Talaash,The Search Begins Now,Epilogue(19/11) - Page 7

hi anu
great fic
too good
best of luck for ur exam

Hey Hello,
     i am new to your fic i just catch up with all your update and i must say it was just Gr8. the way you discribe the whole story is amazing yaar. it is quite difficulte to manage all this mess but you manage it very beutifuly,the way you showas the emotions of all character are really nice i have no word for you so here is my appresiation for you in this way 👏

i waiting for next update. so plzzzzzz update soon.
                              

       keep smilling 😃 keep writting 👍🏼
                            namita

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Edited by vvdn - 15 years ago

Raj Lucknow wapas aya..bahut sare sawalo ko lekar...

Raj Bandra Police Station bhi gaya tha..Inspector Ingle se bhi mila, Ingle ne wahi kaha jo Darbar Saab ka kahna tha..Naina ki kismat achhi thi k us ladke ko arrest kia police ne..varna Naina ki zindagi tabaah ho jaati..kyonki uske ghar me pahle se RDX maujood tha.


kyaa yeh baat Naina jaanti hai?k Arbaaz k ghar me RDX tha pahle se hi..agar janti hai to Arbaaz k lia kyon apni zindagi barbad kar rahi hai?


Raj ko lagta hai k kai aisi baatein hain jo chhoot gai hai..agar un baaton ka pata chale to yeh uljhan sulajh sakti hai.


bich me Raj ko order mila tha Lucknow base se..k woh Jaisalmer base me kuchh kaam khatam kar k aye...

Raj ko Lucknow laut te laut te 10 din ho gaye..

Raj 15/02/2005 ko wapas aya..


Naina apna kaam kie ja rahi hai...

Raj itna samajh gaya k Naina ne abhi tak woh CD nahi dekhi hai..

varna Naina itni shaant nahi rahti..ho sakta hai k Raj ko hi gun point me rakhti..



Raj ne Naina ko bulaya...us CD k saath..

Naina CD laai..

Naina--here is your CD Sir.

Raj--actually..is CD k bare me hi jankari haasil kar k aya hoon..CD me dikha kuchh raha hai aur..iske andar ka sach kuchh aur hi hai.. actually iska video encrypted format me hain..jisko decode karna hai... isi lia..Captain Sujaat Hussein ko bulaya hai maine...


Naina--ok..main baad me milti hoon..aur haa..kal shaam ko mujhe bahut sare roses mile hai..pata nahi kisne bheje..par isi camp k officers ka kaam hai.. itna mujhe malum hai..

Raj--to kyaa karne ka irada hai..unko bhi hospital bhejna hai kyaa?

Naina--nahi..is baar kuchh alag karna hai...

Raj--kyaa?

Naina--kuchh nahi..no reaction is the best reaction ..  

Raj--cool..

Naina--I know..well..you carry on..shaam ko mujhe Dargaah jana hai,wahi jo Jameel Market k paas hai, aaj kawali ki special team aa rahi hai..Sufi sangeet ka bhi jalsa hoga..mujhe sufiana kalaam bahut pasand hai..main jaa rahi hoon.aapko chalna hai?


Raj--yeh Sufi Kalaam kyaa Arbaaz k sath reh kar achha lagne laga??

Naina--not like that..main bachpan se hi Haji Ali k Dargaah me jati thi..sirf aur sirf waha ka Sufiana kalaam sunne..

Raj--ok...kitne baje jana hai?


Naina--shaam ki chai bahar hi peeange..5:30 baje.. main gate k bahar milna.. and ofcourse Uniform nahi..

Raj--to kya aise hi...


Naina--don't be vulger...I mean civil dress..good bye...

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sara din Raj ka sara kaam gadbad ho raha hai...


Naina k dil me koi baat chhupi nahi hai..woh azad ban  k ghum rahi hai..par Raj..uske dil me do gehre raaz chhupe hai..ek raaz hai Ibrahim aur Arbaaz ka ek hona....dusri baat..Raj ka Rajveer Jagat Singh Shekhwat hona...


Raj is baar jab ghar gaya tha..tab pata nahi kyon.. usko kyaa hua tha... usually duty se is tarha leave leke jab koi ata hai ghar pe..tab woh masti me doob jata hai..Raj bhi pahle aisa karta tha,ha..ghar woh  zada nahi ata tha..6 saal me Raj sirf 3 baar ghar aya hai..woh bhi sirf 2 din k lia..par dosto k saath gayab rehta tha..par is baar Raj jab aya kisi bhi dost k paas nahi gaya...kabhi long drive pe jata akele yaa to samundar k kinare baitha rehta....



Raj pahle jaisa nahi tha..

ghar me sab log baatein bhi kar rahe hai..

Rajveer tab bhi aisa nahi tha jab uski shaadi me dulhan bhaag gai thi usko zaleel kar k.

par is baar Raj kuchh badla badla sa lag raga hai...


Raj k maa..Mita Devi ne Raj k dad se baat ki..

ek din dono ne Raj ko bulaya..

Jagat--kyaa baat hai,Raj..yeh tumhari mummy kyaa keh rahi hain k aaj kal tum zara badal se gaye ho.. kyaa pareshani hai beta?

Mita--beta humlogo se nahi kahega?

Raj ne bataya.."Naina.. "

Jagat--Darbar saab ki beti?

Raj--haa..

Jagat--kaha mili tujhe?

Raj ne tab sab kuchh bataya..k Naina kyon bhaagi thi..ab woh kaha par hai..

Mita--tum kya karna chhahte ho...

Jagat--karna kyaa hai usko ....transfer leke kahi aur jaao..


Raj--kaha jaaon dad..?jaha bhi jaaoon...Naina ki yaad mera pichha hi nahi chhodti..shadi k waqt usko dekha bhi nahi..par usse milne k baad..uski kahani sunne k baad..main kyaa karoon??


Raj rone lagaa..foot foot k.."kyaa karoon..mera dil mere bas me nahi..pata nahi kyaa hua hai..?"


Jagat aur Mita dono hairan hue..yeh kyaa hua hai unke bete ko?

thodi der baad..

Jagat--to tujhe kyaa karna hai?

Raj--pata nahi..

Mita--sach bata Raj..kya tujhe Naina se pyaar hai?

Raj rone laga..uske ansoon uske dil ka haal bayaan kar rahe the..

Raj--kyaa karoon main ..main uska ghum bardast nahi kar paa raha hoon..jo usne jhela..uske samne to...dad..I am sorry.but I can't control my feelings about Naina...

Jagat hansne lage....

Jagat--Mita..humara beta to kaam se gaya..

Mita--Raj..beta..Naina kyaa kahti hai?

Raj--usko to malum hi nahi k main hi wahi hoon..

Jagat--tune usko nahi bataya?

Raj--kyaa bataoon dad..agar bata doon..to woh chali jayegi door ..fir se...


Jagat--thik hain..par agar Naina teri zindagi me kabhi ana chaahe.. to tu sab kuchh bhula k usko apna payega?

Raj--woh mujhe apnale..isse zada mujhe aur kuchh nahi chahiye..

Jagat--thik hai...aur agar aisa hua nahi to..to humari pasand ki ladki se shadi karega?


Raj--Naina bhi to aaplogo ki pasand thi..

Jagat--tab baat alag thi...par main samajh sakta hoon..k Naina k dil ki haalat kyaa hogi..sirf jhooti shaano shaukat ki wajah se main usko doshi nahi thehra sakta..par usne ghalat kaam kia hain..


Raj--nahi..shadi k ek din pahle usne phone kar k sab bataya tha mujhe..maine hi dhyaan nahi dia..

Raj bachcho ki tarha rone laga...


us waqt agar kamre me koi ghusta to dekhta k ek 32 saal k Army ka Major kaise bilagh bilagh kar ro raha hai..aur uski maa uska sar apne goad me leke usko dilasa de rahi hain..aur uska baap usko samhal raha hai..



Raj to Lucknow chala aya..

par Raja Jagat Singh Shekhawat aur Mita Devi yeh sochne lage..k kaise Naina ko bataya jaye pura sach..

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shaam k 7 baje..

Dargaah k andar..

Naina aur Raj door baith kar kawali sun rahe hai..

Sufiaana kalaam bhi..

"Ajaa re Maahi..k ab dil pe bas nahi chalta hai..par dekhne ko hai,k kyaa yuh hi zindagi ka shaam dhalta hai.. Maahi..mera Maula to tu hi hai,Maula bhi mere bandegi se jalta hai..."


kalaam me ek ardaas hai...ek pukaar hai..dilbar ko bulane ki sadaa hai....kisi apne ki talaash hai...jo zindagi k raah par yuh hi bichhad gaya hai..


Naina rone lagi..aur gaane lagi, "Ajaa.. Ajaa.. Maahi... "  


Raj pareshan ho gaya..

Raj--Naina..kyaa hua..Naina..


par dargaah me koi chauka nahi..kyon ki waqt ne unse unke apno ko chheen lia hai..sab hi k dil se pukaar nikal rahi hai.. "Ajaa, Ajaa, ab to aajaa.. karam itna farma..k bas samne aajaa..ekbaar.."

ghum ka fasana sabhi ka ek hai..

Raj ne yeh manzar pahle kabhi nahi dekha.


sab log jake mannat ka dhaagaa baandhne lage....


Raj aur Naina bhi..

Naina ne dhaagaa baandhte hue yeh dua ki.."Arbaaz ko raahat de do is ghum se..usko salamat rakho..aur sahi raah par le aao"


Raj ne bhi dhaagaa bandha.."shiddat k saath yeh dua karta hoon..k Naina ko is ghum se bahar nikaalo..uska ghum main dekh nahi sakta..aur agar ho sake to.."


Raj ki akhri fariyaad ankahi hi reh gai..

par jo hai baitha uparwala...shayad usne tai kar lia..k Raj ki har kahi-ankahi fariyaad woh puri karega...kuchh is tarha k Naina ko samajhna hoga Raj k armaan ko.


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

i m speechless......u r great great great great in potraiting others' emotions and a aweeeeeesum writer.....hats off to u di......a great appalause for u 👏

awsome
i am speechless
superb
too good
great going 👏
plz continue soon

intresting update too good
what a emotinol situation

brilliant uopdate..........beautifully portrayed......the whole update ws very emotional......and raj's sentiments touched my heart....his unsaid emotions were aptly expressed 👏 👏 👏 .......update soon

Great!!!Awesome!!!

I loved Raj's "Kya aise hi?".... 😳 😆 😆 ..........how naughty!!!

Waise kya haal bayan kiya hai Raj ke dil ka!!!Kisi ke bhi dil tak pahuch jaye!!!Kya baat hai!!! 😭

Aur ab Raj ki kahi ankahi dua bhi puri hogi......hona hi chahiye!!!

Haaiiii!!!!

kyaa baat hai..Shaina taarif kar rahi hai!!!!

thanks😃.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Great!!!Awesome!!!

I loved Raj's "Kya aise hi?".... 😳 😆 😆 ..........how naughty!!!

Waise kya haal bayan kiya hai Raj ke dil ka!!!Kisi ke bhi dil tak pahuch jaye!!!Kya baat hai!!! 😭

Aur ab Raj ki kahi ankahi dua bhi puri hogi......hona hi chahiye!!!

Haaiiii!!!!