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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 58)

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PART-35

Navin and Rosy leave supposedly to book the venue!!

Raj Naina Aky and Aakash are preparing the guests list!!..Mostly friends and colleagues!...

Aky-Raj woh mom dad??

Raj looked up..

Silence!..

Naina-Raj I think hume unhe bulana chahiye!..Its a big day for you...I think Tumhare chacha chachi ka hona important hain!..

(aky was refering to her mum and dad.....and aky and raj are cozins)

Aky-Raj you take a call...I wont force you...Its your decision!..

Raj gets up and goes away!!

Naina sees him go....She gets up and follows him!!...

Aakash-Raj aur mum dad ke nahi banti kya??

Aky-Raj is a gem aggar samney wala insaan usse se acha chale toh woh bhi accha chalta hain....sirf mere mom dad se uski problem hain....

Raj ke dad aur mere dad aapas mein bhai the!...Raj ke dad ek bahut hi imandar police officer!..Aur mere Dad ek businessman....Aur dad ke business mein kuch gadbad thi....kuch illegal kaam chal raha tha....Yeh case itifaq se Raj ke dad ko mil gaya!..

Unhhon ne imandari se yeh case bhi solve kiya!..TAbse yeh issuess shuru huyi...kuch dino baad Raj ke dad ko mara gaya!Raj aur main bahut hi chote the!..Tabse Raj ko lagta hain ki mere dad ne uske dad ko mara.....Raj ne uske baad bahut tough times dekhe hain!...Uski mom bhi maarr gayi!...apne pati ke mrityu ka jhatka woh sehh nahi payi!...

Tabse its always been gudi(nisha) and Raj...Raj ne woh sab kuch kiya jiss se nisha khush hoon.....usse se iss sab se durr rakha....hes fought it out all alone!...

I am very proud of Raj....Maine kabhi aisey tough times mein uska saath toh nahi diya!...But he always knew i was with him....meri khud ki limtations thi...mum dad ke khilaf jaana .i mean main kaise...i was small....

Dad paisey ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain!...Kuch bhi!....

Raj ko dad bilkul pasand nahi....now they seem to have changed...I dunno...I dunno why i said mum and dad!..

Aky ke aankh mein asson the!.....

Aky-Kyun Raj kee saath hi sab hota hain!...I just want to see him happy noww!!....He deserves much more!.....do you knoe woh shona se itna pyar kyun karta hain?....aur i can bet jab uske bacche hongey na he will bring them up in the best way!...

Kyun jaantey hoon?...Jab humme kuch nahi milta hain na...tab you wish ke tumhare apney ko woh miley!...

Raj ko ek bahut hi bura bachpan mila hain....jab woh shona ko dekhta hain he wishes ke usse ek bahut hi accha bachpan mile!...aur jab uske bachhe hongey he will see to it they live a wonderful Life!...

Aky was crying!!...

Aakash jus hugged her

Aakash-Shhh!!....Tumhari sehat ki liye yeh thekh nahi hain Aky!..

AKy wipes her tears...

Aakash-Mujhe nahi mallom tha ki Raj apney andar itna daba ke rakh sakta tha!...College mein usne kabhi aisa kisiko mehssos honey nahi diya ki woh itna dukh sehta aa raha hain....

ek baar mere puchne par usne sirf itna bataya ki uske mum dad nahi rahe!...aur kuch toh mujhse kabhi share nahi kiya!...

Aky-Yeh memories raj kisiko nahi bata ta...he hates remebering them!....Usne sirf naina ko bataya hain....tabhi toh naina ne aise behave kiya!.....usse janney ka haq hain...

Aakkash--Hmm...waise ab tum chup ho jao!..

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Naina-Rajj

Raj wipes his tearss..

Naina-Raj mein samajh sakti hhon tum kaise feel kar rahe hoon....but Raj tumhe shayad unhe maaf karna chahiye!..

Raj-Mujhse nahi hoga naina....mein ek aamm insaan hoon....bhagwan nahi hoon mein!!....jis aadmi ne mujhse mere mom dad ko china how do you expect ki main unhe maaf kar deta!...

Naina-Raj...Woh huumse badeiin hain!!

Raj-Mujhse nahi hoga naina...nahi hogaa!!..

Raj breaks down...Naina hugs him..

Naina-ITs ok....I am sorry!!...TUm shayd unhe maaf nahi kar paogey!..you were right!..Its ok...sorry...please roona bandh karo...

Naina was ruffling with his hair!.

Naina-Hey kahin is sab mein shart toh nahi bhul gayee??

Raj smiledd..

Naina-Chaloo apni barbadi se tumahrey chehrey par smile toh aayyi!..

Raj naina ko tightly hug karta hain!!..

Raj-Tumahre bina kya karonga??

Naina-Kuch nahi kar paogey!!

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Next day morning....Raj is getting ready!..

Navin comes there..

Navin-Acha hua tu tayar hogaya!..We are going shoppingg!!

Raj-Dude whos gonna go to office then?....The girls are supposed to do this shooping and stuff guys are supposed to work!!

Navin-Not one day before your enagagement!...We are not going today!....We are going shooping!..Its your engagement so like you have to wear some good clothes!!....

Raj-Navin..I am going to office!

Navin-We are leaving in 15 mins for shopping!...Change into casuals!..

Naina enters!

Navin-Please handle this guy!

Naina-What happened?

Navin-He wants to go to office!...

Naina-Umm Raj we are going shopping and you have to come along!!.....

Raj-Yeah alright I'll just change and come!..

Navin was flabergasted!!

Navin-Raj i dunt believe this!...I have been trying to convince you and naina said it once and its like a rule!!...

Raj-Umm Navin I'll be ready!..I guess Rosy was looking for you!!

Navin shoook his head!!..

And left!!

Naina-Kyun nakhre dikha rahe the!

Raj-Ahan!...Tum aa rahi hoon toh mein bhi aa raha hoon!!....

Naina--HMmm....

Raj--Aur batao!...How was your night?

Naina-Huh?...It was good!..

Raj--DId you dream about me?

Nainaa--Raj are you alright??....

Raj-Yea..Just enjoying my last few ages of bachelorhood!!..

Naina smiled!!

Raj-Ab tum yahan yuhin khadi rahogi toh mein tayyar kaise hoonga?? (typically the way he said it in Lrl!!)

Naina-Kyun mere samne change karne mein koi problem!!...KAhin tumhe sharm toh nahi aa rahi!!..

Raj looked at her naughtily!!...

Raj-Well I dont mind aggar mein tumhare samne change karta hoon toh tumhe bhi wahi karna hoga!!

Naina-Hmmm kuch zyada hi naughty hoo gaye hon!!

Raj-Tumahre pyar mein ho gaya hoon jaan!...

RAj starts removing his buttons!!

Naina--Rukoo...mein jaati hoon phir change kar le lena...

Raj--Kyun sharm aa rahi hain!!

Nainaa--Raj stop!..

Naina turns to leave...

Raj usse pakad leta hain!!...

Raj's hand moving on her tummyy!!..

Her hand placed on top of his!!..

Naina-Raj chodo....get ready please we are getting late!

Raj-Naina....kya tum jaanti hoon mein tumse kitna pyar karta hoon??

Naina--Raajjj...

Just then the door knob turns!!

Aky-RAj are youuuu (almos screamin this part) and then slowly says Readddyy...

Aky-Sorry...rong tym!..

Aky turns around to go!!

Raj--Ummm Di...

Aky stops...Raj lets go of Naina...

Raj--Woh mein actually wo...umm..naina ne umm ahh wohh

Aky(still with her back facing them)

Aky is giggling!!

Aky-Umm woh actually raj umm woh its ok!!...MY timing was rong.........umm woh uhh umm sorry!!    

Aky-Kya mein ghum jaoon??

Raj--Ofcourse!!...

AKy smiled...Naina was blushing!..

Naina--Umm mein aati hoon....

And she went out!...AKy smiled....

Aky--Hmmm...

Raj-Hmmm...

AKy started laughing...

Aky-Get readyyyyyyyyyyy (she screamed)

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At the mall!!...Aky Naina ROsy and Neelu go different and Aakash NAvin Raj Aalekh go different!

Naina takes some clothes and goes into the trail room!!....Aky standing outsidde..Uss waqt Raj spotted her!...

RAj goes there...

Raj-Di woh aapko Neelu dondh rahi thi....she wanted to show you some dress....(phaink raha tha)


He went outside that trail room!...

Suddenly after 2 minutes Naina opened the latch she saw someone standing there.....and she knew di was waiting outsidee and said..."Di andar ayye na woh button nahi ho raha hain"....

RAj had the biggest grin ever!!..

He gladly went in!!......

Naina was tryin hard to put the button which was at the back of her dresss.......

She was struggling....Raj peche se aata hain.....darwaza lock karta hain...

Naina sees his refelctiion in the mirror...she is about to scream....Raj uska mooh bandh karta hain...

Raj--Shhh...Its me...

Naina--Raj tum yahan kya kar rahe hoon??

Raj slowly runs his hadn across her back....Naina was having problems with the last 3.....she had put 2 of them...which were on top....from down there were 3 buttons!!....

Raj touched the button with his one hand...and the other across her bare skin!!...

It sent a shiver in her bodyy!!...

Raj looked into the mirror...just what he had expected...Naina's eyes closeedd...........and her breathing kinda hard!..

Raj smiled!!...

Raj-Aggar yeh button mein laga doon koi problem??

Naina dint say antyhing!!...

Raj removed one of the 2 put buttons!!....

A mourn escaped Naina's lips!!..

Raj smileddd...

Raj-Dusre wala bhi nikal doon??

Naina-Raj pleaseee....

Raj-Please?...Matlab tum keh rahi hoon please remove the button...ok jaan as you say!!..

Raj removed the other button also.......he moved the cloth a little towards the front!!....

Raj placed a kiss on her back!!..

Naina-Rajjj

Raj-Nainaa!!

Naina ne annkhen bandh kar li!!....

RAj smiledd...he placed another kiss on her bare back!!..........with evry kiss naina's heartbeat increased....

Raj smileedddd to himself!!..

He took his hands on her top again....Naina's heartbeats increasing....

Now wat he will remove this also....ohh gawd.....yeh kahan phas gaya...maal ke trail room mein.....

Raj ne sarrey ke sarrey buttons laga diya!!.....

Raj-Daar gayii?...Maal ke trial roms se behter jagah hoti hain!!...

Naina still not speaking!!

Raj-Kuch toh kahoon...acha laga nahi laga.....aisa bhoot jaise baithi hoon....ankhen bandh kar ke!!...

Naina laughed!!..

Naina--I hate you!!..

Raj-But I love you!!..

Raj -- EK hug milega??

Naina hugged him instantly!!....

Raj smiledd!!....

Raj-YOur looking beautiful!...

Naina -Thnx!!.

Raj-Ab jao meri princess go and show it to the others !!..

Naina-Hmm...

AKy's voice from outside !

Aky-Naina kya hua??..Koi problem!..

Naina-Nahi Di bas abhi ayyi!!..

She placed a peck on Raj's lips!

Naina(whisepreing)...DI ne dekh liya toh?

Raj-Let the pro handle it!..

Naina Raised her brow!..

Raj-Ok baba listen bahar jao...di ko dress dekhaney....phir tell her ki chalo neelu aur rosy ko dikhata hain......walk with her....then i will escapeee..jao take care!!

Naina went out!.

AKy-Arrey you look good!!...Waise Raj ko kahin dekhaa??

Naina khabra gayi!...ab kya hoga?...di ne kaisey guess kiyaa??



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