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Posted: 15 years ago
ok here is the next part,this part is all about Jay n Prachi so here goes enjoy!!
                          ....::::Part 15::::….

That night Jay told Prachi to meet him at the dance hall, when Prachi entered, she couldn't see anything, it was dark everywhere, she was kind of getting scared

P: anybody here? Hello!! Anybody

Just then a spot light flashed on her, and another on Jay, He was at the far end of the hall, he slowly walked up to her n got down on his knee, n a bunch of violin players started playing the tune that was used in the promo of Kuchh Is Tara(when Ranbir was proposing to Kanya remember??) Jay got down on his knee

J: Ever since I saw u, I fell in love with (I know pretty cheesy but couldn't think of anything) I knew u were the one for me, Prachi I love u very much n I wanna spend the rest of my life with u, Will You Marry Me?
P: NO
J: What?
P: I said no, I don't wanna marry u

Those words just echoed in his head. Jay couldn't believe what he was hearing.

J: no u can't say that, I thought u loved me, u can't do that

While saying that he fell out of his bed, then he just realized that he was dreaming about this (got cha)

J: oh it was just a dream, thank god

Jay was relived, but then he ran out of his room n went to Kanya's room


In Kanya's room

Kanya was dreaming about Ranbir, she was dreaming that Ranbir was caught her n wouldn't let go of her

K: (giggles) Ranbir choro….. choro mujhe naughty boy

Just then Jay knocks on her door

Kanya still in my dream: Ranbir choro na……R…Ranbir
J: Ranbir nehi Jay it's me Jay

Kanya woke up n opened the door

K: (moans)kya hai sone do na yaar
J: I'm sorry but I'm scared
K: awwww did u have a nightmare
J: no, I'm scared, what if Prachi says no to me
K: Jay Prachi won't say no to u, she loves u
J: yea but what if she doesn't wanna marry me?
K: u'r just thinking that cuz u'r nervous, look I'm really tired so can we please talk about this in the morning?
J: fine sorry to bother u
K: u should be
J: why were u dreaming about Ranbir (smirks)
K: goodnight Jay (closes the door)


* * * * * * * * * In The Morning* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Jay, Kanya, Ranbir, Neha n Iqbal were discussing about how Jay was gonna propose to Prachi, Jay decides that he will propose to Prachi tonight. Kanya, Ranbir, Neha n Iqbal got to work. That evening they arranged a special table outside in the deck. It had candles on top of the tables and red roses, there were also 3 violin players playing some romantic tunes

P: Jay kaha le jaa rahe ho?

Jay had covered her eyes with his hand

J: ek minute
P: where r u taking me?
J: a few more steps…….n we're here

Prachi opened her eyes, she looked n had tears in her eyes

P: Jay ye sub kya hai?
J: it's all for u

Jay smiles n takes her to her seat.

P: I can't believe u did this all this for me
J: well this is to show u how much I love u
P: aw u'r so sweet, I love u too
J: I know (winks)

They have dinner together, both feed each other foods, Kanya, Neha ,Ranbir n Iqbal were watching the whole thing from inside.

Back to Jay n Prachi

Jay n Prachi were having a great time together, they laughed n talked n all, Finally it was time for desert. The waiter brought a chocolate cake. On top of the cake it says "Prachi will u marry me?" Prachi read the message. She looks up to see Jay but he wasn't at his seat.

P: Jay? kaha gaya
J: Prachi

Prachi turns n sees Jay getting down on one knee with a box that has a diamond ring

J: Prachi will u marry me?

Prachi got all teary n didn't know what to say

J: (thinks) don't say no, don't say no, don't say no
J: so Prachi will u marry me?
P: yes!!

The gang inside: YES!!!

Jay got happy. He took the ring out n placed it on her figure. They both got up n shared the most passionate kiss ever. Then a bunch of fireworks started. They broke the kiss n saw the fireworks, they both looked at each other n smiled

J: I Love You Prachi
P: I Love You Too Jay

They both hugged tightly, Both were feeling so happy. The gang on the other hand came outside

Gang: CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both Jay n Prachi were surprised

N: I now pronounce u Mr. & Mrs

Prachi blushed n ran away

N: oy hai mai sudke java

Everybody laughs

J: guys I'm so happy
I: yea man u should be
R: dude u should go to Prachi right now, she was blushing like crazy
J: on one condition
R,K,N,I: what??
J: DON'T FOLLOW ME!!!
K: we promise now go go go

Jay ran to Prachi's room, he saw Prachi leaning against the window looking out n blushing like crazy

J: wow kitna sharmati ho
P: (starts blushing even more)

Jay starts laughing n hugs her tightly

J: I Love U Prachi
P: I Love U Too Jay


k i know it's not that good but still hope u liked it,i gotta think of the next part till then leave me me lots of comments,bad good doesn't matter,just be honest 😉


Edited by diya219 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
(HA me first)That was AWSOME yay she said yes now i am looking forward to how ranbir proposes to kanya!!!!!!!!!!😉 Edited by candy princess - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
hey
gr8 update
jay prachi part was very cute!
plz continue soon!!
Posted: 15 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
Posted: 15 years ago
great update
cant wait till Rankan get together
continue soon
Posted: 15 years ago
hey diya.. i read ur fanfic till 9th part and its sooo good its amazing... 👏 👏 👏 but i'll read the rest ov it tomorrow... but seriously it was awesome.. 😃
Posted: 15 years ago
oh .. i finished reading it.. 👏 👏 it was awesome do continue soon 😆
Posted: 15 years ago
aw what a cute part plz write more soon =)
Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys thank u so so much for liking my ff i will be posting soon it's just that my computer is crashed so yea but i'll get it fixed soon i promise bye for now luv u guys
Posted: 15 years ago
is your computer
still not well 😆
plz continue

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