina jus looks at him and den dosent respond!..

They drive home!!



AKy ke ankh mein asson the!..

Raj-Di...kya hua?? Confused

Di-Umm nothing!..

She wipes out the tear!...

Di-Zindagi ne humesha tumhe dukh diye!!........lekin tum!!....tum humesha khush honey ka natak karte rahe!...apna dukh dusroon ke khushi ke samne daba detey!.....tum sach mein mujhe bade papa ke yaad dilatey hoon!!..... Cry

Raj ke ankh main bhi asson the!!...

Raj-Aggar zindagi ne humesha dukh diye hote toh naina aaj mere saath nahi hoti!....har woh ek ghum bahut chota lagta hain jab mein naina ko dekhta hon!....naina meri duniya hain!...meri sabse badi khushi!!....... Wink

Naina gives a smile to Raj!!...

Suddenly they here some noise at the door!..

Nish!!...

Nish wiped out one tear!!..

Raj-Tum idhar kab aayi??..

Nish-Abhi abhi!...apki love stry ke mahek room tak pahunchi!...meri neendh uda di!....so here i am!...continue!! LOL

Raj-Oyye story khatam!..

Aky-Raj!.

Raj-Di nish ke samne!. Embarrassed

Aky-Shut up Raj..Nish is not some 8 year old kid!...uska khud ka koi boyfriend bhi hoga!...so chill!.. Wink

Raj-Hey!...nish tera koi boyfriend hain kya?....hey bhagwan! Confused ....main navven ki tarah nahi hoon iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum kuch bhi kar sakti hoon!.. LOL

Nish-Boyfrend toh pal sakti hoon na!.. LOL

Raj-Kya koi kutta hain kya?...usse palogi?? LOL

Nish-Areyy jab aap love marriage kar sakte hain phir mein kyun nahi?? Smile

Raj-AReey!.. Wink

Navveen--Kyun yahin keh kar mujhe bhi toh pataya tha! LOL ....i can beat Raj...nish ka koi boyfriend hain! Smile ...ab teri galti hain!...kitna aaram se chod diya isko!...kahin aur akele!.....i mean wahan kya hua hoga??....who knoes! LOL ...nish ka 1 boyfriend 2 10 kitne bhi!....aur unke saath nish ka relationshp ka tak hoga?.....who noes!....friendly mental psycological ya physical!!.... LOL LOL

Raj-Shut up!..Nish tera koi boyfriend naih hain na?....arrey yeh navin fokat mein meri taang khich raha hain!!.. Wink

Nish-Bhai chill!....phillal koi ladka nahi mila!...milega toh aapko hi batongi na!....bhabhs ke tarah nahi 4 saal tak chupana!... LOL

Naina smiled!..

Raj-Hmmm pleaseee i am happy tum apney bhabs ke tarha nahi hoon!.. Wink LOL

Navin--Ohh mere bhai!.....bhabs kahan beey??...abhi tak shadi nahi huyi!!.. LOL

Raj-Please cut the bhhai!..aggar tu mera bhai toh teri behen meri behen!...i mean naina meri behen!...please!....so cut the bhai! LOL

All start laughing!...

Nish-Toh aggey batao!...mere flirty bhai ne bhabs ko propose kaise kiya?...i mean offciially propose!...yeh to timepass tha!..

Raj-Naina aur mein!...yuhin odd feel karte rahe!...naina madame confused thi!....najane kis barey mein!....but phir ek din!...mera haat kat gaya!...its weird but humara beemar hona hi humare liye phaydemand tha!!... LOL



Raj had a cut on his hand!...it was bleeding badly!!....

Naina saw that...she rushed got the first aid kit!...and she started heling his wound!!

RAj sochne laga!...isne zhakamdiya wohi marham kar rahi hain!!...........

Naina-Are you mad!....itna bhi sambhal nahi patey hoon!...i mean how can some one be so careless!!.......khud ka koi dhyan nahi....i mean kis duniya mein reh rahe hoon...kkuch hosh nahi hain tumhe!...

Naina was screaming!!.. Angry

Raj-Tumhe kyun itna fark padh raha hain?? Dead

Naina-Jus shut up!...khud ka koi khayal nahi rakh the hoon!! Angry

Raj-Lekn tumhe kyun fark padta hain naaina??

Naina-I mean carelessnees ki bhi koi haad hoti hain!....tum toh!...arrhh!1... Angry

NAina was going on blabering!...not caring to what raj was saying!!...

Raj freed his hand from her and caught her by the shoulders!!

She was shocked!..

Raj-(in a raised tone) tumhe kyun fark padtha hain naina??..... Ouch

Naina couldnt speak for a second!!...

Naina-Kyun....kyunki....kyunki aggar tumhe kuch ho jata toh.....i mean yeh cut aggar serious hota toh??

Raj-Toh?......jyade se jyada galt nerve kat jati aur mar jata!...tumhe kya fark padta??

Naina-Shut up!..... Dead

Raj-Kyun??...mere jeeny marne se tumhe kyun fark padta hain??

Naina--Jus shut up!...tum mere dost hoon!

Raj-Dost!!....dost my foot naina!...kab tak!...kab tak tum yeh manney se inkaar karogi??.....i love you naina!...i still do!!

Naina rone lagti hain!!...

Raj releases his grip over her!...

Usne gussey mein aakar!....kya kar diya he doesnt noe!..

Raj-I am sorry!!..

Naina-But i am not because I love you!!!

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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 6:22am | IP Logged
thnx evry1!...ill give a detailed reply later!...g2g now!!
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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 6:32am | IP Logged
omg sweety very very nice,Big smile


Raj describin hiz love in the first part waz realy 2 gud n very funny 2, Clap thz scene waz realy awesum,

tat salwar thng Raj teasn Naina waz realistic n also 2 gud, Clap Clap Clap


NAina in lehangha omg so pretty as wel as RAj seein her in it super duper,Big smile


u realy write gud funny dialogues 4 Aky as wel as Naveen u r realy done a gud work dear,thz showz u'r sense of humour, Clap


the last part waz simply super,a complete hatz of 2 u dear, Clap Clap


All the best 4 the next update, Embarrassed




Aarthi



Edited by aarsow - 20 June 2008 at 6:32am
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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 6:39am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice lovely part waiting for next asap with long part.
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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 8:18am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwww
itsssssss beautiful........
i just oved the whole of RN's love story......its fresh and lovely and cute and romantic and so on.........

the way they proposed, fought with their feelings and then accepted..........it ws all wowwwwwwwww

and the humour u have put in between.........nish, raj and navin's convo......that ws soooooo cute and funny.....
ur updates r always balanced having all sorts of flavours..........and thats the best part.
awesome Clap
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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 9:06am | IP Logged
so cool update soon..........

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