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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 69)

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Posted: 17 June 2008 at 11:26am | IP Logged
As always update was rocking.... coincidently i was also in blue house when i was in school but i didn't have any captain ad raj LOL LOL ..

Will be waiting for ur update

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:51am | IP Logged

Originally posted by cool~~gal

thnx to all....but sorry at de same tym..lol!...i wldnt be updtin mon nd tues....i wil updt on wed!....sorry bout dat guys!...but wed will be a long part!!.....

aaj hai na wednesday update karna Tina.

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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 5:52am | IP Logged
PART-41


Naina and Aky go out to get some coffee...they return after some time!!...With the coffee mugs and a new guest!!... Tongue

Navin sees her and is so happy!!..

Navin-Rosy tum yahan?? Embarrassed

Rosy-Haan tum toh mujhe kyun yaad karogey??...Aky ne yaad kiya aur mein aa gayi......aky se aur uhh Mere bhai se milne!!.. LOL

Raj smiled!.. Big smile

Aky-Waisey baitho...uhh kya tha woh gana?...haan....pyarr ke yeh kahani suno ek ladka tha ek ladki thi..... LOL

Rosy was confused!

Aky-Hum sab Raj aur naina ke kahani sun rahe the!!.. Wink

Navin and others briefly tell her the story so far!!...

Aakash-Alright conitnue??

Naina took her coffee mug and went and sat.....evrybody took their mugs one was left it was Raj's....he got up and took it....naina dint care to get it for him....

Raj sat down next to her and smiled!!...






Raj-ALright toh friends saath mein dance toh karte hain na??.... Wink

Naina--Kartey hongey....lekin mein tumhare saath dance nahi karungi!... Dead

Raj-Hey lets give it a try!..

Raj extends his hand to her....

Suddenly he drops it!..

Raj-Actually yeh toh tumhare bass ki baat hi nahi hain...tum aur dance no way!....thnak god tumne uss din dance nahi kiya...karti bhi toh hum last aatey!!... LOL LOL

Raj knew woh naina ko aisey bolega toh woh gussa hogi aur pakka dance karegi!.

Naina-Hey I was wondering how about a dance??

Raj grinned!....formula hit!!..

Raj-Sure!!...

Raj (in his mind)--Aao Ms.Naina....tumhe dikhata hoon....apna jalwa....tumne jis ladke se aisi baat ki thi...aaj you will regret!!.....umm ..are you ready to get seduced!!..

Raj was giggling all the way!....He was going to teach naina a lesson!!....

Raj and Naina reached the centre stage!...Raj preffered the typical ball-room dance....then only he could flirt with her....be by her side ...!!...and most of all seduce her!...and make her fall for him!!...

Raj put his hand out...naina laced her hand into his!..

Naina(in her mind) so you think i cant dance!!...duddee lets show it to u!...

Raj pulls Naina close to him in a flash!!....he places on of his hands on her waist!...and the other entwined with her hand!.....she placed her other hand on his shoulder!!....

They started dancing!!....She showed him some awesome moves!!..

Raj went closer and asked her

Raj-Tum aaj ke occasion pe itna casually dressed??....i mean its strange na!!..

Naina-Well I am like this only!...I hate dressing up nd make up nd all that scrap!.....i mean eiwwe thats so girly!..

Raj laughed!!..

He slowly increased his grip over her waist....he thought he would get some girly girly response!!..... Embarrassed

He kept Naina busy in talks and started rubbing his thumb on her waist!!...he tried evrythin.....evrythin he used to do with other girls!...Naina seduce kya....seduce ka "s" bhi nahi huyi!!...it dint really matter to her!!......

She did feel weird for a second but who cares!....she dint understand Raj's intentions!!...She just wanted to stop that stupid dance right there!......raj ke iradey kuch theekh nahi lag rahe the!!....

Naina-(in her mind)--Yeh ladka khud ko samjhata kya hain??...Ahh i need to do something....get this guy off me....why did i even dance wid him.....eiwee i hate the feel of his hand!....cant he jus keep it in one place....hes goin on moving it.....dirty mindded fool!!... LOL LOL

Raj(in his mins) arrey yaar ladki hain ya kya?....koi response nahi!....uff....sample hain yeh!.... Angry

Naina--Umm i guess i need to get back...my friends are waiting for me!..

Raj nods and slowly leaves her!...

Naina-Okk i'll seeyou then!....

Raj smiles!..

He gets back with his friends thinking about how a girl dint respond to him!.....now he truly doubted if she was a girl!!.....
LOL

Naina went back to her friends thinking bout the dirty-minded fool she had just met!!....




Navin was rolling on the floor with laughter!!!....

NAvin-Raj tujhe aur koi nahi mili kya?....meri behen....the tomboy---ofcourse tere badd she is the very shy girl!.. LOL

Raj blushed!...Naina gave him a stare!!..

He again pulled up the blanket!...She threw it off!....

All tried not to laugh!!...

Raj shrugged....with blanket or without....i am gonna cacth your hand!....raj moved his hand to get Naina's.....naina was caught...she pulled up the blanket!!..........she dint want ny1 to noe wat was happening...well they already knew!!...

Ra slowly caressed the part which was hurt!..Naina knew this was his trick!.....raj slowly moved his fingers over her wound!.. Embarrassed

Naina looked at him and smiled!!...

Navin whispered to Rosy

Navin-Dekho bina words ke jhagda aur bina words ke maffi!!! LOL LOL

Rosy smiled!!!..

Rosy-Pyar mein kabhi words ya shabd ke zarrorat nahi hoti Navin!...Ankhon hi ankhoon mein sab ho jata hain!..

Navin looked at her and smiled!!...

A.D-Aggey kya hua??

Naina-Well Raj uss hawa ka naam tha jo meri zindagi mein aya audition leney aur phir gaya...phir ayya party mein dance karwaya phir gaya....bas aake chala jata tha!!.

Raj-Tumne bhi toh choda tha mujhe !!....infact is desh ko!.. Wink

IT like slipped out of his mouth!...Naina's face was blank!!....he dint want to say it....but galti se!...

Naina ke ankhein bhar aayi!...


Raj-Naina I am sorry...woh galti se!!..I really dint mean that naina!..

Naina caught his shoulder and softly sobbed!!...

Raj-Shh!...Galti hogayi meri maa....roona bandh karo...ya toh phir aalekh ke pass ja kar continue karo!.. LOL

Aalekh pulled up a blanket up his face!..

From inside said

AAlekh--Arrey yeh Aalekh kaun hain?? LOL LOL

All started laughing!...Naina also smiled!!..

Aalekh came out!..

Aalekh-Tohh aise hi ruththi rena phir mein aur Raj tereko dirty jokes se maneyengey!!... LOL

Naina rested her head on Raj's shoulder!...Smiled...

Raj-Aggey ke kahani batao!..

Naina--aur parrty ke baad i forgot this whoole incident!...kuch dino bad mere pyarey bhai ke dost humare ghar aayye uhh padhai karney!!....exam se ek din pehle!....aur woh dost nikla Mr.Rajveer Singh!!... Wink

Duniya ghum gayi!....Kitni baar usse aadmi se mulakat!..






Navin-Naina mera dost Rajveer...hum aaj sarri raat padhengey...toh tu sojana!..

Naina ne Raj ke taraf dekha!....aur RAj ne Naina ke taraf!..

Wahi ladki....faded jeans aur t-shirt pehne wali!....who hates girly girly stuff!!....

Raj-Uhh hi Naina!..

Naina-Hii Raj!..

Raj-Yeh ladki teri behen hain?

Navin-Haan koi problem??

Raj-School mein blue house captain tha...aur teri behen bhi blue house mein thi!!...

Navin-Ohh thats kool....lekin tere pass out hone ke waqt naina toh bachi hoti....tu ne pehchan kaise liya!..

Raj-Uhh woh ahh kuch din pehle mile the...reunion par!..

Navin-Ohh not bad!!...Chalo accha hua!...meri tension kam!!..

Raj-Tension??

Navin-Haan I mean jawan ladki......aur hum do ladke!..

Raj-Hello tu iska bhai aur mein tera shareef dost!...

Naina started coughing!..

Naina-(in her mind) shareef my foot!... Angry

Navin-Janta hoon yaar...!!...mazak kar raha tha!.....

Raj-Woh toh mera field hain!

Navin-Well is waqt Naina teri guru hain....woh tujhse bhi mahan hain....aise pranks aur jokes mein...

Raj-Ohh really...aapne kabhi bataya nahi Naina!...

Naina-(mind) bladi helll bhai ke samne sanyasi bana baitha hain!.. Angry

Raj-Phir toh humari khoob jamegi!!......partners!!....hum duno milkar navin ke band baja dengey!...what say LOL

Naina-Ofcourseee Angry

Days passed Raj Navin ke ghar jata raha.....the thought of being able to trouble her brother was too temptin!!....in the days that followed Naina joined hands with Raj.....they made navins life hell!!....and in these days of their deal...they actually discovered what they had in common......and they became good friends leaving behind evrything else!!...all other anger and differences!!.....because they together could ruin anyones life!!.. LOL







Raj-Bas ban gayee dost.....dost ke baadd pyaar aur aaj hum yahan hain!!......

Aaksh started laughing!..

AAkash-That was a nice try....but we arent leavin you!...tell us when did you propose to Naina....aise adhuri kahani hum nahi sunegey!....aur Aalekh ki toh entry bhi nahi huyi...aur tum bol rahe hoon movie khatam!!.... LOL

Raj-Arrey Aaksh sab ho jata hain na! Embarrassed

Rosy-Bhaiya batayi na....apne bhabhi ko kaise propose kiya!!... Wink

Raj and Naina were blushing!..

Naina-I thought I was supposed to call you bhabhi!.. Wink

Rosy-Yeah...and i am supposed to call you bhabhi!!...

They all laughed!..

Navin-Bata Raj....tune meri behen ko kitne besharmi se kaise propose kiyaa Wink

Raj-I could say the same....tu bata rosy ko kaise propose kiya... LOL

The very thought made rosy blush!...and navin smile!..

Navin-Uhh story teri chal rahi thi...tere badd mein batonga!!.... Wink

Raj-Main nahi bataney wala...arrey kuch cheezein hoti hain....private and personal!... Wink

Navin-Shut up!....abb bata!..

Naina-Mujhe neend aa rahi hain!..

Neelu-HAhaha!.....jus chill Naina...itna sharmaney ki kya baat hain??....waise bhi kuch dino mein teriii ----

Neelu stopped abruptly!...

5 pairs of eyes stariing at her!!....... Angry

Naina-Meri kya??

Neelu--Uhh ah woh kuch dino mein teri umar bad jayegi....ek saal budhi ho jayegi!......

Naina-Ohh......kahin koi gadbad toh nahi!.. Confused

Navin-Gadbad?...Nah koi gadbad nahi! Dead ...acha aggey batao!..

Raj-Naina kya tum batana chahogi?? Wink

Naina-Uhh tum hi bata do!... Smile

Raj took a deep breath and began!!



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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 5:53am | IP Logged
ok dat was a quick one!...my comp is still under repair!....i am at my cozins place!...so i jus managed dis!.............i noe updts arent regular!...bear wid me my pc is under repair!!
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Reply to part-40....late i knoe...nevertheless....here it is!!

@mahak
thnx a lot!!...

@sweta
thnx!

@arthi
thnx!!........aftr long tym u posted a big comment!...thnks so much!!

@lipi
thnx!!....

@rituka
thnx!

@shaina

firstly thnx for the hugeeee comment!!

u hv lyk got the whole updt in brief in ur comment!...thx!

@dolly
thnx!

@soni
thnx!!

@yyy
thnxx yaar!!...........

Sorry to all readers to keep u waiting!...but i am helpless!....hv othr work nd stuff..plus no pc at home!...kindly bear wid me!! ....jus anthr few days!!....nd we wld be done with this fic!!...
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 6:07am | IP Logged
awesome too good very nice part waitingggggggg eagerlyyyyyyyy for next prt asap.
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Too good,excellent update. Clap
Sharmate sharmate apni love story bata hi rahe hai dono. Embarrassed
Raj ka Naina ko dance me pareshaan karne wala scene kaffi interesting tha. Wink
Bechare ki khal gayi ki kaise ladki hai ki is ko kuch hota hi nahi. Wink
Naina aur Raj ka vo dialki rone k liye Alekh ko dhoondho bhi kaafi comis tha. LOL LOL LOL
Kaafi dino baad itna lamba aur acccha update diya hai. Smile
Keep it up n ud soon.
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 10:57am | IP Logged
excelent ud dear, Clap ,

waitn eagerly 4 the ud,

but realy gud n came up wit excelent dialogues,gud sequence 2,

Liked Rosy babhi thng a lot, Clap ,


realy super dear,


ya as u go ahead i'l be postn big big commentz sweety, Big smile



Naveen is alwayz funny dear,liked hiz part also a lot,
of al RN rocked,
ClapClap


All the very best 4 the next ud dear Embarrassed




Aarthi




Edited by aarsow - 19 June 2008 at 10:59am

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