Lets write the LONGEST FF - together!! (Page 2)

Arisha Newbie

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Posted: 30 April 2008 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
you have made a very good start it is very nice
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talkativetaurus IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2008 at 2:39am | IP Logged
hey thanks both of u ... but someone else continue it as well ..... we need to write it together na ...
marium the gr8 Goldie
marium the gr8
marium the gr8

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Posted: 01 May 2008 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
kk i ll cont...
afreen is gettin ready in her room shes wearin anarkali...da top bit is blue wiv sequins all ova it n n da bootom bit is red wiv printed flowers etc.. sheve got straight shiney hair wiv sum gud makeup (not da one day used to do in khwaish on afreen)...on da oda hand we see dis guy gettin ready. he wore sum black suit d new style 1 deyve got embroidary ini...he gelled his hair up (da hair style he had in khwaish was propa freaky Dead) he was jus abt ot aply armani code wen his mum entered...
zareen-azaan r u ready. Yes dis guy is Azan
Azan-u go im jus cumin...
Zarren-theek hai
in Afreens house...
Nasreen-dey lot here
nasreen-woh hi who uve been waitin
Afreen-kia Azan agya
Afreen-hum bhi to dekhe jiske bare mian itna suna hai woh dikta kaisa hai.
NAsreen-yh lets go
Afreen n Nasreen were walkin down da stairs n giglin. but Afreen was jus abt to trip ova wen Azan hold her n she was in his arms Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed dey were starin at each ova
dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke
ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke
aa nind ka sauda karein, ik khwaab de, ik khwaab le
ik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye talein
kitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke

but as soon as she came bac to her sense she puches him bac n sed
Afreen-tummmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!! tum Azan ho
Azan-nahi woh main main
Afreens dad- haan yehi azan hai
afreen luks at him wiv teary eyes n Azan lower his eyes.
nasreen n tamreen notice dat she is upset n dey tuk her aside.
TAmreen-api ap itni udaas kyun ho gayi
Afreen-woh Azan jhuta hai main jahan kaam karti hoon wahan aya tha. phir ek duu bar ur bhi mile the usne batya ke woh to khud job karta hai per iska to pura business hai. Mujhe laga azan bohot acha insan hai per...
as she turns around she finds azan tambreen n n Nasreen leaves...
Azan- im sowy..mujhe pata hai maine tumhe hurt kiya per tumne to kaha ta ke tumhe ameer ache nahi lagte...dey ve got tooo much attitude...maine stain lagye kaproon se le kar dhabe main kahan khaya to sirf tumhare liye
Afreen-tumhe meri itni parwa kyun haimain tumhari hoon kuan jo tum mere liye jhoot bolo ge...
Azan pulls afreen towards himself
Azan-coz I LUV YA Smile     
plz sumone else continue n make it more interestin...
maira xXx Smile

sanashau Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2008 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
I like it but maybe we can have azaan with afreen. please!
nainaa Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2008 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
It's very cute..........
sayanti_ashiuv IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 May 2008 at 3:15am | IP Logged
it was gud Clap plz cont..
Arisha Newbie

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Posted: 03 May 2008 at 4:41am | IP Logged
its very good
marium the gr8 Goldie
marium the gr8
marium the gr8

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Posted: 04 May 2008 at 4:31am | IP Logged

azan-cuz i luv u
dey both were lost in romantic moments but distrubed by clapin dey both turned around n found all der family der. dey were propa emberased
khan (azan fatha- jab yeh dono pyar karte hain to lets gt dem maried. Afreen shys n runs off to her plz cont n gt dem married soon LOL

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