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matwamango

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 1:19pm | IP Logged

Guys this is my second FanFic as i am totally enjoying my other story so heres another one just for the weekend. Hope you are enjoying this as much as i am writing it.

SOULMATE

We spend our whole life searching for that one person,

Sometimes we even have several relationships

Just to find that one person

They say love is universal and eternal,

That Love overcomes all obstacles and conquers all,

They say there is someone made for you in the world,

Somewhere, Somehow

You will find your Soulmate,

One day when you least expect it........

Part 1

Ranbir looks at his love Rani lying on the hospital bed after her complicated ceasarian she had just had and was looking at her with tears in his eyes. Ranbir loved her alot as she was not just his wife but his best friend too and although when they met eachother they were poles apart. They never expected to get married so soon but with Ranbirs dad being so ill they decided they might as well do it now and within two months of their marriage Rani was expecting their first baby or shall i say babies. A boy and a girl Arman and Jannat both were so beautiful and looked just like Rani. Rani had done the one thing he never expected her to do. Lie to him about everything being fine and that her health was good. She soon will be leaving him and the babies behind never to be seen again. Ranbir tried hard to hold the tears but in the end just breaks down.

Ranbir-Eh Jaansi ki Rani tum mujhe chod ke mat jao. I can't do this on my own. Atleast lado mera saath taane maro mujhe ke mein tumhara kayal nahin rakhta. Kuch to karo par mujhe yaha akela chodna mat.

Rani-You have the babies nd they will keep you strong. Kabhi unse naraaz mat hona aur daatna mat sirf aggar woh tumhare tara badmashi karte hain tab. Mein tum sabse kitna pyar karti hoon par zindagi saath nahin diya. Ranbir promise me on thing?

Ranbir-Kya? Jaan chahiye deduunga meri jaan!

Rani-Jaan nahin. Ranbir(In a weak voice) I want you to promise ke tum humare bacho ko ma aur baap ke pyar doge and you will vere hate them but love them more than you can ever love a person and if by any means they ask for something tum unko la ke doge.

Ranbir-yeh kaisa promise hain you know i will love them but aggar inhone Chand keliye manga tho?

Rani-Bhuddu akkal hi nahin. I know tum unse bohut pyar karoge par yeh humare bache hain jab samay hogi tab yeh kuch aisa maange ge ke tumhe unh denahi parega. Promise.

Ranbir hugs Rani and makes his promise.

Ranbir-Tum mujhe promise karo(In between tears) chodke nahin jaoge.(That is where Rani leaves the earth).

Hope you guys enjoyed the first part.



Edited by matwamango - 19 September 2008 at 9:47am

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Original concept
I like it but your first part was sooo sad
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Cry Cry Cry so emotional... its amazing... pls continue soon

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it was an interesting start Clap but plz dont use that green colour yaar I found it a bit difficult to read Ouch

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
interesting start. really sad Cry
please continue soon!

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
hmmmm... rani? interesting!! Clap Clap

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Posted: 25 April 2008 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
good job.....please continue soon!
Big smile

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yeah very emotional but sounds interesting so plz continue soon

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