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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 56)

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simply superb particularly the dialogues were awesome Smile

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too good Clap .cont soon........
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@rituka
thnx!!....yep woh maa banne walli hain!!..
raj kya mangeyga??....u will noe!....patiencee!!

@sweta
thnx!

@rani
thnxx!!........

@koolarch
*bows*...lol!...thnx!!

@aarthi
thnxx!!

@ashu
noo probs ashu!!....ohh dunt worry yeh toh sirf kehne ki battien hain....raj aur naina will always play pranks even at 75 wen navin will flirt wid rosy!...lol!!

@yyy
thnxx!!....you will noe!!

@shaina
thnxx!!....naina to haar gayi!...dekhte hain raj kya karwata hain!!

@dolly90
heyyyy thnx a lott!!.......

@varsha
thnxx!!



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PART-34

Aakash and Aky alone in the room!...Aakash went up and latched the door!!..

He turned around and all he saw was a blushing face of his wife!.. Wink

Aakash-Akansha what should i say!...I am so happyyyy!!!

Aky-I knoe Aakash!..

Aakash-Baby you mean the whole world to me!....i lovee you!!.. Embarrassed

Aky blushed!

Aakash kept his hand on her tummy!!..

Aakash-The same feel again feels great!...I knoe how excited i was with shona!...And now!...i am sooooo happyyyy!! Smile

Aky--Okok calm down!..

He cupped her faceee....and he took a deep breath!..

Aakash--I cant love you enough Aky!.. Tongue

Aky looked down!..

He pulled her chin upwardssss

Aakash--I reallly really cant love you enough!!....

He kissed herrrr on her lipsss!!.....


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Naina was finding reasons to run from Raj...Raj ke demand aur normal hoon....yeh toh ho hi nahi sakta!!...

Naina saw Navin

Navin-Naina idhar aa na!

Naina--Hmmm

Navin--Yeh sab tum loggon ka mazak tha na..

Naina-Umm haan bhaiya!

Navin--Uff...mein toh darr hi gaya tha!.. LOL

At a distance she saw RAj coming...

Naina--Main chalti hoon kuch kaam hain!. Wink

Navin got a calll so usne protest nahi kiya..

Naina tried to slowly get into her room.......

Without raj noticing her....suddenly she strtd looking for him...gayab ho gaya.....whatver she went into her room and locked the door first thing....she turned around and closed her eyes....a sigh of relief!..

Suddenly she felt a strong hand holding her!!..

Usne dherre se aannkh kholi....there he was a big grin on his facee

Raj--Bet yaad hain na... Wink

Naina--Umm haan yaad hain!!... Ouch

Raj-SO are you ready?

Naina-Raj tum mujhse pyar karte hoon na......toh yeh sab kyun??...chodo na!! LOL LOL

Raj-No jaan....tumhe ne to kaha tha...keep your proffesional and pesonal life separate!!

Naina--Hmm..Any way kya chahte hoon tum??...A few kisses?? LOL Wink Wink

Raj laughed!

Raj-Itney kaam mein pata logi kya?Iss bar to diwali hain boss!!.. LOL LOL

Naina--Bolo!

Raj-Ok...mere kareeb 5 shart hain!!...

Naina-What????????????

Raj-Mmmmmmmmm

Naina-Raj pleasee

Raj-Sun toh lo!.. Wink

Naina-Bolo...

Raj-No.1 humari is bet ke barrey mein kisi ko pata nahi chalni chahiye.....

Naina soch rahi the... "chalo ek toh timepass hain no problemsss"

Naina-Done! Wink

Raj-Goodd!..ab number 2 tum abhi issi waqt bahar jaoogi aurr navin se baat karogi tumhari aur meri engagement ke bareey mein!!

Naina--What?????? Confused Confused Confused

Raj-Yupp abhi isse waqt....and remember kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye humari shart ke barrey mein.....

Naina sochi ab toh phasey...but acctually itna bura bhi nahi hain....bbhai man jayengey!

Raj-Jaooo i will be waiting! Wink

Naina-Areyy bakki ke toh batao!

Raj-Waqtt aaney par sarrey bata donga jaan!!....ab jao...abhi ke liye itna kafi hain!....kahi mere dost ko heart-attack na aa jaye!..

Raj hassa naina nikli!..

Bahar Navin office ke liye tayyar ho raha thaa!

Naina-Bhai aapse baat karni thi

Navin-Hmm bol!

Naina-Bhai raj aur mein...i mean mein...matlab hum...yeh we we want to get engaged!!...

Navin ko lagga jhatka achanak sagai ka bhoot!!...

Navin--Aise achanak kyun?? sab theekh hain na!!... Wink

Naina--Haan bas we just want to get engaged.....actually aap aur rosy bhi toh i mean hum 4 saath saath engaged ho jayengey!..

Navin-Naina kya hua hain tujhe? Embarrassed

Naina-Kuch nahi...can we get engaged??

Navin--Ofcourse naina...aggar tum duno chahthe hoon toh sure!...jab miya biwi razzi toh kya karega qazi??

Naina smiled and left!..

Naina--Raj all done!

Raj-Hmmm i must say i am impressed!...ab tumhari is bravery ke liyee mein tumhe kya toofa doon??

Naina--Bass baki ka kaam khatam karoo aur mujhe is contract se mukti!!

Raj--Aaram se...abb bakkki ke sharteyy sagai ke baad!!

Naina--What?????????tab takk tumse ufff..

Raj--So ab tumhara innam nahi chahiye kya? Wink

Raj came forwarddddddd....close to herr..

Naina--Not realllyyy!!

Raj sealed her lips with his!....she dint noe anything more!...mil gaya usse toofa!!..

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Navin knocked on Aakash's door!..

Aakash-Navin aa na!.

Navin-Aakash sorry to disturb but woh naina se baat huyi

Aakash--Hmm

Navin--She wants to get engaged soon!

Aakash-Ok dats good newss!!..Isnt it?....koi problemm??

Navin--I dunnoo....bada ajjeb tha....suddenly sagai...anyway iiss sabki tayyari waise toh Aky karti but since uski yeh halat hain....kya iska aarangement tum kar sakte hoon....mein tere patni ka dost nahi tera bhi to dost hoon...iss nateein tujhse yeh favour mang sakta hoon na LOL LOL

Aakash-Ofcourse mein sab sabhal loonga!

Aky-Excuse me!...meri kya halta hain haan?...I am fine!

Navin--Madame tum apne bachey ka khayal rakho!..bakki hum dekh lengey!...I am sohappy for you Aky... Smile

Navin gave Aky a hug!...

Navin got up and looked at Aakash..

Navin-Hope you dint mind that!... LOL LOL

Aakash smiled..

Navin-Well tumhari biwi waise bhi meri bahut achhi dost hain...aur tum bhi mere dost so

Aakash--So you can hug her when her husband is around!.. Wink

All 3 laughedd

Navin-Ab mein jaa raha hoon!!...

Aakash-Office?Itni jaldi??

Navin-Haan kuch kaam tha....Raj badd mein jaa rahha hain...so i thought i will leave early!

Navin--HMm.tum sab sabhal lena please....and thnx!

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Navin is leaving forr office just then he passes from naina's room!....He hears her voice!..

Dekho please chodo koi aajayega Raj...

Ahh...Ohhh ....Rajj ....(naina was mourning with pleasure)

Navin woh aawazein sun kar wahan se chala jata hain!!...

Uske maan mein ek ajjeb kashmakash hain.......usse kahin na kahiin yeh baat sathi nahi jaa rahi thi ki naina itni baadii ho gayii hain......woh ab.....was he over-reacting....or maybe just because naina uska sab kuch hain!....mum dad ke baad....navin has loved naina a lot!..shayad isliye!!

He reaches his office!...

Still lost in how life had changed over they years....and trying to tell himself that naina had grown now!!...

Frustration and tension clear on his facee

Rosy was passing by from there and like alwasy she stealed a glance at him from the glass door!..

But this time he looked upsett tensed.....fighting himself!..

Rosy looked around....rules kabhi kabhi toodh sakte hain na....she walked in......

Navin dint even notice her entry...only when she called his name did he realize she was there....andd he knew he was going to be interogatted by her!! LOL

Rosy-Navin...

Navin-Um....ah....haan..

Rosy-Whats the matter .......koi problem

Navin--Nono nothing...

Rosy-Your face doesnt agree with you!..

Navin got up from his chair and sat on the sofa kept nearby........his head burried in his hands!!..

Rosy knew something was not right!!

She went and sat by his side!..

Took his hand into hers.....

Rosy-Kya baat hain Navin?...mujhe nahi baatoagey?

Navin had a tear in his eye... Cry

Navin-What do I do Rosy...I am confuseedd....I really am...

Rosy-Whats the matter Navin?

Navin narrates to Rosy that Aky is pregnant and that when he was leaving he had heard Naina mourning...

Rosy rubeed his hand...

Rosy-Navin I perfectly understand how you feel...

Navin-No you dont!...No one does...

Rosy sat quiet letting him speak...he needed to speak and she was ready to listen..

Navin-Mom dad passed away when we were very young....ever since then Naina has been the only person in my life...i have loved her so much and i still love her and i knoe i will love her all my life....how much ever we fight and pull each others leg....she is very very special to me.....and i mean i call her "baccha" its not that i dunt like raj i mean raj is a very good guy i knoe naina cant get a better guy....then why do i feel this?...I just am not able to accept that naina has become a big girl!!...i meann she is big but pata nahi kyun i am feeling this way...i knoe its rong....but kya karon....jitna soch raha hoon utna confuse hoo raha hoon....

He couldnt speak further

Rosy kept her hand around his shoulder!!

Rosy-I knoe its difficult for you Navin....but thats the truth...you have always been protective about naina...but now you have to let go of her!...she has her own life and you have yours...doesnt mean you have to love her less....or jus because she gets married she loves you less...she will lovee you always infact after marriage she will love you all the more!!...Its the sub-consicious feeling!....dunt worry!...naina will be fine!!....and shes matured nough!!

Navin nodded.......hee hugged herr

Navin--I really nedded you!..

Rosy smiled--Anytime anyday!...I am always there for you Navin!!.. Wink

Navin-Thanxx a lot!..I feel better!..

Rosy-Alright then I am off..

Navin-Stay a bit longer!!.. Embarrassed

Rosy-I'll leave now and get back earlier so that we can go out!.. Wink

Navin smiled..

Navin-Seeya!
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That night Aalekh and neelu come home and congratulate eacch other!...and they come to knoe about raj-naina's prank also!..

Aalekh-Nautanki!!..

All laugh!..

Aalekh-Okk I have to make an announcement!...

Neelu blushes!...

Aalekh-I and Neelu will be getting married soon!!........

A loud cheer erupts in the whole room!!..

Raj-Thats awesome news buddy!!.....................

Aalekh smiless...

Aalekh-Her brother will be cooming tommorow to see me!....sounds weird but yeah hopefully if he likes me then we will get married soon!... Wink

Navin-Awesome stuff and even i have to announce something..

He looks at Naina...

NAvin--MY sister...my little baby sister has become a very big girl today!...I have arranged for her engagemnt to the most handsome bachelor in town Mr.Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!!.....

A loud cheer erupts this time too!.

Shona sits there confused!!..

Shona-Papa Alu and Elu going to play Marriage-Marriage??

Aakash-Umm yeah baby!...they will play marriage marriage!!... Wink

Shona-Wow!...Even shona can play??

Aalekh pulled neelu closer!..

Aalekh-Only to an extent!..

Neelu punched him!!..

Raj-Thnx NAvin..

Navin smiledd..

Navin--DAy after tommorow is a good day!...We will have the engagement that day...ok with evryone??

Shona--Nooooooo

Aakash--baby what happned?

Shona--What is Navin asking?....He used some new new word..shona cant understnad? Wink

Aakash-Umm its engagement

Shona-Meaning?

Aakash-Ummmm starting of Marriage-Marriage!!

Shona--Ohh!!...Even Veeru da will play marriage-marriage !!

Aakashh-Hmmm

Shona-Whom will veeru da play with??

Aakash-Nia!..

Shonaa-Wowowo!...Veeruda and Nia will play marriage-marriagee!!...

Aakash smiledd.....naina blushed!!.......

Navin--Ok guys we should get cracking....aakash lets go check out the hotels now!...and naina and raj if its your engagement doesnt mean you can sit just like that and keep romancing all day long!!........make a list of the guests....take aky's help in that.....and aalekh and neelu.....go to the jewwellers shop.....

Rosy-And me?? Wink

Navin looked at her lovingly!!...... Embarrassed

Navin--Umm no work for you!!...Jus sit and dream!..

Raj-Ahem ahem.....rosy its your one-day brothers engagement you should do something....i would like you to choose the location...and aakash i need your help here...so just swap....why dont you stay back and let navin and rosy go!.. LOL LOL Wink

Aakash-Ofcourse...I am off....rosyy enjoy your evening!.. Wink

Rosy smiled and started walking with Navin...

Raj-Excuse me dont forget to book the venue!..... LOL

Navin and rosy laughed!..

Navin-We will think about that!!...

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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Too good dear
Shona is sooooooooooooo sweet.
marraige-2 game. LOL
Raj aur Raj ki sharte my god. Wink Wink Wink
Navin itna sochta kyoun hai? Angry
Naina aur Raj ne to had tak kar di. Ouch Ouch Ouch
Agar Aky na giri hoti to inka drama aur khichta. LOL
Aky n Akash r soon going 2 b mom dad again.Good news.
saari good news ek saath. Wink Wink Wink
Update asap.
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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 3:37am | IP Logged
tooo goood........raj bhi kuch kam nahin hai......loved navin n rosy too........aky n ad also alu n elu wer good1's....

above all d sweet n cute shona......
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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 3:46am | IP Logged
awesome too good very nice asap.

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