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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 48)

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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 2:29am | IP Logged
thnx guys for ur awesome commentss!...and most importantly most of u hv accepted and are happy wid d characters........thnx a lot!...

I am going out now...but before dat 1 quick part!!..

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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 3:03am | IP Logged
PART-29

Next day morning...Raj gets ready for work...goes to NAvins house for breakfast..

He sees Naina there...In the kitchen with Aky..

AKy looks at Raj and smiles to him...he smiles back..

Naina doesnt look up...Rajs eyes fixed on her...Aky whispers something into Nainas ears she blushes looks up and says good morning....

Raj smiles back and says good morning...

Navin-Raj your here for breakfast i suppose... Wink

Raj-Umm yea.. Smile

Raj sits down...navin smiles...

Navin-I was wondering if you will be able to work in office with so many distractions... (naina)

Raj-Umm what do you mean..If you can then even I can!!..

Both smiled..

Shona came out from her room..

Shona-Veeru da.....

Raj-Gud morning Jaa baby..

All started laughing...nain at the kitchen counter blushing...

Shona-Veeru da shona is getting boredd....she wants to go out!!.. Smile

Navin-Where does baby want to go??

Shona-Home.......here evryone is busy busy...Shona can play with her friends atleast in her house..

Aakash-So all have been real busy with their gals that my gal is getting bored...very bad!!.... Wink

Aky-Well yur giving so much time to her na... LOL

All laugh...

Raj-We are gettng latee Navin..

Navin-Hmm lets goo..

Raj-To excitedd to go to office?? Wink

Navin-Shut up lets go..

Raj-Naina dont call me today...I am a bit busy...I have 4 meetings today which I will attend with My SECRETARY...the whole day should go off in that...so dont call me. Wink Wink

Naina was like ???...I nva call him itself...

Navin ka chehra dekhne layak tha..

Navin-Well Naina PLease dont call him....he is bsy with his secretary....

Naina laughed...

Raj winked..

Raj-Chale??

Navin and Raj left!..

Naina ka din yuhin gaya....little bored....sitting and thinking about Raj...same with Raj...aaj toh ek bhi meeting nahi thi!!.....naina ke khayallon mein khuya hua tha..

But Raj tried his best to send rosy to navin...kisi na kisi bahaney se..

Raj-Ummm Navin ke pass mera file hain will you get that rosy..

Rosy-Raj stop it...subah see 5 baar you have sent me to Navin for some silly reason.... LOL

Raj-Rosyy go and spend some time with him..I am fine with that....I mean I dunno what he must be feeling..I am here with his girlfriend...making her work...please go to him...

Rosy-Listen we are not teenagers ok...we are adults...kaam ke time pe sirf kaam....so please stop it now..

Raj-Uff your weird...you dunt want to be with ur boyfriend?? Wink

Rosy-Noooo Smile

Raj-I hope my girlfriend doesnt feel the same.

And bang a file on Raj's head!..

Rosy-Stop dreaming about her!! LOL LOL

Raj--You are weird!! LOL LOL

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Aalekh and neelu..

Neelu-DUnt go to office today please!.

Aalekh--Ahem ahem...your getting romantic!.

Neelu-Shut up I dunt feel like cookingg please stay back..

Aalekh--Umm ok....

Aalekh dropped his bag....and went forward getting close to neelu..

Neelu-Stop....not in the morning....ryt now i want you to cook for me...

Aalekh--Neelu..

Neelu--Yeah..

Aalekh--One kiss..

Neelu--Nooooo

Aalekh-2

Neelu--Nooooooooooo

Aalekh-I m going to office!

Neelu was thinking...ok

She kissed him...

He responded....

Neelu--done now cook.. Wink

Aalekh-Ur mean LOL

Neelu and Aalekh spent that day with each other....Romancing cooking eating...everything!.. a perfect day!...

Raj Naina Navin Rosy....Away from their love for that day!!...

Aakash and Aky had a perfect day with shona...shona never had that much fun in her life...she had some awesome time with her mum and dad!!.....

Naina left for C&G..it was too touhg not to go... LOL

Naina went straight to Raj's cabin..

Raj was finally looking into some file without thinking about her...

Naina came and sat right in front of him..

He looked up and smiled...back to his file..

Naina frowned..

Naina--Excusee me!!......

Raj looked up...

Naina-I am here and ur working..

Raj shook his head...rubbed his eyes..

Naina frowning.

Raj-Is it you??

Naina-No its my ghost!! Angry

Raj-Naina ..oo god...

Naina-finally you remebered me..

Raj-Its not that way..since this morning I am imagining that your with mee...I can see you evrywhere....in my fileee on my laptop screen....in my cabin...i am jus seeing you...so i thght this was also imagination.. Wink

Naina blushed..

Naina-Its been the same with me..

Raj smiled..

Raj-Mann we couldnt stay away for few hours...

Naina smiled..

Naina-Ok now I am really here....and what are we doing chatting about some crap..

Raj-What do you want me to do... Wink

Raj got up from his seat and locked the cabin door!..

Naina--Ok I dint mean that... Embarrassed

Raj-Well you dint mean what?

Naina-Rajjj

Raj--Naina...

Naina--Raj we are in the office....please..

Raj-The door is locked jaan..

Before anything else..Raj was kissing naina's neck....naina holding his head....raj caught hold of her hand...turned her around....and again his chin rubbing against her shoulder....he dint stop this time...he kissed her shoulder....his hand on her waist....going left right left....he was just lost in her...and naina well obviously already seduced!!...

The romance continued for 10 mins..

Raj-Uff I have never done anything of this sort in my cabin...and today coz of you I have!! Wink

Naina blushed..

Naina-Raj I missed you...

Raj-- LOL Naina Its been just a few hours...

Naina-I knoe I am crazy!!..

Raj-I am crazyy too....Man seeing you and not touching you is so irritating...

Naina blushed some more..

Naina-I am outta here now..

Raj caught her hand.

Raj-Not just now...stay on for some more time..

Naina-Then I would gift you tommorow mornings newspaper...probably you and me in a lip-lock...and a beautiful article on that...wat say?? LOL LOL

Raj-Seeyaa...I hate newspaper gifts!! Wink

Naina left...both kinda happy!..
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Ok I noe pointless update...jus bit of r-n romance saved my skin!...sorry for this not-so-impressive update!...

I dunoo jus not in the modd today.....nothing striking me....I itself aM not satisfied after writiing..but i m posting!..otherwise u guys wld hv to wait....so jus try nd njoy d r-n romance!!........sorry once again!!!

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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Embarrassed damn hillarious and romantic...braaaavo dear....it was like u r watching them all and giving us live commentary.....u shameless creature Wink LOL brilliant yaar...love every bit of it...man every time i say this line and it feel new for me everytime....i really mean it...suuuuperb..thankuuuu sooooooooooo muuuuuuuch for this cute funny part.... Clap can't resist myself to give u a round of appalause....
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 3:38am | IP Logged
tooo good..........also loved d choice of charachters.........rn r reallly cute together........
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 3:58am | IP Logged
ME STUPID.FOOL.WEIRED.EVERY GOOD PRAISE WILL BE LESS FOR ME...U KNOW WHAT I DIDN'T COMMENT ON PART 25...HOW CAN U NEVER MIND..........
any way here goes my comment....love Alekh....what a character sketch have u given....a really true great friend...RN r soooooooooooooooo hot and romantic..issssssss... Embarrassed Akash is tooooooo good..love him for teasing RN shamelessly...they deserve this...Aky and Akash convo was hillarious LOL suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb ...thankuuuuuu soooooooooo much for this WORLD'S AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING part... Clap
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 5:08am | IP Logged
too good
update soon.......
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 5:16am | IP Logged
@rani
live commentary!!...lol!!....hahah!...u luvd evry bit of it...nw dat cant be...i said it wasnt a very nice part...but u still luvd evry bit of it....gud!..lol!!......

@lipi
ohh well thnx a lot lipi!..

@rani
well i did notice dat u dint comments on 2 chaps...but i jus was reli busy....sorry yaar!...i did rmmbr u!....but i had cozins cme down!...we used to be awake all nyt sleep in d day tym...nd lyk i said there were othrs occupying my room!...nd to ur comments....alekh is no doubt a true frnd!....thnxx!!..aaksh teases dem big tym!!..lol!!

@rituka
thnx!!

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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 6:24am | IP Logged
hey simply super sis,

i liked the part Raj dreamin abt NAina n NAina realy appeared in front of Raj,


Clap ,

u'r dialogues n scene presentation is realy super,


very wel writen n presentation rocked in u'r ff,

god bless u,

a complete hatz off 2 u dear, Clap



al the best 4 the next part, Embarrassed


Aarthi

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