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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 16)

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ummmmm sister...or ah can't think anything more..

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hey simply super n excelent dear,itz super super n fantastic,

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dialogues r excelent n Alekhs part waz super, Clap


All the best 4 the next part,


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Originally posted by Shaina_b

Awesome!!!! thnxx 

You know it is true ....Time is the best medicine.Raj was right he is not marrying someone else that they need to rush!!!!raj is always ryt... 

By the way is it Elu or Neelu??? i had to tell that in the next part....did i type neelu smewer by mistake or ur simply askn.....??....nyway elu nd neelu re d same....lol!...ull noe in the next part...

And Navin fida on Rosy..... LOL LOL !!!! yuup....

Aalekh always finds the right person to get his job done!!! aalekh is aalekh...

Waise the last part was almost like...."Hi I am Naina.Mujhse dosti karoge?"...... LOL LOL !!!!

Waise who is Shona.....his sister??? patience in the name of god...lol!...ull noe soon...

Are you really going to make Rosy Naina's bhabhi?? who noes...nt thgt bout dat....howzz d idea nyway??

Ab pata chala ke Navin kaise phasa office ein......par Rosy Aalekh ki baaton mein aayi kaise?? aalekh said dat ryt...he flirted wid her for wat?...put nice butter nd gt his wrk done.....ill put that flashback part soon

And she calling Raj weird and Navin flirt and Naina getting angry was LOL LOL !!!! naina is niana...possesive siter nd girlfriend oops as of now lover..lol!...

i wntd to reply to ur post  ystrday shaina...but there was a power cut...so cldnt reply...

 

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PART-10

Naina--Oh man he finally spoke decently with me..

Aalekh--thank godd....some sense in him...

Naina--We were so stupid ,,,,dint think about him....

Aalekh--I think that was right too...Helped us this way...He atleas realized he still feels d same for u...

Naina--RIght...But anyway no more plans...And plan-3 we will execute after sometime....aftr shona goes...

Aalekh--Fine as you say...

Aalekh's fone ringss...

Naina--ROsy?

Aalekh--Ahan elu..

Naina--Hehe!..speakere fone please..

Aalekh--NO..

Naina--Please...

Aalekh puts it on speaker fone..

Aalekh--Hey ELu...

Neelu--Its neeluu....

Aalekh--FOr me elu...tell me why have you called??..arnt you sleepin??

Elu--What??...Are you kidding me.how could i sleep until you dunt get home....Have you seen the time....its 2 45....where on earth are you??

Aalekh looked at Naina....She gave him a fakee bigg smile...

Elu--I am waiting for you Aalekh....Please Come fast..

Aalekhh was all red...

Aalekh--Umm I am with Naina...At her place...shes come down...

elu--Ohh realllyy...Kool....Give the phone to her...

Aalekh--She listening to you go on...its on speaker..

Elu--What??.(silently)could hv told me fooll   --..umm ok hey naina...how are u

Naina was laughing...

Naina--I am fine hw are you??

Elu--Gud...

Naina--SO umm ur waiting for Aalekh??

Elu--Umm yea...

Naina--Sorry i kept you waiting...

Aalekh and elu badly embarrased....

Naina--Yuo should come over some day..

Elu--Umm yea I will....

Aalekh--Umm ok neelu ill be home in 20 mins...

elu--Seeyu...

Disconnectt!..

Naina--Ahem ahem ahemm...

aalekh--Naina its not what you are thinking it is...

Naina--Really??

Aalekh--Yea its just we are like you knoe we are ummm

Naina starts laughing....

Naina--Aalekh you could have told me you and Elu are in a live-in...wouldnt have eaten u up...

Aalekh--Umm its not ahh its not like that...

Naina--Look at your face...like as if i have caught a tennager doing a crime...

Aalekh--Umm...

Naina--Aalekh..your grown upp and i aint ur mum....so relax...

Aalekh--Bladi hell I am helping you so much and ur pulling my leg only.....

Naina--Whatever...You did the same...

Aalekh--Yaa right...

Naina--so hows it goin (naina asked exictedly)

Aalekh--What??

Naina--Ummm the live-in...

Aalekh--Naina.....

Naina--Aalekhh tell me.....

Aalekh--Yea its gud!...

Naina starts laughing again..

Aalekh--What else am i supposed to say??

Naina--HAHAHA...Aalekh...gawdd!,,,,How about elu's brother??He cant be knowing about it...

Aalekh-Family to her is only one brother.....Ohh gawd...That guy is a pain.....He thinks where we live is His sister's house...so whenever he comes i am like outta my house only....

Naina-Ohh kool!....

Aalekh--Yaya very kool....

Naina--Aalekh...did you get to knoe any reason behind neelu's case??

Aalekh--Case??

Naina--Yea remeber when she saw me and raj..

Aalekh--Ohh yea....right...We gotto knoe about it form her brother...

Naina--What was it??

Aalekh--When neelu was very young once in the middle of the night she went to her mum's room and caught them in the rong spot...she saw themm and it affected her a lot.....she was a kid after all....she found it too disgusting...any kid would...

Naina was silent...

Aalekh--Also later when she was about 11 or 12 her dad left her mum and went away.....so they hv seen tough times...and she was almost assaulted by some local goons.....her brother saved her....from then on she finds it all very dirty...shee shivers from a man's touch....

Naina--I am so sorry about that...

Aalekh--Nothing to be sorry about naina...

Naina--But now shes in a live-in with you....I mean how??

Aalekh-She recoverd from it...I was with her all the time...and got her out of it....

Aalekh had tears in his eyes but he would never let them flow...he gave a smile even then...

Naina--You are very strong aalek

Aalekh--Naina i need to tell you something....

Naina--Go on..

Aalekh--Thanx...only after that incident i got closee to neelu....she started believing in me and we got her out of that phobia.....if not for that day....she would have hated me too......when i would have tried to ge close to her she would have hated me too.....its after that incidentt that we got close.........



(okkk some of you might hvae not got what d conv was bout)(heres d flashback)



FLASHBACKKK


Raj--I will be back in 2 weeks naina...

Naina--DO you realy need to go??

Raj--yupp....I am sorry jaan...will be back soon....

Naina--2 weeks...

Raj--Its ok na now ur strong i noe...

Naina--I will miss you....

Raj--Me too...

(Raj had to go to pune his granny was sick)(this is during the time when both were madly in luv)'

Aalekh and neelu were friends...Aalekh liked her but dint tell her...

Aftr 2 weeks Raj was too return today,,,,,

and luckily navin wasnt there...he had gone for 2 days to noida...with work....

raj was too return at 4pm...

IT was 2pm..

Naina-I cant wait to see him...

Aalekh--Ya ya ok this is d 6th time your tellin me this...

Naina--Aalekh i luv him man...

Aalekh-I knoe....

Naina--Ohh gawd you wont understand..

Aalekh--Dunt tell me then....you knoe jus go to ur room ndd sleep you can kill 2 hrs like that...

Naina-I am going anyway who wants to sit with u nd argue...

Naina goes to her room puts the blanket nd strts dreaming about raj.....

Raj wanted to give her a surprise....
He was to reach by 2....not 4...

He reached he asked aalekh where she was??

Aalekh--In her room...go get her...i am goin out no one to disturb....njoyy...

Aalekh winked..

Raj--I will speak to u late.r.bye...

he ran to naina's room....

He opened the door silentlyy ,,,,went in and closed it...

He saw naina's eyes closedd nd he went close to her...

Raj--Jaan....I am backk,,,

Naina opened her eyes....She thought she was hallucinating...

Raj--Jaan we r meeting after 2 weeks and your confused...

Naina touched him....

Raj--Hey,,,I am back..

Naina --Ohhh rajjjj...

And she huggedd himm.....he looked at her

Raj--what happened??

Naina--I though i was imaigning....Just like what i have beenn doing for the past two weeks...

Raj--I was too jaan...

Naina--So early??

Raj--Hmm...missin you....

He took her upper lip into his mouth.....
A tear rolled down naina's cheeks..

Raj drank that away...

Raj--Jaan i missed you...

Naina--I missedd the feel of you raj....the feel of your skin i missed it...

Naina put her cheek against raj's cheeks nd just kept rubbinn to get the feel of him....something she had missed for two weeks....jus his feel was intoxicating.......

Raj--Naina!...

He took her lips into his....she responded with the same amount of passion nd love....which she missed expresiing in these two weeks...
The kiss got more and more demanding....they were jus expressing their lovee which they dint for 2 weeks....

Raj broke from it....both were breathless...

Raj--Nainaa i missed this so much...

Naina-I did too raj...i did too...

Naina removed the butons on Raj;s shirt....

Raj looked at her...confused....

Naina--enough Raj...Lets break all the lines today...I cantt do this any more i lovee you and i need you...I dunt care about anyting else...make me yours today forever.......i want to be yourss....only yours...

Raj--you were mine and you are mine and you will alwasy beee mine jaan........but for that...

Naina-shh!...why do you have a problem?

Raj--I dunt have a problem but you??

Naina--I cant take tihss anymore...I want to be yours...I lovee you man....U drive me crazy...

Naina removed his shirt and threw it it one corner.....

She ran her hands through his chest....she touched it with care....she had missed himm so much.....she started planting kisses all over his chest...with each kiss she said i missed you.......raj let her finish she had missed him a lot even he did....he kissed her neckk....hee played with her hair...

He kissed her all around....she was moaning with pleasure.....

Raj was just about to take off Naina's t shirt he was under the proccess of removing it...and there was a noise at the door....Raj left naina's tshirt and turned around he found neelu there..Neeluu had seen raj barechestedd and naina's tshirt in his hands---..she had this disgustedd expression on her face....she was frustrated noo he cldnt read her face....he was confusedd he made naina's tshirt quickly picked up his shirt put it on and went to the door neelu had gone back to the hall by then........

Naina looked at raj...

Raj-no clue lets go...

They went outside they saw neelu running towards the door.....

she colided wiht aalekhh and strted crying in his arms....

Aalekh was taken aback....

He saw Raj and naina coming....

Looked at them questionigly...

Both nodded in negativve...

they sat down neelu was very uncomfortable when raj nd naina came and sat next to her......

Raj signed to naina that they should leave....the went back to naina's room....sitiin quietly and waiting for aalekh...

Outside aalekh..

Aalekh--what happened??

Neelu was sobbing..

Aalekh-Stop cryin first tell me what happened...

Neelu was thinking about it only and she feel unconsicious....

Aalekh called out to raj and naina they rushed....

Aalekh--Call the doc...now fast..

RAj called the doc..

AFter some time the doc came and examined her...

Doc--what exactly happened??

Aalekh--Ummm i was out i went down for a walk when i came back she was crying.....

doc looked at Raj nd naina...

doc--Were you both at home?

Raj--Yes...

Doc--Did you see her before she cried...

Raj--umm yes,,,

Doc--Please come with me both of you...

Raj naina nd d doc went out...

Doc--Plese tell me what exactly happened??

Raj looked at naina both felt uncomfortable.....

Doc--Please...

Naina--ACtually he is my fiancee....he got home after many days today...

doc--ok...go on...

Naina looked at raj...she was too uncomfortable...

Raj--Doc actuallly we were just sharing a private moment and thats when neelu walkedd in...she saw us and she got panicky...

Doc--Ohh i am so sorry i dint mean to embarras both of you...

raj--Its ok...

doc--Well it was very important to knoe about it.....

aalekh stood behind and heard it....

Aalekh--Now what exactly happened why did she react like that??

Doc--Well I will explain....But who exactly is she to you guys...

Aalekh--She is my girlfriend ...

Raj nd naina looked up at aalekh...there was a sense of responsibility on his face...they were proud of him...

doc--you r lying she cant be your girlfriend..

Aalekh was shocked how on earth did she knoe dat,....

Aalekh--Not exactly girlfriend but wtvea u go on...

Doc--See she has walked in to the room when your friends where sharing a personal moment ..right....there gotta be a reason why she reacted the way she did...i cant be really sure but maybe some childhood incident....maybe some old memories...you knoe when she was a kid she might have seen something of that sort....so its jus affected her somewhere at the back of her mind....and now even though she knoes about it all...its still affecting her the way it used too...its not a disease its a mental block....

Aalekh--What exactly are u trying to say she is mad she has a mental disease...(aalekh was angry)(lovee yaar)

Doc-I aint sayin that...I am jus saying that she might never be able to adjust to a man's touch....u get that....its about u nd her....if u like her she might like you to...but when it comes to being in a physical relationdhip she might not be comfortable......thats about it...u should noe dat...

Aalekh--ohh please doc.....

Doc--alright its upto u now...do whatevr you wish,,,I have told you...

Aalekh--Thnku..

Raj-Aalekh control urself its alright...shell be fine..

Aalekh--She is not mad alright she dosn have ny mental block...

Doc smiles....

Doc--Its ur lov for her that i see....young mann i pray that you be happy with her....i m sure with your love maybe she could recover...

And the doc start moving....

Raj goes with her..

Raj--I am sorry on his behalf...he loves her a lot so he over-reacted....i am sorry..

doc--No thats ok dunt worry....i understand perfectly!...

Raj smiled...

****************

BAck in the present!...

Aalekh--If i find that doc i will tell her my neelu is perfectly fine todayy....and we are in a live-in....

Naina smiled..

Naina---What exactly did you do??

Aalekh--Naina it was easy...I dint try getting close with her i dint tell her i love you nd stuff...she was a frined...you cant discuss some stuff when your a boyfriend girlfriend you knoe...but the same thing you can discuss as friends....dats bout it i discussed her problem with her as a friend and assured her about stuff..it was a long and slow process...but we fought in it together....nd here we are today....

Naina--Proud of you aalekh...

aalekh smiled....

Aalekh-ok den i think i should leave..

Naina--Seeya...

One long night came to an end...And now awaiting the arrival off shona!....


ANd this was a longgggggggggggggggg part too.....so awaiting ur long commentss too!...

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thnxx aarthi..

and rani dunt wryy shona will cme soon....
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awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.

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