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"A strange feeling ".THE END!(Note-Pg 84) (Page 14)

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Awesome!!!Too good!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! --thnxxx

Aalekh was so funny whether it be the beauty palour scene or the dialogue that he asked you to be the mother of his children!!! LOL LOL ---yup...aalekh is aalekh

But yaar Raj confessed in his subconcious state!!!

And then also in his anger and excitement!!!! confesss to kiya..lol!...nyway lets see whether he confesses in his normal human being state--lol!...

The flashback scene was soooo sweet Embarrassed Embarrassed !!!!! cute na...thnxx

Waise the lover's point was also very good and quite significant ..thnxx.......... sacche pyaar ka saath ho toh sab muskilein aasan ho jati hai!!!! ryt ho!

Wow you even have started putting inner meaning in your fic!!!!! Smile yoo!...improvin u see...

Par ab I think ish raat mein hi sab plans ko execute karenge!!! LOL karna padega...koi serial toh nahi hain....jahan they take months nd months to patch up ...lol!....if u luv sme1 u can stay long widout him or her.....

I have a feeling this is going to be one long night!!!! it definately is one long nyt sweetie!..


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PART-9

Aalekh got up to go to Raj...His phone rang.....It was Rosy...
A big smile on Aalekh's face.....

Naina--Elu??

Aalekh--Ahan Rosy..

Naina--Rosyy????

Aalekh-Hmmm your boyfriends secretary....hot babe man

Aalekh stopped his conv wid naina and picked up the phone...He put it on loudspeaker...

Aalekh--Yess rosyy...

Rosy-Were you sleeping??

Aalekh-Nopes..

Rosy-Good...Called to wake you only..after putting me in troublee you cant be sleeping peacefully....

Aalekh laughed...

Naina was confused...

Aalekh--Dont worry why would i give you that work if i had to sleep tonight..

Rosy--Who knoess you could be another weird creature like boss...

Aalekh looked at Naina..SHe dint like the comment...

Aalekh--You should think before you talk especially when the phone is on loudspeaker...

Rosy--shit....boss is with you???

Aalekh--You just cant call him weird ...(aalekh wanted to have some fun)

Rosy--Boss noo i was just joking...I dint really mean what i said..

Aalekh--Wteva...your boss isnt here but some one else...

Rosy--Ahh...cant be that flirt Navin...I am stuck with him here and its not boss so i dunt care whoever it is...

aalekh looked at Naina....Here face went like who the hell does she think she is Raj is weird my brother is a flirt....

Aalekh told her to relax...

Aalekh--Ummm rosy anything else??

Rosy--ehhh please tell me who is hearing us??

Aalekh--You wont like to knoe..

Rosy--Please...

Aalekh--Navin's sister and Raj is her bo...bestfriend...(he corrected)

Rosy--(noo words coming out) Navin's sisterrrr....

Aalekh--Yup.....Baby yoou r in sme trouble..

Rosy--Umm hey I am so sorry...I really dnt mean anything...Navin and Raj are two best creatures on this earth...I really love both of emm...(SHe tried to cover uppp but little did she knoe what she had said)

Aalekh--Well navin would doo please say u dunt love Raj..

Rosy-Ummm I dunt love Raj.....(she said in a hurry)

Naina smiled..

Naina--Its ok Rosy...I understand...

Rosy--Hey i am sorry.,,,,

Naina--ITs fine...

Aalekh-Now we are awake and busy anything else sweetheart..??

Rosy--noo ill get backk to work...

Aalekh--Seeya...

Disconnects d fone..

Naina--What exactly did you tell her to do...

Aalekh--Why do you think i flirt with her so muchh and keep myself in her goood books...

Naina--No clue...

Aalekh--I told her to keep Navin busy tonight...She gave him some stupid projectt and told him to help her.....And told him that if she dint finish then Raj would fire her...And navin is crazy about Rosy...he woulld do anything she says...

Naina--Wat?...Bhai crazy about this rosy???

Aalekh--Yup....Old newss!...

Naina--I dint knoe..

Aalekh--Raj told me long back...yesterday when i spoke to him like i dint knoe rosy...he dint object...he doesnt even remember that he told me about rosy....But she is one hot chich man...Navin's choice is good for once...

Naina--Aalekh....Lookss like you'll dump elu and take to rosy..

Aalekh--Dunt wry shell be your bhabhi only..

Naina--Haha!....We will see noww gooooo to raj...

Aalekh-Ohh yea...

*******

In raj's house..

Aalekh--Sorry!..

Raj--For what??

Aalekh-I was rude..I am sorry...

Raj--ITs fine Aalekh...dunt wry...

Aalekh--Raj do you knoe what you are doing...

Raj looked at him...

RAj--Honestly i dunoo what i am doing....i wish i knew....

Aalekh--I sware you dont....you are ruining your life do you realize??

Raj--I have ruined my life and i am and i will ruin it...Coz i am maha confused...

Aalekh--About what??...whehter you love her or you dont??

Raj--Well I was about it but now i know i still have sme feelings for her...

Aalekh--Then what??...Whats the confusion about...

Raj--I dunno if we can do what you want

Aalekh--What do i want??

Raj-You want us back together right??

Aalekh--Yes ofcourse...but why cant you

Raj--Itss not easyy aalekh...i lovee her but the thought of getting back with her is like i dunoo cant imagine...we were so in luv wid each other...nd now to imagine getting back to that...i cant imagine..

Aalekh--Raj....Imagine is not some movie ok...Its you who imagines...and its a false imagination..I can imagine you both together....what next??

Raj--Aalekh you are rushing....I am hurt I dunno about her....I am reallly really hurt...I need some time....

Aalekh-She's just come day before yesterday o smthin....its been jus 2 days....you want me to forget all that i felt for two years in 2 days...Its asking for too much Aalekh...

Aalekh realized that probably they were rushing up stuff...she had just come and Raj was right it takes time...

Aalekh was silent...

Raj--Its a request Aalekh..you knoe these two days of my life have been naina naina naina...I need some peace.....Please....LEt her be a normal person in my life...And if you are workiing on some plann please put it to rest....shes come just 2 days back and she aint going anywhere...and i aint marrying anyone...so please jut give me some time damn it....

Aalekh--Sorry Raj...you have all the time in the world......Take your time...And I am really sorry....

Raj dint say anything...frustration clear on his face...

Aalekh walked out to Naina's house...

Naina was ready...

Naina--What happened???

Aalekh--Naina we were speding up stuff...You have jus come 2 days backk ...Hes hurt he needs some time...He told me that on my face...

Naina sat down and told Aalekh to sit too...

Naina--What did he say?

Aalekh--He said that...He is hurt...It aint easy for him...Maybe it was for you...but he needs time...he needds time to get over watever happened....and 2 days to cover up for emotions of 2 years he cant manage...

Naina also realizedd that they were making a mistake....

Naina--Why dint we think of that??..I was being selfish...I was bein selfish again...

Aalekh--No naina its ok..We have realized now...Plan-3 aborted we will do at in the right time....

Naina--Hmmm right!...now do soemthing which will make him happy...

Aalekh--well that's like climbing the mount everest ...

Naina--Is his condition so bad???

Aalekh--Kind of...

Naina--Something which will give him hapiness...there ought to be soemthing...

Aalekh--Right there is something...

Naina--What????

Aalekh--Shona...

Naina-Ofcoursee shona..Call her up and tell her to come over...

Aalekh--Wow!...We ev got it...Now after shona comes...Raj will be happy for sometime...He might be better....

Naina smiles..

Naina--Its all coz of me...

Aalekh--Dunt strt again...

Naina--I have hurt him so much..

Aalekh-Its ok now forget the past we will handle him....

Naina--Soo get shona asap.....

Aalekh--Yup!...

Silence!..

Aalekh and naina have a small chat...

***

TIng dong..(after 10 mins there is a bell on raj's door...)

Raj--Aalekh dorr is open you knoe come in....

Naina comes in...

Raj immediately put something down that he was holding...


Raj--Ummmm sorry thought it was aalekh...

Naina--Its me can i come in??

Raj--Sure....

Naina--Raj I noe you dunt want to speak about the past...and i respect that...But i need to tell you something else...

Raj was already frustrated..

Raj-Go on..

Naina--I am sorry..

RAj looked up in surprise,,

Raj--Is today sorry day o smthin??..Aalekh said sorry now you are saying...For what anyway??

Naina--for all the pain i have causedd after returnin....I am really sorry...

Raj--Itss ok..

Naina--I dunno what to say,,,,But raj...

she was sielnt...

Raj--Naina...I am not angry with you for anything alright...

He turns around and goes to the window....

Naina goes behind him.....

Naina--Raj could we behave normally??

Raj turned around...

Raj--I dint get that

ANd he went to the bed...he was too restless....

Naina--if we behave like this...then definatelyy evryone would suspect something is wrong....I mean bhai...He would definately suspet...

Raj--hmm..

Naina--I knoe you still are angry with me....but believe me....i am ready to listen you shout screamm abusee I am here to hear,,,,Just get it outaa you...

Raj gives a fake smile...

Raj--you knoe thats one thing i wont do...

Naina sees the love in his eyes...

Naina--You can I wont mind...But i cant see you like this...It hurts me...Its coz of me...I am sorry again...

RAj--Its ok Naina I aint angry wiht you...But you know its not easy for me...I have livedd two years of my life as a different man...with so many questions...Its tough...Its just been 2 days...I pomise ill be fine soon...and then we could speak in detail...Even i am looking forward to it...But right of now if we speak i dunoo how i will react...you kow i need some time....

Naina--I perfectly understand...I aint here to speak bout something you dunt want to speak...I just want you to knoe that I am ready to take the shoutings....coz it was my fault and my silly mistake....A stupid decision...I
Naina couldnt say anytihng further...

Raj--Its ok...

Naina --Umm...anything else??

Raj--maybe you were right....we should behave normally ...how about being friends??

Naina gave him a smile...

Naina--Heyy I am naina..

Raj--Rajveer!..

And they shook hands!...

Naina smiled at Raj,.....

Raj--Umm well about the job...

Naina--Umm..RIght of now i dunt want that...

Raj--Why not???

Naina--I dunt want it...Just for now...firstly do i get it??

Raj--Ummm yes you do...

Naina--Could i join later this month....I mean its anyway midway...so ill join from next month??would that be ok..

Raj--As you wish...Any specific reason that i could knoe?

Naina--Ummm jus like that i ev just come catch up wid some friends and stuff...

Raj--Sure...

Naina and Raj were silent!...

Naina--Okk i ll leave now...Its pretty late...

Raj--Yea...

Naina turns to leave.......She sees something on the bed...HEr and Raj's pic...thats exactly what he had dropped .she smiled....SHe turned back...Smiled at him...

Naina--Good night and sweet dreamss     

Raj--Yea to u too...

Edited by cool~~gal - 11 May 2008 at 4:51am

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rituka nd sweta...
i was wrkin on d updt wen u posted...njoy!...i ev postedd part-9
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long part leave ur comments!

nd ny guesses who shona is??

ill be waiting...



Edited by cool~~gal - 10 May 2008 at 2:38am
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awesome too good waiting for next asap.

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