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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 22)

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
Too good!!Awesome!!!

Shona is so sweet Smile !!!!

Akansha seems to be smelling a rat Wink !!!!!

And Rosy is also very sweet.She cares for Raj and is happy for him!!!!

I liked the name...Nia but aalekh as Alu LOL !!!!!

It was nice to see the old Raj back again!!!

Hope Shona just brings loads of happiness into their life...his little angel!!!Haan aur usse dekh kar dil mein yeh khayal zaroor yega ke ....umm.... Embarrassed unka bhi ek aisa hi.... you know someday.......!!!!

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 1:49am | IP Logged
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part asap.
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:39am | IP Logged
@rani
thnxx nd ur welcme...lol!...

@yyy
yuppp bulls eyes....shes a lil kid who is related to raj...
and navin will be there not to worryyy....he is busy in officee doing work u see...ahem ahemmm i wont say wat work...lol!...i ll see to it theres more of navin

@swetaa...
thnxx..

@ritukaa
thnxx..

@lipi..

thnxx

@shainaa
thnxx a ton....nia nd alu....haha!...shona definately will bring hapiness into their livess.....areey tumhe toh bahut jaldii hain shona jaiseeyy bachi ka......sabar my friend sabar..... :) Tongue Tongue

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:53am | IP Logged
when r u updating plxzzzzzzzzzzz do it now only asap with long part
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PART-14..

Shona was busilyy eatingg the chocolatee that naina gave her....welll there was less of it in her mouth there was more of the chocolate on her hands and mouth and face....

Just then shona turned around and saw Aluuuuuuuuu.......

Shonaaaa ran to alu......aalekh bent down on his kness so that she could reach him......she ran and huggedd him tightt....leaving some beutifull designs on aalekhss shirt....

Shonaaa--Aluuuuuuu I missseddd you so much....why couldnt you come before......

Alu--Sorry princesss your veeru da dint tell me..

SHona loked angrily at RAj....Like as though she was angry.......

Shona--Why dint you tell him veeru da??..(she askedd screaing at the top of her voicccee)

Raj was smiling within..

Raj--Baby i dint knoe that you were cming....mommy dint tell me..

Shona now looked at her moomyy...

Shona--Why dint you tell veeruu da that we are comingg??

Akansha--Baby daddy dint tell me...he told me just today morning...nd i dint have time to tell veeru da..

Shona looked at her mom grasped what she was saying and started cryingg...

she sat down where she was and started crying at the top of her voicee...Raj got up and quickly went over to her...hugged her tight..

Raj--Babyy why are you cryingg see alu has come noww no need to cry...

Raj was trying to make her stop..

Shona--(was crying nd talking)..I am..m.mm..missing myy daddaa....

ANd she was cryingg again..

Raj--Baby dad has some workk he will come soon....

Shona=-Promisee.??

Raj--Ummmm yea promise...

SHona immediately wiped her tears...

SHona--Veeru da wheres Navy...??

Naina laughed she figured out who that could be....
Raj---I'll call him..

Naina--No raj hes come...

Raj was shockedd how on earth did naina knoe he has come..

Raj--You can feel him huh??...bro-sis connectionn

Naina started laughing..

Naina--Hear him...you hear the honk....thats my broo mr.impatientt he'l keep honking....

All of them had a gud laugh..In no timee Navin reached and had some unexpected guest...

Navin entered--Heyy shonaa woow your here...

Shona ran and hugged him....

Navin--How are you my baby?

Shona--I am fine Navy...

Navin--Hey aky...how have you been??

(Navin was the only guy who was so comfortable with akansha....he always called her aky.....She was like a pal to him though Raj who is the same age calls her di...navin calls her aky...)

Aky--GUdd navin....you??

Navin--Gudd----with your brother and my sister eating my life....

Aky--Ohh i hope they rnt much of a probb (aky said with a wide grin)

Akansha used to come over oftenn with shona in these 2 years but she had hrdd lots of storiess about the mischeiff of raj nd naina..from navin who else)(probably thats why they got close)

THe people sat around chatting about stuff...

After about 20 mins...Neelu entered..

Shona saw her and frowned...she dint noe who this was...

Shona--Veeru da....(she pointedd to neelu)

Raj--Hey neelu...

Raj went up greeted her nd hugged her...

Shona's face was worth watching....with a big frown..

SHona--Soo now shes d new angel huh??

Raj smiled..

Raj--Oh baby your my angell no one else..

Shona--Then why did you hug her??(shona asked with a sad face)

Raj--Just like that coz she is my friend..

Shona--Ok...are you gonna get married to her??

RAj laughed...a four-year old talking about marriage...

He looked at his sis...

Raj--Not bad at 4 she knoes marriage...

Aky-Ohhh well.....you knoe how she is....she wanted to listen to a story of her father and me....so i used this word by mistake and shes been askin that to anyone possiblee she doesnt knoe wat it means..

they all were laughin..

Raj--Baby i aint getting married to neeluu...someone else mightt(raj said with a wide grinnn looking at aalekhh..)

Aalekhh's face was redd...and so was neelu...

Neelu just sppoke to otherr nd stuff...they all settled down....dinner timee!..

Naina Aky and neelu preparedd some food...

Navin-Raj left early today??

RAj--Yepp...

Navin--You could have told me they are coming i would have come along..

Raj-Ohh i dint knoe that...was a surprise...

Navin-Then where were you??

Raj--With naina..

Navin looked upp

Navin--What were you doing with her??

RAj laughed remembering this morning's incident..

Raj--on a date wat else??

Navin spat out the water he was drinking..
Raj started laughing...and aalekhs face was worth watching...

Aalekh--On a date???(he askedd puzzledd)

Raj got what aalekh was thinking and now raj was caught...he had to give up on playing with navin....coz aalekh was serious..

Raj--Umm aalekhh we were just kidding this morning about naina and me....so navin got protective nd stuff...nothing of that sort....(he added that sort with a smugg)

Aalekh--I thought we could party tonight...if you and naina were you knoe...(aalekh said with a smilee)

Raj--Navin would not leave me alivee to give you a party

Aalekh--I think navin would be hapy why navin??

NAvin-Well dunt even think about it aalekh naina has a 100 times better choice...she wont choose thiss idiot of all people in this world....she would die a virginn but her choicee is better than raj...

Aalekhh was laughing hardd within himself...yeaa rytt her choice is just this navin....pitty the day wen you come to noe...

RAj wanted to laughh at this statement but it hurt him somewhere....was he so bad??...

Raj got serious and asked navin

Raj-Itna bura hoon kya navin??

Navin realizedd maybe he over-said...

Navin-Umm..(before he could complete)(naina enteredd)

She heard the conv and she knew raj would feel bad

Naina--Noo tum itne bhi bureyy nahi hoon..

RAj turned back..

Naina--bura mera bhai hain...you noe raj you are a veryy nicee guy....I mean a 100 times better than my bro..my next affair will be with you only.. Wink
Navin looked at naina..

RAj surprisedd no doubt...

Navin--Haan haan uski sidee loogi na...akhir tumahra so-called-boyfriend jo nikla...

And navin used to wrong word at the wrong time...shona came running from nowhere...

Shona--Wats the wordd you jus used....so--given-boyfriend..

Raj looked at navin saying "explain""

Navin--Umm baby arent you hungry??

Shona--I am but first the new word..I love learning new words..

Navin--Not of this kind(he said slowly)

Raj hrd that and was laughing..

Raj--Shonaaa did you speak to dada.??

Shona--Nooo where is the phone...daddaaaaaaaaa

Raj--Moommy's got it...go...

Shonaa ran outta there...

RAj--Iss baar bachayaa agali baar nahi bachonga....navin yeh yahin hainn tohh thoda soch samajh ke bat kar....aurr to bhi aalekh..

Navin and aalekh--yes sir..

RAj--I dunt want myy baby to be spoilt by both of you...

Navin--Naina ko bhi bol na..woh bhi yahin hain

Raj said almost instantly...

Raj--I knoe her woh aisa kuch nahi karegii i trust her..

Naina looked at Raj...

There eyes met...andd thenn naina looked down..

Raj saw her shying away and smiled to himself....

NAvin--Ohh meri behen mein kuch zyada hi barosa hain. LOL LOL ..jab tumse kaam ho jayega tumhara sarra barosa todh ke jayegi..she'll dumpp you.....(navin said laughing) LOL LOL

Little did he knoe how much impact what he said had..

RAj looked at Naina this time no one daring to look away....they just kept staring at each other...

Naina--Is baar Nahi chood ke jaongi...promisee

Raj dintt say anything......he keptt looking at her......

Navin noticedd this..

NAvin--Kya hua??iss baar matlab kya??

NAin-Umm kuch nahi mein khana laga ke aati hoon..

And naina ran outaa there..

RAj staring at her..

Navin--Kuch zyada hi ho raha hain Raj..

Raj--Umm kyaa??

Navin--Tumhara naina ko dekhna..

Raj--Umm nahi...aisa nahi hain...

And came the call for dinner....

Navin--Hey chalo aky bula rahi hain..

Raj--Hey keep ur eyes of my sister.....shes married with a kidd you noe...

Navin laughed..

Navn--You keep your eyes off my sister and i promise ill do the same..

BOth smmileddd and leftt the room....



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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 5:55am | IP Logged
awesome too good lovely part waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 6:28am | IP Logged
super super super,


excelent dialogues n the small kid soooooooo cute n sweet Embarrassed


realy gud dear,likd the last 2 updates a lot,a complete hatz off 2 u,


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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 7:31am | IP Logged
braaaaaaaaaavo...update was just beautiful...how do u manage to write such update yaar...convo was as usual amazina from top to bottom...excellent dear...thanks for this marvelous update... Clap Clap Clap

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