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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 35)

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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Kuan tha baba vo jo do logon ko ek doosre se pyaar bhi nahi karne deta hai.Koi media waala hi hoga.I really hate dat ppl.Update soon.

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waiting eagerlyyyyyyyyyyy for da update
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thnx sweta

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thnx.....both r dating...lol!...so u like shona a lot..gud!...glad that somewhere i help u make a good day!!..

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thnxx a lott!..

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thnx...rosy-navin-raj wala job prob we will solve later......
villian...dekh lena nxt updt mein...koi villian hain ya kuch aur

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arey areey media waley nahi the not to worry!!..



Well kise ne kaha villian toh kisi ne kaha media waleyy...hahah!...dekh lo is update mein!! kaun the woh
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PART-22

Lost in each other unaware of the pair of eyes looking at them....

2 people enter..

A man and a woman with him...

Man-Ahem ahem.....

Raj and Naina break....

Both embaraased..

Man looks at the woman disgusted..Start walking!

Man--Yeh aaj ki pidi bhi na...apne aap ko kya samjhati hain...aisee pavitra jagah mein yahi sab karte hain....hum thodi der baad aatee toh hey aalah...

Raj looks at Naina both badly embarrased...

The man had white hair and a white moustache...and the lady was wearin a burkha!.

Woman--Chodiye hum apne kaam se kaam rakhte hain aur jitni jaldi ho sakeey yahan se nikal te hain...

Raj and Naina dint noe wat to do..

Raj--Jee woh sorry...actually..

Man-Bas bas...kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi...chaloo (he tells the lady)

Raj and Naina are feeling weirdo!..

Raj and Naina sitting in one corner...while the other two have gone..

Raj--Mann this is so weird..

Naina--Tell me one thing they looked aged...I mean itni sarri sedi...

Raj-I noe like aalekh says a thousand stepss!.well jo bhi hain.....just ignore...koi badmash bhi ho sakte hain...

They were silent!..

Man and Woman come back to where they are..

Man-Naam kya hain?

Naina-Complaint likhwaogey....jao Mr. and Mrs Rajveer singh shekhawat...

Man--Areey Shadi Aab tak nahi huyi hain na.........

He got a stamp on his foot..

Man--Ahhh wo ahh shadi kab huyi aap loggon ki?

Raj--Ek minute jis tarah apney pehle kaha aapko kaise maloom ki humari shadi nahi huyi..

Man-Umm

Naina calls Raj in the corner..

Naina--Apna koi admi hain Raj..

Raj--Haan kaun?

Naina-Hain hi kaun humare ghar mein...bhai to Rosy ke saath hain...toh bacha..

Raj and Naina--Aalekh!..

The man trieed to act confused!..

Man--Aap kya keh rahen hain....aap to mujhe hi maarengey....chalo chalteyy hain..(to the lady)

Woman-Chalo..

They turn!..

Raj-Aalekhh bahut hi ghatiya tha jo bhi tumne kiya...

Naina--You guys cant be like us come what may!.... LOL LOL

Raj--Now stop the natak and remove your burkha neelu....or even worse could be di.. Wink

Man and Woman look at each other no other choice...the woman removes her burkha..and the man his false moustache and wig..

Turn around..

Raj and Naina laughing!!!..

They exchange hi-fi's...

Raj--You guys cant be raj and naina... LOL

Aalekh-Whatever....we did succede in making you feel embarrased.. Confused

Naina--But we caught you red handed!!.. LOL

Neelu--Okk fine now forget that.. Angry

Raj--your caught na forget it.. LOL

Neelu--Raj stop it.. Embarrassed

Raj--Mission Fail.. Smile Smile

Naina and Raj start laughing.. LOL

Naina--What made you think to do all this..

Aalekh-Badla...how much you guys have irritated us....dunt we have to take revenge....now that you guys are you knoe love birds again...the war is on again.. LOL LOL

Raj--Naina we should consider breaking up.. LOL

Raj and Naina started laughing..

Raj--Aalekh...you learnt from your guru and your tryin to fool your guru...not happening!!...

Aalekh-Be on your guard...you'll get caught some day!!..

Raj-We will be waiting!!... LOL

They have their dinner and get home!...

Naina goes to her room picks up her night gown and goes to change....

She is still thinking about the time she spent with Raj.....her heart was so happpy!!

SHe changed and came out Aky sitting on the bed,,

Aky--THinking about Raj..

Naina--No.. Embarrassed actually woh

Aky--Yes,,

Naina--No di...

Aky-Well your dress says dat..

Naina looked at her dress..

Naina--Huh?

AKy-When did you purchase a black night piece??

Naina--Ohh I am so sorry this one is yours...I dint notice..

Aky--Hmm..Right!..

Naina--I ll change nd come..

Aky-Its ok give me yours i will wear that...not a problem!..I aint very fat am I?(she put her hand on her tummy)

Naina gives aky her red gown!..

Aky goes to change!..

Naina standing by the window....

Suddenly from behind someone comes and holds her by her waist and starts playing with her hair..and strts kissin her hair ....and kissing her neck..(from behind)

Person--I missed you so much baby!!...

Still kissing her neck...

Naina assumed it ought to be Raj,,

Naina was standing facing her back..

Naina--Raj stop it someone will see..

Person-Since when have you started romancing with Raj... LOL LOL LOL

Naina--Stop it wel get caught again..

Naina turns around to stand face to face with the person

Naina sees the person its not Raj..

Naina-Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh help....raj ....help help...chor chorr chor!..

Seeing her scream the other person also started screaming!!!!!!

Man--AHhhhhhhhhh shh! shhh!!..I am not chor!

He put his hand over her lips..

Naina--Dont touch me..

Naina--Rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj

Raj heard her screaming and came running into her room...

She ran and huggedd him tighttt!..she was kinda sobbing...

Raj--Naina relax kya hua

Naina--R..RAj wo koi mere saath woh dekho......(pointing to another man standing in the room)

Raj saw his eyes with horror...he was shocked!!..

THe person standing with his back towards raj and naina..

Raj--Kaun ho tum?..Yahan kaise pahunchey...Tumhari yeh harkat karni ki itni himmat.....sala akeli ladki ko dekh liyaa toh shuru ho gaya...mard hain is ghar mein..mein hoon ....ab mard ke tarah apna chehra toh dekha.

Man--Abbey ladki lagti kaun hain teri?

Raj-Sallaaa meri biwi hain kya karega

Raj moves forward to catch that guy and beat him

The person heard all these dialogues and turned around...And Raj got the shock of his life!!!!!!!

Man--Tu apney aap ko mard kehta hain... LOL LOL
LOL

Raj--Tu idhar??..Kar kya raha hain..aisee chorron ki tarah ..
Wink
Man--I knoe chorron se tu itni battein karta hain...bashan deta hain..

Raj-SHut up..

Both forgot about a confused naina standing behind..

Naina--Exucseeeee meee!!!.. Angry

Raj and the guy turned towards her!...

Naina--Raj yeh aadmi yahan mere kamre mein achanak aa gaya aur tum isse gussa karne ke bajee battein wats dat gappe lada rahe hoon...

Both are laughing..

Naina--Isse idiot ko jantey hoon??

Raj--Badkismatii se!..

Man--Hey lekin ruk ruk....tune kaha biwi...kabse boss mujhe to bulaya hi nahi..

Raj-Biwi nahi hain...aise he bol diya..

Man-Girlfriend?

Raj-Hey Navin ki behen hain..

Man--Aiii la!!...Navin ke behen he mili tereko!.. LOL

Raj was blushing!.. Embarrassed

Raj-AIsa kuch nahi hain!.. Embarrassed

Man--Tabhi isse laga ki tum ho

Raj-Huh?

Man--Yaar mein isse apni biwi samjhe ke thoda sa touch kiya....usne kaha raj chodo!...matlab chakkar toh hain boss.. Wink

Raj--Today aint my good day!...Aaj subhe hi teri biwi ne pakda!..aur ab tu..

Man-Hahah!..Waise kab se?

Raj-Lambi kahani kabhi aur batonga!..

Naina stood there still feeling disgusted..

Naina in her mind "bladi hell kisi aur ko yuhin kiss karta hain phir sorry bhi nahi bolta!!.." kaise pati hain yeh

Raj-Waise Naina meet Aakash AKy di ka pati!...

Aakash went to her..

Aakash-Hi I am so sorry...I mean mujhe laga Aky hain..

Naina--Its ok...(still not convinced)

AKy came out rushing....

Aky-Kya hua kaun chila raha tha?

AKy saw Aakash..

Aky-TUm yahan??

Aakash-Tumse milney jaan..

Aakash went and hugged her..

Aakash-Missed you

Akansha-Me too..

Aakash cupped her face...

Raj-Ahem ahem...hum abhi bhi yahin hain!..

Aakash-Janta hoon!..Chotey bachhe hoon...ankhen bandh karo!..ya phir hume copy karo....better option..

Akansha was blushing..

Aky-Shh!!

Aakash-Areey biwi hoon...

Aakash placed a soft peck on her lips!..

Aakash was looking at her..

Raj-Ho gaya?

Aakash-Sala romance mein bhi nahi chodega..

Raj--Aakash shadi ke 5 saal ho gaye!..ab kaisa romance!..

Aakash-Kyun koi rule hain kya business ka...5 saal ke bad no romance!...wel mein toh romance karonga even wen I am 80!!.. LOL

Raj started laughing!.. LOL LOL

Raj-Haan phir di yeh ayega...

Raj mimicking how an old man walks....back shaking and stammering..

Raj-Mein..Mein tumsee bahut pyar karta hoon....ek doon na...chummmmaaaa

Raj was laughing.. LOL LOL

Raj-Chumma toh nahi milega thapad se kaam chala lena!! LOL LOL


Aakash--Areey bhagwan woh kahan hain?

Raj-Kaun teri girlfriend? LOL

Aakash-Bahut khush lag raha hain...bajata hoon teri band pehle bata teri girlfriend kahan hain?

Raj--Yeh rahi...(poinitng to naina)

Aakash-Purani waali..

Naina looked at Raj..

Raj-Abeyyy rishta todega kya..kiski baat kar raha hain? LOL

Aakash--Areey meri betii teri choti girlfriend..

LOL LOL

Raj-Oh haan mere saath thi navin ke kamre mein leke aata hoon..

Aakash--Is girlfriend ke saath maza kar mein milta hoon..

Naina somehow dint even smile...she dint like this guy!!..


Shona was playing with Raj's phone waiting for him to come..

Aakash-Shonaa baby!!

Shona turned!!...

Shona-Dadddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

He knelled making way for her to come and hug him...she came runninggggggggg..

Shona-Daddddddd shona so happy happy you are here....veeruda promised you will come!..

Aakash-Eyy le idhar bhi veeru da veeru da...baby how are you?

Shona-Finey finey!..

Aakash-come lets go!..

Shona caught her dad's hand and walked with him a big smile on her face!!..

Shona-Mamaamm see dad!..

Aky-I saw jaan...come now change your clothes..

Aky picked some clothes and took shona to change!..

Naina-Mein pani aur kuch khane ko lati hoon..

Naina left..

Raj-Aur sab kaise hain..

Aakash-Sab theek hain yaar...baki I amm really sorry...mujhe laga ki aky hain..i think shes still feeling weird...meri taraf se sorry bol dena..

Raj-Its ok chil...Meri girlfriend hain..not to worry!.Waisey yahan pahuncha kaise?

Aakash-Tum to mahan log...main door khula tha...sab log kamre mein..aa gaya yeh chor andar!..

Raj-Ohh..

Aakash-Bakii your too funny....chor se batein kar raha hain...kaun ho..batoon..mard hoon mein..(he mimicked him)

Raj-chup bey!..

Aakash-Waise naam kya hain uska?

Before Raj could say

Shona-Kiska dad?

Aakash--Us ladki ka

Shona-Niaaaa..

Naina entered with water and stufff..

Aakash took water from the tray..

Aakash-Thnx

Aky-Waise tum Aakash ko dekhkar chilayi?

Raj was like phir se topic kyun khola..

Aakash--oh chodo woh sab...tumhari tabyat ko kya hua??lag to rahi hoon thekh-thak....

Aky-thekh hoon yaar yeh tumhara dost he mujhe bemar bana raha hain..

Aakash--Baat to aise kar rah hoon jaise tumhara kuch nahi hain...bhai he yaar!!...badkismatti se hi sahi lekin bhai hain na!

All were laughing!!..except yea naina who else!!

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Aakash Das...Husband of Akansha...He and Raj were a part of the same basketball team when in school(aakash was senior)..Later on they got into different colleges...But The college in which Aakash studied Aky joined the same college!..Thus began a new tale of love!..Later on Aakash came to knoe that Raj is the cousin of aky.. So Raj is very freindly and calls him Aakash rather than jiju!...He made him meet Navin..His family his friend..His evrything!.And aakash and navin got along well too!!

Aakash Das!. played by Ankurr Nayar (apna guny yar)


Very nice down-to-earth guy!..Loves his wife loads..and plans to flirt with her even at 80..just like Navin does... LOLHe is basically a very nice chap..he is having his own business.
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Well I had no other choice...this guy has driven me crazy in the past few days!!...My New FAvourite Hero!!....I had to Bring him in!...Lovee ya!!...

Edited by cool~~gal - 24 May 2008 at 6:21am

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awesome too good very nice waiting gfor next
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